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suggestions ofc
[General]
delete osb?
[Normal]
00:48:110 (1,3) - move both to the right 2, so 3 can have a small uguu stack with 00:51:539 (1), even if unnoticeable, you can move 2 and 4 too if you want to.
That's pretty much all I could find for Normal.
[Hard]
00:16:825 (5) - i'd like it better if you did http://puu.sh/aGJr ; 2nd dot at 320,136 if you need it.
00:40:825 (3) - i think a subtle curve would be nice since 00:40:396 (2) is a curve, i thought http://puu.sh/aGK9 ; 2nd point 216,176 if you need it
01:12:110 (2) - make it more like http://puu.sh/aGKS to match 01:12:539 (3,5); 2nd on 272,272 if you need it
01:48:110 (1) - i like this when it's ctrl + r'd
02:33:967 (6) - I don't see the point in this slider being slanted, it's hardly noticeable. either straight up or a little more slant. i like slanting it -- last tick two more to right
02:39:967 (2) - moving this down 1 equalizes the spacing a bit more between 1 and 3.
02:57:110 (2) - ^ but up 1, nothing major
star cause i love this song.
[General]
delete osb?
[Normal]
00:48:110 (1,3) - move both to the right 2, so 3 can have a small uguu stack with 00:51:539 (1), even if unnoticeable, you can move 2 and 4 too if you want to.
That's pretty much all I could find for Normal.
[Hard]
00:16:825 (5) - i'd like it better if you did http://puu.sh/aGJr ; 2nd dot at 320,136 if you need it.
00:40:825 (3) - i think a subtle curve would be nice since 00:40:396 (2) is a curve, i thought http://puu.sh/aGK9 ; 2nd point 216,176 if you need it
01:12:110 (2) - make it more like http://puu.sh/aGKS to match 01:12:539 (3,5); 2nd on 272,272 if you need it
01:48:110 (1) - i like this when it's ctrl + r'd
02:33:967 (6) - I don't see the point in this slider being slanted, it's hardly noticeable. either straight up or a little more slant. i like slanting it -- last tick two more to right
02:39:967 (2) - moving this down 1 equalizes the spacing a bit more between 1 and 3.
02:57:110 (2) - ^ but up 1, nothing major
star cause i love this song.
lolaston wrote:
suggestions ofc
[General]
delete osb?
Hey! picked this map from my mod queue!
The map is already good, so I'll just give some suggestions!
[General]
1/3 rhythm rocks!
03:03:539 - 03:03:682 - It would be nice (imo) if you would add a short kiai section just for a star fountain in the end of the map.
[Normal]
01:17:253 (3,4) - I think it would sound better if you would reverse them and move them 1/3 earlier like here?
01:27:539 (4) - whistle on end?
01:28:396 (1) - ^
01:32:682 - 01:35:682 - this part feels a bit empty imo! try adding soft whistles (you can try the default ones too) ?
01:54:967 - 02:21:539- ^
[Hard]
00:52:825 (5,1) - I think this anti-jump is a bit confusing! maybe change it? :S
01:23:967 (1,2,3,4,5) - look at this windmill http://puu.sh/aPU3 does it look and play better?
01:39:825 (3) - NC like in normal?
01:58:396 (1) - soooo nice! does the end of the slider underlap the start? Is it allowed? I mean I dunno D:
awesoome map <3
Starrrrr!
EDIT: I love those tags too xD
The map is already good, so I'll just give some suggestions!
[General]
1/3 rhythm rocks!
03:03:539 - 03:03:682 - It would be nice (imo) if you would add a short kiai section just for a star fountain in the end of the map.
[Normal]
01:17:253 (3,4) - I think it would sound better if you would reverse them and move them 1/3 earlier like here?
01:27:539 (4) - whistle on end?
01:28:396 (1) - ^
01:32:682 - 01:35:682 - this part feels a bit empty imo! try adding soft whistles (you can try the default ones too) ?
