Hi! I'm taking care of your request from the Rank-Ready Modding Queue.

• General

1. Nothing to point out. Cute video haha ^u^

• [Easy]

1. 00:26:048 (3) - This note sounds nice there but I think that it may be confusing because it's placed at a red tick. I suggest you to move this slider to 00:25:820, make it end at 00:26:275 and add 1 repeat to it.
2. 00:37:639 (3,4) - Hmmm this should be simplified in my opinion. I think that this would be better and more easier for beginners:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:56:729 (3,4,5) - ^ I also think that this fits more because the combo number goes to 3 instead of 5 doing this (I think that 5~8 combo numbers are high for this kind of difficulties):
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:57:639 (5,1) - This spinner starts very early after clicking (5) in my opinion. I suggest you to replace it with a long slider or something.
5. 01:00:820 (1,2,3) - Can you move this notes a bit down? They get overlapped by the spinner-osu and the hitburst. It's hard to see them:
   
   SPOILER

   L
6. 01:01:275 (2) - I find difficult this combo for an Easy. I suggest you to delete this note to make it more easier.
7. 01:11:729 (4,1) - Same as I told you about 00:57:639 (5,1).
8. 01:16:729 (2,3) - I think you should unstack this notes. I find this difficult for an Easy too.
9. 01:31:275 (2,1) - Again, the same as I told you about spinners. Also, the next note 01:37:219 (1) it's placed very early to the spinner's end. I suggest you to make the spinner end at 01:36:275. It's the most easiest difficulty of the mapset, and beginners need a bit of time before clicking notes again for hand recovery.
10. 01:38:142 (1) - I suggest you to move this spinner to 01:38:372. It starts too early after clicking the slider (1) in my opinion.
11. 01:41:245 (1) - This note is placed very early after the spinner. I highly recommend you to move this slider to 01:41:725 and make it end 01:42:685. You should also move this slider more closer to the spinner centre since it's the easiest difficulty of the mapset.

• [Normal]

1. 00:15:820 (1) - I don't like this spinner here. It doesn't fit in my opinion, and, the end of of it sounds off. I suggest you to replace this spinner with a note, since there's no sound until 00:18:093.
2. 00:22:411 (2,3,4...) - Hmm this sounds weird. I suggest you to do this. It fits more with the music in my opinion:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:00:366 (1) - This note gets overlapped with spinner-osu too. It's hard to see what actually is. Oh and the reverse arrow isn't visible at all:
   
   SPOILER

   
   I suggest you to move this slider to 01:00:820 and remove the repeat of it. I think that it's better for beginners for hand recovery after spinning and it fits more with the music.
4. 01:02:184 (3) - I suggest you to try this out. I think that it fits more with the music:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:06:048 (2) - ^:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:33:093 (1) - I suggest you to end this spinner at 01:36:275. It sounds better to me :3
7. 01:41:245 (1) - This slider gets overlapped with the spiner-osu too. Check it by yourself on test mode. You should move it a bit down.

• [Hard]

1. 00:15:820 (4) - Maybe add a whistle here? It sounds good in my opinion.
2. 00:35:820 (5) - How about moving this note a bit down so it doesn't appear where slider (2) body was? I think that it would look better.
3. 01:02:184 (2,3...) - This sounds weird. I suggest you to try this. I think that it fits more with the music and sounds better:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:18:093 (5) - Maybe add a whistle at the start of the slider?
5. 01:23:207 (4) - Hmmm I understand that this is the most hardest difficulty of the mapset, and you added some streams intentionally to make everything a bit more difficult, but I think that this would sound better if you delete this note.
6. 01:25:139 (1,2,3...) - I suggest you to try this rhythm. It sounds way better than your current in my opinion:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:29:002 (4,5) - ^:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:30:820 (9,..) - ^:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:32:639 (1,2) - Replace this 2 notes with a slider. It sounds better :3
10. 01:34:570 (1) - This spinner starts way too early after (3). You should move it to 01:34:798.

Aaaand that's all! Call me back later after making your changes for a recheck and I'll see if your map is ready to pass to the next queue layer. ^^

Kei you are pro, teach me your modding skills >w<

Adsf! You're pro too >: I only do what I can >.<

you guys = =

Oh sorry about this but I forgot to mention something in the mod. You have to remove the audio of the video file. It is not necessary. It only increases the .osz file size.

Kei wrote:

Hi! I'm taking care of your request from the Rank-Ready Modding Queue.

