Faust wrote:

SPOILER

I'm impressed that this is your 1st map.

Anyway, suggest you find a higher quality mp3 because this one sounds like you ripped it directly off the video, hence the muffling. If you use another mp3, the offset will likely change, when that happens you can call me back.

KeA Easy:

No claps here? I think they go rather well with the song.

I think the proximity in this map is a tad much. Can make things confusing for the player, but I suppose patience in reading the approach rate solves things.

Kind of debatable, but I would suggest you go over this difficulty and play it through by sightreading a little to see which patterns and notes are more intuitive so you can fix some potential issues with spacing since the Distance Snap is very textbook here.

- 01:30:187 (4) - Stack on slider.

S.S.S Normal:

Like KeA, devoid of claps. Once you go over the hitsound suggestions in the following difficulties. You can apply them here.

- 01:49:569 (1) - Spinner should end on - 01:52:603 -

Arianrhod Hard:

- 00:28:670 (4,5,6,7) - Looks neater and less confusing.

- 00:31:367 (4,5,6,7) - Do the same as above. Including all similar patterns/rhythm, eg. - 00:34:063 (4,5,6,7) -

- 00:53:951 (7) - Remove the claps. Put a clap on the beginning and end of the repeat slider instead.
( - 00:53:951 - & - 00:54:457 - )

- 01:00:019 (1,2,3) - Suggestion to use New Combo on (2 & 3) since this pattern make use of a perfect overlap.

- 01:01:873 (4) - Stack on the end of the previous slider.

- 01:03:389 (4) - Remove clap.

- 01:03:895 (6) - ^

- 01:04:232 (7) - ^

- 01:05:075 (2) - Add a clap.

01:20:917 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Remove every single clap by mass-selection.

The clapping rhythm should be like this: 01:21:591 (1,2) - (1) should have no claps. While the beginning of (2) should receive a clap.

The order repeats itself. You can try variations of clapping style but make sure the claps don't land on the downbeat because that will disrupt the flow. Best to stick with what I wrote here.

- 01:26:647 (4,5) - Move somewhere else. Overlapping here is not pretty.

- 01:32:378 (7) - Remove this note.

- 01:43:164 (5) - ^

Ao no Insane:

Pattern-wise. Moderately clean and almost no bad overlapping. Rhythm is simple and you did not complicate anything, hitsound usage however, is a little misplaced.

- 00:44:176 (1) - Move the spinner to the previous red-tick on - 00:44:007 -

- 01:49:569 (1) - Remove the clap.

- 01:53:277 (6) - Remove the claps on the rest of the notes to come. Don't place them on White ticks here. It's terrible.

- 01:53:614 (8) & 01:54:288 (3) - Now, you place the claps on the White ticks here, rather than the previous examples.

Listen to the rhythm now and you'll catch on. Do the same for the rest of the notes you put claps on.

- 01:55:299 (1) - Clap on this particular repeat. From here on, consistent claps would be pretty nice.

- 01:57:996 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Remove all the claps. Utilize the rhythm I mentioned earlier.

02:04:400 (5,6) - Reverse the clapping position. 6 should have a clap instead of 5.

That's it.

Faust wrote:

Here's your 1st star. Keep on going.

merchat7 wrote:

SPOILER

As requested

[General]

- Kiai time should start at 01:28:943, don't see why you start it at the current place and end at 01:51:864 (don't understand why you end in the middle of a spinner.
- Preview point should be at 01:28:943 as well.
- Please keep end point the same for all diffs so either do a circle for 02:07:876 (Normal, Hard) or add spinner to Easy and Insane at that spot.
- If you're going to map this break at 01:52:369 for Insane, then map it for the other diffs as well. let beginners/casual player enjoy this part of the song as well and not just experienced player and this song isn't very long anyway so having no breaks is fine.
- Same with the beginning, if you're going to map it in Insane map it in the other diffs as well, the only time that it's fine to have a different begin / break time is when it's a guest diff imo.
- Combo colors are slightly different between diff, edit via notepad (File > open .osu in notepad), copy from one of the diff the combo colors, and paste it the other diffs.
- comboburst-1 & comboburst-2 exceed the 500px width limit, resize/crop so that it's lower than this. viewtopic.php?f=15&t=51694
- Just keep tick rate 1. 0.5x tick rate is unrankable now and I don't understand why you use slider tick 2 for Hard.
- Insane has an offset of 1339 which is different, not sure which timing is right so check it. Offset needs to be consistent between diffs in a mapset.
- I'll leave the timing check to someone, I'm not too good with timing, but it feel off to me.

