Nymph wrote:

Nymph(70660701) 1:38:34
General:
Nymph(70660701) 1:38:38
BG is H

Nymph wrote:

微风我来接节操 req from 华语节操群

General:
啥都没发现


Beginner:
Beatmap design/suggestion
02:28:407 (X) - 考虑加个note在这？ 加了感觉难了点, 我把slider拉到这儿了

Hitsound
00:15:625 (7) - 哎去这个太震了…………音量太高 吓到我了 降到45%了
00:46:157 (1) - 这个音量也似乎略高了 听起来过于突出。 其实我觉得00:47:407 (3) - 这个才是应该加大音量突出的重点……我个人感觉加到75都不高. 1倒是觉得35就可以了. 1降低了, 3提高了
02:20:157 (1) - 这里感觉音量小了 我听的感觉是建议45起步递增 这个我觉得还好


Advanced:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:31:157 (1,2,3) - nazi：这种spacing 真的弄成间距一样好看点 23都往右1grid好看不少 k
00:36:157 (1) - ……这种shape的话 对称感觉更好 k
01:04:907 (4,5,6,7,8) - …………这绝对不是整齐的五边形 打的时候就能感觉到 :/ 好吧
01:17:157 (5) - 这slidershape……咋快趴下了………… 因为slider开头不跟前面01:15:157 (1)重合的话感觉很难看
02:20:657 (4) - 太往里了有点 拉出来一格？跟那些减小间距的连打一样就行
02:21:657 (7) - ^
02:22:657 (2) - 这个spacing就可以
02:23:657 (5) - 又缩回去了 这些都改了
02:40:407 (2) - 再拉大点间距？ 也行啊

Hitsound
00:15:625 (4) - 同beginner.. 不再提了 难道是我耳机太爆了么
00:46:157 (3,4) - 这俩还是高 囧 又跟beginner一样了 这次真不再提了 后面2分20秒还是同beginner
01:16:157 (3) - 我始终觉得MP3这里的鼓声早了 造成跟自己加的hitsound没融合起来 很别扭 手工弹奏始终是会抽的, 这里加红线又不太现实


Challenge:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:48:157 (1) - 一串到这间距突然变小了？1.04转0.78 是故意的么 因为前面那段是0.75xBPM
别的都还好 有几个地方有点坑 快睡着了 就先写这么多吧

atk1992 wrote:

Nymph wrote:

Nymph(70660701) 1:38:34
General:
Nymph(70660701) 1:38:38
BG is H

lol

hitsound总体感觉鼓声偏小 我是觉得还好, 先暂时这样吧, 如果还有人这么觉得的话我就提高点音量

[美女脱衣]
00:09:657 (2,3) - 和背景的强鼓冲突不和谐
00:11:657 (5,6) - ^ 那该这么改呢
01:32:657 (3) - 不如跟1和2重叠 1,2是两个重音所以感觉重叠比较好
01:35:407 (3) - 红线节奏微妙 微妙的既视感
02:02:407 add note 这个可以有
02:28:407 add note k
02:40:157 (9) - 拆成两个NOTE？ k

[美女入浴]
00:05:157 (4) - 强音效here 还是长白线的比较强, 这里提高音量前面的反而不明显了
00:25:157 (2) - ugly(nazi)，来回ctrl+R测试对不对称 好吧, 你们这群对称控
00:36:157 (1) - ^
00:46:782 (5,6,7) - 距离大胶布？ 萌大奶
00:49:782 (6,7,8,1,2) - 这边按我感觉是678间距拉大，然后1和2stack，当然现在这样也fine。下面几个同样的地方也一样 嗯, 我比较喜欢这样, 间距较大的连打对我来说很难HD lol
01:06:157 (9) - lol感觉这孩子说不上来的很可怜 意义不明
01:12:657 (4) - 1/6 here ，到01:13:407，音效渐强到渐弱 确实是1/6, 改了
01:17:157 (5) - CTRL +R k
01:17:907 (6) - 跟改过以后的5的尾巴水平对称 k
01:18:157 (7) - CTRL +R k
01:28:657 (8) - 长了 改了
02:19:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice节奏here your中english混合也nice
02:39:157 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - 目前distance：0.97/1.22/1.18/1.4/1.42/1.36。建议1.0/1.0/1.2/1.2/1.4/1.4，然后排列改成比较明显的加速间距比如http://puu.sh/aIrD 建议很好, 不过我觉得我这样也不错




