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Tanizawa Tomofumi - Kimi ni Todoke (TV Size)

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Miya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 Nopember 2011 at 0:27:14

Artist: Tanizawa Tomofumi
Title: Kimi ni Todoke (TV Size)
Source: Kimi ni Todoke
Tags: Opening Kazehaya Shota Kuronuma Sawako HeatKai
BPM: 126
Filesize: 14076kb
Play Time: 00:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. 52's Taiko (4,8 stars, 190 notes)
  2. Easy (2,01 stars, 57 notes)
  3. Hard (4,89 stars, 127 notes)
  4. Normal (4,07 stars, 86 notes)
Download: Tanizawa Tomofumi - Kimi ni Todoke (TV Size)
Download: Tanizawa Tomofumi - Kimi ni Todoke (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Opening song from Kimi ni Todoke. :)

Enjoy~

All osu diff is done by me.
Taiko diff is done by HeatKai.
Star Stream
Easy
00:10:111 (1) - delete? it will be better easier
00:17:730 (4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/8VfN

Normal
00:14:873 (1,2,3,4) - distance? (confusing for me)
00:47:730 (5) - x:420 y:108 ?


good map, good song~ :D
Topic Starter
Miya

Star Stream wrote:

Easy
00:10:111 (1) - delete? it will be better easier Well, for a moment i'll keep this. But if someone mention this again i'll delete it. :)
00:17:730 (4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/8VfN Sorry, i'll keep this for a moment.

Normal
00:14:873 (1,2,3,4) - distance? (confusing for me) Allright, fixed
00:47:730 (5) - x:420 y:108 ? Hmm, I didn't notice the spacing is a bit error. Okay fixed.

good map, good song~ :D
Thank you for your mod Star Stream ^^
Niva
Mod request via In-Game PM ~

[General]
-> Remove "OP" from tags, because the osu! web search can't find tags with 2 letters or less
-> Use brighter combo colors? Your current combo colors somehow give a sorrowful to me orz. Maybe like this:
-> I got offset -4 (4393 ms), not really sure though

[Easy]
  • 00:10:111 (1) - This is definitely too early after spinner for an Easy orz
    00:27:254 (2) - Try this slider code:
    296,180,27254,2,0,B|368:224|369:300|306:360|248:372|194:354|142:284|149:216|220:176,1,440,0|4
    It will look like this:
    00:29:396 (3) - Add note here maybe?
    00:34:873 (4) - I'd rather use a circle here, followed by 2/1 slider afterwards
    00:42:492 (2) - Don't use normal sliderslide here, sounds ugly (use inherit section to recover into soft sliderslide)
[Normal]
  • 00:14:873 (1,2,3,4) - Arranging them in an arc will play better imo (sorry ngeditnya buru2 lol)
    00:16:539 (1,2,3) - I'd rather use the whistle on (1)'s end, use no hitsound on (2), and use a finish on (3)
    00:40:587 (4) - Remove clap from slider's start, it breaks the clap consistency
    00:49:158 (2,3,4) - I personally dislike how this will stack in play mode
[Hard]
-> HP Drain and OD -1?
  • 00:07:492 (4,5) - Try this pattern?
    00:25:587 (1) - Finish in end, instead of whistle?
Rush modding orz
Good luck Miya ~
Topic Starter
Miya

Niva wrote:

Mod request via In-Game PM ~

[General]
-> Remove "OP" from tags, because the osu! web search can't find tags with 2 letters or less Ok
-> Use brighter combo colors? Your current combo colors somehow give a sorrowful to me orz. Maybe like this: Nope. It doesn't matter to me
SPOILER
[attachment=0:a7dc1]b3.png[/attachment:a7dc1]
-> I got offset -4 (4393 ms), not really sure though Nope, i will use my offset