Well I guess that's all, you should fix all the issues.

[Easy]

00:54:561 (4,5) - Stack like this are not nice to play at the current approach rate, please space it out.
01:02:482 (2,3) - I suggest doing a slider instead, this rhythm is a little hard to play for the easiest diff.
01:14:449 (4) - Don't do kick slider (repeating slider with more than one repeat) on the easiest diff. Do something else instead. Perhaps add a hit circle at 01:14:449 and a slider at 01:14:786 and end it at 01:15:460.
01:20:347 (2,3) - Similar to 01:02:482, feel a little difficult for the easiest diff.
01:31:977 (6) - Similar to 01:14:449, try something else. But this one isn't as bad as it points to the next note.
01:42:426 (5) - ^ please do something else.
02:07:201 (1,2,3) - Just do a repeating slider instead since this is the easiest diff.

Didn't mention the kick sliders at 01:58:606 since they play well enough. Pretty nice although I think more patterns could be simplify, feel a little too hard for Easy. Hitsound could be nicer, but I'll leave this to somewhere else. Slider as well.

[Normal]

+1 approach rate, current approach rate make the screen feel clustered and your note density is quite high.

00:41:752 (1,2) - Slider fit nicer with the instruments.
00:52:538 (1,2) - It's a better idea to do short repeating slider instead. This pattern feel too hard for a Normal.
00:53:213 (3,4) - ^
00:53:887 (5,6) - ^
01:08:718 (1) - This kick slider doesn't play very well at all, there's nothing really saying there's going to be another repeat so do something else.
01:21:527 (1) - I would remove a repeat, this next note play weird like this and it's probably too hard for Normal.
01:22:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would definitely try to rework this. Add slider/repeating slider to this part. Too many hit circles in a row imo and you can easily add sliders here.
01:31:977 (2) - I don't really like this at all, do a mix of slider+ hit circle seems nicer to me.
01:42:426 (2,3) - Very confusing to play, you have to guest how many repeats the sliders are going to have and you don't have much time to react at all.

Perhaps try to find a custom hitsound, clap doesn't really fit too well with how you did the hitsounding imo.

[Hard]

+1 ar please. Similar reason to Normal.

00:49:842 (1,2,3,4) - Curving all the slider give a nicer feel.
00:51:190 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:54:561 (7) - The way you place the note, the extra repeat is confusing. removing the repeat feel nicer.
00:59:280 (5,6) - If you're going to do this, do a slider, (5) plays weird since I can hear a note on the red tick so I thought I had to hit it earlier.
01:40:404 (3,4,5) - Space this out, this part just feel very clustered and stacking this make it feel even worse. Very hard to read with current approach rate as well.
01:42:426 (1,2,3,4) - Curving all the slider here give a nicer feel.

[Insane]
00:43:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is quite an annoying pattern to play, doing shorts sliders instead works better so (1,2) a slider, (3,4) a slider and etc.
02:03:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ if you do short sliders for above, I would do it here too for consistency.

This is a lot better than the other diffs. Nice job!

Well this is good if this is your first beatmap. It still need work, but I'm sure with enough mods you'll get there.

No star because of this and sorry for lazy mod since I don't really like the song (It may not look lazy, but it really is, I usually show you a screenshot of what I mean, but here I don't so that's what I mean and I ignore some minor issues as well.)

Good luck!

GiNa wrote:

Hi :3

My Mod

[General]
-Diff names are confusing, do you have any guest? If no, changed the kiai time for all diffs, starts from 01:28:942, ends at 01:51:863.
-Take off “Letterbox during breaks” (song setup -> Storyboarding) because you have video.
-Stack Leniency 2 is unrankable, it must be higher than 3.
the names are game related so...yeah