01:54:967 - 02:21:539- ^
[Hard]
00:52:825 (5,1) - I think this anti-jump is a bit confusing! maybe change it? :S
01:23:967 (1,2,3,4,5) - look at this windmill
http://puu.sh/aPU3 does it look and play better? 01:39:825 (3) - NC like in normal?
01:58:396 (1) - soooo nice! does the end of the slider underlap the start? Is it allowed? I mean I dunno D:
awesoome map <3
Starrrrr!
EDIT: I love those tags too xD
He's 100% done with the map. I assume he won't accept any guest difficulty whatsoever.z666ful_nasZain wrote:
can i make insane map? pls pls pls~
Anywho, putting some stars. Will check this soon.
After a bit of modding regarding some various slider changes in both difficulties...
Bubbled.
Bubbled.
General
Turn of letterboxes in diffs, because you have a video~
1st and 2nd combocolours looks close, make a bigger difference, if you can orz
Normal
Okay, there is a big gap between diffs, but nah, it's fine.
Normal diff seems too hard for me : AR4, OD2 have more sense than AR5, OD3, cuz it's an easiest diff. Also diff will have less than 3 stars.
01:17:110 (3,4) - increase spacing a bit?
01:38:539 - inis break? hum, usually it should be snapped on white tick. and HP2 is not HP8. just remove this short break, looks better without
01:41:253 (2,3) - stack with SL 0, you know about this rule, right?
02:06:539 (2,1) - could you avoid this overlap?
02:48:110 (4,1) - stack better or unstack
Hard
01:21:967 (7) - x:72, y:192 (half grid to the left)
01:32:539 (5) - add nc here? new vocal part
01:34:396 (1) - vocal part is still here, remove nc
01:35:682 (2) - add nc here, new vocal part
01:39:825 (3) - big distance between, add nc
01:48:110 (1,2) - unstack, same reason as in Normal
02:16:825 (4,5) - you can stack it better, i know it
02:37:682 (1,2,3,4) - awwww --^
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EDIT : rebubbled !
Turn of letterboxes in diffs, because you have a video~
1st and 2nd combocolours looks close, make a bigger difference, if you can orz
Normal
Okay, there is a big gap between diffs, but nah, it's fine.
Normal diff seems too hard for me : AR4, OD2 have more sense than AR5, OD3, cuz it's an easiest diff. Also diff will have less than 3 stars.
01:17:110 (3,4) - increase spacing a bit?
01:38:539 - inis break? hum, usually it should be snapped on white tick. and HP2 is not HP8. just remove this short break, looks better without
01:41:253 (2,3) - stack with SL 0, you know about this rule, right?
02:06:539 (2,1) - could you avoid this overlap?
02:48:110 (4,1) - stack better or unstack
Hard
01:21:967 (7) - x:72, y:192 (half grid to the left)
01:32:539 (5) - add nc here? new vocal part
01:34:396 (1) - vocal part is still here, remove nc
01:35:682 (2) - add nc here, new vocal part
01:39:825 (3) - big distance between, add nc
01:48:110 (1,2) - unstack, same reason as in Normal
02:16:825 (4,5) - you can stack it better, i know it
02:37:682 (1,2,3,4) - awwww --^
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EDIT : rebubbled !
Nice song and map, RANKED
BTW, Nubunaga...信長？
00:24:539 (3,4) -
This part is damn hard in CTB mode
But hey it's fun
BTW, Nubunaga...信長？
00:24:539 (3,4) -
This part is damn hard in CTB mode
But hey it's funthe hit volume is too damn low 
Yay finally~ Also nice bg, gratz
Oh, this got ranked overnight? Shiirn's gonna be a happy camper. 
~Congratulations~
No, TAIKO. What.
Anyway, congratulation~
Anyway, congratulation~
Topic Starter
this is my second map with vocals to be ranked
and arguably my first serious one
thanks everyone!
and arguably my first serious one
thanks everyone!
안녕하세요 lol
yeah me too i heard itNakagawa-Kanon wrote:
안녕하세요 lol
Congrats Shiirn~
The best map of yours.
FC'd it first try, amazing beatmap! Flowed perfectly
hi lo first map i dl when i started osu xd