aabc271 wrote:

嗯, 應你的要求來 Solo mod 的 :3
平時沒 solo mod 經驗 ( 都 Taiko mod ), 所以 mod 不好的請見諒 ^^"

Blue~ 必需 Fix
Purple~ 最好 Fix
Pink~ 建議而已

Boring

感覺有點前易後難
eg 00:29:595 和 03:21:385 相比, 前者明顯較易 ~
可以的話平衡一下難度較好

02:37:490 ( 2 ) - 移前 1/2 ? ( 到 02:37:174 ~ 02:37:806 ) 之前的 notes 和 sliders 都是開始在白線的, 突然一個紅線感覺怪怪的 ~

02:47:279 ( 2, 1 ) - 感覺兩個 sliders 不太平衡 ...?

03:11:279 ( 1, 2 ) - 感覺 2 應該離 1 較遠 ...?

03:21:385 ( 1, 2 ) - ^

03:39:069 ( 1 ) - 因為有 03:34:016 ( 1 ) 的關係, 新手可能誤以為是 x 0.75, 而不能預計到這是 x 0.5 ...?

03:51:700 ( 1 ) - 有點過大聲...? 用 60% ?

Romantic

00:31:174 ( 3 ) - Slider 尾別加 hitsound ...?

00:41:279 ( 3 ) - ^

00:37:174 ( 1, 2 ) - 1 的 Slider 尾別加 hitsound, 2 加 whistle ?

01:41:753 ( 3 ) - Slider 起點移後 1/4 ( 到 01:41:911 ) ? 之前的 slider 較慢, 所以有點誤導 ...?

02:07:964 ( 6, 1 ) - 取消 1 的 New combo, 在 6 加上 ...? 紫 + 白的 Stack 不太美觀 ...?

02:18:227 ( 3 ) - Slider 震得怪怪的 ...?

Spinboxer

HP -1 ? HP 扣得很快 ._.

01:37:806 ( 4, 1 ) - 第一次玩的時侯會以為 4 是來回一次, 而不是兩次. 玩家可能會 miss 4 或 1 ...?

Posthumous

SV 3.6 ._. !

可能是我不懂 Solo 吧, 我覺得這 Diff 太難了, 尤其是那些跳 Orz

AR -1, Notes 太快了 > <

01:25:174 ~ 01:32:753 - 難度突然增加了許多, 1/2 對我而言太亂了, 而那些跳好像太大 ( x5+ Distance )...?

02:23:279 ~ 02:28:332 - ^, 跳得好亂 ...?

02:47:279 ~ 02:49:174 - ^

Nice overall ~

Spinboxer <3 ~

But Posthumous is way too hard for me www

Star

• Posthumous

• Spinboxer

• Romantic

• Boring

LKs wrote:

irc modded(rechecked?)/

1. Timing : First offset -5ms
2. Tags : The tag "Instrumental" is not needed since it will be here :
   
   SPOILER

   
   Remove it then.

1. 01:25:490 - This break is kinda long and then boring, try to shorten it ? Maybe by adding a spinner at its end ?
2. 02:37:490 (2) - I disagree with this slider, it sounds too late. In my opinion, you should move it 1/2 earlier like this :
   
   It sounds a way nicer !

1. This difficulty use slider tick rate 0,5 which is unrankable ! You shall use tick 2 as you did in Boring, it sounds nice.
2. 01:10:016 (1) - The end of this slider is uh... The player has to "hold" its end which is not recommanded at all (confusing, etc.). Change it please.
3. 01:11:279 (2) - As it's the same slider ... Same as above hehe
4. 01:43:490 (2) - The shape of this slider is kinda confusing. Make it more readable by moving the first red square 2 grid up or something like this ?
5. 02:18:227 (1) - This slider again, there is not any hint to say to the player that he has to hold the beginning of this slider. Make something like this instead :
   
6. 03:51:700 (1) - This circle needs obviously a finish.

1. Use slider tick rate 2 in this difficulty too ! It would help in the readability of slowdowns (for example : 00:38:437 (1), without tick 2, the player can't see that this slider is slower than the previous ones.) ans tick 2 sounds so well ~
2. OD8 and HPdrain 7 in this difficulty, really o.o" Doesn't fit in my oppinion, Consider using Hpdrain 6 and OD7.
3. 02:56:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't agrre with these jumps, They are uhh o.o. Anyway, it would be fine if you chane them into sliders.

1. Use tick 2 for the same reasons as in Spinboxer.
2. lol jumps

KuraiPettan wrote:

General :

1. Timing : First offset -5ms
2. Tags : The tag "Instrumental" is not needed since it will be here :
   
   SPOILER

   
   Remove it then.