[KeA Easy]
-Please use distance snap, 1.1x would be perfect, then adjust every notes you have right now.
00:21:816 (1) – this sounds late, move this to 00:22:490 and shorten it to 00:22:996, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/203182 isn't this the same as the other difficulties? I checked at 25% speed its quite on time...
00:28:268 (1,2,3) – overlapping doesn’t look good, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/203183m herer’s the code for them
112,88,28268,6,0,B|48:96|24:136|32:208,1,140
112,172,29279,1,0
112,256,29616,2,0,B|176:248|200:208|192:136,1,140,0|0
-There are so many overlapping notes after this, changed all of them and follow the spacing.
01:22:200 (1) – remove NC
01:21:526 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – I would say this pattern is hard to beginners, maybe changed all the sliders from 01:23:548 to something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/203186
01:26:245 (1) – shorten this to 01:27:593, do not add anything after this changed, a note directly after a spinner is hard for beginners.
01:30:796 (4) – don’t hide this under a slider in Easy
01:58:605 (5) – NC
02:06:694 (4) – NC
02:07:200 (1) – remove NC

[S.S.S. Normal]
-Spacing, 1.0x this time ?
-OD+1
No other big problems.

[Arianrhod Hard]
-HP+1, OD+1
-Spacing, maybe 1.0x too, jumps are okay in Hard tho, so you can keep some of them. I feel that 1.0x spacing is too jumpy...kept it at 0.8x
01:08:043 – add a note
02:06:863 (4) – NC

[Ao no Insane]
-OD+1
-Spacing, same as Hard yeah most of my spacing were already 1.0x...there are some special distance changes that i like which don't fit with the spacing...but this is insane so i think it should be fine.
00:32:144 (9) – NC
01:31:470 (11) – NC
01:31:975 (1) – remove NC
01:38:380 (9) – NC
01:42:256 (11) – NC
01:42:762 (1) – remove NC
01:45:796 (1) – NC
01:48:998 (11) – NC
02:06:863 (4) – NC
02:07:200 (1) – remove NC
Keep in mind that NC is for any pattern/spacing changed.

This is a nice map for new mapper (better than my first map).
Also keep in mind that Distance Snap is a nice tool to use.
That's all I have for you, fight !

Nyquill wrote:

Heyo \o/

Go into timing setup, select all your timing points and move all selected offsets by +12. This should be a LOT better (at least from what I can play from on insane). I'll toss your map a mod once you do this, so don't KDS this post ;3.

From what I can tell from looking at it, problems are most likely dealing with hitsounds. I'll do a full mod when you fix the offset~

Yeah, Faust was right, this is a impressive map considering it is your first submitted.

1. Song folder - hitcircle.bpm - What do you use this for? sorry,I can not understand it
2. Timing - offset - It is not unified in all diff. ( Easy,Normal:BPM178 offset1098..BPM178 offset 28280, Hard,Insane:BPM178 offset1094..BPM178 offset28276) Plz unify it.
3. Set Preview Point - Only Ao no Insane diff is different. Plz unify it. 88942⇒change 88943 ( from File ⇒Open .osu in Notepad )

kosiga wrote:

Happy New Year ~ jonathanlfj

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song folder - hitcircle.bpm - What do you use this for? sorry,I can not understand it It was automatically generated when i created the hitcircle...dont want to touch it until someone varify that it is useless
2. Timing - offset - It is not unified in all diff. ( Easy,Normal:BPM178 offset1098..BPM178 offset 28280, Hard,Insane:BPM178 offset1094..BPM178 offset28276) Plz unify it.
3. Set Preview Point - Only Ao no Insane diff is different. Plz unify it. 88942⇒change 88943 ( from File ⇒Open .osu in Notepad )

[KeA Easy]

SPOILER

1. Please have a constant spacing of the DS (maybe you can use DS1.2x or 1.1x)
2. 00:30:976 (1) - spacing too far
3. 00:33:673 (1) - ^
4. 00:36:369 (1) - ^
5. 00:39:066 (1) - ^
6. 00:44:459 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/c4DL
7. 00:47:156 (1,2) - ^ same suggestion
8. 01:10:751 (6) - remove clap to end of the slider
9. 01:11:931 (1) - spacing too far
10. 01:14:459 (4) - remove clap
11. 01:20:358 (2,3) - ^
12. 01:21:538 (4) - spacing too far
13. 01:33:504 (1) - spacing too close
14. 01:36:369 (1) - spacing too far
15. 01:38:560 (4) - remove clap to start of the slider
16. 01:39:740 (1) - spacing too far
17. 01:47:156 (1) - ^
18. 01:58:617 (1,2) - I think kick slider is difficult for a beginner. can you plz change something ?
19. 02:07:212 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap. ( i like whistle here ! )

[S.S.S Normal]

