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YUI - again (Full ver.)

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Yui_old_1
37 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Yui_old_1
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年2月2日 at 15:52:52

Artist: YUI
Title: Again (Full ver.)
Source: Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood
Tags: FMA
BPM: 140
Filesize: 6643kb
Play Time: 03:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.2 stars, 153 notes)
  2. Hard (4.94 stars, 631 notes)
  3. Normal (4.16 stars, 375 notes)
Download: YUI - Again (Full ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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YUI - again Created by Yui
Last edited by Yui_old_1 , edited 14 times in total.
lwusyy
1 post
Joined April 2011
lwusyy
nice map~=w=
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue

General
title 改成 again (Full Ver.)

easy
00:27:626 (1) - 删finish

normal
00:26:126 (4) - 结尾finish ，删掉5
00:42:841 (8) - NC
00:52:269 (5) - ^
01:07:698 (2) - 开头加finish
01:38:126 (4) - 结尾finish
01:55:912 (7) - NC
02:12:841 (1) - 开头finish
02:26:556 (1) - ^

hard
00:31:698 (8) - NC
01:23:984 (7) - ^
01:37:055 (8) - ^
02:33:412 (2) - NC.上一个note 删NC
02:47:233 (2) - ^
02:52:055 (3) - 结尾finish
03:15:627 (6) - 顶HP bar了
Yui_old_1
37 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Yui_old_1

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

General
title 改成 again (Full Ver.)

easy
00:27:626 (1) - 删finish

normal
00:26:126 (4) - 结尾finish ，删掉5
00:42:841 (8) - NC
00:52:269 (5) - ^
01:07:698 (2) - 开头加finish
01:38:126 (4) - 结尾finish
01:55:912 (7) - NC
02:12:841 (1) - 开头finish
02:26:556 (1) - ^

hard
00:31:698 (8) - NC
01:23:984 (7) - ^
01:37:055 (8) - ^ 这里没有改, 连打后边单个的note加了个nc
02:33:412 (2) - NC.上一个note 删NC ?? 貌似歌词是从现在的1开始的啊?
02:47:233 (2) - ^ ^
02:52:055 (3) - 结尾finish
03:15:627 (6) - 顶HP bar了
其他都修复了.谢谢~
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n
:) Hi.

Request from my modding queue :

从Hard开始看的，看到Normal才发现图还没做完 ?

General
  1. Normalclap实在太突兀了 换个合适的吧

Normal
  1. AR - 1 ?
  2. 01:10:055 (x) - add note
  3. 01:24:841 (6) - New combo
  4. 02:48:412 (4) - 索性删点 这个实在不好掌握

Hard
  1. 00:25:055 (8) - 和00:24:198 (6) 尾完全重合 现在是 x0.05
    Code
    148,205,25055,2,0,B|148:141|212:125,1,90,0|8
  2. 01:13:484 (4) - Ctrl + R ? (头尾互换)
  3. 01:17:555 (6) - 跳的位置有点生硬感觉
  4. 01:37:055 (2) - Ctrl + R ?
  5. 02:25:484 (4) - ^
  6. 这歌实在不好做,特别是rap部分,有些地方你跟vocal跟的有点太多,用slider带过就好(我也不知道该怎么办..T.T sorry)
    对歌不熟的人可能有点不知所云... 因为翻唱过这个，所以我觉得还好
  7. vocal
    1. 00:41:020 (3,4) - 换成3/4长的slider ?
    2. 00:49:270 (3,4,5) -
    3. 00:57:412 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
    4. 01:23:341 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
    5. 01:48:091 (1,2) -
    6. 01:49:805 (1,2) -
    7. 01:52:912 (2,3,4,5) -
    8. 01:54:412 (8,1) -
    9. 02:01:055 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
    10. 02:02:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
    ... 不一一列举了
总体不错的图，排版还能再顺手一些
加油~
athiota33
547 posts
Joined January 2011
athiota33
Gyaa~ FMA song x3~

[General]

Add KIA time?

[Easy]

00:35:126 (4) - NC?
01:14:555 (3) - ^

[Normal]

Don't stack many notes. I think it makes the player confuse.
01:09:412 (4) - NC?
01:14:555 (1) - Add finish in the begining of slider?
02:04:269 (5) - NC?
02:21:421 (4) - ^
02:33:413 (2) - Distance

[Hard]

I think there is some part that the sound is to soft and to loud.

