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Aleks719

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Aleks719 2012-06-17T02:10:23+00:00

General
i have got -15ms from your offset, so, 435.

Normal
01:24:753 (5) - add nc
01:42:981 (5) - replace nc here from 01:44:880 (1) -
01:49:816 (3,4) - sounds not perfect. try to improve this place?

S o r d a's Hyper
combos 12-13 are too long for ~~Hard~~ Hyper diff, cut them please
00:16:019 (5,1) - better without overlap
00:26:462 (3) - should be 1/4 later as farer in your diff?
00:49:437 (3,1) - after 2.0x spacing it looks like antijump, increase spacing here a bit
01:07:190 (2) - this slider is hard to read because of 2 reverses. i suggest to make 2 sliders with 1 reverse. will be easier to play and read http://puu.sh/Bsqw
01:07:665 (3,4) - for now and future. I'd recommend you to start your streams from white or red ticks. quite hard to catch start of stream when it placed on 1/4 blue tick. Yes, i saw this pattern (from blue tick) in your diff before, but i'd like to see stream from white or red ticks.
01:38:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this rhythm. imo,fits better : http://puu.sh/BswT
01:53:234 (1) - remove nc
01:53:994 (7) - replace nc here from 01:54:373 (1) -

S o r d a

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S o r d a 2012-06-18T11:38:27+00:00

Aleks719 wrote:
S o r d a's Hyper
combos 12-13 are too long for ~~Hard~~ Hyper diff, cut them please i dont think so. for example http://osu.ppy.sh/b/156547 this map Hard 497 combos
00:16:019 (5,1) - better without overlapchanged a bit~
00:26:462 (3) - should be 1/4 later as farer in your diff?add note and changed slider.
00:49:437 (3,1) - after 2.0x spacing it looks like antijump, increase spacing here a bit changed a bit
01:07:190 (2) - this slider is hard to read because of 2 reverses. i suggest to make 2 sliders with 1 reverse. will be easier to play and read http://puu.sh/Bsqwfixed
01:07:665 (3,4) - for now and future. I'd recommend you to start your streams from white or red ticks. quite hard to catch start of stream when it placed on 1/4 blue tick. Yes, i saw this pattern (from blue tick) in your diff before, but i'd like to see stream from white or red ticks.sorry,i think its fit song blue tick start streams,sorry keep it
01:38:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this rhythm. imo,fits better : http://puu.sh/BswTfixed
01:53:234 (1) - remove ncfixed
01:53:994 (7) - replace nc here from 01:54:373 (1) -fixed

thanks for mod Aleks
offsetは任せますー
遅くなってすみません！
http://puu.sh/BOgh

Muya

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Muya 2012-06-18T12:34:17+00:00

updated

Aleks719

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Aleks719 2012-06-27T09:51:09+00:00

after short irc mod (one hidden reverse in hyper, 2 nc in normal ) - rebubbled

Lybydose

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Lybydose 2012-06-28T17:18:41+00:00

hyper:

00:08:038 (3,4,5) - what is this spacing

S o r d a

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S o r d a 2012-06-28T18:40:58+00:00

fixed~
http://puu.sh/ElQU

Muya

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Muya 2012-06-28T18:56:56+00:00

thanks~
updated

edit:
changed kiai time

Lybydose

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Lybydose 2012-07-01T01:07:59+00:00

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Andrea

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Andrea 2012-07-27T05:49:37+00:00

[General]

Change the Audio Lead-In to 2000 on the difficulties where you used it.

[S o r d a's Hyper]

00:16:583 (1) - This could be stacked better.
00:20:855 (4,5) - What about using a short slider like you did before? Would be better imo.
00:28:829 (5,6) - ^
01:10:697 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Another]

01:44:874 (7) - Add a new combo here, please.

Wonderful map!

Mercurial

Mercurial 2012-07-27T06:44:48+00:00

C'mon Muya, c'mon!

S o r d a

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S o r d a 2012-07-27T13:47:32+00:00

all fixed
http://puu.sh/Maxu

Muya

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Muya 2012-07-27T13:59:57+00:00

thanks Andrea, updated

Apricot

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Apricot 2012-07-27T14:04:56+00:00

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Andrea

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Andrea 2012-07-27T23:21:35+00:00

Awesome job!

Ranked~