SPOILER

1. Please have a constant spacing of the DS (maybe you can use DS1.0x)
2. 00:14:412 (5) - remove repeat.
3. 00:47:662 (1) - spacing too far
4. 00:54:572 (4,5) - spacing too far
5. 00:55:246 (1) - ^
6. 01:11:426 (4) - remove note.
7. 01:11:763 - add note ?
8. 01:14:628 (6) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
9. 01:15:976 (1,2,3) - I think this pattern is difficult for a beginner. ><
10. 01:19:515 (1) - spacing too far
11. 01:21:538 (1,1) - I think this pattern is difficult for a beginner. ><
12. 01:36:369 (1) - spacing too close
13. 01:39:740 (1) - spacing too far
14. 01:43:617 (8) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
15. 01:44:291 (1) - spacing too far
16. 01:47:830 (2) - not stack. 1/2stack is difficult for a beginner.
17. 02:01:313 (1,2,3,4) - spacing too far
18. 02:07:212 (3) - add whistle instead to clap

[Arianrhod Hard]

SPOILER

1. 00:14:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/c4OU
2. 00:37:377 (1) - this spinner start 00:37:545 and to 00:37:377 - add note
3. 02:07:208 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap

[Ao no Insane]

SPOILER

1. OD +1 Someone who tested my beatmap said instead of OD increase AR by 1, so i did that instead
2. 00:14:408 (1) - spacing too far ( because rhythm is different from 00:13:734 (6,7), but DS is the same )
3. 01:10:579 - add note
4. 02:07:208 (2,3) - add whistle instead to clap

That's all ~

Is this really your first map? good map :3

I think it becomes very good map only by little improvement

ok~ Star☆ and good luck ~

1. Remove hitcircle.pbm from folder
2. Add custom section-fail.png
3. Add (at least from template) custom reversearrow.png

1. 00:28:276 (1) - slider right after spinner, might be confusing for newbie players
2. 00:44:455 (1) - make it like this
   
   Open

   
3. 01:28:951 - kiai starts late by 1 ms, resnap it

1. 00:28:613 (2) - spacing error
2. 01:28:951 - kiai starts late by 1 ms, resnap it

1. 00:41:422 (3) - move 2 grids right

Bass-chan wrote:

[General]

1. Remove hitcircle.pbm from folder I'm guessing it has no use after all
2. Add custom section-fail.png
3. Add (at least from template) custom reversearrow.png

[KeA Easy]

1. 00:28:276 (1) - slider right after spinner, might be confusing for newbie players its kinda hard to change now since it follows a specific pattern
2. 00:44:455 (1) - make it like this
   
   Open

   
3. 01:28:951 - kiai starts late by 1 ms, resnap it

[S.S.S. Normal]

1. 00:28:613 (2) - spacing error
2. 01:28:951 - kiai starts late by 1 ms, resnap it

[Arianrhod Hard]

1. 00:41:422 (3) - move 2 grids right

[Ao no Insane]

I suggest AR-1 aite and i increased OD by 1 as the previous modder suggested

As the first map this is nice work .

1. Include a spinner-osu png file, a spinner-spin.png file and a spinner-clear.png file. You need those to complete the spinner set, you know?
2. I thought you said the hitcircle.PBM file has no usage? Why is it still there? ):
3. Since you have you have a custom hitcircle, you got to have a SliderBorder included. This shows you how to do it.
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,60,60
   Combo2 : 58,252,58
   Combo3 : 162,119,81
   Combo4 : 199,197,197
   Combo5 : 154,252,252
   SliderBorder: 255,255,255

1. It's probably best to increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one.
2. 00:39:062 (1, 2)-Sounds like there should be whistles on both of those sliders... Add them in. (:
3. 01:09:736 (4, 5)-It's a good idea to remove those notes and replacing them with a slider starting from 01:09:736 to 01:10:242. It plays better like that in my opinion.
4. 01:50:186 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here. Add one in.

1. 01:21:534-Hmm... Remove new combo? o:
2. 01:45:972-Not necessary to put a new combo here. So, remove it.
3. 01:50:186 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here. Add one in.

1. 01:53:219 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning? (:

1. 01:53:219 (3)-Add a finish.
2. 02:04:006 (1, 2)-Stack these properly on the end of the previous slider.

• - 用Normal-hitnormal當Normal set的clap...兩個同樣的音疊在一起的時候效果其實比用一個鼓音色來的差, 還有點爆音的跡象
  - sliderball製作成可以轉動的?