Thats all,Good luck :D
Yui_old_1
37 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Yui_old_1

S h i o n wrote:

:) Hi.

Request from my modding queue :

从Hard开始看的，看到Normal才发现图还没做完 ? 0 0于是复制粘贴了一通,,现在做完了w

General
  1. Normalclap实在太突兀了 换个合适的吧



Normal
  1. AR - 1 ?
  2. 01:10:055 (x) - add note
  3. 01:24:841 (6) - New combo
  4. 02:48:412 (4) - 索性删点 这个实在不好掌握

Hard
  1. 00:25:055 (8) - 和00:24:198 (6) 尾完全重合 现在是 x0.05 唔.是要放重合一起的意思么0 0,
    Code
    148,205,25055,2,0,B|148:141|212:125,1,90,0|8
  2. 01:13:484 (4) - Ctrl + R ? (头尾互换)
  3. 01:17:555 (6) - 跳的位置有点生硬感觉
  4. 01:37:055 (2) - Ctrl + R ?
  5. 02:25:484 (4) - ^ 嗯,,上面的几个位置都调整了下
  6. 这歌实在不好做,特别是rap部分,有些地方你跟vocal跟的有点太多,用slider带过就好(我也不知道该怎么办..T.T sorry)
    对歌不熟的人可能有点不知所云... 因为翻唱过这个，所以我觉得还好 因为很喜欢这个，所以我觉得还好
  7. vocal
    1. 00:41:020 (3,4) - 换成3/4长的slider ? 突然发现这里时间有点点错误..改成了普通的5连..
    2. 00:49:270 (3,4,5) -
    3. 00:57:412 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
    4. 01:23:341 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
    5. 01:48:091 (1,2) -
    6. 01:49:805 (1,2) -
    7. 01:52:912 (2,3,4,5) -
    8. 01:54:412 (8,1) -
    9. 02:01:055 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
    10. 02:02:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
    ... 不一一列举了
嗯..把一些奇怪的地方换了下0 0

总体不错的图，排版还能再顺手一些
加油~谢谢 喵0(><)o
Yui_old_1
37 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Yui_old_1

athiota33 wrote:

Gyaa~ FMA song x3~

[General]

Add KIA time? ahh i forgot it.. now added

all fixed

[Easy]

00:35:126 (4) - NC?
01:14:555 (3) - ^

[Normal]

Don't stack many notes. I think it makes the player confuse.
01:09:412 (4) - NC?
01:14:555 (1) - Add finish in the begining of slider?
02:04:269 (5) - NC?
02:21:421 (4) - ^
02:33:413 (2) - Distance ?

[Hard]

I think there is some part that the sound is to soft and to loud.

Thats all,Good luck :D
thanks~!
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n

Yui wrote:

Hard
  1. 00:25:055 (8) - 和00:24:198 (6) 尾完全重合 现在是 x0.05 唔.是要放重合一起的意思么0 0,
恩 是的. x0.05有点明显了
Yui_old_1
37 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Yui_old_1

S h i o n wrote:

Yui wrote:

Hard
  1. 00:25:055 (8) - 和00:24:198 (6) 尾完全重合 现在是 x0.05 唔.是要放重合一起的意思么0 0,
恩 是的. x0.05有点明显了
嗯嗯.. 弄到一起啦>w<
仔细看了下你的头像发现原来头像是个男的0 0..
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there Mod for request XD
还是用中文吧

General:
Storyboard大赞！
不过我不知道你是不是专门设计的但是lrc05.png的消失时间比其他歌词要短……
没有能够一个一个检查下去。。。sb做歌词这耐心咱太佩服了……

另外咱听说难度间分数相差6倍以上可能会被挑。。。Easy的分数72万，Normal 450万。。可能需要考虑调下

Easy:
一上来就听到很重的slider ball滚动音。。和另外两个难度相比。。。感觉还是拿掉会好一点或者换soft的……

00:27:626 (1,2) - 这种红白线在easy里感觉不太合适吧？后面还有很多白红线的slider。。咱不是很确认在easy中是否允许这么用

01:17:983 (1) - 最后结尾加个clap会好点
01:41:983 (2,3,4) - 这里的clap感觉不是很好听，要和前面对应的话都移除会更好一点吧？