[Easy]
  • 00:10:111 (1) - This is definitely too early after spinner for an Easy orz Ok deleted
    00:27:254 (2) - Try this slider code: Allright
    296,180,27254,2,0,B|368:224|369:300|306:360|248:372|194:354|142:284|149:216|220:176,1,440,0|4
    It will look like this:
    00:29:396 (3) - Add note here maybe? Nope, i don't want any 1/2 rythim in this diff.
    00:34:873 (4) - I'd rather use a circle here, followed by 2/1 slider afterwards. I add a circle on 00:35:825 instead.
    00:42:492 (2) - Don't use normal sliderslide here, sounds ugly (use inherit section to recover into soft sliderslide) I'll keep it. Sounds good to me.
[Normal]
  • 00:14:873 (1,2,3,4) - Arranging them in an arc will play better imo (sorry ngeditnya buru2 lol) Ok ok
    00:16:539 (1,2,3) - I'd rather use the whistle on (1)'s end, use no hitsound on (2), and use a finish on (3). Nope. Doesn't sounds good to me.
    00:40:587 (4) - Remove clap from slider's start, it breaks the clap consistency. Fixed
    00:49:158 (2,3,4) - I personally dislike how this will stack in play mode. No change, sorry
[Hard]
-> HP Drain and OD -1? It will too easy for hard
  • 00:07:492 (4,5) - Try this pattern? Nope
    00:25:587 (1) - Finish in end, instead of whistle? No, whistle sounds better.
Rush modding orz
Good luck Miya ~
Thank for modding Niva :)
No_Gu
request from my queue

[General]
Source: Kimi ni Todoke

[easy]
00:21:539 (1) - whistle instead of finish
00:23:444 (2) - ^
00:32:492 (1) - finish at the end
00:40:587 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:48:206 (2) - ^
If you think these finish are too noisy. you can turn down the volume

[normal]
00:32:968 (1) - finish
00:48:206 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:52:968 (3) - move it to 00:53:206

[hard]
00:11:063 (1) - remove NC
00:12:016 (3) - add NC
00:32:968 (4) - finish at the beginning
00:40:587 (3) - finish instead of clap
00:47:254 (1) - remove NC
00:48:206 (3) - add NC and finish at the beginning
00:49:396 (1) - remove NC
Topic Starter
Miya

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[General]
Source: Kimi ni Todoke Source has been fixed from the start.

[easy]
00:21:539 (1) - whistle instead of finish Nope, finish sounds better.
00:23:444 (2) - ^ ^
00:32:492 (1) - finish at the end
00:40:587 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:48:206 (2) - ^
If you think these finish are too noisy. you can turn down the volume Well, if someone mention finish at this time again, i'll add it. I'll not add it for now.

[normal]
00:32:968 (1) - finish
00:48:206 (1) - finish at the beginning Same reason as easy.
00:52:968 (3) - move it to 00:53:206 Ok

[hard]
00:11:063 (1) - remove NC Nah, NC for vocal.
00:12:016 (3) - add NC ^
00:32:968 (4) - finish at the beginning Same reason as above
00:40:587 (3) - finish instead of clap Ok
00:47:254 (1) - remove NC Nah, NC for vocal
00:48:206 (3) - add NC and finish at the beginning
00:49:396 (1) - remove NC
Other's than that, it means no. Thx for modding No_Gu. :)
Backstep
Hi Miya-chan :3

As your request form regenz.

P.S. he busy and cannot mod your song lol


General

* Kiai time I think it's look a bit boring if it have only clap sound owo

Easy

00:29:635 (1) - I'm not sure, I heard finish sound here ? (you can remove clap then add green timing sound around 35-40% with finish
00:31:063 (4) - add whistle at start of slider
00:32:492 (1) - add whistle at end of slider
00:34:873 (4) - add whistle at start of slider
00:36:301 (1) - remove clap then add green timing sound around 35-40% with finish
00:38:206 (4) - add whistle at end of slider
00:40:587 (1) - add whistle at start of slider
00:46:301 (2) - ^
00:48:206 (2) - ^
00:49:158 (3,4,5) - 1 grid up (lv4 grid) then (5) add whistle