• 00:12:554 (2,3,4,5) - 就算不是用在簡單難度, 類似這樣的排列+AR+節奏會讓人感到混亂...建議可以換一個比較容易讀的排列. 比如像你在Normal那樣的方式
  01:04:343 (3,4,5) - 和前面組成一個比較接近圓形的排列? http://puu.sh/eYqX , 另外(4)下clap-none
  01:07:208 (1) - 空拍後為了跟vocal而踩紅線讓人感覺沒有節奏感, 建議後移1/2拍
  01:29:624 (3,4,5) - 這種節奏更直觀一些: http://puu.sh/eYrS
  01:37:040 (2,3,4) - ^, (4)的長度可以保留
  01:47:826 (2,3,4) - ^
  
  
  
  Normal
  [list:969cc]- 類似這樣的低難度+vocal踩紅線來說, 我覺得用跟vocal的方式來map不太適合 T_T

• - 連續三個難度都是一樣的Circle size...囧!
  - AR可以提高1, 00:29:287 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 這種排列可以看的清晰點...至於星數顯示並不是一個嚴重的問題, Diff spread主要是看圖的難度平不平衡, 而不是星數

• - SV沒必要這麼高:( , 加上節奏基本都是1/2...看著就像circle和slider滿屏飛

Amyrina wrote:

Hello.
Sorry my poor english.
Normal
00:40:916 (2) -
↓
00:40:747 (2) -
well the slider fits the background music so...yeah no change

I think this is good map.
Please do its best!

Kurosanyan wrote:

No kudo for this of course.

SPOILER

[General]
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
-[KeA Easy] : 88943 k
Fix it please

[Kurosanyan's Taiko (fix it yourself it's okay)] alrite fixed all
01:19:847 (24) - Unsnapped circle.
01:43:611 (10) - Unsnapped circle.
01:56:420 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:57:094 (10) - Unsnapped circle.

[S.S.S. Normal]
00:28:276 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly. k learned something new lol
00:44:961 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly. ^

fixed all. thanks again~~
P.S. u mean no kudos for your mod post rite? dont want to get such things wrong o_O

jonathanlfj wrote:

P.S. u mean no kudos for your mod post rite? dont want to get such things wrong o_O

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Mod requested in my queue.

[General]

1. Looks good for me, and nice skin

[Easy]

1. 01:28:633 (1,1): Is this intentional? yes

1. 01:58:633 (1,1,1,1): ^ well fixed this one

Diff looks good.

[S.S.S Normal]

1. 00:21:828 (1,2): Just make this a one repeat slider... made it two sliders
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:47:172 (4): Finish fits song too, but sounds too loud...Why not replace this finish by a whistle? my older version had whistles, and i disliked it, so keeping the finish

1. 00:52:565 (1): Same suggestion as above, but apply this in slider beginning. same as above

1. 01:02:502 (1): Moving this slider to 01:02:340, will sound much better for me. alrite

1. 01:32:003 (6,1): Try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   done

1. 01:45:992 (5,6,7): This spacing can confuse some normal players, try this spacing:
   
   SPOILER

   
   took a note out of stack instead. kinda hard to put a linear patter and maintain distance snap

Other two diffs looks fine to me.

Good Luck in ranking~

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from my queue o/ Sorry for late

KeA Easy

01:03:857 (1) and 01:04:869 (1) - Maybe these new combos can be confusing in an easy diff... Remove them (Just a suggestion) alrite
01:21:554 (3) NC? i dont think a NC fits here based on previous NC patterns
01:59:307 (1) and 02:00:655 (1) - As I sid befove, these may be confusing... done as previous mod suggested also

S.S.S. Normal

00:21:828 (1) - What about replacing this with two 1/2 sliders? done
01:32:003 (6) - The same ^ did repeat slider and a note
01:36:385 (8) - NC? k
01:47:172 (8) - NC? k

Arianrhod Hard

01:58:633 (1,2,3,4) I really don't like these sliders with 2 repeats... changed, but i think it got harder...

Ao no Insane

01:32:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really confusing @.@ maybe you can make another pattern with these 8 circles remade pattern

I can't find other, this is a good map, I also like the song. Star :3

Xierra wrote:

Heya, it's me from the Tiny Modding Queue!
I must say, your map looks sick! I'm seeing a lot of potential from this first map.

Since I'm a newbie modder, I can't spot any flaws! Every diff looks good to me.

