This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 01, 2012 at 3:04:32 PM

Artist: Demetori
Title: Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial
Source: Touhou
Tags: izayoi sakuya metal
BPM: 160
Filesize: 9319kb
Play Time: 03:52
Difficulties Available:

1. Eternity (3.14 stars, 185 notes)
2. Plenty of Time (4.87 stars, 669 notes)
3. Timeless (4.92 stars, 1016 notes)

Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Pssh! Believe me, THIS TIME IS FOR REAL 8'D!

Update Log:
[Eternity] (Easy): Completed
[Plenty of Time] (Hard): Completed.
[Timeless] (Insane): Completed. This diff is for APPROVAL!!

Special Thanks to:
Xiao: Allowed me to adapt some of his Nexus skin elements.
Cyclone: Touhou skin's adapted numbers.
chirs2972: Morden Touhou skin's hitscores.
You, modder and player, who's trying to improve my map !

Hi, you accept random mods? xD Please take everything as a suggestion since this already looks godly
...and the skin.

And i got ripped apart in Timeless

General:
Consistency with sliders? They look cool though lol

Eternity

Plenty of Time

Timeless

Haha this is actually the first "real" mod I've done so sorry if I screwed up your intended patterns and stuff xD
I love this

LunarSakuya wrote:

Hi, you accept random mods? xD Please take everything as a suggestion since this already looks godly
...and the skin.

And i got ripped apart in Timeless

General:
Consistency with sliders? They look cool though lol

Eternity
Increase Overall Diff by 1 or 2
Increase Drainage Rate by 2

01:18:270 copy and paste the slider before to replace this one Nononono! I've made it this way so it "bumps" along with the bpm =p
01:22:582 Move [2] to 1:22:770 and then adjust spacing Hmmm how did i missed this? Thanks
01:37:582 Remove clap
01:42:082 Remove clap Nuh uh =p
01:45:270 Slider might be confusing for "beginners" It's pretty visible. I'll keep this for now
01:46:770 - 2:12:270 Consider shorter break time That would increase the star rate too much :<
01:46:770 Does the inherited point with 5% volume affect anything?Forgot to remove this, my bad~
02:33:270 - 2:35:895
[2] moved to x:476 y:192
[3] x:388 y:300
[4] x:252 y:332
[5] x:116 y:300
[6] x:32 y:192
[7] x:80 y:64
[8] x:216 y:64
There, a somewhat perfect oval xD Lol. Thanks

02:57:457 Add Finish
02:58:582 Add Finish Hmmk, liked it a bit
03:14:707 Remove clap (idk how important the double clap is for you so i'm not sure anymore lol) Keeping all of em.
03:31:020 Remove new combo
03:31:395 Add new combo
03:32:895 Remove new combo
03:38:520 Remove new combo
03:38:895 Add new combo
03:40:395 Remove new combo
Hmm... Does combos kind of ... Dunno, I'l keep mine for now =3
~Hopefully I can get back to this later. Eternity is done btw
I love this

Are you going to mod the other two? I'll save the kudos for them =p
Thanks for modding XD!

Edit: sorry for dying

Hi, sorry for the delay Orz

[Eternity]
00:30:270 (3): Distance snap (nazi)
00:31:770 (1): Not sure if this is a good idea for an Easy, but I might be mistaken ^^ (I mean stacking with the previous slider)
01:02:520 (2): Again nazi distance snap
01:10:395 (3): New combo
01:10:957 (1): Remove new combo
01:11:520 (2): New combo
01:22:770 (2): Map this break, because kiai + break is definetely not a good idea.
02:41:895 (1,2,3,4): This pattern is too confusing for this diff.
02:59:895 (5): Again map this break
03:35:895 (1): Make it not overlap with the previous slider

[Plenty of Time]
00:01:957 (1): Remove new combo here and add new combo at 00:01:395? I just don't know why the new combo is in the middle of the stream :S
00:26:520 (1): Remove new combo? Just a suggestion
00:40:770 (1): A slider can't completely overlap another one, that's unrankeable. You should move this at least 1 grid, so it doesn't completely overlap (4).
02:57:645 (1): Move 1 grid right (lvl4)
02:58:395 (1): And move this 1 grid down and 1 grid right
02:59:895 (x): Again, map this .-.