Boring :

1. 01:25:490 - This break is kinda long and then boring, try to shorten it ? Maybe by adding a spinner at its end ?
2. 02:37:490 (2) - I disagree with this slider, it sounds too late. In my opinion, you should move it 1/2 earlier like this :
   
   It sounds a way nicer !

Romantic :

1. This difficulty use slider tick rate 0,5 which is unrankable ! You shall use tick 2 as you did in Boring, it sounds nice.
2. 01:10:016 (1) - The end of this slider is uh... The player has to "hold" its end which is not recommanded at all (confusing, etc.). Change it please.
3. 01:11:279 (2) - As it's the same slider ... Same as above hehe
4. 01:43:490 (2) - The shape of this slider is kinda confusing. Make it more readable by moving the first red square 2 grid up or something like this ?
5. 02:18:227 (1) - This slider again, there is not any hint to say to the player that he has to hold the beginning of this slider. Make something like this instead :
   
6. 03:51:700 (1) - This circle needs obviously a finish.

Spinboxer :

1. Use slider tick rate 2 in this difficulty too ! It would help in the readability of slowdowns (for example : 00:38:437 (1), without tick 2, the player can't see that this slider is slower than the previous ones.) ans tick 2 sounds so well ~
2. OD8 and HPdrain 7 in this difficulty, really o.o" Doesn't fit in my oppinion, Consider using Hpdrain 6 and OD7.
3. 02:56:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't agrre with these jumps, They are uhh o.o. Anyway, it would be fine if you chane them into sliders.

Posthumous :

1. Use tick 2 for the same reasons as in Spinboxer.
2. lol jumps

That's all :3

KuraiPettan wrote:

Enjoy this bubble :3

Overmap is my way!

ziin wrote:

Overmap is my way!

oh dear...

1. On the final part, it seems as if you were missing a timing section! The piano slows down a bit at 03:52:959. There you should add a new red section, with a BPM of 87,00. You should resnap the next sections too
2. Combo Colours 1 and 2 are pretty similar. You should make them look more different so that the new combos are more distinguishable.

1. Seems like you forgot a kiai at 03:03:695 -, at least for consistency with the other three diffs~
   Also be careful where you end it - it should be at 03:03:774 -

1. AR 9 seems rather forced on this map, that might be due to the high SV and jumpy patterns. Perhaps 8 would be better, but it might get a little confusing in some parts so... It's your decision.
2. 01:19:643 (5) - Just saying, this is overlapped by a hitburst and doesn't look so good under it :V
3. 01:28:959 (1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I can't let you go with this. Sorry, but this is way too overmapped. The music doesn't suggest any 1/4 there yet you used a lot of them AND insane jumps. I'm ok with the insane jumps, but not with the 1/4 so you should remap this part. Really.
4. 02:40:959 (1) - To be honest, this slider looks horribad Could you try another shape please?
5. You know, honestly, do you think that all of those jumps play so well? I'd suggest you to get some people to test play this... It's pretty weird to see so many jumps and I can't assure they all play so well...

narakucrimson wrote:

Hello!

[General]

1. On the final part, it seems as if you were missing a timing section! The piano slows down a bit at 03:52:959. There you should add a new red section, with a BPM of 87,00. You should resnap the next sections too
2. Combo Colours 1 and 2 are pretty similar. You should make them look more different so that the new combos are more distinguishable.

[Spinboxer]

1. Seems like you forgot a kiai at 03:03:695 -, at least for consistency with the other three diffs~
   Also be careful where you end it - it should be at 03:03:774 -

[Posthumous]

1. AR 9 seems rather forced on this map, that might be due to the high SV and jumpy patterns. Perhaps 8 would be better, but it might get a little confusing in some parts so... It's your decision.
2. 01:19:643 (5) - Just saying, this is overlapped by a hitburst and doesn't look so good under it :V
3. 01:28:959 (1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I can't let you go with this. Sorry, but this is way too overmapped. The music doesn't suggest any 1/4 there yet you used a lot of them AND insane jumps. I'm ok with the insane jumps, but not with the 1/4 so you should remap this part. Really.
4. 02:40:959 (1) - To be honest, this slider looks horribad Could you try another shape please?
5. You know, honestly, do you think that all of those jumps play so well? I'd suggest you to get some people to test play this... It's pretty weird to see so many jumps and I can't assure they all play so well...