01:59:126 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 还是难度问题……还有后面那处也是……

02:10:269 (3) - slider形状不太好看……
03:45:412 (1) - 尾部加个clap感觉好听一点
03:47:126 (1) - 最后这个spinner有一点短吧？

Normal:
说实话咱自己也不清楚在normal里这样大量的使用红线会不会被挑刺……

00:11:769 (3,4) - 这个打的时候感觉别扭……听到也别扭……考虑改成一个reverse slider然后做成白线-白线这种？
00:28:912 (4) - 这个开头少了个clap吧？

00:37:055 (3) - 个人感觉这个clap可以拿掉
00:37:912 (6) - slider不好看。。同个人感觉……
01:48:626 (2) - 考虑向下挪动1格？
02:43:269 - 总觉得这里少了点什么……加个note试试看？


Hard:
AR-1? 感觉AR7手感刚好，AR8一上来就遇到红线起手的slider于是感觉怪怪的

00:10:912 - 这里感觉少了一个Finish，考虑加个note或者把折返延长到这里？
00:17:984 (1) - Spinner可以考虑加个finish音效

00:53:341 (6,7) - 感觉向上挪动一格会好看一点？
00:56:984 (8) - 感觉这个clap放在尾部更舒服一点，另外可以考虑把这个slider的弧度向下修正一点和前面小串的延长方向连到一起？

01:10:055 (3,4,5,6) - 这里小连打的距离突然拉大了，难度上真的没问题么？

01:24:198 (8) - 看起来好像没和前面串的弧度契合在一起，用的是0.7的DS？我自己试了下向下挪动一格会感觉好一点，不过似乎01:23:770 (4,5,6) - 这三个Note的弧度摆的也有点怪，也许需要整个重新微调一下让弧线更平滑会更好吧？不妨把Grid Level调到4试试看？

01:35:555 (4) - 这个slider是设计成这样么？和后面2个相对比似乎拐点的位置有点偏？

01:37:055 (2) - 不太好看……和另外一个统一了形状会好一点吧？

01:42:627 (5) - 还是slider的弧线好像有点问题……同一个combo里01:41:984 (3) - 就要看好多了

01:45:412 - 这段test的时候打的感觉很奇怪……不知道是不是因为蓝线slider的缘故……特别是01:48:627 (2) - 这个note。。。除非死盯着approach circle否则只靠听旋律的话很难打准的感觉……

02:18:841 (5,6,7) - 5 6间的弧线好像有点问题，把6向右挪动一点会好点吧？

02:47:555 (3) - 这个的slider形状和2统一了会不会好一点？

02:53:984 (1) - 和前面对应的话，这里尾部应该加个Clap吧？

02:55:484 (1) - 建议spinner从白线开始

03:29:984 (3) - slider形状感觉不太好……

03:30:841 (5,6,7) - 也是弧线的问题……

不知道你是不是专门把slider拉成这种很偏的形状……如果是的话请忽略掉全部和slider形状有关的部分就好……。。。


这个sb太华丽了，要坚定的支持一下，star~
Yui_old_1
37 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Yui_old_1

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there Mod for request XD
还是用中文吧

General:
.......
哇好详细,, >< 慢慢修ing..


shion.scorpiour.谢谢星星><
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

感觉槽点不多又很多……所以我只说下建议好了

Easy:
也是同楼上 第一反应滑条音非常重 考虑降低下音量吧？
第二反应0.7的sv的真低啊……不过也不是问题 hitsound下的也不错 所以先pass


Normal:
这难度我感觉AR稍微低了点 上手先AR+1感觉就更舒服 不过就有点像HARD-了…………这个你就见仁见智吧
其次感觉clap有点过多 尤其前面的部分 再者对比你另外两个难度的hitsound 你那种2个2个clap的加法并不适合默认的clap 应该变成hitnormal更合适
00:47:126 (1) - 从这开始后MP3每一个重音都可以加上FINISH来配合 现在明显有点过于单调了
后面基本也是同理