[美女推倒]
00:05:407 (7) - 这边听着奇怪，要么sliderslide静音要么取消折返用三连note 我觉得还好啊
00:14:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - combo建议1234123412341，排列遇1折返比如http://puu.sh/aIuu 改了
00:19:657 (6) - 拆成slider + note建议 k
00:23:657 (4) - ^ 这里我就不改了
00:40:657 (3) - 虽然背景有东西，但不建议跟 先暂时不改, 看看其他人这么说
01:44:407 add note here可以拉仇恨 我不是MT扛不住
02:12:407 (2) - 哇哦3.13 改小了点
02:13:907 (11,1) - 不跳一下吗 不跳都够坑了


无星可射

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2,56357,59157

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
BG微H 我沒意見可是有被噴的風險？ 又没露点又没胖次的:S
tag chinese instrumental 之類的？ 行
Break periods可以弄成一樣
Hard

2,56357,59156

Insane

2,56357,59157

应该是一样的吧

[Timing]
前面還是off了點？第2段拿00:15:625出現早了~5-10 ms
試試(162, BPM120), (13637, BPM122)
如果行的話也套用去後面 这个timing目前我觉得算比较合适了, 只有几个单独地方off, 那个应该是人工弹奏的问题lol

[Challenge]
00:07:532 (8) - 音樂中(8)比(7)大聲 可以考慮這個note大聲一點 k
00:48:907 (3) - 右一格 k
00:54:157 (1,2) - 加finish？前面2次不加 然後後面2次加finish這樣 我觉得这里不加好点
01:35:157 (5) - 左一格 k
02:16:407 (1,2) - 把(2) stack在上一個(3)上面 然後ctrl+H找對稱地方放(1)？ 嗯...那样我觉得很难排列

[Advanced]
00:07:532 (5) - 同[Insane], 大聲一點 k
00:11:907 (1) - 左一格吧 就這個spacing不同 k
00:54:127 (1,2) - finish？ 这个我是觉得音乐里没有那么强的finish音的感觉
02:28:157 (1) - 上一格 k

[Beginner]
ok

就這樣 加油

Star Stream wrote:

hi~
from my queue

Beginner
02:26:157 ~ 02:28:157 - spinner? why here spinner?
02:38:157 (5) - NC? k

Advanced
00:46:157 (3) - NC? nah
00:46:782 (5,6,7) - > 00:46:657 ? It follows music here
01:28:157 (7) - NC? nah
02:27:157 (8) - add a return arrow and delete the circle(02:27:907 ) ? Keep that note for symmetry

Challenge
00:18:157 (3) - NC? nah

that's all.. ovo

Leorda wrote:

Hi Cheeze

Beginner
* Uhh, NSFW BG? This is art, serious

00:41:657 (5) - New combo? k
01:37:157 (3) - Add 1 repeating slider for following instruments? Hmm, then idk how to put later notes lol
02:26:407 (6) - You using too many repeating slider with short slider. This issue can makes beginners confusing about when the slider is end 大丈夫だ、問題ない！

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Advanced
00:46:157 (3) - New combo for new stanza? Like others? k
01:28:657 (8) - If you following the strings (I don't the instrument, lol) for this slider, the end slider should 01:29:157 Ends 01:29:407 makes 9 more easy to read, anywat I lowered volume here
02:19:407 (7,8,9) - Move 1 grid up for make parallel (Nazi) nah

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Challenge
* AR -1? 8 is fine

00:54:657 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I think the stream without slider is might be good, instead of stream with slider There are some 1/8 sliders, 1/8 notes are bad imo

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Really, Breeze's avatar must have a mustache

LunarSakuya wrote:

Hey, practicing my mod (saw this in modreq)

Beginner

00:00: 657 small spacing problem between [1] and [2] fixed
00:46:907 more space? to avoid confusion in rythmn it's usual spacing here
02:01:657 extend this slider to 02:01:907 Hmm, I feel that would make it hard
02:28:157 try to Add finish yes it has finish
02:28:407 Add finish k

Advanced
00:45:907 Add note k
01:15:157 Delete NC
01:16:157 Add NC:arrow: I feel it works well now
01:19:157 Delete NC
01:20:157 Add NC ^
02:39:157 [3,4,5,6] Continue with slider pattern? nice idea, changed

Challenge
02:26:407 zig-zag it? the linear pattern doesn't suit this song Hmm, I feel straight line better

Pretty pictures
I like the song and the map is really good xD Good luck Breeze!