[Timeless]
01:33:832 (4): 1 grid down :3
01:52:863 (2): Distance with (1) o.o?
02:04:863 (2): ^
03:17:520 (4,5,6,7,8): Distance between (5) and (6) isn't the same as the rest.
03:25:301 (9): Move 2 grid left

Uhm, overall, this diff seems a little bit overmapped to me. There are too many random streams, and it isn't very fun to play. But that's just me .
Nice work with the SB.
Good luck~

Snepif wrote:

Hi, sorry for the delay Orz

[Eternity]
00:30:270 (3): Distance snap (nazi)
00:31:770 (1): Not sure if this is a good idea for an Easy, but I might be mistaken ^^ (I mean stacking with the previous slider) It's readable =3 Plus, 3 1/1's apart.
01:02:520 (2): Again nazi distance snap
01:10:395 (3): New combo
01:10:957 (1): Remove new combo
01:11:520 (2): New combo Hmm.. done them
01:22:770 (2): Map this break, because kiai + break is definetely not a good idea. Sorry, can't do it >.> It'll break 3 stars :<
02:41:895 (1,2,3,4): This pattern is too confusing for this diff. You're sure ._. ?
02:59:895 (5): Again map this break Same reason =<
03:35:895 (1): Make it not overlap with the previous slider I'll keep this one for now.

[Plenty of Time]
00:01:957 (1): Remove new combo here and add new combo at 00:01:395? I just don't know why the new combo is in the middle of the stream :S Hmm fixed~
00:26:520 (1): Remove new combo? Just a suggestion Gotta keep this one =p
00:40:770 (1): A slider can't completely overlap another one, that's unrankeable. You should move this at least 1 grid, so it doesn't completely overlap (4). They're 2 1/1 apart, it's okay here imo =p
02:57:645 (1): Move 1 grid right (lvl4) Oh you... hehe
02:58:395 (1): And move this 1 grid down and 1 grid right
02:59:895 (x): Again, map this .-. I can't. Due to score limits this would make the map unrankable =3

[Timeless]
01:33:832 (4): 1 grid down :3 =3
01:52:863 (2): Distance with (1) o.o? reduced both a bit
02:04:863 (2): ^
03:17:520 (4,5,6,7,8): Distance between (5) and (6) isn't the same as the rest. fixed
03:25:301 (9): Move 2 grid left moved to x=452

Uhm, overall, this diff seems a little bit overmapped to me. There are too many random streams, and it isn't very fun to play. But that's just me . It may be a bit =p. This diff is going App tho...
Nice work with the SB. Thanks xD
Good luck~

Thanks for your mod =3

ok, here we go 8D

General
acho que tu pode tirar instrumental das tags, pq quando o mapa for rankeado já vai ser listado como genero e tals (como foi nessas duas aqui, por exemplo http://puu.sh/aFFT)
desativa letterbox? ;~; fica meio feio
e tu sabe minha opinião sobre forçar skin. whatever

Skin
spinner-clear.png amarelo fica meio estranho.. pq tu não deixa ele de uma cor que combine mais com o resto da skin? D:
uma star2 custom ficaria bonitinha x3 (pensei em ou algo vermelho ou algo tipo as bolinhas brancas que tem na parte de cima do bg)
nas files de score a parte esfumaçada tá cortada Dx
eee o verde no centro do spinner-circle.png tá meio limão demais ;~; ficaria melhor num verde/azul mais água que nem tu usou no resto do spinner

[Eternity]
00:27:270 - não entendi a razão pra essa timing section existir o.o
02:12:363 - ^
blabla, eu sei que a diff é 3 stars, mas eu acho que ela tá meio.. dificil demais pra ser a mais fácil ._. 1,40 na SV numa musica de 160 é um pouco.. demais imo XD

[Plenty of Time]
fora a AR, tá tudo meio.. desproporcional a diff em si ._. dá uma olhada nisso
00:40:770 (1) - hidden slider
01:31:395 (6,7,8) - sugiro notas nas blue ticks pra fazer uma stream, fica meio estranho sem elas x-x (isso conta pra todas as outras partes que tu fez isso.. apesar que acho que se fizer stream em cada uma delas excede o limite de score)
03:34:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - eeeu acho que um pattern fazendo um círculo (voltando pra baixo a partir do (3) ficaria melhor, tipo http://puu.sh/aFHG ou algo do tipo, mãs)

[Timeless]
ohwell, eu normalmente não dou mod em approval, mas check rapido:
01:40:395 (4,5,6,7,8) - fucry
achei meio overmapped ._.

enfim, espero que seja útil x3

Wiinter wrote:

ok, here we go 8D

General
acho que tu pode tirar instrumental das tags, pq quando o mapa for rankeado já vai ser listado como genero e tals (como foi nessas duas aqui, por exemplo http://puu.sh/aFFT) Arrumei <3
desativa letterbox? ;~; fica meio feio
e tu sabe minha opinião sobre forçar skin. whatever

