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Marie - Rocket Love Panic! (Short Ver.) [Osu|Taiko]

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Dino99
Request from my queue :D

Sorry for my poor English!! :P

[Easy]

Fine~

[Normal]

  1. 00:57:207 - Add a note
  2. 00:57:568 - ^
  3. 01:34:074 (1,2,3) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/189593
    224,280,94074,5,2
    136,256,94436,1,0
    96,176,94797,2,0,B|80:136|80:88,1,90,2|0
[Hard]

  1. 01:04:797 - Add a note
  2. 01:07:869 (1) - Remove? Add notes at 01:07:869 01:08:231 01:08:412 01:08:592 01:08:773 01:08:954 01:09:135~
  3. 01:31:544 (2) - Reverse?
  4. 01:34:978 (2) - I think it's better>< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/189597
    80,272,94978,2,0,B|56:296|56:320|56:344,2,75
[Insane]

  1. 00:25:761 - Add a note
  2. 00:57:749 - ^
  3. 00:57:839 - ^
  4. 01:07:869 (1) - Remove? Maybe add some notes?
  5. 01:31:544 (2) - Reverse?
That's all~

Good Luck!!
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[Easy]
00:52:127 (1) - 3 grids up the middle point
01:03:512 (1) - move to 01:03:693
01:21:042 (1,2,1,2) - the rhythm might be a bit dense, try useing combined long sliders and short sliders


[Hard]
01:06:584 (1,2,3) - the spacing increase suddenly .. may confuse players.. decrease to 1.2x
01:20:861 (3) - add a note


[Insane]
00:57:910 (1) - do a jump because of the spacing previous
01:03:241 (4) - add a note?
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nice map
good luck ;)
mancuso_JM_
Mod Request as Modding Queue :P

Easy:
01:01:524 (2,3): Spacing (Don't forget to move the next notes to don't have sapcing problems)
01:14:898 (x): Add a Note

Normal:
01:03:512 (1): The slider have to ends in 01:04:054 (White Tick)
01:21:765 (1): This New Combo is unnecesary because the music don't change. Remove it Please
01:22:488 (1): ^

Hard:
HP Drain Rate: +1
Overall Difficulty: +1
01:19:958 (2,1): Use Distance Snap, because the spacing is to high here

Insane:
Looks Good.

Too lazy to mod taiko xD.
That's all Good Luck with your map ;)
hoLysoup
hi~

[Easy]
00:25:922 (1) - end this spinner at 00:27:910 feels better
00:28:994 (1) - start this spinner here is better: 00:28:813
01:36:946 (4) - remove 1 repeat, and extend slider to 01:37:488 is better http://puu.sh/axrX

[Normal]
00:55:560 (2,3,4) - a bit hard for Normal..? I think try to make it simpler
01:02:066 (3) - add whistle on slider body
01:35:500 (1) - ^
01:36:223 (2,3,4,5) - a bit hard for Normal..? I think try to make it simpler

[Hard]
00:34:777 (1) - remove clap on slider head?
00:41:102 - add a beat?
01:12:368 (1,2) - strongly suggest don't stack (2) on the repeat arrow
01:19:958 (2,1) - make spacing even?
01:36:765 - why 0.75x here? if you want to keep it, I suggest make this 01:36:223 (4) 0.75x too

[Insane]
00:34:777 (1) - remove clap on slider head?
nothing else..

nice map :>
-Lennox-
IRC mod.