Normal

00:09:396 (3,4) - switch your clap. (like your previous pattern.)
00:25:349 (1) - I think it's very short spinner, maybe you can make spinner end at 00:26:777.
00:29:635 (2) - remove clap then add green timing sound around 35-40% with finish
00:32:016 (1) - whistle
00:32:968 (1) - ^
00:33:920 (3) - start of slider add whistle.
00:36:301 (4) - remove clap then add green timing sound around 35-40% with finish
00:39:635 (2) - whistle.
00:40:587 (4) - whistle at the start of slider.
00:42:016 (5) - whistle at the end of slider.
00:47:254 (4) - whistle.
00:49:158 (2) - ^
00:51:063 (6) - whistle at the start of slider.

Hard

00:29:635 (3) - remove clap then add green timing sound around 35-40% with finish
00:36:301 (?) - add note with finish?
00:32:968 (4) - start of slider add whistle
00:34:873 (2) - whistle
00:48:206 (3) - start of slider add whistle
00:50:111 (3) - whistle


Good Luck ;)

P.S. I love slow song :3
Topic Starter
Miya

backstep wrote:

Hi Miya-chan :3

As your request form regenz.

P.S. he busy and cannot mod your song lol


General

* Kiai time I think it's look a bit boring if it have only clap sound owo So? What's the problem with that? I don't like switching clap and whistle so suddenly.

Easy

00:29:635 (1) - I'm not sure, I heard finish sound here ? (you can remove clap then add green timing sound around 35-40% with finish) Wrong, it's a clap sound
00:31:063 (4) - add whistle at start of slider
00:32:492 (1) - add whistle at end of slider
00:34:873 (4) - add whistle at start of slider
00:36:301 (1) - remove clap then add green timing sound around 35-40% with finish
00:38:206 (4) - add whistle at end of slider
00:40:587 (1) - add whistle at start of slider
00:46:301 (2) - ^
00:48:206 (2) - ^
00:49:158 (3,4,5) - 1 grid up (lv4 grid) then (5) add whistle

Normal

00:09:396 (3,4) - switch your clap. (like your previous pattern.) Ok
00:25:349 (1) - I think it's very short spinner, maybe you can make spinner end at 00:26:777. Ok fixed
00:29:635 (2) - remove clap then add green timing sound around 35-40% with finish
00:32:016 (1) - whistle
00:32:968 (1) - ^
00:33:920 (3) - start of slider add whistle.
00:36:301 (4) - remove clap then add green timing sound around 35-40% with finish
00:39:635 (2) - whistle.
00:40:587 (4) - whistle at the start of slider.
00:42:016 (5) - whistle at the end of slider.
00:47:254 (4) - whistle.
00:49:158 (2) - ^
00:51:063 (6) - whistle at the start of slider.

Hard

00:29:635 (3) - remove clap then add green timing sound around 35-40% with finish
00:36:301 (?) - add note with finish? It's off vocal, i don't want do that.
00:32:968 (4) - start of slider add whistle
00:34:873 (2) - whistle
00:48:206 (3) - start of slider add whistle
00:50:111 (3) - whistle


Good Luck ;)

P.S. I love slow song :3
Others than that it means no. But if someone mention this whistle problem again i'll consider it. Thank you for your mod backstep :)
athiota33
sorry :(, salah account :?
shikyu
mod4mod request, let's start

[General]
mmm... isn't kiai time seems too long? cut a little?

[Easy]
00:32:016 (X) - add note here?
00:42:492 - sounds better without timing here
overall good :)

[Normal]
00:05:111 (X) - add note here? more fit for lyric
00:07:016 (X) - ^
00:15:587 (4,1) - move 1 tick ahead, if you do that delete (2), more folow the lyric and add clap to each end of slider
00:25:349 (1) - lenghten spinner 2 ticks ahead and delete (1), sounds better
00:38:444 (4) - better make this slider from 00:38:682 until 00:39:158, if you do that delete (1)

[Hard]
00:06:658 (2) - delete it, seems doesn't follow anything
this good too :)

Still have some empty parts, that's all
Topic Starter
Miya

shikyu wrote:

mod4mod request, let's start

[General]
mmm... isn't kiai time seems too long? cut a little? Well, it's because the song itself is short, so it's like the kiai time is long. I just follow the basic reff.

