general:
1) I think you better divide the kiai time into two. Here are the division.
start - end
00:29:158 - 00:40:587
00:44:396 - 00:55:925
2) add heatwave95 (which is heatkai's previous username) to the tag
3) how about adding 'reaching you' (the english translation) to the tag too?
-easy-
00:08:206- (1) spinner.. I think its better if you map this part. The next beat after spinner looks a little confusing for starters to play ._. (I play it by myself, thats why I can write this)
00:10:111- (1,2) I think its better if you convert this both into one. Because the end of the slider is a start of a lyric, (like this
http://i41.tinypic.com/mx1pwh.jpg ) then nc at (2).
(don't reject before trying this part first or in other word, don't like, reject all.)
00:17:730- (4) remove finish in the end of slider. put it at 00:21:063 instead (since the lyric is mixed up in the middle of slider orz)
00:21:539- (1) remove finish in the start of slider. (other option is try this pattern :
http://i40.tinypic.com/2056nwl.jpg ) of course with finish in the end of (3)
00:23:444- (4) remove finish here too.
(the one packet mod pack ends)
00:36:301- (1) remove nc (this is still the same lyric with before)
00:36:777- (7) if you did ^, new combo here.
00:39:158- (1) remove nc (this is still the same lyric with before)
00:50:587- (6) same as ^
00:52:016- (1) if you did ^ new combo here
00:56:301- (1) the spinner is a little bit late >< I think it'll be better (though a little harder) if you put it 1/4 tick behind the 'todoke' part.
good diff >< I don't think my mods are that useful though..
-normal-
00:10:111- (6) remove nc here, for the sake of the next slider (which is a new lyrics)
00:11:063- (7) if you did ^, nc here.
00:12:492- (1) remove nc.
00:13:920- (4) nc here. its a new lyric after all. get back to the combo consistency you have on the song opening neesan ><
00:14:973- (1) remove nc
00:15:587- (5) nc
00:16:539- (1) remove nc
00:17:492- (3,4) move them 1/2 beat backward. It sounds better. Since you followed the lyrics in the back parts.
00:23:444- (4) nc. its a new lyric.
00:24:396- (1) remove nc.
00:54:754- add a green line, move the sound back to soft since the drum stops here.
00:54:873- (4) new combo.
00:56:301- (1) the spinner is a little bit late >< I think it'll be better (though a little harder) if you put it 1/4 tick behind the 'todoke' part.
this diff is better than the easy in my opinion xD i enjoy playing this diff more.
-hard-
00:11:896- (x) add note here to follow the 'o' sound in the music (or more likely to make it similar with the part in front)
00:18:682- (4) new combo here, since its a new lyric.
00:19:635- (1) remove nc-- how about removing finish here and put it in the end of (5) ?
00:21:539- (1) remove finish here too. put it in the end of (7)
00:23:444- (1) remove finish here.
...can't find anything else orz
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good diff, good song (and short too).
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I hope this get ranked.
star xD