Skin
spinner-clear.png amarelo fica meio estranho.. pq tu não deixa ele de uma cor que combine mais com o resto da skin? D: Hmm, eh que queria deixar ele bem visivel
uma star2 custom ficaria bonitinha x3 (pensei em ou algo vermelho ou algo tipo as bolinhas brancas que tem na parte de cima do bg)darei uma olhada =p
nas files de score a parte esfumaçada tá cortada Dx pssh pssh, ngm vai ver =p
eee o verde no centro do spinner-circle.png tá meio limão demais ;~; ficaria melhor num verde/azul mais água que nem tu usou no resto do spinner

[Eternity]
00:27:270 - não entendi a razão pra essa timing section existir o.o
02:12:363 - ^ Restos das outras diffs, thanks
blabla, eu sei que a diff é 3 stars, mas eu acho que ela tá meio.. dificil demais pra ser a mais fácil ._. 1,40 na SV numa musica de 160 é um pouco.. demais imo XD

[Plenty of Time]
fora a AR, tá tudo meio.. desproporcional a diff em si ._. dá uma olhada nisso Aumentei
00:40:770 (1) - hidden slider Mesmo com a distancia do tempo vc acha que estao escondidos =3? Bem, vou mexer aqui[/b[
01:31:395 (6,7,8) - sugiro notas nas blue ticks pra fazer uma stream, fica meio estranho sem elas x-x (isso conta pra todas as outras partes que tu fez isso.. apesar que acho que se fizer stream em cada uma delas excede o limite de score)[b]Eu as removi justamente por isso
03:34:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - eeeu acho que um pattern fazendo um círculo (voltando pra baixo a partir do (3) ficaria melhor, tipo http://puu.sh/aFHG ou algo do tipo, mãs) Veja como ficou =3?

[Timeless]
ohwell, eu normalmente não dou mod em approval, mas check rapido:
01:40:395 (4,5,6,7,8) - fucry
achei meio overmapped ._.

enfim, espero que seja útil x3

Foi sim <3

Desculpe a demora, Drag, fiquei distante do computador por um tempinho :]
Aqui vai!
ps.: eu não gosto de atrasar a entrega dos mods, então eu to fazendo isso de noite. Logo, estou com bastante sono. Me desculpe se o mod não for bom o bastante ):

Mod (em Português)

Foi mal, to sem kudosu hahahaha

Boa sorte!!

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Desculpe a demora, Drag, fiquei distante do computador por um tempinho :]
Aqui vai!
ps.: eu não gosto de atrasar a entrega dos mods, então eu to fazendo isso de noite. Logo, estou com bastante sono. Me desculpe se o mod não for bom o bastante ):

Mod (em Português)

SPOILER

Overall
Mapa legal.
Ótima escolha de BG.
SB é simples, mas combina 100% com a música. Ótimo trabalho
Skin é legal também.

Eternity
- Os mini-brakes me irritam ):
- Alias, reparei que no refrão da dificuldade Plenty of Time os seus combos combinavam com a música, enquanto no refrão dessa diff ele combinam com o estilo de slider que você está usando no momento. Se o slider muda, o combo muda. Pessoalmente, eu primeiro os combos da Plenty of Time...
- O mapa se joga com Normal, mas tem settings de Easy... :/ Bem, é meio difícil manter o nível da música em "easy" por ser um metal bem pesadinho =3

01:09:270 (1,2,1,2) - Eu removeria o segundo New Combo se eu fosse você. Por quê? Porque em 00:46:770 (1,2,3,4,5), por exemplo, você manteve uma mesma pattern e manteve todos em um mesmo combo também. Da mesma forma, aqui você manteve a mesma pattern, mas dividiu a parte em 2 combos. Na verdade, eu também gostaria que você removesse o New Combo do 01:11:520 (1), mas esse daí ja é um pouco mais pessoal. Removi o primeiro, thanks!
01:46:770~58:987:999[break] - Acho essa Break inaceitavelmente longa!! Não tem como começar umas brincadeirinhas com notas 1/1 apartir de 01:58:770, não? Essa parte da música é tão épica, merece um pouco mais de respeito ):

Plenty of Time
- Pô, tem a mesma aprooach Speed que a diff mais difícil... Tem como abaixar nem que seja um ponto aqui? Como essa é a diff ranked, creio que não tem problema em deixar assim =p