General

I spot one .osb file in your folder. If you don't use Storyboards, then delete it. i will delete it
I'm not really sure but I think you might need a Futsuu / Muzukashii for the Taiko diffs. t/92508 the beatmap was submitted like a year ago so it is excluded from the new rule

You deserve a star, mate. Thankfully I have one round of Star inside my pocket, so I'll shoot it.
Go, and I look forward to see this getting ranked.

shojimeguro wrote:

Easy
Try to use distance snap to re-arrange your beats
all beats seems to be in place anyway
so it was PERFECT!!! tyty

Normal
00:06:491 - fill it with notes made it a slider repeat
00:17:277 - this too ^

I added notes at these locations for all other diffs so they have the same drain time

since it was >2 minutes i only mod 2 diff
anyway that's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!!

popner wrote:

01:48:688 (5) - 不太好看，可以更弯一些 我想要的是这个效果

SPOILER

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko M4M~

All are suggestions unless in red.

[Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni]
- not sure what that extra timing point is for, if unnecessary, remove it It's not.
- try to use alternating colours next time, it makes life easier for modders :3 I use it now, but it's an old map

00:33:688 - kdd Ok
00:38:070 - kkkdd Nope, I hate this kind of pattern and it doesn't seems necessary
01:36:553 - kdd I prefer to keep kdk

Nice map~
Falcom Sound Team FTW~

NewibornCLivee wrote:

Taiko M4M...

[Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni]

Just some ideas...just ignore it if you dont like it

the volume of the music is quite low...maybe you can adjust the volume a bit lower?Otherwise i can only hear the drum sound.. Yeah right, I like it like this but I'll still make 90% instead of 100%

01:06:216 - k Nope, I prefer the pattern like this, I make it this way on the whole map. It's better and easier imo.
01:08:238 - remove Same, I prefer the pattern like this, not easier but I don't see why I should remove this note

the map is really great...i really love it.

Kurosanyan wrote:

NewibornCLivee wrote:

Taiko M4M...

[Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni]

Just some ideas...just ignore it if you dont like it

the volume of the music is quite low...maybe you can adjust the volume a bit lower?Otherwise i can only hear the drum sound.. Yeah right, I like it like this but I'll still make 90% instead of 100%

01:06:216 - k Nope, I prefer the pattern like this, I make it this way on the whole map. It's better and easier imo.
01:08:238 - remove Same, I prefer the pattern like this, not easier but I don't see why I should remove this note

the map is really great...i really love it.

Kin wrote:

Hi ~
Taiko mod here ~
He's french then that will be french mod And I'll answer in English because why not.

Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni :

please utilise les custom combo color, mes modders serront happy D: "mes modders" what. Also I'm too much lazy to remake the whole thing with combo colours for hitsounds.
00:38:070 (11,12,13,14,15) - kkdkd ? je trouve que ça suit mieux la guitare Fix'd
00:55:261 (3) - k ? Nope, I prefer ddk
01:00:654 (3) - ^, pour suivre la batteri Remapped this part
01:11:272 (2,3,4) - kdk ou ddk ? Let's go with kdk
01:27:115 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - kkdkdkkddkkdk ? <- ou peut etre que c'est un peu trop dur pour une oni Hahahaha...no.
01:53:913 (9,10) - k d ? je dirais que ça suit mieux la batteri et qu'en + sur le 9 la guitare est + aigu que sur le 10 Remapped this part too


Good luck ~

mintong89 wrote:

jonathanlfj 泥豪~~~

Taiko Mod <3

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Taiko]

00:29:137 - i hear the drum sound at this (or call back sound ). i think you can put d at this and remove 00:29:306 -There is drums in both, but it's better to map on white ticks and it follows the rhythm better too.
00:31:834 - ^ remove 00:31:834 - Same.
01:14:474 - kkk Nope, fits better to the drums and because of the pattern after that have a lots of katsu.

yeah i just can found this only.

Kurosanyan wrote:

mintong89 wrote:

jonathanlfj 泥豪~~~

Taiko Mod <3

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Taiko]

00:29:137 - i hear the drum sound at this (or call back sound ). i think you can put d at this and remove 00:29:306 -There is drums in both, but it's better to map on white ticks and it follows the rhythm better too.
00:31:834 - ^ remove 00:31:834 - Same.
01:14:474 - kkk Nope, fits better to the drums and because of the pattern after that have a lots of katsu.

yeah i just can found this only.

