KSHMR & Marnik - Bazaar

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Topic Starter
Reynolduh
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, November 29, 2017 at 8:28:58 PM

Artist: KSHMR & Marnik
Title: Bazaar
Tags: electro house cut short edit sunburn goa 2015 official anthem fruityenloops
BPM: 82
Filesize: 3936kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.47 stars, 69 notes)
  2. Fruity's Shopping Time (4.17 stars, 313 notes)
  3. Hard (2.86 stars, 171 notes)
  4. Insane (3.75 stars, 269 notes)
  5. Normal (1.84 stars, 120 notes)


Download: KSHMR & Marnik - Bazaar
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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HI there this song i actually did not lose motivation on lmao
so yeah i don't think i'll give up on this anytime soon
for rank LEGIT this time ecks dee

Easy-100% Hitsounds-100%
Normal-100% Hitsounds-100%
Hard-100% Hitsounds-100%
Insane-100% Hitsounds-100%
Fruity's Shopping Time-100% Hitsounds-100%

pls i want this rank
Alfarai
Insane


00:07:230 (1) - make this curve more smooth looking, there's a bit of too much curviness here

00:13:950 (1) - same

00:14:769 (3) - blanket properly under 00:15:041 (4). Use the approach circles

00:16:132 (1) - 00:13:950 (1)

00:31:127 (7) - fill up this empty space

00:33:353 (6) - nc

00:39:564 (2) - looks weird cuz of too much curve

00:47:533 (4) - increase spacing

00:49:408 (6) - ^

00:50:814 (3) - ^

00:52:923 (4) - ^

00:54:096 (6) - you should map this break. Song doesnt represent a rest here, instead, its a tension-building section

01:10:971 (7) - nc

01:13:314 (2) - ctrl+g for flow

01:16:127 (1) - increase spacing

01:18:471 (7) - nc

01:19:877 (1) - remove nc

01:25:971 (7) - nc

01:27:377 (1) - remove nc

01:33:471 (6) - nc

01:34:877 (1) - remove nc


Fruity's Insane


00:38:627 (9) - nc

00:56:674 (5) - align 5 by putting it at x 156 y 88 to make it neater

00:57:377 (7,8) - move this a bit to the right since its kinda too close to slider

01:02:533 (4) - do something like this since the current flow seems weird

01:12:377 (7) - increase spacing cuz strong beat

01:18:002 (7) - small overlap on (6), move it a bit to make it neater

01:18:471 (1) - overlap too

01:21:986 (8) - overlap aswell

01:34:877 (8) - you mapped this differently than 01:12:377 (7,8) - and 01:27:377 (8,9) - etc

01:19:642 (7,8,9,10) - same^

gl :D
Topic Starter
Reynolduh

Alfarai wrote:

Insane


00:07:230 (1) - make this curve more smooth looking, there's a bit of too much curviness here ok

00:13:950 (1) - same ok

00:14:769 (3) - blanket properly under 00:15:041 (4). Use the approach circles im not a blanket person

00:16:132 (1) - 00:13:950 (1)

00:31:127 (7) - fill up this empty space but no sound there?

00:33:353 (6) - ncoik

00:39:564 (2) - looks weird cuz of too much curve ok
00:47:533 (4) - increase spacing ok

00:49:408 (6) - ^

00:50:814 (3) - ^

00:52:923 (4) - ^

00:54:096 (6) - you should map this break. Song doesnt represent a rest here, instead, its a tension-building section ok

01:10:971 (7) - nc ok

01:13:314 (2) - ctrl+g for flowno

01:16:127 (1) - increase spacing

01:18:471 (7) - nc

01:19:877 (1) - remove nc

01:25:971 (7) - nc

01:27:377 (1) - remove nc

01:33:471 (6) - nc

01:34:877 (1) - remove nc fix all aboive


Fruity's Insane


00:38:627 (9) - nc

00:56:674 (5) - align 5 by putting it at x 156 y 88 to make it neater

00:57:377 (7,8) - move this a bit to the right since its kinda too close to slider