Hard:
这个难度我不同意AR7的提案 我觉得AR8刚刚好适合玩 AR7会慢很多
这个难度感觉问题就是复制粘贴似乎很多的样子 很多排列见了一次又见一次 节奏也是同理 感觉有点缺少变化 没有想象中的那么好玩了
其次就是排列有些乱 无论是滑条的形状还是各个圆圈的位置都感觉有点mess 这个感觉也不是三言两语能解决的问题 所以我只提一下好了


SB确实做的不错 我是不清楚你怎么控制的那个歌词渐入渐出的时间……（没办法我SB白痴）不过效果确实不错
唯一想吐槽的就是有的地方歌词走的太快 我还没看清他就已经切下一句话了…………而且歌词的字体效果存在感不是很高 可能因为空心的我不是很喜欢吧 别的就都好了


…………感觉说了一堆废话 一点实质MOD内容都没有…………不过确实也就是我现在能表达的东西了 钢炼里面听的这首歌 一直很喜欢 所以star一个 加油吧~
Yui_old_1
37 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Yui_old_1

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

感觉槽点不多又很多……所以我只说下建议好了

Easy:
也是同楼上 第一反应滑条音非常重 考虑降低下音量吧？
第二反应0.7的sv的真低啊……不过也不是问题 hitsound下的也不错 所以先pass


Normal:
这难度我感觉AR稍微低了点 上手先AR+1感觉就更舒服 不过就有点像HARD-了…………这个你就见仁见智吧
其次感觉clap有点过多 尤其前面的部分 再者对比你另外两个难度的hitsound 你那种2个2个clap的加法并不适合默认的clap 应该变成hitnormal更合适
00:47:126 (1) - 从这开始后MP3每一个重音都可以加上FINISH来配合 现在明显有点过于单调了
后面基本也是同理


Hard:
这个难度我不同意AR7的提案 我觉得AR8刚刚好适合玩 AR7会慢很多
这个难度感觉问题就是复制粘贴似乎很多的样子 很多排列见了一次又见一次 节奏也是同理 感觉有点缺少变化 没有想象中的那么好玩了
其次就是排列有些乱 无论是滑条的形状还是各个圆圈的位置都感觉有点mess 这个感觉也不是三言两语能解决的问题 所以我只提一下好了


SB确实做的不错 我是不清楚你怎么控制的那个歌词渐入渐出的时间……（没办法我SB白痴）不过效果确实不错
唯一想吐槽的就是有的地方歌词走的太快 我还没看清他就已经切下一句话了…………而且歌词的字体效果存在感不是很高 可能因为空心的我不是很喜欢吧 别的就都好了


…………感觉说了一堆废话 一点实质MOD内容都没有…………不过确实也就是我现在能表达的东西了 钢炼里面听的这首歌 一直很喜欢 所以star一个 加油吧~
唔..afk了几天再回来看感触很多.. ><我会继续加油的.

normal声音修改完毕后上传..
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
喜歡yui的朋友你好 >3< 我都好喜歡呀 ~~~
等我回來mod一個 :D

star 一下先
wule
150 posts
Joined April 2011
wule
师傅！（回头闲下来就来MOD）
Yui_old_1
37 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Yui_old_1

KingsAL2 wrote:

喜歡yui的朋友你好 >3< 我都好喜歡呀 ~~~
等我回來mod一個 :D

star 一下先

atk1992 wrote:

师傅！（回头闲下来就来MOD）
好多星星!! !!
.好突然><!
谢谢大家><
!!!!!!!!
Teru21
746 posts
Joined September 2011
Teru21
Hi! from teruteru modding & guest diff queue
lets start :D

[General]
i dont think the kiai time is at that point... remove all kiai time and add the new one.. here:
01:00:841 - add kiai time
01:24:841 - remove kiai time
02:12:841 - add kiai time
02:36:841 - remove kiai time
03:24:841 - add kiai time
03:48:841 - remove kiai time

[Easy]
00:32:126 (5) - x:112 y:104
00:33:626 (1) - not to fit with the music... try change it like this, add circle here 00:33:841 , or move it to 00:33:412 with once reverse, or make slider from 00:33:412 and end it 00:33:841.
00:35:983 (1) - R NC
00:36:412 - NC
00:53:983 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/192957
01:37:912 - add break
02:11:126 (4) - NC
03:16:055 - add break
03:26:555 (2) - NC
03:29:983 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:14:555 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/192963 just make one.. the copy paste :D
00:26:126 (4) - NC
00:31:483 (4) - ^
00:34:483 (4) - ^
00:41:126 (4) - ^
01:47:126 (5) - ^
suggestions :
02:00:412 (4) - NC
02:02:126 (4) - ^
02:03:841 (4) - ^
02:07:269 (5) - ^
02:08:983 (4) - ^
02:10:698 (5,6) - ^
03:16:055 - add break