[Easy]
00:32:016 (X) - add note here? There's nothing to follow there. Sorry.
00:42:492 - sounds better without timing here. Allright.
overall good :) Thank you :3

[Normal]
00:05:111 (X) - add note here? more fit for lyric Nope. it will make the rythim same as hard
00:07:016 (X) - ^
00:15:587 (4,1) - move 1 tick ahead, if you do that delete (2), more folow the lyric and add clap to each end of slider. No, i think this is suit the vocal better.
00:25:349 (1) - lenghten spinner 2 ticks ahead and delete (1), sounds better Nope, it's because there's a drum sounds on the back, and it will make the circle is too close with the circle.
00:38:444 (4) - better make this slider from 00:38:682 until 00:39:158, if you do that delete (1) Nah, i follow 'Ta' and 'Te' sounds.

[Hard]
00:06:658 (2) - delete it, seems doesn't follow anything. Okay
this good too :)

Still have some empty parts, that's all ??
Ok, thank you for your mod shikyu :)
Dino99
Request from my queue~ :D

Sorry for my poor English!! :(

[Easy]

  1. 00:16:301 (2) - Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184809
  2. 00:48:206 (2) - Finish
  3. 00:50:111 (5) - ^
  4. 00:53:920 (1) - Finish
  5. 00:54:396 (2) - Remove~ add notes with finish at 00:54:873 & 00:55:825
  6. 00:56:301 (1) - From here to 00:59:635?
[Normal]

  1. 00:27:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Maybe turn the volume up gradually. (Add green lines at 00:27:730 & 00:28:206 & 00:28:682)
    ~If you do it, Please fixs the [Hard] too.
  2. 00:53:920 & 00:54:873 - Finish
  3. 00:56:301 (1) - From here to 00:59:635?
Hard

  1. 00:16:063 (8) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184828
  2. 00:22:730 (7) - Clap
  3. 00:53:920 - Add a note with finish
  4. 00:54:873 (5) - Finish
  5. 00:56:301 (1) - From here to 00:59:635?
Nice song~

GOOD LUCK :D :)
Topic Starter
Miya

12BARRY21 wrote:

Request from my queue~ :D

Sorry for my poor English!! :(

[Easy]

  1. 00:16:301 (2) - Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184809 Ok
  2. 00:48:206 (2) - Finish Why? I don't like finish here.
  3. 00:50:111 (5) - ^ Overuse imo
  4. 00:53:920 (1) - Finish ^
  5. 00:54:396 (2) - Remove~ add notes with finish at 00:54:873 & 00:55:825 Nah. I prefer this one.
  6. 00:56:301 (1) - From here to 00:59:635? No, too long
[Normal]

  1. 00:27:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Maybe turn the volume up gradually. (Add green lines at 00:27:730 & 00:28:206 & 00:28:682)
    ~If you do it, Please fixs the [Hard] too. There's no different with it.
  2. 00:53:920 & 00:54:873 - Finish Overused
  3. 00:56:301 (1) - From here to 00:59:635? No
Hard

  1. 00:16:063 (8) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184828 Nah, prefer my pattern.
  2. 00:22:730 (7) - Clap There's already clap in that sldier :|
  3. 00:53:920 - Add a note with finish Nah. it doesn't follow vocal at all.
  4. 00:54:873 (5) - Finish Nope, overused.
  5. 00:56:301 (1) - From here to 00:59:635? No
Nice song~

GOOD LUCK :D :)
Thank you for the mod 12BARRY21
eg91022a71w
Here is my poor MOD

[Normal]
00:07:968 This sliders's end 00:08:206 is better.
00:08:920 add circle

[hard]
00:17:968 This and spinner are too near.
Topic Starter
Miya

eg91022a71w wrote:

Here is my poor MOD

[Normal]
00:07:968 This sliders's end 00:08:206 is better. ??, it's already end at 00:08:206
00:08:920 add circle hmm. ok

[hard]
00:17:968 This and spinner are too near So? This is a hard diff. And that's no problem.
Thank you for the mod eg91022a71w :3
Rei Hakurei
old log
20:08 <Miya> : nyan~
20:08 <Miya> : mw nyoba map baru miya ga?
20:08 <Rei_Fan49> : nyaa
20:08 <Rei_Fan49> : media fire ?
20:08 <Miya> : puush aja deh :3
20:08 <Miya> : bntr y upload dl
20:08 <Miya> : ngg baru 1 diff jg xD
20:11 <Miya> : ngupload 1,25mb :(
20:11 <Miya> : agak lama deh
20:12 <Rei_Fan49> : hmm ok
20:14 <Miya> : nyaan ini nyaan~
20:14 <Miya> : http://puu.sh/7SGV
20:15 <Rei_Fan49> : napa ga pake .osz ?
20:15 <Miya> : gmn cara ngompress osz nya?
20:16 <Miya> : soalnya kan miya g bisa upload ke osu!
20:16 <Rei_Fan49> : compress as zip
20:16 <Rei_Fan49> : rename .zip as .osz
20:16 <Rei_Fan49> : simple
20:16 <Miya> : oh gtu
20:16 <Miya> : baru tahu :3
20:16 <Miya> : tapi kan sama aja itu tinggal di ekstrak aja
20:17 <Rei_Fan49> : nyaa
20:17 <Miya> : gmn?
20:17 <Miya> : kl mod di mod disini aja lgsng :3 trus simpan savelognya
20:17 <Rei_Fan49> : ok
20:17 <Miya> : kl uda bisa upload lgsng post biar kasih kudosu xD
20:18 <Rei_Fan49> : ok
20:21 <Miya> : nyan~ gmn nyan?
20:21 <Rei_Fan49> : blom liat
20:21 <Miya> : >.<
20:23 <Rei_Fan49> : passable. diff terlali tinggi
20:23 <Rei_Fan49> : CS-1 OD-1/2
20:24 <Miya> : nyan, masa sih?
20:24 <Miya> : itu hard loh bukan normal >.<
20:24 <Rei_Fan49> : tau
20:25 <Rei_Fan49> : ga ada jump ?
20:25 <Miya> : ga :3
20:25 <Miya> : pake distance spacing smw
20:26 <Rei_Fan49> : kalo ini bisa dapet S lol
20:26 <Rei_Fan49> : OD-2
20:26 <Rei_Fan49> : *1
20:28 <Rei_Fan49> : kurang berkesan hard w/o jump
20:28 <Miya> : mknya miya g mw dikurangi soal od ar bla bla bla
20:28 <Miya> : biar susah :3
20:28 <Rei_Fan49> : okelah kalo OD ngga, toh AR cukup buat gw
20:29 <Rei_Fan49> : OD7 sebenarnya cuman nambahin 100 doang
20:29 <Miya> : ya biarin toh :3 toh ada stream triplet nya
20:29 <Rei_Fan49> : oh iya.. ada late timing
20:29 <Miya> : mana? o.o
20:29 <Rei_Fan49> : timing sekitar 589-592ms
20:30 <Miya> : offset mksdnya?
20:30 <Rei_Fan49> : 587an
20:30 <Rei_Fan49> : iya
20:30 <Miya> : jadi offset yg bnr?
20:30 <Rei_Fan49> : kalo gw sih ambil beat awal banget (umumnya sblm 1s)
20:30 <Miya> : ga ah miya mending ngambil pas heavy beat pertama
20:31 <Rei_Fan49> : tapi pindahin +8
20:33 <Miya> : nya lumayan deh :3
20:36 <Rei_Fan49> : ga ada speed up ya ?
20:37 <Rei_Fan49> : paling segitu dah kalo masalah umumnya... sisanya ga ketemu
20:37 <Miya> : buat apa?