• General

1. Nothing to point out. Cute video haha ^u^

• [Easy]

1. 00:26:048 (3) - This note sounds nice there but I think that it may be confusing because it's placed at a red tick. I suggest you to move this slider to 00:25:820, make it end at 00:26:275 and add 1 repeat to it.
2. 00:37:639 (3,4) - Hmmm this should be simplified in my opinion. I think that this would be better and more easier for beginners:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:56:729 (3,4,5) - ^ I also think that this fits more because the combo number goes to 3 instead of 5 doing this (I think that 5~8 combo numbers are high for this kind of difficulties):
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:57:639 (5,1) - This spinner starts very early after clicking (5) in my opinion. I suggest you to replace it with a long slider or something.
5. 01:00:820 (1,2,3) - Can you move this notes a bit down? They get overlapped by the spinner-osu and the hitburst. It's hard to see them:
   
   SPOILER

   L
6. 01:01:275 (2) - I find difficult this combo for an Easy. I suggest you to delete this note to make it more easier.
7. 01:11:729 (4,1) - Same as I told you about 00:57:639 (5,1).
8. 01:16:729 (2,3) - I think you should unstack this notes. I find this difficult for an Easy too.
9. 01:31:275 (2,1) - Again, the same as I told you about spinners. Also, the next note 01:37:219 (1) it's placed very early to the spinner's end. I suggest you to make the spinner end at 01:36:275. It's the most easiest difficulty of the mapset, and beginners need a bit of time before clicking notes again for hand recovery.
10. 01:38:142 (1) - I suggest you to move this spinner to 01:38:372. It starts too early after clicking the slider (1) in my opinion.
11. 01:41:245 (1) - This note is placed very early after the spinner. I highly recommend you to move this slider to 01:41:725 and make it end 01:42:685. You should also move this slider more closer to the spinner centre since it's the easiest difficulty of the mapset.

• [Normal]

1. 00:15:820 (1) - I don't like this spinner here. It doesn't fit in my opinion, and, the end of of it sounds off. I suggest you to replace this spinner with a note, since there's no sound until 00:18:093.
2. 00:22:411 (2,3,4...) - Hmm this sounds weird. I suggest you to do this. It fits more with the music in my opinion:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:00:366 (1) - This note gets overlapped with spinner-osu too. It's hard to see what actually is. Oh and the reverse arrow isn't visible at all:
   
   SPOILER

   
   I suggest you to move this slider to 01:00:820 and remove the repeat of it. I think that it's better for beginners for hand recovery after spinning and it fits more with the music.
4. 01:02:184 (3) - I suggest you to try this out. I think that it fits more with the music:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:06:048 (2) - ^:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:33:093 (1) - I suggest you to end this spinner at 01:36:275. It sounds better to me :3
7. 01:41:245 (1) - This slider gets overlapped with the spiner-osu too. Check it by yourself on test mode. You should move it a bit down.

• [Hard]

1. 00:15:820 (4) - Maybe add a whistle here? It sounds good in my opinion.
2. 00:35:820 (5) - How about moving this note a bit down so it doesn't appear where slider (2) body was? I think that it would look better.
3. 01:02:184 (2,3...) - This sounds weird. I suggest you to try this. I think that it fits more with the music and sounds better:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:18:093 (5) - Maybe add a whistle at the start of the slider?
5. 01:23:207 (4) - Hmmm I understand that this is the most hardest difficulty of the mapset, and you added some streams intentionally to make everything a bit more difficult, but I think that this would sound better if you delete this note.
6. 01:25:139 (1,2,3...) - I suggest you to try this rhythm. It sounds way better than your current in my opinion:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:29:002 (4,5) - ^:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:30:820 (9,..) - ^:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:32:639 (1,2) - Replace this 2 notes with a slider. It sounds better :3
10. 01:34:570 (1) - This spinner starts way too early after (3). You should move it to 01:34:798.

Aaaand that's all! Call me back later after making your changes for a recheck and I'll see if your map is ready to pass to the next queue layer. ^^

Kei wrote:

Oh sorry about this but I forgot to mention something in the mod. You have to remove the audio of the video file. It is not necessary. It only increases the .osz file size.

Fixed all
Can't update now... My net speed is reaaaally slow ;w;

i...was about to mod your map but...
"cant update now"
well...if you really want a mod, forum pm me....?

