General
--THe meter should be 3/4, only Easy has this meter tho some reason.
i forgot it...--The kiai times are different.
changed be oneInsane00:09:740 (1,2) - i don't like how these overlap, it just looks a little ugly. I have no idea what this song comes from, but i am assuming these are wings. I remade them with less overlaps. If you like what i did you can replace your original design with mine:
ur design is very good, but more likes a shell 
so i changed something base on ur design,would u mind?[spoilerbox][attachment=0:6f64f]screenshot141.jpg[/attachment:6f64f]
Here is the code for the design:
256,152,9740,6,0,B|244:104|192:48|144:24|32:24|-28:120|-28:120|20:124|40:168|40:168|80:132|80:132|88:188|88:188|128:148|128:148|140:208|140:208|180:164|180:164|188:204|224:220,1,800
256,152,11990,6,0,B|268:104|320:48|368:24|480:24|540:120|540:120|492:124|472:168|472:168|432:132|432:132|424:188|424:188|384:148|384:148|372:208|372:208|332:164|332:164|324:204|288:220,1,800
Use that code to
replace your original code, which is shown below:
292,160,9740,6,0,B|272:92|200:40|112:24|44:-20|-32:128|-32:128|48:100|80:68|120:216|8:164|156:140|156:140|212:212|156:192|240:168|240:168|276:192,1,800
220,160,11990,2,0,B|240:92|312:40|400:24|468:-20|544:128|544:128|464:100|432:68|392:216|504:164|356:140|356:140|300:212|356:192|272:168|272:168|236:192,1,800
00:39:371 (1) - remove combo
00:45:177 (x) - add note
00:47:058 (4,5) - i would move this further away from 00:47:621 (1), because it looks it's a jump, even tho it's not. Or you could add a note at 00:47:427 -
chose former
00:59:802 (x) - i would add a note
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01:56:427 (6) - i would use normal hitsound for this one note. and add a finish to it.
good idea01:56:615 (1) - then remove the finish and add whistle to this note (use soft hitsounds still)
good idea]
Pokie's --I find nothing wrong with it since I read it perfectly fine and it plays well. However, although there may be less notes, the rhythm and slider velocities require a higher level of skill to read compared to insane. idk, i just feel a little uncomfortable naming it a hard. nice difficulty otherwise.
Normal00:05:615 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - seems confusing.
be ezer.. i m not sure whthere r ur want to be
00:18:365 (4,1,2) - spacing.
00:32:802 (x) - add note? makes it easier to read imo and sounds better
good idea
00:38:240 (3,4,5) - the unequal spacing looks weird.
fixed00:39:552 (6,7) - i would have this jump here.
do u mean i should't obey the ds 
01:02:240 (4) - i wouldn't stack this, but that's just me.
01:10:490 (5) - new combo.
01:25:115 (5,6,7) - i wouldn't do this. ALso 01:25:115 (5) - is a little far away.
01:28:302 (4) - it is hard to expect that there is a second repeat here, especially for beginniners imo.
fixed01:30:177 (6) - i would move this note back 1/2 tick
01:30:739 (8) - ^ (rearrange spacing if you change it)
01:43:115 (1) - I am quite sure designs like these are banned, since they require an actual arrow to show the player where the slider goes. And i would definitely not do it in a normal. you should either make the slider path visible, or change the design completely.
changed it ... only me who love it
Easy--The offset it different
00:16:121 (4,1) - i would not make a jump here
00:22:121 (7,1) - ^
--ok there are a lot of spacing infringements and random jumps. I would suggest you look at AIMod a bit and fix some of them. Easy can have jumps, but i wouldn't use any unless they really fit.
have fixed all of it.. thx
00:27:371 - add a spinner
01:26:996 (1) - i don't really see a point in having this slider, and it may confuse beginners a bit
fixednice sb and map! :3 Good luck.
(sb lags me tho D:)
Also, You are supposed to try to keep the SB Load under 5x. Sometimes it goes over. I don't know much about SBing, but just something that came to mind.