SPOILER
[...]
05:57 <-Lennox-> : 01:12:368 (1,2) - those kick sliders in Easy could be very confusing for new players. They just can't follow
05:57 <-Lennox-> : the rhythm with this sliders. Maybe you just put here 2 sliders instead of that reverse?
05:58 <-Lennox-> : Maaybe this here http://puu.sh/aPvA
05:58 <-Lennox-> : 01:23:934 (1,2) - same
05:58 <Star Stream> : ok i'll fix them
05:58 <-Lennox-> : 01:29:717 (1,1,1) - This here is actually fine because they are good to see
05:59 <-Lennox-> : Good difficult! But you have to improve your hitsounds i guess. I can't help you with hitsounds cuz im not
05:59 <-Lennox-> : good at it ;-;
06:00 <-Lennox-> : Try to ask Tenshi-Nyan or Sandpig if they can give you a hitsound mod
06:00 <Star Stream> : yea i'm terrible at hitsounds T^T
06:01 <-Lennox-> : [normal]
06:01 <-Lennox-> : 00:55:560 (1) - you don't need to put a new combo here
06:01 <Star Stream> : fixed
06:03 <-Lennox-> : Normal seems fine to me
06:03 <Star Stream> : ovo
06:04 <-Lennox-> : [hard]
06:04 <-Lennox-> : 00:23:211 (1,2) - that looks like a random jump
06:05 <-Lennox-> : 00:49:958 (2,1) - huh whats with that spacing here
06:06 <Star Stream> : just for make a shape
06:07 <-Lennox-> : 01:12:187 (5,1) - Okay. The hitburst from (5) makes the reversal from the slider (1) a bit invisible. Its not
06:07 <-Lennox-> : that bad but i would change before i get some trouble for this
06:08 <-Lennox-> : 01:24:657 (3) - This one gets invisible too with the hitburst from 01:23:572 (4) -
06:08 <-Lennox-> : thats unrankable you have to know D:
06:09 <Star Stream> : ok :p
06:09 <-Lennox-> : 01:36:765 (5) - There is no reason to put here a new combo :p Also it looks without mucha better :D
06:10 <Star Stream> : mucha?
06:10 <-Lennox-> : much :p
06:11 <-Lennox-> : [insane]
06:11 <Star Stream> : ah, ' '
06:11 <-Lennox-> : 00:25:199 (3) - idk what to do with that slider
06:11 <-Lennox-> : its near the unrankable sliders.
06:11 <Star Stream> : hmm..
06:11 <-Lennox-> : sec i'll ask one
06:13 <-Lennox-> : http://puu.sh/aPye
06:13 <-Lennox-> : You have to change :<
06:13 <Star Stream> : ok..
06:16 <-Lennox-> : Okay all others seems fine!
06:17 <Star Stream> : ovo!
06:17 <-Lennox-> : Just need to improve your hitsounds :p
06:17 <Star Stream> : .. T^T
06:18 <-Lennox-> : I post this log into the thread to see that i have modded this :p

Keep up the good work! I guess i'll leave you a star /o/
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hello :)

Easy
00:25:922 (1) - end this slider at 00:27:910 ?
01:26:825 (5) - move this slider to grid x:436 y:140 ?

Normal
01:22:849 (6) - left 1 grid? x:372 y:240

Hard
  1. Approach Rate change to 6?
00:28:452 (2) - remove this slider repeating? and make the next spinner start at 00:28:813 ?
01:13:271 (4) - up + right 4 grid? x:256 y:224
01:13:452 (5) - right 1 grid? x:204 y:304
@ Nice Difficulty! <3

Insane
01:37:307 (3,4) - confused here @@

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That's all..
you got a Nice mapset. and Great job.
Good Luck! :D
Kurai
General :
  1. Combo colors : In my opinion you should darken the combo colors, they blend in the vidéo/backgroud too much for my taste.
  2. Snapping : You have unsnapped objects in every difficulty, check AImod to see where (crl+shift+A). This needs to be fixed !
Easy :
  1. 00:25:922 (1) - This slider should end 1/2 earlier, otherwise it is not in the song's rhythm.
  2. 00:40:560 (1) - I would reduce this slider by 1/2 to follow the vocal here, it fits much in my opinion. (It's just a suggestion)
  3. 00:44:175 (2) - Here again, I would extand this slider by 1/2 to follow the vocal.
  4. 01:08:030 (1) - This spinner needs to start 1/2 earlier, otherwise it doesn't follow the song.
  5. 01:18:151 (1,2) - Move these notes 1/2 earlier to follow the music.
  6. 01:29:717 - Kiai time should end here !
Normal :
  1. 01:08:030 (4) - The last reverse on this slider doesn't really fit :/ It would e much better if you remove it.
Hard :
  1. 01:34:958 (2) - This slider is too close from the previous note, you need to fix the spacing, otherwise it may be confusing for some players.
Insane :
  1. 00:23:211 (1,2,3) - This kind of pattern are really bad, when you see this screenshot, can you tell me which are the circles and which is the slider ?
    No, right ? That's why it's very confusing and I highly recommand you to change it.
  2. 01:08:934 (1,2,3) - This pattern is hidden by the spinner's hitburst, that's not really readable and you ought to move them somewhere else. :3
  3. 01:37:307 (3,4) - Same thing as 00:23:211 (1,2,3).
Not a bad map :3
Topic Starter
Star Stream
all fixed except '00:44:175 (2) , 00:40:560 (1)' in easy diff
thx~
Kurai
Timing :
  1. Mh, your offset is too early, add +8ms please (offset : 5869ms). (Don't forget to resnap the green timing section, especially the kiai ones, and the preview point).
i_k's Taiko :
  1. Rename it "i_k's Taiko Oni" ?
  2. 00:05:862 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
  3. 01:34:235 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
  4. 01:38:211 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
jossieP