[Hard]
00:13:698 (5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/192968

Good Luck :D :)
Dino99
1,809 posts
Joined May 2011
Dino99
From My Queue :D

[Normal]

  1. 01:24:841 (1) - 往上一格
  2. 01:36:412 - Add a note with finish?
  3. 01:38:126 (4) - Clap
  4. 02:19:698 (2) - ^
  5. 02:26:556 (1) - ^
  6. 03:23:126 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 也許不要重疊? 或換Slider 這樣如何? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/193037
    128,280,203126,2,0,B|64:280,3,60,0|0|0|8
    48,232,203983,2,0,B|112:232,3,60,0|0|0|8
[Hard]

  1. 01:00:198 (4) - Clap
  2. 01:11:662 (1) - 好短... 刪掉~ 多加幾個Note?
  3. 01:20:126 - Clap
  4. 02:23:662 (1) - 同第2個理由
  5. 02:49:912 - Add a note
  6. 02:50:019 - ^
  7. 02:55:698 (1) - Finish
  8. 03:47:126 (1) - 刪掉? 轉完從這開始
加油~
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
as your req from my queue

General

Errors

  1. I downloaded your map twice. But still, I can only found 2 diffs inside. Idk where the [Hard] goes?
  2. Does it really necessary to set 1 second Lead-in?
Suggestions

  1. Delete 1 .osb file from this document.
  2. I can't thoroughly understand your design about the kiai areas. Why didn't you let kiai starts at 01:00:841&02:12:841?
  3. I personally disagree the usage of default hitsounds. They don't really fit the song. Especially when you truned the volume so high.
  4. It's not pretty worth awarding to do copy&paste works when you do decided to map a Full ver. song :o

Easy

Errors

00:20:769 (1) - Stupid finish sound, delete
00:27:626 (1) - ^
00:45:841 (1) - My ears get broken, why so suddenly comes such a heavy N-finish :(

Suggestions

Abate all the volume section by at least 15%, you made it too loud to hear.
00:23:126 (2,3) - Bad looking sliders
00:30:412 (3,4) - ^
00:35:983 (1) - No NC
00:38:983 (1) - ^
00:42:841 (1) - ^
01:47:983 (1) - ^
01:50:983 (1) - ^
01:54:841 (1) - ^
01:56:555 (1) - ^
01:59:126 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I saw your design but this is just meaningless, remove all NCs
02:05:983 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

Normal

Errors

You'd better to arrange objects with distance snap, some of your notes are just randomly touched
00:47:983 (4) - Spacing.

Suggestions

Abate all the volume section by at least 15%, you made it too loud to hear.
01:36:626 (1) - Remove NC here and add NC at 01:36:841 (2) -
03:14:555 (2) - Ugly slider
03:17:983 (2,4) - ^
03:33:412 (1,2,3) - Spacing
03:45:198 (1,2) - Hey, N-clap-S-clap spam here? remove clap from 1
Yui_old_1
37 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Yui_old_1

LKs wrote:

as your req from my queue

General

Errors

  1. I downloaded your map twice. But still, I can only found 2 diffs inside. Idk where the [Hard] goes?
  2. Does it really necessary to set 1 second Lead-in?
Suggestions

  1. Delete 1 .osb file from this document.
  2. I can't thoroughly understand your design about the kiai areas. Why didn't you let kiai starts at 01:00:841&02:12:841?
  3. I personally disagree the usage of default hitsounds. They don't really fit the song. Especially when you truned the volume so high.
  4. It's not pretty worth awarding to do copy&paste works when you do decided to map a Full ver. song :o

Easy

Errors

00:20:769 (1) - Stupid finish sound, delete
00:27:626 (1) - ^
00:45:841 (1) - My ears get broken, why so suddenly comes such a heavy N-finish :(

Suggestions

Abate all the volume section by at least 15%, you made it too loud to hear.
00:23:126 (2,3) - Bad looking sliders
00:30:412 (3,4) - ^
00:35:983 (1) - No NC
00:38:983 (1) - ^
00:42:841 (1) - ^
01:47:983 (1) - ^
01:50:983 (1) - ^
01:54:841 (1) - ^
01:56:555 (1) - ^
01:59:126 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I saw your design but this is just meaningless, remove all NCs
02:05:983 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

Normal

Errors

You'd better to arrange objects with distance snap, some of your notes are just randomly touched
00:47:983 (4) - Spacing.