L_P wrote:

i...was about to mod your map but...
"cant update now"
well...if you really want a mod, forum pm me....?

Ok!,sorry for troubling you...;w;"

hello~ good to see that it has a star icon, then i dont need to kudos you my star is kind of bless... good song, calm map and good luck

HARD
circle size smaller?
00:07:184 (1) - lower the volume more? i like completely silence here (personal feeling, if you like it ..do it, up to you)
00:13:775 (5) - delete that whistle
00:45:139 (8) - move the note away from combo burst of 00:44:002 (6) - ? i see that you made a clean map, why not making this clean as well？
01:02:184 (2) - delete a repeat? could be hard to predict that it is a kick slider..and no repeat does sounds well

01:29:002 (1,2,3) - omg nazi your spacing
01:46:895 (1,2,3,1) - use antijump as the music slows down?
nice song...

normal
00:05:366 (1) - start this at previous red tick?(would be better if follow the vocal) and stack it...still end at same poiint
00:14:002 (3) - gaa kinda nazi, could curve it better
00:35:366 (1) - wanna map a clean one i suggest you to change the direction where it is going...up to you ><
00:47:184 (1) - curve better
01:07:639 (3) - why dont just add a repeat? this could be easier...for normal

easy nothing here
bless you bless you

L_P wrote:

hello~ good to see that it has a star icon, then i dont need to kudos you my star is kind of bless... good song, calm map and good luck

HARD
circle size smaller? its too small ><,but if someone say so,i'll change
00:07:184 (1) - lower the volume more? i like completely silence here (personal feeling, if you like it ..do it, up to you)
00:13:775 (5) - delete that whistle
00:45:139 (8) - move the note away from combo burst of 00:44:002 (6) - ? i see that you made a clean map, why not making this clean as well？
01:02:184 (2) - delete a repeat? could be hard to predict that it is a kick slider..and no repeat does sounds well

01:29:002 (1,2,3) - omg nazi your spacing
01:46:895 (1,2,3,1) - use antijump as the music slows down?
nice song...

normal
00:05:366 (1) - start this at previous red tick?(would be better if follow the vocal) and stack it...still end at same poiint
00:14:002 (3) - gaa kinda nazi, could curve it better
00:35:366 (1) - wanna map a clean one i suggest you to change the direction where it is going...up to you ><
00:47:184 (1) - curve better
01:07:639 (3) - why dont just add a repeat? this could be easier...for normal

easy nothing here
bless you bless you

Thanks for mod and...star O.o

I'm slow at modding, sorry. I also think I've heard this song before, but maybe not!

[General]
- Have you had anyone check the timing for those last few red sections? I'd like to be sure before bubbling.
- It might be nicer to have the map end at the last note of the song instead of having a spinner continue after that, the last note is where the song actually ends so it makes more sense to have the map end there as well. I also believe it's closer to the purple 1/6 tick (01:50:709).
- Along those lines, it would also make more sense to start all difficulties at the same time for consistency.
- Tick Rate 2 on all difficulties would work very well here, it makes the faster sliders feel less empty and the ticks will restore HP.
- Your spacing is slightly inconsistent throughout the map, maybe use Distance Spacing 1.0x and stick to it (not counting jumps) in the future.

[Hard]
00:06:730 (3) - I'm not sure why the slider velocity decreases slightly here, but it causes the start and end to overlap, so perhaps keep it at the same speed as the other sliders to prevent this.
00:20:366 (4,5) - These notes overlap slightly, try to space them apart a bit more to avoid that.
00:26:502 (5,6,1) - Same as above but with (5) and (1).
00:31:730 (1,2) - This is very poorly spaced. I'd take (2) out from under the reverse arrow of (1) and put it somewhere else.
01:05:139 (2,3,4,5) - This is a nice pattern, but maybe change the position of the end of (2) so it doesn't overlap with (5).
01:08:093 (1,2,3) - Anti-jump isn't really necessary here and could be confusing for players, maybe space it more normally.
01:34:798 (1) - Not sure why this spinner starts on the blue tick, I think it would make more sense for it to start on the white tick.
01:37:219 (1) - This note is missing a new combo for some reason, so please manually apply it.
01:43:645 (1,2,3) - More confusing spacing, maybe make it more normal.
01:50:768 (1) - The start of this spinner sounds a bit odd, I think the last note is at the first purple tick after the downbeat, using 1/6 beat snap divisor.