GiNa wrote:

你好，那繪師的圖好像遊戲人物呢 ;o

[Beginner]
00:14:125 (4) – maybe NC here? Cuz the pattern changes k
00:54:157 (1,2,3) – this doesn’t fit imo, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/202639 Hmm, I feel it's fine now
01:28:157 (1) – 這個在調一下應該會更好看，用Grid Level4把第四個waypoint移到x:196 y:16 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/202640 k

[Advanced]
01:57:907 (1,2) – add finish 嗯, 我是感觉这里没有finish的感觉
這diff好難

[Challenge]
越難越mod不出神馬

以上

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello~ Here's my mod

[Advanced]
00:46:657 - Add a hitcircle here? Hmm, I feel that makes here kinda hard
00:47:157 - ^ ^
(It would look better like this imo, though I'm not so sure about this one:)
00:47:657 - ^
^
00:55:657 (6) - Remove this hitcircle. [Based on the music this sounds better for me] Hmm, seems odd if just here remove one beat

[Challenge]
00:29:157 - Add NC
00:30:157 - Remove NC k
00:54:657 - Add NC Add NC to 00:56:032 then
01:31:157 - Move this [pointed by the arrow in the pic] 2 grids upward. k

That's all~
Nice map~

1. 00:54:907 (2,3) - 突然来俩后半拍..? 在00:54:657开始 , 00:55:657结束 来个折返slider 如何
2. 01:19:157 (7,1) - 换下NC
3. 01:56:157 (1,2,3) - 排一直线有一点分不清slider尾和note..

1. 00:08:157 (7,1,2) - 像这种3个一起的 设置成一种颜色会不会清晰一点.. 后面几个也是这样

1. 02:18:907 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 由于之前的(4) 会形成一种o o o的节奏, 而且这里音乐也没有明显的3连音, 会显得比较奇怪。把(5)之后的换成1/2节奏 或者索性全部换成连打..?
2. diff名改成Challenging ? 搜到别的图用形容词形式的比较多.. 不过你之前的图也用的名词形式吧 ~

S h i o n wrote:

Beginner

1. 00:54:907 (2,3) - 突然来俩后半拍..? 在00:54:657开始 , 00:55:657结束 来个折返slider 如何 嗯, 其实这里是跟背景的鼓声...我先留着, 再有人说的话我就改吧
2. 01:19:157 (7,1) - 换下NC 貌似没太差别
3. 01:56:157 (1,2,3) - 排一直线有一点分不清slider尾和note.. 咦, 会吗, 其他人貌似还没这么说过的, 先留着看看

Advanced

1. 00:08:157 (7,1,2) - 像这种3个一起的 设置成一种颜色会不会清晰一点.. 后面几个也是这样 k

Challenge

1. 02:18:907 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 由于之前的(4) 会形成一种o o o的节奏, 而且这里音乐也没有明显的3连音, 会显得比较奇怪。把(5)之后的换成1/2节奏 或者索性全部换成连打..? 换了个1/2拍的
2. diff名改成Challenging ? 搜到别的图用形容词形式的比较多.. 不过你之前的图也用的名词形式吧 ~ 这个无所谓吧XD

谢谢

@Kiiwa ...pic mod hard to catch the exact time lol
Change color to brown then, thanks
And fixed NC issue and some other suggestions
thanks
good luck ~

Soul-less wrote:

从mod queue飘来的~

[General]
- [Beginner]和[Advance]有很多没用到的绿线，主要都是Challenge用的。没什么大碍，但能的话，清理一下？
- 那slider slide音效。。。hmm。
- 还是想说一下，[Beginner]的bg真的大丈夫？我本身是觉得没问题，但那感觉不像是100% SFW吧。 好吧, 既然很多人说了我就换个好了...