modded at 31 october 2011 InGame
Rei Hakurei
nyan~ :3

[General]
> pffftt 59664 wwwww napa ga 60000 aja lol~ tanggung~

[Timing]
> di spinner TERAKHIR, volumenya kecilin sampe batas (pas diujung spinner) (5%~15%)

[Easy]
> 2 star ;_;
> kurangin SV(slidervelocity)nya 25%(0.28) - 50%(0.55) (dan remap, jika dirubah SVnya), atau naikkan AR 1.. soalnya AR sama SV ga pas..
00:08:206 (1) - convert into a slider.
00:50:587 (1) - remove NC
00:52:016 (2) - add NC
00:56:301 (1) - extend 2/1 beat?

[Normal]
> remove 2nd RED timing point. it annoys me about 1/4s lol..
00:56:301 (1) - extend 2/1 beat?

[Hard]
00:56:063 (1) - extend 2/1 beat?

:3 bahasa campuran~

(matte, HOSHI!!!)
Topic Starter
Miya

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

nyan~ :3

[General]
> pffftt 59664 wwwww napa ga 60000 aja lol~ tanggung~

[Timing]
> di spinner TERAKHIR, volumenya kecilin sampe batas (pas diujung spinner) (5%~15%) Hmm, uda pol paling kecil o.o

[Easy]
> 2 star ;_;
> kurangin SV(slidervelocity)nya 25%(0.28) - 50%(0.55) (dan remap, jika dirubah SVnya), atau naikkan AR 1.. soalnya AR sama SV ga pas.. Moh, ini uda termasuk lambat dibanding 2 diff lainnya.
00:08:206 (1) - convert into a slider. Spinner plays fine too.
00:50:587 (1) - remove NC No
00:52:016 (2) - add NC ^
00:56:301 (1) - extend 2/1 beat Well, extend it for 1/2 beat?

[Normal]
> remove 2nd RED timing point. it annoys me about 1/4s lol.. Orz, suddenly there's 2nd Red timing point o.o where this come from?
00:56:301 (1) - extend 2/1 beat ^?

[Hard]
00:56:063 (1) - extend 2/1 beat ^?

:3 bahasa campuran~

(matte, HOSHI!!!)
Thank you for the mod and the star rei :3
eg91022a71w

Miya wrote:

eg91022a71w wrote:

Here is my poor MOD

[Normal]
00:07:968 This sliders's end 00:08:206 is better. ??, it's already end at 00:08:206
Oh..I mistook. This sliders's end 00:08:206 00:08:44 is better.
Topic Starter
Miya

eg91022a71w wrote:

Oh..I mistook. This sliders's end 00:08:206 00:08:44 is better. Nah, i don't think so. It doesn't follow the vocal at all.
HeatKai
video offset : -150

here's the vid : http://www.mediafire.com/?px8coas48za3tdy

I will give the taiko diff later \:D/
Topic Starter
Miya
Well, thank you HeatKai, di video has been uploaded. :3
HeatKai
hey there hey there
EDIT:HERE THE TAIKO BG

Download: Tanizawa Tomofumi - Kimi ni Todoke (TV Size) (Miya) [52's Taiko].osu

YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request. if u ignore any of my suggestions please tell me a reason why u ignored it so i can learn from this in the future.

Easy:
00:07:254(3) - *nazi* 1 grid right
00:32:492(1) - ^
00:33:920(3) - make this the same as (1)

Normal:
00:18:682(1) - this bothers me because its almost touching the HP bar. i suggest that u make it lower. and if u ask me this doesnt look symmetrical because the 1st half and 2nd half doesnt look even. this is wat i mean if u dont understand http://puu.sh/9gZE
00:21:063(4) - *nazi* 1 grid down

Hard:
00:06:658 - add a circle like at the beginning

this is the best i can do. GL :D
Topic Starter
Miya

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request. if u ignore any of my suggestions please tell me a reason why u ignored it so i can learn from this in the future.