00:33:270 (6,1) - Inverte New Combos? Sim o/
00:35:707 (1) - Honestamente, não acho esse New Combo necessário Opa, obrigado por notar, era sobra de um antigo setup
00:43:770 (7,1) - Você até tem um motivo aqui, mas eu gostaria que invertesse os New Combos aqui também. E eu não acho que vai deixar a pattern feia não... Hmmm.... ok
01:27:457 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Aqui você dividiu a seção em 2 combos, enquanto na parte similar (01:33:457) você usou só um combo. Eu não acho que a pattern do primeiro caso tenha sofrido uma mudança tão grande a ponto de ser necessário mudar o combo. Sugiro que iguale as duas partes (ou divida as duas em dois combos, ou faça com que ambas sejam formadas por um só combo)Fixed

Timeless
Eu até achei uns "errinhos" com os New Combos que poderiam ser consertados. Mas como os "erros" se repetiram por todo o mapa, eles meio que perderam esse título e se tornaram "Estilo do Mapper". Logo, não acho que posso fazer um mod que altere seu estilo.

Foi mal, to sem kudosu hahahaha

Boa sorte!!

Obrigado <3
PS: Agora tem rerere -q

Hi, from #modreqs


[General]

1. The background is black as the slider trail, maybe change a BG / slidertrack override brighter?
2. add epilepsy warning, all diffs
3. and maybe add a Hard diff (easier than Plenty of Time)?

[Eternity]

1. 02:35:895 (1,2,3) - reverse slider

[Plenty of Time]

1. 00:19:770 (1,2) - stack these two?
2. 00:26:520 (2) - no nc
3. 00:33:645 (2) - clap
4. 00:33:832 (3) - no clap
5. 00:42:832 (2) - make it symmetrical with 1
6. 00:49:207 (6) - add a note
7. 03:17:520 (4) - move to (248,288)

Good luck~

~LunaticModder v0.1 alpha3

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs


[General]

1. The background is black as the slider trail, maybe change a BG / slidertrack override brighter? Increased brightness by a bit
2. add epilepsy warning, all diffs There isn't a really fast strobing, well, it's only 3 at max. Are you sure I need it?
3. and maybe add a Hard diff (easier than Plenty of Time)?

[Eternity]

1. 02:35:895 (1,2,3) - reverse slider

Hmm, no thanks ;3;

[Plenty of Time]

1. 00:19:770 (1,2) - stack these two? I didn't wanna stack these because of the tiny feeling in moving the cursor =p
2. 00:26:520 (2) - no nc
3. 00:33:645 (2) - clap
4. 00:33:832 (3) - no clap
5. 00:42:832 (2) - make it symmetrical with 1 Done, lol
6. 00:49:207 (6) - add a note hmm... okay
7. 03:17:520 (4) - move to (248,288)

Done

Good luck~

~LunaticModder v0.1 alpha3

Sorry for the late response

LunarSakuya wrote:

Hi, you accept random mods? xD Please take everything as a suggestion since this already looks godly
...and the skin.

And i got ripped apart in Timeless

General:
Consistency with sliders? They look cool though lol

Eternity

SPOILER

Increase Overall Diff by 1 or 2
Increase Drainage Rate by 2

01:18:270 copy and paste the slider before to replace this one
01:22:582 Move [2] to 1:22:770 and then adjust spacing
01:37:582 Remove clap
01:42:082 Remove clap
01:45:270 Slider might be confusing for "beginners"
01:46:770 - 2:12:270 Consider shorter break time
01:46:770 Does the inherited point with 5% volume affect anything?
02:33:270 - 2:35:895
[2] moved to x:476 y:192
[3] x:388 y:300
[4] x:252 y:332
[5] x:116 y:300
[6] x:32 y:192
[7] x:80 y:64
[8] x:216 y:64
There, a somewhat perfect oval xD

02:57:457 Add Finish
02:58:582 Add Finish
03:14:707 Remove clap (idk how important the double clap is for you so i'm not sure anymore lol)
03:31:020 Remove new combo
03:31:395 Add new combo
03:32:895 Remove new combo
03:38:520 Remove new combo
03:38:895 Add new combo
03:40:395 Remove new combo

Plenty of Time

SPOILER

00:01:395 - 00:02:520 lol this is probably my noobiness but took several tries to get it
01:25:301 Add note in between
01:26:801 Add note in between
01:35:988 Add note (stack)
01:36:176 Add note (stack)
01:37:207 - 01:37:582 [5,6] Felt slightly odd, maybe it was the whistles
(But then the one at 01:41:707 felt really good xD)
01:43:301 Add note in between
01:59:801 Delete note
02:02:801 Delete note
02:49:395 Add Finish
02:59:895 Add Finish
03:21:082 [2] Move to x:124 y:200
[3] x:116 y:296
[4] x:196 y:352
[5] x:272 y:296
[6] x:264 y:200
[7] x:324 y:124
[1] x:312 y:220
I enjoy symmetry when the map allows it
03:34:020 - 03:34:301 [7]-[1] Make a stream?
03:37:207 - 03:38:332 Delete notes and follow same pattern as 3:35:895 [1]-[3]