Sorry, nothing fixed D:

jonathanlfj wrote:

wait should i kds if u didnt fix anything?

shikyu wrote:

Hi, for Kuro-nyan m4m

[Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni]
00:34:025 (4) - change to k, feel awkward with pattern after this Yeah I thought it was awkward too, thanks
00:36:384 (2,3,4,5) - kdk d, (4) follow piano sound and to make flow better change (5) to d Yup, fix'd
01:10:092 (34,35,36) - better with dkk Nope, I'm following the drums here and (34) totally sound like a k
01:10:514 (38) - delete? after all 01:10:429 (37,38,39,40,41) kinda weird I don't get why D: If I had to delete something it would be 40, and imo this stream is okay this way
02:00:149 (14) - change to d, it's better to hear Yup
02:04:531 (4,5) - DK, still have same sound as 02:04:025 (2,3) Yup

Hope it's helpful, good luck~

Taris wrote:

Old map~

by request.

[KeA Easy]

01:06:890 (2) - Maybe add a whistle to the end ok
01:19:699 (2) - Move this to the position of this slider end 01:21:890 (1) - done

Rest looks good~

[S.S.S Normal]

00:22:670 - Maybe add a note. i think that is too hard for a normal
00:57:957 - ^ i want to keep consistency with 00:55:429 (1)
01:16:497 (4) - New combo? kk

[Arianrhod Hard]

00:42:789 (1) - You can improve this shape. made it more curvy~
01:25:935 (5) - Add new combo here to be consistent with 01:21:216 (1) - ok
01:45:317 (5) - ^ done
02:03:014 (5) - ^ done

[Insane]

00:03:962 - Note seem missing. intentional to connect smoothly to the next combo
00:38:070 (4) - Maybe new combo here? ok
00:53:407 (5) - ^ done
01:01:665 (1) - Add finish to start. personally dont think it fits well
01:15:317 (3) - Add Whistle? nice one, sounds good
01:45:991 (1) - Remove new combo this was changed based on previous suggestion (aesthetic issue with different colour stacks)
01:46:665 (10) - Add here. as above
01:54:081 (1) - Finish start? doesnt sound very fit
01:58:295 (3) - ^ yeah not a big fan of finish spamming...guitar sounds more dominant in this section

That's all.

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, jonathanlfj

My mod from your request in my modding queue (Sorry for mod delay)

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Fine

Easy

1. 00:42:789 (1) - I think that spinner is too short for this diff. Maybe change is slider (Same as ) and add circle in 00:44:137 by this. done
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:49:868 (1) - I think that remove finish be better. yep

Normal

1. 00:42:789 (1) - Same as Easy diff. kk

Hard

1. 00:48:014 (2) - The same reasoning with (2). So move last point of slider to up 2 grids. Didnt quite understand this...im assuming the goal is to be parallel with 00:48:519 (4) so i did that
2. 01:49:868 (1) - Same as Easy diff. ok

Nightmare

1. 00:43:463 (5) - Add NC be better? aite
2. 00:45:991 (6) - Move last point of slider to left 1 grid, to parallel with (5). fixed
3. 01:05:542 (2) - I feel weird when I try play and listen to it. Remove circle be better? hmm i would like to keep this as a transition note due to the overlap...it will be harder to hit 01:05:710 (3) on hidden if there is a full 1/1 gap and objects are overlapped (and it being the only one mapped like that)
4. 01:49:868 (1) - Same as Easy diff. yep

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you. (Sorry for short mod)
Overall nice map, give a star

Good luck~

LKs wrote:

hi


easy-ok
normal-ok
taiko-ok
hard-hmm, ok

[nightmare]

00:05:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - instead of stacking them, I'd prefer http://puu.sh/1HDft done
00:14:748 (4,6) - SV change seems a bit sudden and may resulting in mis-follow or sth so how about make them gery? (by manipulating color) made it blue-gray setup
00:29:643 (4) - 1 grid down and right hmm just did 1 grid down for 1.50x spacing purposes
00:37:649 (2,3) - purposed overlaps? why not stack? this position change was suggested by previous mods since perfectly stacking them will give ugly overlapping due to stack leniency
00:39:250 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/1HDiu more fasion? ok
00:47:340 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/1HDlrcurves is good for flow planned to keep it parallel with the previous straight slider...but alrite flow comes first


all for me

LKs wrote:

rechecck

02:02:340 (1,2,3,4) - this linear jump is hard for me(maybe not only me). so i suggest rotating 02:02:677 (3,4) - anti-clockwise like this http://puu.sh/1HTiI the angel they lean also form two triangels, which make it plays better imo done, i scaled the distance a bit down too to lower the difficulty

Melophobia wrote:

Where is the "-Opening size-" from? If it's officially labeled then it's fine as it is. If not it needs to be changed. I checked the video and only saw this. Can you provide me some source?