KuraiPettan wrote:


i_k's Taiko :

  1. Rename it "i_k's Taiko Oni" ? - >v< I dont mind about adding "Oni" to my taiko diffs, why? because of I have no idea about the tatsujin criteria.
  2. 00:05:862 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
  3. 01:34:235 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
  4. 01:38:211 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
@Star Stream can you do this for me? D: plus you must fix the timing stuff
Topic Starter
Star Stream
All fixed :3
Kurai
General
  1. You have forgotten to resnap the preview point, change it to 17435 in all difficulties.
Easy
  1. 00:21:772 (2) - This slider is kinda late at the beginning (because there is a strong beat 1/2 earlier, so this slider should start at 00:21:591)
Fix this and I will bubble :3
(no kudosu please)

Edit : Bubbled ~
Miya
ah yey, it's bubble x). I hope this map will be ranked soon.
Topic Starter
Star Stream
Thx thx~ ^^
IceBeam
hi

are you sure that source name is correct?
I found various results,with capitalized The and Girlfriend
coud you provide me a link to the original source?

you can't have both slienced normal-sliderslide.wav and normal-slidertick.wav
delete one of them

kiai ends suddenly,that's not good
could you end 1-st kiai at 00:28:820 at least?

and it's better to end 2-nd kiai at 01:33:881

[Easy]
00:44:905 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier
00:56:471 (1) - ^
01:02:073 (3) - start it 1/1 earlier and add a repeat to 01:02:435,so it would look like this:
also fix spacing in this pattern,using DS

and separate all combos that are longer then 5 please,it's required for the easiest difficulty

[Normal]
00:29:001 (1) - start 1/2 earlier
00:43:459 (1,2) - add some claps?
00:44:905 (1) - 1/2 earlier

[Hard]
fine

[i_k's Taiko]
00:16:170 (1) - remove ninja spinner please,it's way too short

[Insane]
01:07:856 (1) - spinner doesn't fit here..map this part
01:15:266 (1,2,3) - nope D: you can't see where it starts because both slider start and end point are hidden by hitbursts,so change this pattern
Topic Starter
Star Stream
All fixed

and the source from an album http://puu.sh/dZ4r

http://www.alcot.biz/product/osana/spec.html

fixed President -> PRESIDENT

and.. waiting ikari_kyon now...
merchat7
Should keep consistency with vndb imo even if the Japanese name had it capitalized http://vndb.org/v2622

Offical English name doesn't capitalize President http://www.jlist.com/product/JAST001 so I think Osananajimi wa Daitouryou -My girlfriend is the President- like before is better.
jossieP
@Star Stream you can remove the spinner by me or wait until I get home >v<

all doned

Download: Marie - Rocket Love Panic! (Short Ver.) (Star Stream) [i_k's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Star Stream
ok, updated
IceBeam
don't kd this

everything is nice,but Kiai should start/end along with objects
there're no objects at 01:33:881 in Easy/Normal
so,you can remap or choose another kiai

if you want to remap,then use this rhytm for Normal,it improves the map and follows lyrics/instruments btw
just look at the timeline,you're free to use any other shapes of sliders

and something like this for Easy
well,just a slider that follow lyrics nice

if you don't want to change rhytm,then finish kiai at 01:38:037,for example..but remapping would be better of course,as the kiai should actually finish at 01:33:881

well,and the second issue is capitalized PRESIDENT,merchat7 provided you a link to the original source
are you willing to change it back to lowercase or leave a current one?
-Lennox-
Wiat why isn't there a star from me?

Take it
Topic Starter
Star Stream
lol.. thx lennox~!!
IceBeam
ranked
Kawayi Rika
첫 랭크 축하합니다 ~ :)
ToHeart_old
드디어 첫 랭크! ㅊㅋㅊㅋ
Miya
hey, congratz for your first ranked map star ^^
rui
congraturation :)
Laurier
>w<
Yasora
congrats :)
regenz
Gratz :D
hoLysoup
congrats~
Melophobia
gratz~ ^^
Marie ></
Backfire
Awww yeah, star-chan in the hizzouse.
c:
Topic Starter
Star Stream
lol.. thx all ^^
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