Easy:
00:07:254(3) - *nazi* 1 grid right. Hmm, all right. Blanket is more better.
00:32:492(1) - ^ Well, when i check again this slider shape, it doesn't simetrical. Fix the slider shape instead.
00:33:920(3) - make this the same as (1) ^

Normal:
00:18:682(1) - this bothers me because its almost touching the HP bar. i suggest that u make it lower. and if u ask me this doesnt look symmetrical because the 1st half and 2nd half doesnt look even. this is wat i mean if u dont understand http://puu.sh/9gZE Well, changing it into new pattern
00:21:063(4) - *nazi* 1 grid down ^

Hard:
00:06:658 - add a circle like at the beginning. It doesn't follow the vocal.

this is the best i can do. GL :D
Thank you for the mod 249. :)
Maya-kira
general:

1) I think you better divide the kiai time into two. Here are the division.
start - end
00:29:158 - 00:40:587
00:44:396 - 00:55:925

2) add heatwave95 (which is heatkai's previous username) to the tag

3) how about adding 'reaching you' (the english translation) to the tag too?

-easy-

00:08:206- (1) spinner.. I think its better if you map this part. The next beat after spinner looks a little confusing for starters to play ._. (I play it by myself, thats why I can write this)
00:10:111- (1,2) I think its better if you convert this both into one. Because the end of the slider is a start of a lyric, (like this http://i41.tinypic.com/mx1pwh.jpg ) then nc at (2).
(don't reject before trying this part first or in other word, don't like, reject all.)
00:17:730- (4) remove finish in the end of slider. put it at 00:21:063 instead (since the lyric is mixed up in the middle of slider orz)
00:21:539- (1) remove finish in the start of slider. (other option is try this pattern : http://i40.tinypic.com/2056nwl.jpg ) of course with finish in the end of (3)
00:23:444- (4) remove finish here too.
(the one packet mod pack ends)
00:36:301- (1) remove nc (this is still the same lyric with before)
00:36:777- (7) if you did ^, new combo here.
00:39:158- (1) remove nc (this is still the same lyric with before)
00:50:587- (6) same as ^
00:52:016- (1) if you did ^ new combo here
00:56:301- (1) the spinner is a little bit late >< I think it'll be better (though a little harder) if you put it 1/4 tick behind the 'todoke' part.

good diff >< I don't think my mods are that useful though..

-normal-

00:10:111- (6) remove nc here, for the sake of the next slider (which is a new lyrics)
00:11:063- (7) if you did ^, nc here.
00:12:492- (1) remove nc.
00:13:920- (4) nc here. its a new lyric after all. get back to the combo consistency you have on the song opening neesan ><
00:14:973- (1) remove nc
00:15:587- (5) nc
00:16:539- (1) remove nc
00:17:492- (3,4) move them 1/2 beat backward. It sounds better. Since you followed the lyrics in the back parts.
00:23:444- (4) nc. its a new lyric.
00:24:396- (1) remove nc.
00:54:754- add a green line, move the sound back to soft since the drum stops here.
00:54:873- (4) new combo.
00:56:301- (1) the spinner is a little bit late >< I think it'll be better (though a little harder) if you put it 1/4 tick behind the 'todoke' part.

this diff is better than the easy in my opinion xD i enjoy playing this diff more.

-hard-

00:11:896- (x) add note here to follow the 'o' sound in the music (or more likely to make it similar with the part in front)
00:18:682- (4) new combo here, since its a new lyric.
00:19:635- (1) remove nc-- how about removing finish here and put it in the end of (5) ?
00:21:539- (1) remove finish here too. put it in the end of (7)
00:23:444- (1) remove finish here.

...can't find anything else orz

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good diff, good song (and short too).
><
I hope this get ranked.
star xD
Topic Starter
Miya

Maya-kira wrote:

general:

1) I think you better divide the kiai time into two. Here are the division.
start - end I don't think so. The reff part is one imo.
00:29:158 - 00:40:587
00:44:396 - 00:55:925

2) add heatwave95 (which is heatkai's previous username) to the tag HeatKai is enough

3) how about adding 'reaching you' (the english translation) to the tag too? It's same with the tittle.

