1. Easy (1,17 stars, 80 notes)
2. Hard (4,46 stars, 169 notes)
3. Normal (2,11 stars, 100 notes)

terametis wrote:

Hi~~
These are all suggestions.

[General]

Official Ranking Submission Rules and Guidelines
Difficulties of a mapset must be in a consecutive order. Making three hard/insane difficulties and throwing an easy or normal in is unacceptable and won't get your map ranked. Therefore, difficulties must be in a consecutive order such as Easy-Normal-Hard or Normal-Hard-Insane. A gap in difficulties (e.g. Easy-Normal-Insane) will not be allowed.

You should make normal diff~ Then move to WIP :3


[Eazy]

01:20:336 (1)~(2)　　 1grid left

[Hard]

00:14:880 (5)　　　　　　Make it prettier.

SPOILER

00:21:698 (5)　　　　　　IMO,ugly slider. How about this?

SPOILER

00:23:971 (5)　　　　　　Make it prettier.

SPOILER

00:32:149 (1)　　　　　　move 2nd point (x184,y144)
00:48:971 (8)　　　　　　I think,one reverse is better.

SPOILER

01:02:153 (x)　　　　　　How about this?

SPOILER

01:16:224 (3)　　　　　　Remove whistle on the slider's rail.
01:22:380 (6)　　　　　　How about this?

SPOILER

01:24:426 (x)　　　　　　Add a note or Slider's end move to 01:24:426.
01:25:335 (x)　　　　　　How about this?

SPOILER

SPOILER

Good map! star~~
I wish your map is Ranked
Bye~

LaceWingfield wrote:

Mod incoming
[Easy]
00:24:427 (4): add whistle
00:25:336 (1): remove whistle?
00:34:427 (3): add finish~
00:48:372 (3): remove whistle add finish~
00:52:381 (4): add whistle
01:06:927 (4): add finish/whistle here.
01:21:699 (3): add whistle

it's nice.. but wow, whistles.

[Normal]
00:07:153 (2): add whistle
00:15:789 (3): add finish
00:23:517 (3): add whistle
00:24:653 (2): move note to 00:24:426 then add a note here.
00:34:198 (5): add whistle
00:43:062 (3): ^
00:46:698 (2): 2 grid left
00:50:335 (2): like this?

SPOILER

[attachment=0:af674]screenshot056.jpg[/attachment:af674]

00:56:244 (6): add whistle
01:03:971 (5): ^
01:06:244 (4): 3 grid down
01:10:789 (2): add whistle
01:16:244 (1): ^
01:18:971 (4): ^
01:21:698 (4): add finish
01:28:062 (3): add whistle
01:38:142 : add finish in this spinner

Overall, it's nice xD

[Hard]
00:33:517 (4): add whistle
00:46:698 (1): remove whistle
01:07:153 (5): remove whistle and add finish
01:50:626 (spin): add finish~

wow great

nice map >< star
i want to make a guest diff but i suck xD

Star Stream wrote:

offset -> 2588

easy
01:37:268 (1) - > 01:37:154

normal
01:21:698 (4) - distance
01:30:562 (1) - little far from 01:29:426 (6)
01:43:629 (4) - new combo ?

hard
00:14:653 - delete ? If some moder say so, I'll change it
00:22:835 - ^ ^
00:27:153 (7) - new combo
00:43:744 (6) - ^
00:55:789 (5) - ^
01:17:607 (5) - ^
01:30:108 - add a circle If some moder say so, I'll change it
01:30:221 -> 01:30:335 ^

LaceWingfield wrote:

oh yeah i forget ==~
[Easy]
00:04:860 (2): 1 grid right and down
00:23:497 (3): 1 grid up~
00:33:042 (2): ^
00:50:769 (3,4): 1 grid down
00:53:497 (1): 1 grid up
00:54:860 (2): 1 grid left
01:06:678 (4): ^
01:21:678 (3): ^