Also please don't overmap ^^

narakucrimson wrote:

Some stuff was fixed via irc:

Log

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17:02 <nold_1702> : I hv a question q_q
17:02 <narakucrimson> : tell me~
17:02 <nold_1702> : Have you ever seen a mapper who use this "Clap sound"like that 01:15:064 (1) - in boring?
17:02 <nold_1702> : 01:15:695 (2) - This clap sound.
17:03 <nold_1702> : NO
17:03 <nold_1702> : No this
17:03 <narakucrimson> : I guess so
17:03 <nold_1702> : 01:15:064 (1) -
17:03 <nold_1702> : This
17:03 <nold_1702> : Guess?
17:03 <narakucrimson> : there should be some maps with similar hitsounds :V
17:03 <nold_1702> : ww
17:03 <nold_1702> : www I didn't see them ww.
17:04 <nold_1702> : xp
17:07 <narakucrimson> : hey, ehm
17:08 <narakucrimson> : I've asked soe people about this and
17:08 <nold_1702> : Hey xp
17:08 <narakucrimson> : definitely
17:08 <nold_1702> : About what...
17:08 <narakucrimson> : Boring isn't a good name for a difficulty
17:08 <narakucrimson> : you should change it to "Calm" or something like that
17:08 <nold_1702> : But...I can't get ranked if I change it ?
17:09 <narakucrimson> : why not? o.o
17:09 <nold_1702> : Okay,,Then I change it :<...
17:09 <nold_1702> : Calm...
17:09 <narakucrimson> : or something like that
17:09 <nold_1702> : Good name..Then,I upload it?
17:10 <narakucrimson> : wait, I'll recheck the whole thing first
17:10 <nold_1702> : OKAY
17:11 <narakucrimson> : oh it seems like you forgot about another kiai in spboxer's diff
17:12 <nold_1702> : Wait.
17:12 <narakucrimson> : at 00:49:801 -
17:12 <nold_1702> : Oh god..
17:12 <nold_1702> : It's my wrong..
17:12 <nold_1702> : Fixed..
17:12 <nold_1702> : Then upload?
17:12 <narakucrimson> : also remember to end it at the same time as in the other diffs
17:12 <narakucrimson> : not yet, wait
17:12 <nold_1702> : Okay
17:15 <nold_1702> : I found a nazi in posthumous...shall I tell you?
17:15 <narakucrimson> : yeah
17:15 <nold_1702> : 01:06:222 (4) - should stack at 01:04:959 (1) - tail
17:15 <nold_1702> : but I didn't do it...now I fixed it
17:16 <narakucrimson> : oh also
17:16 <narakucrimson> : 01:28:959 (1) -
17:17 <narakucrimson> : the end is hidden, that can't happen
17:17 <narakucrimson> : sorry if it breaks the pattern...
17:17 <nold_1702> : no sorry!
17:18 <nold_1702> : I should say sorry that I am wasting your time
17:18 <narakucrimson> : also I'm a little concerned about the length of the breaks
17:18 <narakucrimson> : it's ok
17:18 <narakucrimson> : the only thing I should tell you is that I'll have to rebubble this
17:18 <nold_1702> : I know
17:18 <narakucrimson> : a lot of things have been changed so...
17:18 <narakucrimson> : :/
17:18 <narakucrimson> : sorry that I can't rank it
17:18 <nold_1702> : Not too much...
17:18 <nold_1702> : ><"
17:19 <nold_1702> : Under than 10 lol ><"
17:20 <nold_1702> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207299 Is it okay now.
17:21 <narakucrimson> : the end is still overlapped by something but I'd like to see how it looks when test played
17:21 <narakucrimson> : also
17:21 <narakucrimson> : in Spboxer's diff
17:21 <narakucrimson> : 01:42:538 (4) -
17:21 <narakucrimson> : please remove that clap
17:21 <nold_1702> : DONE...
17:22 <narakucrimson> : also did you receive what I said about kiais?
17:22 <narakucrimson> : I men
17:22 <narakucrimson> : mean*
17:22 <narakucrimson> : breaks
17:22 <narakucrimson> : orz
17:22 <nold_1702> : ??
17:23 <narakucrimson> : they are pretty inconsistent
17:23 <narakucrimson> : through the difficulties
17:24 <narakucrimson> : also, you can update now
17:24 <nold_1702> : It's no need to make them be consistent..
17:24 <nold_1702> : Please rank it><"
17:24 <narakucrimson> : I can't really :/
17:24 <nold_1702> : Not many Problems !><"
17:24 <narakucrimson> : I thought it was ok before but I can't really
17:24 <nold_1702> : Not really many
17:25 <narakucrimson> : also I added a red section
17:25 <nold_1702> : ...God..
17:25 <nold_1702> : My first bubble :< ..
17:25 <narakucrimson> : sorry, really, I'll rebubble it ^^

Ok, have your bubble back!