01:02:533 (4) - do something like this since the current flow seems weird

01:12:377 (7) - increase spacing cuz strong beat

01:18:002 (7) - small overlap on (6), move it a bit to make it neater

01:18:471 (1) - overlap too

01:21:986 (8) - overlap aswell

01:34:877 (8) - you mapped this differently than 01:12:377 (7,8) - and 01:27:377 (8,9) - etc

01:19:642 (7,8,9,10) - same^

gl :D
FruityEnLoops

Alfarai wrote:

Fruity's Insane


00:38:627 (9) - nc

00:56:674 (5) - align 5 by putting it at x 156 y 88 to make it neater

00:57:377 (7,8) - move this a bit to the right since its kinda too close to slider

01:02:533 (4) - do something like this since the current flow seems weird

01:12:377 (7) - increase spacing cuz strong beat

01:18:002 (7) - small overlap on (6), move it a bit to make it neater

01:18:471 (1) - overlap too

01:21:986 (8) - overlap aswell

01:34:877 (8) - you mapped this differently than 01:12:377 (7,8) - and 01:27:377 (8,9) - etc

01:19:642 (7,8,9,10) - same^

gl :D
yes to all

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67221
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.699999

[Metadata]
Title:Bazaar
TitleUnicode:Bazaar
Artist:KSHMR & Marnik
ArtistUnicode:KSHMR & Marnik
Creator:Reynolduh
Version:Fruity's Insane
Source:
Tags:electro house cut short edit sunburn goa 2015 official anthem
BeatmapID:1474492
BeatmapSetID:690204

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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polka


[General:]
  1. This bg does't fit the mood or feel of the song at all haha. I get it's a bazaar but idk I'm not liking it. Plus the use of an anime bg when this song has nothing to do with one is kind of boring. If you need suggestions I have a few.
    http://architectureimg.com/chinese-stre ... allpapers/
    https://avante.biz/wp-content/uploads/F ... ws-039.jpg
    https://www.artsfon.com/pic/201505/1366 ... -69020.jpg
  2. 00:24:096 - No use for the break here. Please just map this. There's tons of good sounds you can use. Or if you want to keep this one, remove 00:54:096 - . You're just skipping too much and honestly it's a bit lazy.


[Easy:]
  1. 00:11:198 (2,1) - Beginners can't read this. Make this a circle.
  2. 00:16:132 (1) - Slider is kind of unsightly. Want to at least balance the sides out like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9586173 ?
    1. 01:12:846 (1) - Again with maybe evening out the sides like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9586193 ?
  3. 01:19:877 (6) - Missing a clap.
  4. 01:23:627 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Don't copy and paste. It's literally a minute long song.

    Looks really lazily done. Please tidy this one up.

[Normal:]
  1. 00:03:443 (2) - Lands on a sound that would be much better to have an object started on.
    1. 01:11:674 (4) - ^
  2. 00:03:443 (2,3) - Your target audience can't read stacks. Please move this out from under (2).
    1. 00:08:103 (2,3) - ^
      I'm going to stop pointing it out. But please change all of these. Normal players will have no idea what theyre doing.
  3. 01:12:377 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Normal players can't read giant chains like this. Please break some of this up.
    1. 01:27:377 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^
  4. 01:20:346 - Put a beat here and start your spinner later because spinners act like slider ends in a sense that you can't click them, leading to whatever sound they're on not being emphasized.
    1. 01:35:346 (1) - ^
  5. 01:34:877 (1) - Clap?

[Hard:]
  1. 00:02:570 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe blanket these? It'll look nicer.
    1. 00:11:769 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
  2. 01:18:002 (1) - Please replace with two circles. This slider covers up important beats.
    1. 01:25:502 (1) - ^
    2. 01:33:002 (1) - ^
  3. 01:20:346 - Put a note here and scoot the spinner over for reasons mentioned above.

[Insane:]
  1. 01:21:283 (5,6,7,8) - This last chunk doesn't go to anything. Can you reconfigure your rhythm to fix the music?
    1. 01:36:283 (5,6,7,8) - ^
  2. 01:28:783 (3,4,5,6) - Space these out further like you did with the previous pattern to keep consistent.


Concepts are there but I think your use of slider shape and ideas of flow could use some work. That all comes with practice though! Good luck!

Here's my map for the m4m btw: t/650452/start=15
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