1. audio volume is a bit low, checked with audition(http://puu.sh/1YLGG). here is a fixed one: http://puu.sh/1YMaU +4ms to all sections.
2. video quality is quite poor, try this (you may need to adjust the video offset, around -843ms maybe): http://puu.sh/1YM4g
3. romanized artist should follow the asian names rule, that is: Kotera Kanako
4. Title: 碧い軌跡 Aoi Kiseki -Opening size- (don't use or trust baidu if you're doing something Japanese related, romanized title is fine)
5. and source: THE LEGEND OF HEROES: AO NO KISEKI (Falcom may call their works 英雄伝説XXX before the release, but have never given a number in the actual name.)
6. tags: Falcom Sound Team jdk
7. highly suggest you add a blanked sliderslide for the soft intro part, try http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav if you agree on this

1. 00:22:838 (1) - sound like 1/8 snap, at 00:27:683. (also in nightmare diff)
2. 00:38:070 (5) - soft-whistle usages here is out of the main theme here imo, i know you're trying to cover the guitar but not working well. suggest you make repeats on 00:38:070 and 00:38:407 still normal sampleset and place a clap on the 2nd one. (same thing also happens in other osu diffs, as they're quite alike so I won't repeat.

1. 00:22:838 (1) - maybe ends at 00:25:029 and add a whistle? current ending position is quite random. and maybe
2. 00:16:939 - add a break after this note.

1. 00:22:838 (1) - ends at 00:25:029 and add whistle

Colin Hou wrote:

2 weeks.. but have to pop this for these issues.

[General]

1. audio volume is a bit low, checked with audition(http://puu.sh/1YLGG). here is a fixed one: http://puu.sh/1YMaU +4ms to all sections.
2. video quality is quite poor, try this (you may need to adjust the video offset, around -843ms maybe): http://puu.sh/1YM4g
3. romanized artist should follow the asian names rule, that is: Kotera Kanako
4. Title: 碧い軌跡 Aoi Kiseki -Opening size- (don't use or trust baidu if you're doing something Japanese related, romanized title is fine) does this mean i only change the normal title but leave the romanized title the way it is? thats what i did
5. and source: THE LEGEND OF HEROES: AO NO KISEKI (Falcom may call their works 英雄伝説XXX before the release, but have never given a number in the actual name.) i failed at being a falcom fan orz
6. tags: Falcom Sound Team jdk
7. highly suggest you add a blanked sliderslide for the soft intro part, try http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav if you agree on this

[Hard]

1. 00:22:838 (1) - sound like 1/8 snap, at 00:27:683. (also in nightmare diff)
2. 00:38:070 (5) - soft-whistle usages here is out of the main theme here imo, i know you're trying to cover the guitar but not working well. suggest you make repeats on 00:38:070 and 00:38:407 still normal sampleset and place a clap on the 2nd one. (same thing also happens in other osu diffs, as they're quite alike so I won't repeat.

[Easy]

1. 00:22:838 (1) - maybe ends at 00:25:029 and add a whistle? current ending position is quite random. and maybe
2. 00:16:939 - add a break after this note.

[Normal]

1. 00:22:838 (1) - ends at 00:25:029 and add whistle

yea I have to agree with Garven on the spinner background..
send me a PM once you fixed them, better before Feb 9th cuz I would be quite buzy after the beginning of Chinese New Year :3

1. 00:22:842 (1) - Did anybody said this spinner ends at a weird point? Shouldn't it end at 00:27:646 blue tick?

1. 00:22:842 (1) - the same to hard

Breeze wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:22:842 (1) - Did anybody said this spinner ends at a weird point? Shouldn't it end at 00:27:646 blue tick?

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:22:838 (1) - sound like 1/8 snap, at 00:27:683. (also in nightmare diff)

The 1/8 does sound like the fading point more than the blue tick, so its probably more appropriate

[nightmare]

1. 00:22:842 (1) - the same to hard

same as what's done in hard

call me back when you have reply