Soul-less wrote:

很好玩的图，而且相信很多人都赞同。又加上已经泡泡了，就当我送星路过吧~

Ranking gambatte!

1. 00:25:485 (1) - The jump in volume at the end of this spinner sounds weird. Fix the sections or change the spinner somehow please.
2. 03:51:380 - Move the section here 1/2 further (to 03:51:695 -) to prevent this silly loud sliderslide sound
3. 03:52:327 - Move this section to the beginning of the spinner because the beginning of the spinner sounds weirdly loud

1. Reduce AR and OD by 1 please
2. 02:52:959 (1) - I wouldn't recommend using this jump in the second easiest difficulty. Maybe remove the jump?

happy30 wrote:

Aww, I liked the old background better, it gave me a warmer feeling even though it was drawn This background makes me cold Sorry that I like this BG and this BG give me a epic feeling.

[Calm] I reduce thee AR to 3,OD3,HP3 since [Romantci]is higher than it before.

1. 00:25:485 (1) - The jump in volume at the end of this spinner sounds weird. Fix the sections or change the spinner somehow please.
   DONE
2. 03:51:380 - Move the section here 1/2 further (to 03:51:695 -) to prevent this silly loud sliderslide sound
   DONE
3. 03:52:327 - Move this section to the beginning of the spinner because the beginning of the spinner sounds weirdly loud

Done
Suggestions for the rhythm in the beginning of the map
00:33:380 (3) - I suggest changing this into a normal circle instead, because there is no sound in the song at the endpont (00:33:380 (3) So it sounds wrong to me.
00:38:432 (3) - Same thing here
00:43:485 (3) - here as well
I think this rhytm is okay and give players beats

[Romantic]

1. Reduce AR and OD by 1 please That's I must do.
2. 02:52:959 (1) - I wouldn't recommend using this jump in the second easiest difficulty. Maybe remove the jump?

Done
Other diffs are good, if you are changing anything, let it me know and I can rebubble oKAY,YOU CAN RE-BUBBLE IT NOW><"

overmap is fun , isn't it? It is.Oh no...It must be!

nold_1702 wrote:

I give up mapping...

Gonzvlo wrote:

nold_1702 wrote:

I give up mapping...

Seriously? Are you going to act like that?. I'm sorry but I can't let you do this, just because I disagree with you? That doesn't mean that you should give up mapping. Do not rush and think about it. Also, I'm not the only BAT in this game.

Just if you were wondering

22:25 <Gonzvlo> : What date is it today?
22:25 <nold_1702> : And now is 11:22 a.m.
22:25 <Gonzvlo> : Oh god, I'll try to check it today
22:25 <Gonzvlo> : I mean, right now
22:25 <nold_1702> : Okay thanks xp.
22:35 <Gonzvlo> : Uhm, you mapped to some rhythms that are not present in the song. Also, some jumps felt too ridiculous imo
22:35 <Gonzvlo> : :>
22:35 <Gonzvlo> : :<*
22:35 <nold_1702> : They're for pro.
22:35 <nold_1702> : And it's a overmap ,yup.
22:35 <nold_1702> : Many players enjoys it.
22:36 <Gonzvlo> : I see, and I understand that many players would love this map
22:36 <nold_1702> : Like a MAT fartownik
22:36 <nold_1702> : I really like the [Posthomous] diff. :I really like the [Posthomous] diff.
22:36 <nold_1702> : fartownik said that.
22:36 <nold_1702> : yup :>
22:36 <Gonzvlo> : But I wouldn't feel comfortable ranking it, I'm afraid that I'll mod the map but I won't rank it
22:36 <nold_1702> : Why not:< It's not unrankable ..ww
22:37 <nold_1702> : Please><"
22:37 <nold_1702> : Really many players love playing it ww..
22:37 <Gonzvlo> : I know it's not unrankable, but I don't agree with overmapping nor those jumps, ranking it wouldn't make me
22:37 <Gonzvlo> : feel comfortable with myself
22:38 <nold_1702> : Just see it in editor.
22:38 <Gonzvlo> : There might be some BATs that agree with overmapping and stuff, they could decide to rank it but I will not,
22:38 <Gonzvlo> : sorry.
22:38 <Gonzvlo> : I will still mod it because I promised to do so
22:38 <nold_1702> : I hv found many BATs only you and narakucrimson ><"
22:38 <nold_1702> : ... :< No....Please...beg you..
22:38 <nold_1702> : I'm a new mapper and it's my first map:<
22:39 <nold_1702> : Please><"
22:39 <Gonzvlo> : I'm sorry but I will not do it :<
22:39 <nold_1702> : Please...
22:39 <nold_1702> : It's fun at all..
22:39 <nold_1702> : Also happy30 agree that..
22:39 <nold_1702> : :< Please..
22:40 <Gonzvlo> : As I said, there might be lots of MAT/BAT that will agree with you but I don't. Overmapping has never felt
22:40 <Gonzvlo> : right to me, that's why I'll have to skip this time
22:40 <nold_1702> : If you can't , then no BAT mod it...
22:40 <nold_1702> : Oh..god....
22:40 <nold_1702> : ><"....
22:40 <Gonzvlo> : I could help you finding a BAT to check it ou, but I can't promise that he would rank it, that's up to him
22:40 <nold_1702> : Then you will not give back a bubble to me?
22:40 <nold_1702> : ><"
22:41 <nold_1702> : Who is he...
22:41 <Gonzvlo> : No, sorry, but I can't bubble/rank something that I don't agree with
22:41 <Gonzvlo> : I still don't know, I'll ask around
22:41 <nold_1702> : Then,your modding will break my first map 's bubble><"
22:42 <nold_1702> : ....No..please..
22:42 <nold_1702> : God...
22:43 <nold_1702> : Gonz
22:43 <nold_1702> : I give up mapping.
22:43 <nold_1702> : No need to mod it.
22:43 <Gonzvlo> : Don't
22:43 <nold_1702> : I think I hv to afk
22:43 <nold_1702> : Bye