[Normal]
00:33:497 (4): 1 grid left
01:04:406 (1): 2 grid up~
01:04:860 (2): 1 grid up
01:17:588 (3): 1 grid left

[Hard]
00:10:769 (3): 1 grid left
00:43:951 (2,3): 1 grid up
00:45:088 (4,5): ^
00:46:224 (6): ^
01:20:315 (2): ^

yup, all grid problem solved~

athiota33 wrote:

Fixed!x3
anda teliti sekali OwO~

LaceWingfield wrote:

athiota33 wrote:

Fixed!x3
anda teliti sekali OwO~

biasa aja o.o

1. Your mp3 file is en-coded in 256kbps , which is unrankable. Use something 192 (recommended) or 128 kbps. If you need a 192 one, feel free to ask me for that.

1. 00:22:360 (1) - This is really hard for new players to react correctly. Just use more sliders
2. 00:24:406 (4,1) - Change new combo
3. 00:33:497 (3) - Remove finish from this. It is loud imo.
4. 00:43:042 (3,4) - Relace a 1/2 length sldier with them
5. 01:01:678 (3) - finish on head ?
6. 01:28:951 (1,2,3) - Change new combo between (1,2) and (3)

1. Fine, but the fact that you followed too much vocal made it strange to play. The same to the Easy diff. I'd advise not following vocal all the time in order the have a good consistence through the whole diff.

1. Since it is a Hard , reduce HP drain rate by 1 please.
2. 01:30:201 (9) - Delete it
3. 01:41:739 (5,6,7) - Spacing , at least the same as 01:43:629 (3,4,5) imo

S h i o n wrote:

:) Hi. (From my queue)

General

1. Your mp3 file is en-coded in 256kbps , which is unrankable. Use something 192 (recommended) or 128 kbps. If you need a 192 one, feel free to ask me for that. Ok

Easy Fixed

1. 00:22:360 (1) - This is really hard for new players to react correctly. Just use more sliders
2. 00:24:406 (4,1) - Change new combo
3. 00:33:497 (3) - Remove finish from this. It is loud imo.
4. 00:43:042 (3,4) - Relace a 1/2 length sldier with them
5. 01:01:678 (3) - finish on head ?
6. 01:28:951 (1,2,3) - Change new combo between (1,2) and (3)

Normal Ok,I'll try to not following the vocal

1. Fine, but the fact that you followed too much vocal made it strange to play. The same to the Easy diff. I'd advise not following vocal all the time in order the have a good consistence through the whole diff.

Hard Fixed

1. Since it is a Hard , reduce HP drain rate by 1 please.
2. 01:30:201 (9) - Delete it
3. 01:41:739 (5,6,7) - Spacing , at least the same as 01:43:629 (3,4,5) imo

Good luck ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ athiota33 ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

[General]

You Mp3 file is 256kbps, this is unrankable, change 192 or 128 plz.

BG quality is not very good, try to find a better.

00:07:360 - add break time.


[Hard]

00:32:588 (2) - Remove whistle and add finish.
00:47:133 (2) - add finish.
01:01:224 (8) - end point Remove whistle and add finish.
01:16:224 (3) - start point add finish.
01:27:815 (4) - not perfect overlap.


[Normal]

AR+1,OD-1
00:06:224 (1) - Remove NC.
00:13:724 (4) - move to here 00:13:497.
00:29:860 (1) - Remove NC.
00:32:588 (3) - start point Remove whistle and add finish.
00:47:133 (1) - start point add finish.
01:01:678 (1) - Remove whistle and add finish.
01:11:224 (3) - add a reentry.
01:16:224 (1) - Remove whistle and add finish.
01:50:768 (1) - Remove finish.


[Easy]

00:31:678 (1) - end point Remove whistle and add finish.
00:47:133 (3) - start point Remove whistle and add finish.
01:11:451 (3) - move to here 01:11:678.
01:15:315 (1) - end point add finish.


that's all.

good luck ~

S h i o n wrote:

192 mp3 file : puu.sh/8RRU

Don't forget to change offset / resnap all notes / timing sections / ...