Timeless

SPOILER

01:04:770 Spacing, maybe adjust [3] to [5]
01:16:770 New combo
01:17:332 delete new combo
01:25:207 Make [6] the triplet instead of at 01:25:395 [7]
hold on

Haha this is actually the first "real" mod I've done so sorry if I screwed up your intended patterns and stuff xD
I love this

I'll finish Timeless this time lol

Timeless

00:22:395 (7,8,9,10) - Put this stack nearer to the stack before it; if not put a NC
00:24:645 (3) - NC to signify distance change
00:30:832 (7) - Slider here too
00:31:582 (3) - Finish at the end
00:32:332 (4,5) - Add Finish to these
00:34:582 (6) - NC, easier to see
00:37:770 (1) - Move to left: http://puu.sh/hQy4, fits pattern
00:39:082 (2) - Add Finish at the beginning
00:45:270 (8) - NC, and Remove NC at 00:45:645 (1)

01:04:207 (3,4,5,6) - Make these equal spacing, looks funny xD
01:12:082 (2) - Add Finish? ...probably not lol
01:16:770 (7) - NC, Remove at 01:17:332 (1)
01:25:207 (6) - make the triple stack here instead of on (7)
01:40:395 (4,5,6,7) - x_x

02:23:520 (2) - NC here instead of at (1)
02:27:270 - Make a single note here somehow, if that happens NC at 02:27:645 (3) and possibly make (3,4,5,6) the same distances from each other.
02:32:895 (4) - NC to signify timing change more epic feeling
02:35:520 (1) - NC here instead of at (5) before it
02:43:395 (7) - NC here instead of (1) after it
02:46:395 (1) - Add Finish at beginning
02:48:645 (5) - Finish at end?

03:17:895 (8) - NC instead of at 03:18:083 (1)
03:23:895 (10) - NC, remove the one after
03:37:394 (8) - ^
03:48:832 (4) - Might be confusing to read

Found you on modreqs, and decided that it would be nice to show my thanks for your timing help with more than just kudosu.

[GENERAL]

I'm really confused as to the long empty space after the song. On the Plenty of Time diff (and maybe even Timeless) I can't skip past the end part. Maybe you could cut it, or maybe add a "Thanks for playing!" message in the SB?

[Eternity]

01:21:457 (1) - Maybe one grid down? :O
01:36:270 (3) - I'm really sorry for all the Nazi... but 2 grids left? :3 Then... some resnapping lol.
01:44:895 (2,1) - It would probably look better if (2) didn't touch (1). :/
01:46:770 (-) - This is an insanely long break. I'd prefer something in between...
02:43:395 (4,1) - Make these two notes into one slider so we recognize the rhythm transition? It's a bit easier to play to, considering this is the easiest diff.
03:29:895 (3) - Not sure about the slider overlap between (1) and (3). Maybe move (3) 1 grid up 1 grid left so it's more on the path of (1)?
03:31:395 (3) - Don't like how this slider's repeat side touches the (3) slider before it...

[Plenty of Time]

00:18:645 (3) + 00:19:395 (6) - Perhaps move the anchor point of each of these sliders one grid down so they look more asymmetrical?
01:06:832 (2) - Make this slider more symmetrical - you probably know how, but I had to turn of grid snap to center it.
01:44:895 (6,1) - Both of these one grid left?
02:59:520 (7) - Finish on the end of this slider?

[Timeless]

Mebbe CS +1? The distance spacing IS crazy.

00:27:270 (1) - There might be a bit of a error in this slider, the bottom two points aren't linear. I'd pull the left most one down one grid.
01:40:395 (4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't read well. I'd move (7) and (8) elsewhere.
01:41:520 (4) - Up one grid.
01:45:645 (2) - Whistle?
01:46:395 (6) - ^
02:27:895 (5,6) - I'd move (6) further away from (5).
02:32:895 (4) - I'd like (4) further from (3), it might read a bit better.
03:03:457 (4) - Down a grid?
03:22:770 (2) - Whistle?
03:23:520 (6) - ^
03:28:769 (3) - Up one grid.
03:28:956 (4) - Up two grids.
03:31:019 (7) - Whistle?
03:32:519 (7) - ^
03:41:894 (8) - Hidden note. >_<
03:46:769 (2) - Whistle?
03:47:519 (6) - ^

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Nice map!

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