[Normal]
- The slider velocity you used here causes notes 1/2 apart to overlap slightly, in the future it's good to choose slider velocities that avoid that sort of problem, makes the map look nicer. Despite that, the rest of the difficulty seemed fine so no other problems here.

[Easy]
00:43:548 (1,2) - This blanket is a little bit off, see if you can make it perfect and have the notes not overlap.
01:41:725 (1) - Another note missing a new combo, add one manually.

Most of the problems were on [Hard], but I did check the other difficulties, really! Anyhow, forum PM me for a re-check after fixes.

SapphireGhost wrote:

I'm slow at modding, sorry. I also think I've heard this song before, but maybe not!

[General]
- Have you had anyone check the timing for those last few red sections? I'd like to be sure before bubbling.
- It might be nicer to have the map end at the last note of the song instead of having a spinner continue after that, the last note is where the song actually ends so it makes more sense to have the map end there as well. I also believe it's closer to the purple 1/6 tick (01:50:709).
- Along those lines, it would also make more sense to start all difficulties at the same time for consistency.
- Tick Rate 2 on all difficulties would work very well here, it makes the faster sliders feel less empty and the ticks will restore HP.
- Your spacing is slightly inconsistent throughout the map, maybe use Distance Spacing 1.0x and stick to it (not counting jumps) in the future.

[Hard]
00:06:730 (3) - I'm not sure why the slider velocity decreases slightly here, but it causes the start and end to overlap, so perhaps keep it at the same speed as the other sliders to prevent this.
00:20:366 (4,5) - These notes overlap slightly, try to space them apart a bit more to avoid that.
00:26:502 (5,6,1) - Same as above but with (5) and (1).
00:31:730 (1,2) - This is very poorly spaced. I'd take (2) out from under the reverse arrow of (1) and put it somewhere else.
01:05:139 (2,3,4,5) - This is a nice pattern, but maybe change the position of the end of (2) so it doesn't overlap with (5).
01:08:093 (1,2,3) - Anti-jump isn't really necessary here and could be confusing for players, maybe space it more normally.
01:34:798 (1) - Not sure why this spinner starts on the blue tick, I think it would make more sense for it to start on the white tick.
01:37:219 (1) - This note is missing a new combo for some reason, so please manually apply it. What do you mean?
01:43:645 (1,2,3) - More confusing spacing, maybe make it more normal.
01:50:768 (1) - The start of this spinner sounds a bit odd, I think the last note is at the first purple tick after the downbeat, using 1/6 beat snap divisor.

[Normal]
- The slider velocity you used here causes notes 1/2 apart to overlap slightly, in the future it's good to choose slider velocities that avoid that sort of problem, makes the map look nicer. Despite that, the rest of the difficulty seemed fine so no other problems here.

[Easy]
00:43:548 (1,2) - This blanket is a little bit off, see if you can make it perfect and have the notes not overlap.
01:41:725 (1) - Another note missing a new combo, add one manually. What do you mean?

Most of the problems were on [Hard], but I did check the other difficulties, really! Anyhow, forum PM me for a re-check after fixes.

Thanks for mod

Oh oops, my wording was confusing.
01:37:219 (1) - on [Hard] and 01:41:725 (1) - on [Easy], to put it simply: add new combo. Go ahead and PM me again afterwards!

SapphireGhost wrote:

Oh oops, my wording was confusing.This is not your fault D: This is because I suck at english (especially grammar...Orz --)
01:37:219 (1) - on [Hard] and 01:41:725 (1) - on [Easy], to put it simply: add new combo. Go ahead and PM me again afterwards!

Fixed

Good news, I'm finally catching up on re-checks and this is ready to be bubbled now.
I checked with a BAT, the timing is fine and the new combo has been fixed. I don't speak any other languages at all, by the way.
Bubbled!

SapphireGhost wrote:

Good news, I'm finally catching up on re-checks and this is ready to be bubbled now.
I checked with a BAT, the timing is fine and the new combo has been fixed. I don't speak any other languages at all, by the way.Haha...-w- Sorry about that...
Bubbled!

I don't believe it(?)
Btw,thanks SapphireGhost!><

Yay, more tales of maps!

Note: Did not do a timing check.