No kd

ikari_kyon wrote:

1st time line
offset: 2640

the others timelines looks good

tutuhaha wrote:

PreviewTime: 31730

Easy

HP-1
00:23:549 (2) - add whistle
00:35:367 (1) - space
00:43:549 (X) - add whistle
00:43:662 (1) - spinner begain to there
00:46:730 (2) - add whistle
00:49:912 (1) - add whistle
00:54:912 (2) - need revise
00:57:185 (4) - add whistle
00:58:094 (1) - spinner begain to there and add circle on the 00:57:640
01:00:821 (1) - add whistle
01:09:003 (X) - add whistle
01:12:185 (x) - add circle on there and spinner begain to 01:12:640
01:22:639 (1) - space
01:24:912 (X) - remove this whistle
01:25:367 (4) - add whistle
01:30:821 (1) - ^
01:37:219 (1) - this slider end on 01:37:680 and spinner begain to 01:38:142

Normal

HP-1
00:07:185 (X) - I think you don't need this green line because it is too soft......
00:19:003 (1) - space
00:23:776 (1) - Try to use this →
00:31:730 (1,2) - too soft
00:33:549 (4,1) - add whistle
00:43:662 (1) - spinner begain to there
00:45:821 (1) - try to use this

Hard

OD-1
00:13:776 (1) - you don't need this green line, 40% is good
00:18:094 (1) - ...too soft
00:37:639 (6) - NC
00:39:003 (1) - add whistle
00:46:276 (6) - NC begain to there
00:57:639 (1) - add whistle
01:02:640 (X) - ^
01:04:458 (1) - ^

GOOD LUCKY~~~~~Nice song XD

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

offset 3549

easy
00:39:003 (1) - whistle at the beginning
01:08:094 (1) - whistle or finish at the end
01:19:003 (1) - finish instead of whistle at the end
if you don't want to go on making the other parts.delete some useless timing setions

normal
00:39:003 (1) - finish instead of whistle at the end
00:54:458 (3) - finish instead of whistle at the beginning
01:05:367 (3) - ^

hard
00:11:730 (4) - NC
00:35:367 (1) - finish instead of whistle
00:45:367 (5) - finish instead of whistle at the beginning
00:46:276 (6) - finish instead of whistle
01:04:458 (1) - finish instead of whistle at the beginning

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request

Easy:
00:07:525 - i suggest that u remove the break since its not going to kill anyone
00:12:639(1) - make this slider symmetrical
00:38:093(3) - make this slider a lot nicer
00:57:539(5) - 1 grid down

Normal:
00:07:525 - same as the 1st suggestion on easy
00:36:275(2) - make this slider a lot nicer

Hard:
00:32:639(2) - stack it properly
01:32:320(2) - oh dear i dont like this loop. make it better.
01:38:142(3) - rotate it about 5 degrees CW

this is the best i can do. GL

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Mod Request as Modding Queue

Easy:
Maybe you have to map all song
00:06:730 (4,5): Try to don't Stack in Easy
00:14:002 (2,3): ^
00:25:366 (2): Move (2) to x=272 y=204

SPOILER

01:29:002 (1): I think New Combo is unnecesary. Remove it please

Normal:
00:24:684 (3): Spacing. Don't forget to move the next notes

Hard:
00:06:502 (4,5): Spacing
00:07:184 (5): Hitfinish at the end
00:15:820 (6,7): Looks better if you don't stack, because previously you stack (5) with (6)
00:20:366 (x): Add a Note
00:20:593 (x): ^
01:41:739 (5): New Combo
01:56:175 (Spin): Remove hitfinish

Nice map, Good Luck with your map

• 00:06:730 (5) - Whistle on slider's end? It fits the high-pitched piano here
  00:24:002 (5) - Curve it smoother like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:27:184 (1) - Same thing goes to this slider, don't be afraid to use more waypoints to create a smoother slider:
  