ziin wrote:

Overmap is my way!

oh dear...

ziin wrote:

I do not like overmapping. There are many people like me, but I don't think there are any nearly as against it as I am. You can already see that a number of BATs won't rank the song due to the overmapping involved. Well you are certainly welcome to keep your stance on overmapping, but it's a terrible waste. You shouldn't be mapping to anything other than the music, and it's silly to overmap songs when you can do so much better by just mapping correctly.

[posthumous]
00:29:590 (1) - this section's overmap is terrible and doesn't fit at all. I also don't think you thought through your rhythms very well. I went ahead and remapped this section to show you a rhythm which doesn't suck, so download the flibbertigibbet difficulty and see if you like it. You can copy it, or just mess around with the locations, but I wouldn't mess too much with the rhythms.

On silencing notes: this is usually a bad idea, but I incorporated it into the flibbertigibbet difficulty only on the overmapped slider ends. Slider ends and spinners are the only times I will ever silence a note, since they are not always an important part of the rhythm, especially on long sustained notes that decrescendo into silence.

00:49:801 (1) - this section's overmap is nice, which is very high praise from me. It fits and you're creating a new rhythm section. I don't agree with all of it, but you're thinking like a drummer which is the most important thing. I don't mind overmapping so much in taiko for example, because the taiko drum in itself is a drum (and I don't play taiko). The problem occurs when the overmap doesn't fit the song and you run into the danger of being able to put any song to your rhythms and it sound just as good.
00:52:169 - I would leave out this beat
01:19:643 (5) - delete, add circle 1/4 later, add repeat on previous slider. One thing common in music is syncopation by using dotted notes or by putting the accent on a 1.5x beat. In this case, the accent is on 01:18:853 - 01:19:327 - 01:19:801 - these 3 beats, so the rhythm flows much better if you hit an object on those 3 beats.

01:42:853 (1) - this section i feel has awesome rhythms in the piano which you just skip because you're sticking to the beat. Sure that's good, but if you want to make this song rhythmically interesting, you can do it. I changed a few areas here, so keep an eye out for them in flibbertigibbet.

02:28:327 (1) - you had a really good thing going here and you killed it right before the climax. (reversing) tornado combos would be good here with increased spacing between each group of 4. if you don't like how repetitive that is, make the beginning of this buildup easier with more sliders and less circles.

02:33:380 (1) - now the main theme returns. While I would follow the piano, this isn't bad either. However this is the same in the music as 00:49:801 so I don't understand why you don't overmap here like you did before. If overmapping is truly your style, then you should do it as much as you can, especially when you do it well.
02:37:643 - don't forget to map this note.
02:38:274 - ^

03:21:380 (1,2) - take off the claps here

03:51:695 (1) - due to the ritardando here, I think it's unwise to map this with anything other than a spinner. You can justify it by saying you're mapping the chimes.

When I played this the first time the only part that stuck out was the first part. If you liked this mod and are willing to make the changes I may come back and mod the whole map next time along with a recheck on posthumous, but it likely won't come quickly. However, chances are gonz or lolcubes will come back and help you out.