[Advance]
- 00:46:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段。。hmm。 建议在 00:46:532 加一拍， 排列如以下建议？ 加了note了

拍子建议~(3)叠在(2)下面

- 01:28:657 (8) - 感觉是白线停比较好？与 01:12:657 (4) 类似。 k

[Challenge]
- 01:29:282 (10,11) - 参考[Advance] - 01:28:657 (8)的建议？ k


好久没听华乐了~

Deif wrote:

Hi o/

General:

hitcircle: I'm not a huge fan of coloured hitcircles. But in this case, with those combo colors, it works fine.

Beginner:

Star rate: 3.09: You know the easiest diff in the mapset has to be below 3 stars... Yup, I know, this diff is easy enough imo

02:26:407 (6) - Too many repetitions... End them in the 1st beat of the music (02:28:157), not the second one. If you've made that change, you should add a note at 02:28:407. Done some changes then

Advanced:

Looks good~

Challenge:

00:54:657 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - This pattern is kinda confusing the way it is. Try something like this:

SPOILER

But anyway, as Leorda said in a previous post, it'll be better if there aren't sliders in that stream... However, if you want to keep that 1/8 sliders, at least exchange (5,6) for a 1/4 slider (5). (8,9) too. okay, change to sliders

That's all!

Taiko_[69] wrote:

Taiko:

SPOILER

00:07:719 (24) - should be a kat here
00:15:750 (60,61) - 2 dons in the end maybe?
00:17:157 (5) - Big note
00:19:157 (12) - ^
00:21:157 (21) - ^
00:23:157 (28) - ^
00:25:157 (5) - ^
00:27:157 (12) - ^
00:29:157 (21) - ^
00:31:157 (30) - ^
00:33:157 (6) - ^
00:35:157 (14) - ^
00:37:157 (23) - ^
Umm there are too many of them, please change them to big notes, since the music is very slow even a beginner in taiko will be able to hit here a big note.
02:51:907 (66) - Big don + put a new timing section with slider velocity x2
02:52:032 (67) - Big don
02:52:157 (68) - Big kat
02:52:282 (69) - Big don,there is a useless timing section, maybe remove it?

I think it sounds and looks much nicer with these small changes, try it out. I had fun playing it~

Katsuri wrote:

The download link is broken, I don't take the taiko diff.

1. Skin: You are missing reversearrow.png in your folder, since you have a custom circle and overlay. Just use a default one from the template skin if you don't have a matching one for this set.

1. 02:26:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - I strongly suggest to put a spinner here, or map the melody with jumps or something, because that drumline in the music is unmappable if you don't use additional red sections, which would just make it awkward to play. Players who lower hitsounds so they play with music more, will get many 100s here because the drumline is improvised a little and a flat 1/4 stream doesn't fit into that. I will not hold it against you if you wish to keep this, but please check it yourself and see how ridiculous the drumline here actually is.

1. I would strongly suggest to use normal hitsounds here (and lower volume) rather than soft, because of the new rules being made which will most likely abolish the use of soft hitsounds in taiko. Not a big deal and you don't have to do this if you really don't want to, but if you ask me it's a good thing to consider changing this to fit that criteria.

1. 02:28:157 (5) - New combo?

lolcubes wrote:

Lets get this awesome map ranked!

[General]

1. Skin: You are missing reversearrow.png in your folder, since you have a custom circle and overlay. Just use a default one from the template skin if you don't have a matching one for this set. added

[Challenging]

1. 02:26:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - I strongly suggest to put a spinner here, or map the melody with jumps or something, because that drumline in the music is unmappable if you don't use additional red sections, which would just make it awkward to play. Players who lower hitsounds so they play with music more, will get many 100s here because the drumline is improvised a little and a flat 1/4 stream doesn't fit into that. I will not hold it against you if you wish to keep this, but please check it yourself and see how ridiculous the drumline here actually is. you're right, changed to spinner, so does [advanced]

[Beginner]

1. 02:28:157 (5) - New combo? k

Amazing map I have to say, I sort of expected a really awesome map but really, the hitsounding blew me away, awesome job. Contact me after you make any changes and I will rank this asap.

lolcubes wrote:

Hm it appears that your fullsubmit has gone wrong, because I am not getting the reversearrow.png in my folder. :S

Also I see that you changed them into a spinner, but how about extending that spinner (02:26:407 (1)) in both your diffs all the way to 02:28:157 and removing a note there? I think it sounds better and gives off a better rhythm. Just a thing to consider. Hmm, okay, then

Fix the reversearrow, see if you like my suggestion and I rank. :3