  SPOILER

  
  

  256,192,27184,6,0,B|323:207|351:277|341:349|245:391|174:367|152:280,1,340,2|2

  00:34:230 (6) - Long slider doesn't build a good rhythm imo, perhaps change into a 1/1 slider (with whistle on end) followed by a circle 1/2 after?
  00:36:275 (3) - Hitsound finish here?
  00:38:320 (3) - Whistle here, for rhythm's consistency
  00:49:002 (9) - Whistle on repeat
  00:59:911 (1,2,3,4) - The stack here makes (6) is quite covered by default hitburst. Not a big problem though
  01:06:048 (3) - Whistle on slider start
  01:12:070 (1) - Starting a spinner on a blue line feels strange... idk, I'd rather start this spinner 1/4 later or earlier
  01:20:366 (2) - This anti-jump is hard to guess, I suggest to stack this note atop of (3)
  01:21:729 (5) - Whistle on slider's end
  01:44:574 (6,7,1) - I suggest "manual stacking" these three, like this (it will play better and more intuitive imo):
  
  SPOILER

  

• 00:23:775 (1,2) - Unstack? Looks weird in play mode
  00:24:002 (2,3) - An antijump on these two? Well... I don't think it's a good idea, just follow the spacing or try to add a note at 00:24:684
  00:34:002 (5) - Remove whistle on slider's start
  00:35:366 (1) - Add whistle on slider's start
  00:45:820 (1) - imo, the recovery time after the spinner is quite too fast for a Normal. Also, whistle on slider's end
  01:06:275 (4,5) - Put the whistle on (4) for rhythm consistency
  01:12:184 (4,1,2) - Elbow sliders doesn't flow well here imo, perhaps try something like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:28:548 (3) - Inconsistent spacing here

• 00:06:730 (4) - Few grids down (so (3,4,5) will form an arc) definitely will flow and play better :3
  00:12:639 (1) - Add whistle at slider's start to accompany the high-pitched piano voice
  00:15:820 (4) - Sudden volume decrease (from 50% to 5%) is quite disorienting, make it more audible, maybe ~25%
  00:35:366 (1) - The whistle should be on slider's start. In the reverse, however, you could try using finish instead of whistle.
  00:40:366 (2) - Add a repeat?
  00:41:275 (1,2,3) - Perhaps create a windmill pattern with three sliders here? Just rotate each other by 120° and press CTRL+R on the second slider:
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:47:184 (3) - Whistle on the repeat, for hitsound consistency
  00:54:911 (2,3) - Spacing. Not really hard to catch though
  01:01:729 (3) - Whistle on slider's end, and delete the whistle on (5)
  01:15:366 (1) - I personally dislike how this slider's path got covered by comboburst, perhaps move it few grids up and curve it?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:29:457 (4) - Move few grids left, so (3,4,5) will form an arc. It will flow better imo
  01:43:157 (2) - One grid lv4 right for symmetry?
  01:46:373 (2,1) - Spacing. It's quite dense compared to 01:45:046 (3,1) for example. Not hard to catch though

eikkaleyd wrote:

:) From Anshi and eikka's Modding queue

Oh, very nice song.><
I used to love it very much when I was in primary school.

[general]
try to add audio what do you mean?o.o

[Easy]
00.43.093 (3)it's too far from the spinner, you can put

it above (2) Ok

[Normal]
00.19.911 (2)put it on 00.19.684, and longer No,sorry
00.25.139 (3,4)change into a slider Ok

[Hard]
00.07.184-00.09.911 insert break timeOk
00.15.820-00.18.093 the same ^

01.00.139 (2,3)it's not suitable to add stream here for it's very quiet. Please delete (2,3)
If you want to add stream, you can add a circle at 01.03.207 as an example No,sorry

Good luck~