General:
Video has audio in it, so please remove the audio.
T_T 12mb for a low quality video, please find a higher quality vid that is encoded correctly (it can be done in a reasonable file size, check out my Endless Story map if you don't believe me) (I know I am exaggerating a bit, but you can definitely get a better video)
Not exactly sure what your combos are following, so I didn't mod them

Easy:
Style/Aesthetics:
01:15:366 (1) - (I normally don't nazi these things, but you can see it during gameplay) The slider looks a little weird here not being aligned horizontally with the previous notes, esp since they were in a straight vertical line
01:43:165 (2,1) - overlaps do not look that great, so please rearrange these notes so they don't overlap.

Normal:
Style/Aesthetics:
01:19:911 (1) - place under the repeat of 01:18:093 (4) to remove the partial overlap
01:22:184 (4,5) - curve 4 slightly more so 5 can be put at the start of 3 because the partial overlap between 5 and the start of 3 looks bad

Hard:
Style/Aesthetics:
00:13:320 (7) - these sliders look better when 6 ends driectly on the track of 7 like so:
00:19:002 (1,2) - ^
00:41:275 (4,5) - another overlap
00:54:002 (2,3) - same as 00:19:002 (1,2)
01:13:320 (2,4) - ^ (okay I'll just stop now and let you decide what you want to change)
01:42:445 (5,1) - I was really surprised at how fast these sliders are. Not only is the msuic slower here, the distance snapping is smaller, but these 2 sliders are faster than the slider right before the 2 spinners

======================
Not a bad map overall, but it could just some improvements here and there. sadly I have to pop the bubble over the audio in the video. As for everything else, I'll leave up to you. Also, since I am not sure, I'll be able to remod, anyone is free to rebubble this map.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Yay, more tales of maps!

Note: Did not do a timing check.

General:
Video has audio in it, so please remove the audio.
T_T 12mb for a low quality video, please find a higher quality vid that is encoded correctly (it can be done in a reasonable file size, check out my Endless Story map if you don't believe me) (I know I am exaggerating a bit, but you can definitely get a better video) Removed video ;w;,I don't have time to search the vid
Not exactly sure what your combos are following, so I didn't mod them

Easy:
Style/Aesthetics:
01:15:366 (1) - (I normally don't nazi these things, but you can see it during gameplay) The slider looks a little weird here not being aligned horizontally with the previous notes, esp since they were in a straight vertical line
01:43:165 (2,1) - overlaps do not look that great, so please rearrange these notes so they don't overlap.

Normal:
Style/Aesthetics:
01:19:911 (1) - place under the repeat of 01:18:093 (4) to remove the partial overlap
01:22:184 (4,5) - curve 4 slightly more so 5 can be put at the start of 3 because the partial overlap between 5 and the start of 3 looks bad

Hard:
Style/Aesthetics:
00:13:320 (7) - these sliders look better when 6 ends driectly on the track of 7 like so:

SPOILER

00:19:002 (1,2) - ^
00:41:275 (4,5) - another overlap
00:54:002 (2,3) - same as 00:19:002 (1,2)
01:13:320 (2,4) - ^ (okay I'll just stop now and let you decide what you want to change)
01:42:445 (5,1) - I was really surprised at how fast these sliders are. Not only is the msuic slower here, the distance snapping is smaller, but these 2 sliders are faster than the slider right before the 2 spinners

======================
Not a bad map overall, but it could just some improvements here and there. sadly I have to pop the bubble over the audio in the video. As for everything else, I'll leave up to you. Also, since I am not sure, I'll be able to remod, anyone is free to rebubble this map.

Fixed some
Thanks for mod~

Mod for M4M

[genernal]
00:29:002 may be 30% volume is good
I think if add the lyric,this map is very nice

[Easy]
01:32:639(3)- too far from the spinner

[Normal]
00:41:730(4)- too far from the spinner

[Hard]
01:26:957(8)- new combo here?
01:27:184(1)- remove the newcombo?
Nice!


Very good map of all,Ranked it,Good luck!

AstroniX wrote:

Mod for M4M

[genernal]
00:29:002 may be 30% volume is good
I think if add the lyric,this map is very nice I don't know how to make storyboard ;w;

[Easy]
01:32:639(3)- too far from the spinner

[Normal]
00:41:730(4)- too far from the spinner

[Hard]
01:26:957(8)- new combo here?
01:27:184(1)- remove the newcombo?
Nice!


Very good map of all,Ranked it,Good luck!

Thanks mod~

if you need,I can help you to design~~

AstroniX wrote:

if you need,I can help you to design~~

Yeah,I need it :3

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