Suggestions

Abate all the volume section by at least 15%, you made it too loud to hear.
01:36:626 (1) - Remove NC here and add NC at 01:36:841 (2) -
03:14:555 (2) - Ugly slider
03:17:983 (2,4) - ^
03:33:412 (1,2,3) - Spacing
03:45:198 (1,2) - Hey, N-clap-S-clap spam here? remove clap from 1
谢谢mod>< thx
Strawberry
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Strawberry
:3 hi yui~
拖了很久的request 来还债 :)
因为超过3分钟而且你没有指定所以我mod[Normal]&[Hard]

[Normal]
nice diff

[Hard]
00:34:055 (3,4) - 00:34:376 (5,6) - 这两对二连感觉不要叠在一起比较好 或者+NC让人更容易读出来？
01:10:055 (3,4) - 01:10:377 (5,6) - ^
01:12:091 (3,4,5) - ^ 也很容易当成四连打过去
01:58:269 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:34:055 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:52:270 (1) - 移到x108 y88
01:16:269 (3) - ^x192 y124
01:23:448 (3) - 有点坑
01:59:984 (5,6,7,8,9) - 距离调整好 这种地方关掉grid snap摆也没什么关系
02:08:448 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
03:30:841 (5,6,7) - ^
02:17:984 (3) - 中间的锚点移动到x376 y72
02:20:341 (4) - ^ 也是中间的锚点x148 y108
03:16:270 (1,3) - 去掉whistle会不会听起来舒服点？
03:17:770 (1) - 结尾下whistle
03:19:484 (1) - ^
03:18:627 (3) - 开头下whistle

好歌&好图~ :) good luck!~
Yui_old_1
37 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Yui_old_1

Strawberry wrote:

:3 hi yui~
拖了很久的request 来还债 :)
因为超过3分钟而且你没有指定所以我mod[Normal]&[Hard]

[Normal]
nice diff

[Hard]
00:34:055 (3,4) - 00:34:376 (5,6) - 这两对二连感觉不要叠在一起比较好 或者+NC让人更容易读出来？
01:10:055 (3,4) - 01:10:377 (5,6) - ^
01:12:091 (3,4,5) - ^ 也很容易当成四连打过去
01:58:269 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:34:055 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:52:270 (1) - 移到x108 y88
01:16:269 (3) - ^x192 y124
01:23:448 (3) - 有点坑
01:59:984 (5,6,7,8,9) - 距离调整好 这种地方关掉grid snap摆也没什么关系
02:08:448 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
03:30:841 (5,6,7) - ^
02:17:984 (3) - 中间的锚点移动到x376 y72
02:20:341 (4) - ^ 也是中间的锚点x148 y108
03:16:270 (1,3) - 去掉whistle会不会听起来舒服点？
03:17:770 (1) - 结尾下whistle
03:19:484 (1) - ^
03:18:627 (3) - 开头下whistle

好歌&好图~ :) good luck!~
谢谢mod>< !!~
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from my queue~

    General :
  1. Tags裡的FA FMA是什麼意思?沒意思的話就刪除吧 如果有意思就別理我了..

    Normal :