-easy-

00:08:206- (1) spinner.. I think its better if you map this part. The next beat after spinner looks a little confusing for starters to play ._. (I play it by myself, thats why I can write this) Nah, it's because the vocal is just long.
00:10:111- (1,2) I think its better if you convert this both into one. Because the end of the slider is a start of a lyric, (like this http://i41.tinypic.com/mx1pwh.jpg ) then nc at (2). No. I don't like it.
(don't reject before trying this part first or in other word, don't like, reject all.)
00:17:730- (4) remove finish in the end of slider. put it at 00:21:063 instead (since the lyric is mixed up in the middle of slider orz) No, the finish sound doesn't fit with the song.
00:21:539- (1) remove finish in the start of slider. (other option is try this pattern : http://i40.tinypic.com/2056nwl.jpg ) of course with finish in the end of (3) No, i don't think so.
00:23:444- (4) remove finish here too. ^
(the one packet mod pack ends)
00:36:301- (1) remove nc (this is still the same lyric with before) No, it will make the NC is not consistent.
00:36:777- (7) if you did ^, new combo here.
00:39:158- (1) remove nc (this is still the same lyric with before) No ^
00:50:587- (6) same as ^
00:52:016- (1) if you did ^ new combo here
00:56:301- (1) the spinner is a little bit late >< I think it'll be better (though a little harder) if you put it 1/4 tick behind the 'todoke' part.Nah. It will be too surprising for newbie player.

good diff >< I don't think my mods are that useful though.. Sorry, i don't agree with all of your suggestion.

-normal-

00:10:111- (6) remove nc here, for the sake of the next slider (which is a new lyrics). I NC it for the piano sound. Denied. And it will make the combo is too long.
00:11:063- (7) if you did ^, nc here.
00:12:492- (1) remove nc.
00:13:920- (4) nc here. its a new lyric after all. get back to the combo consistency you have on the song opening neesan >< Its too long. I nc it every stanza.
00:14:973- (1) remove nc
00:15:587- (5) nc
00:16:539- (1) remove nc
00:17:492- (3,4) move them 1/2 beat backward. It sounds better. Since you followed the lyrics in the back parts. Doesn't fit with the song imo.
00:23:444- (4) nc. its a new lyric.
00:24:396- (1) remove nc.
00:54:754- add a green line, move the sound back to soft since the drum stops here. I don't think so.
00:54:873- (4) new combo.
00:56:301- (1) the spinner is a little bit late >< I think it'll be better (though a little harder) if you put it 1/4 tick behind the 'todoke' part.

this diff is better than the easy in my opinion xD i enjoy playing this diff more. Well, sorry again, i don't agree with all of your suggestion especialy comboing.

-hard-

00:11:896- (x) add note here to follow the 'o' sound in the music (or more likely to make it similar with the part in front) The 'o' sound is definitely on 00:12:016
00:18:682- (4) new combo here, since its a new lyric.
00:19:635- (1) remove nc-- how about removing finish here and put it in the end of (5) ?
00:21:539- (1) remove finish here too. put it in the end of (7). I don't agree with removing finish sound here.
00:23:444- (1) remove finish here.

...can't find anything else orz

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good diff, good song (and short too).
><
I hope this get ranked.
star xD Thank you :)
Well, thank you for modding this map sis. But you still get kudosu for me because you have donate your time to mod this map. :)
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Miya ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

[General]

Your mp3 file is 352kbps,this is unrankable, change 128 or 192 plz.

Delete OSB file plz.


[Hard]

00:15:825 - add note will be better.
00:21:539 (3) - Remove finish.


[Normal]

OD,HP-1
00:21:539 (1) - start point Remove finish.


[Easy]

HP,AR,OD+1
00:21:539 (1) - start point Remove finish.
00:32:016 - add note.
00:47:254 - ^
00:56:301 (1) - start to here 00:56:063.


That's all ~ Nice song and map ~

Good luck ~ ;)
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