    SPOILER
  2. 00:11:555 (2) - 去掉clap 然後在後面slider的頭加上clap
  3. 00:26:126 (1) - 開頭去clap
  4. 00:37:055 (1,2,3) - 重疊好吧 有點歪歪的 把grid snap去掉後對準吧
  5. 00:39:626 (2) - 結尾finish去掉換clap 這裡不是很大聲
  6. 00:40:269 (X) - 加個note吧 如果有加 把這個note加NC 下個note去NC
  7. 00:42:841 (1) - 去NC
  8. 00:44:769 (1) - ^
  9. 00:45:841 (1) - 去finish
  10. 01:00:412 (3) - clap
  11. 01:00:626 (4) - 去clap
  12. 01:00:841 (1) - 開頭finish就好 把clap去掉
  13. 01:02:341 (3) - 去clap
  14. 01:04:055 (1) - 我實在不想多說了... 這種連續兩拍的clap實在不配音樂 反正後面連續兩拍clap的 全部都刪除第一個clap
  15. 01:47:983 (1) - 去NC
  16. 01:49:912 (1) - ^
  17. 01:54:841 (1) - ^
  18. 01:55:912 (4) - NC
  19. 01:57:841 (1) - 去finish
  20. 02:46:912 (1) - ^
  21. 03:16:055 ~ 03:17:769 這段Break太短了 把他去掉吧
  22. 03:23:126 (1,2) - 太吵了啦!!! 兩個slider都開頭finish就夠了!
  23. 03:47:341 (1) - 太吵了! 用40%綠線的Timing在結尾吧
Hard :

SPOILER
00:25:055 (8) - NC吧 這段太長了00:27:627 (1) - 去NC00:35:127 (9) - 加NC吧00:35:984 (1) - 去NC00:36:841 (7) - 加NC00:37:805 (1) - 去NC00:38:555 (7) - 加NC00:38:984 (1) - 去NC00:41:984 (9) - 加NC00:42:841 (1) - 去NC00:43:698 (7) - 加NC00:43:698 (7) - 我的話會把這note刪除
後面的那一段也改成像這樣下NC的樣子吧 就是音效換Normal的時候換NC00:52:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這擺法真讓人擔心...MAT一定會挑吧 spacing小一點吧>_<03:23:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^03:47:126 (1) - 同Normal

基本上都還不錯啦~
Good luck~! :3

務必要閱讀~!
紅色:是我覺得unrankable的 藍色:建議 但個人認為要改的 黑色:就單純建議
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from my queue~

    General :
  1. Tags裡的FA FMA是什麼意思?沒意思的話就刪除吧 如果有意思就別理我了..

    Normal :

    SPOILER
  2. 00:11:555 (2) - 去掉clap 然後在後面slider的頭加上clap
  3. 00:26:126 (1) - 開頭去clap
  4. 00:37:055 (1,2,3) - 重疊好吧 有點歪歪的 把grid snap去掉後對準吧
  5. 00:39:626 (2) - 結尾finish去掉換clap 這裡不是很大聲
  6. 00:40:269 (X) - 加個note吧 如果有加 把這個note加NC 下個note去NC
  7. 00:42:841 (1) - 去NC
  8. 00:44:769 (1) - ^
  9. 00:45:841 (1) - 去finish
  10. 01:00:412 (3) - clap
  11. 01:00:626 (4) - 去clap
  12. 01:00:841 (1) - 開頭finish就好 把clap去掉
  13. 01:02:341 (3) - 去clap
  14. 01:04:055 (1) - 我實在不想多說了... 這種連續兩拍的clap實在不配音樂 反正後面連續兩拍clap的 全部都刪除第一個clap
  15. 01:47:983 (1) - 去NC
  16. 01:49:912 (1) - ^
  17. 01:54:841 (1) - ^
  18. 01:55:912 (4) - NC
  19. 01:57:841 (1) - 去finish
  20. 02:46:912 (1) - ^
  21. 03:16:055 ~ 03:17:769 這段Break太短了 把他去掉吧
  22. 03:23:126 (1,2) - 太吵了啦!!! 兩個slider都開頭finish就夠了!
  23. 03:47:341 (1) - 太吵了! 用40%綠線的Timing在結尾吧
Hard :

SPOILER
00:25:055 (8) - NC吧 這段太長了00:27:627 (1) - 去NC00:35:127 (9) - 加NC吧00:35:984 (1) - 去NC00:36:841 (7) - 加NC00:37:805 (1) - 去NC00:38:555 (7) - 加NC00:38:984 (1) - 去NC00:41:984 (9) - 加NC00:42:841 (1) - 去NC00:43:698 (7) - 加NC00:43:698 (7) - 我的話會把這note刪除
後面的那一段也改成像這樣下NC的樣子吧 就是音效換Normal的時候換NC00:52:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這擺法真讓人擔心...MAT一定會挑吧 spacing小一點吧>_<03:23:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^03:47:126 (1) - 同Normal

基本上都還不錯啦~
Good luck~! :3

務必要閱讀~!
紅色:是我覺得unrankable的 藍色:建議 但個人認為要改的 黑色:就單純建議
Yui_old_1
37 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Yui_old_1

bossandy wrote:

[list][size=125]Hi hi~ request from my queue~

General :

[*]Tags裡的FA FMA是什麼意思?沒意思的話就刪除吧 如果有意思就別理我了.. 是动漫的缩写><.. 有的地方缩写FA有的地方缩写成FMA><
呜 . 谢谢MOD><
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Shana Aisaka
hi ~ request from my queue ><"

Red = Fix it.
Pink = Suggestion

[General]
how about like this???
01:14:448 end kiai time , 01:14:555 put kiai time.
02:26:448 end kiai time and 02:26:555 put kiai time?
03:24:841 add kiai time and 03:38:488 end kiai time , 03:38:588 put kiai time, 03:45:412 end kiai time

[Easy]
Overall Difficult +1
03:16:055 = remove break time

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate +1
Approach Rate -1
Overall Difficult +1
01:10:055(2) = spacing
01:22:055(3) = ^
03:46:055(3) = ^

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate +3
Approach Rate -1


That's all @@" Everything is fine...
Yui_old_1
37 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Yui_old_1

Shana Aisaka wrote:

hi ~ request from my queue ><"

Red = Fix it.
Pink = Suggestion

[General]
how about like this???
01:14:448 end kiai time , 01:14:555 put kiai time.
02:26:448 end kiai time and 02:26:555 put kiai time?
03:24:841 add kiai time and 03:38:488 end kiai time , 03:38:588 put kiai time, 03:45:412 end kiai time

[Easy]
Overall Difficult +1
03:16:055 = remove break time

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate +1
Approach Rate -1
Overall Difficult +1
01:10:055(2) = spacing
01:22:055(3) = ^
03:46:055(3) = ^

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate +3
Approach Rate -1


That's all @@" Everything is fine...
thx for mod ~\(≧▽≦)/~
break time removed . but I think AR8 is better
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[General]
SB
lrc12.png and lrc55 is unused.
Title, tag, source
A bit nazi here, it should be Again (Full ver.)
delete tag "FA" since the searchers can't find keywords with less than 3 letters

- I can't understand your new combo colour stratagies because they looks purely random, you get G-Y-G-Y for two sentences and then three colours in a group later on... somehow meaningless for me orz

[Hard]
timing and settings
duplicated timeline: 45626, 47126, 59126
AR+1? this is not really slow.
Arrangement
00:24:198 (6,2) - stack properly
00:31:269 (7) - try to make it curve upward to rreduce overlapping?
0:34~0:39 - try to avoid three combos in similar area?
00:47:431 (2,3,4) - uneven spacing here
01:05:126 (7) - (3,4,5,6,7) looks curving outwwards so try to make this slider pointing upwards rather than the current one pointing downwards
01:51:412 (3,4) - slider adjustment: 
272,232,111412,2,0,B|280:176|328:144,1,90
388,172,111841,2,0,B|408:104|328:68,2,90,0|0|0
02:08 - ummm I prefer making a smoother turning angle
02:25:055 (2) - [Nazi] right 1 grid lv4
02:26:233 (x) - sounds like it needs a note
03:18:627 (3) - may not fit with a whistle since the vocal's not there
03:21:616 - feeling that these two are off-vocal...

there can be more variation than purely note for those streams, but hitsound sounds nice.

[Normal]
timing and settings
OD shouldn't be too low, +1~2
hitsound and arrangement
0:00 ~ 0:20 the consecutive clap does not fit with the music.
01:49:912 (3) - slider adjustment 
456,72,109912,2,0,B|488:128|456:208|392:224,1,180

[Easy]
00:58:269 (2) - NC here?
02:43:698 (1) - make this one symmetrical

- As above said, deafult hitsound system don't really fits with the current song (especially [normal] and [easy]), the hitsound logic is quite different from hard (the accent is not as significant as [hard]) truning out that the clap is generally too loud while the soft notes sounds too soft for me.
- Some sliders are stacked quite randomly and if you use a low spacing constant, the map overall make look a bit crowdy.
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