Barney Stinson wrote:

First mod of this map!
General:
-Keep SliderTicks on 1. With new rules 0,5 are unrankable, 'cause player don't understand the velocity of a slider. (I mean, when there are slowdown and so on) - Done.

-SNAP GREEN POINTS. If u dunno how to do it ask in game - They're snapped. I just put them mostly 1/8 before what I wanted to change with hitsounds to avoid the unwanted sounds changes while fixing the offset.

Easy:
-Well, for newbies slowdowns are hard to read. So try to make same velocities in whole map. You are a pro mapper, you will surely find a way to do it. - These 'slowdowns' are not confusing because there are only 2 velocity changes in the entire map, and they're reasonable. Not gonna change anything about this.

-7.011: Add finish - Nope.
-8.570: ^ - Nope.
-9.379: Spacing here. - It's like 2 grid of spacing disobeyed but the symmetry is enough to guess what comes next.
-11.687: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/178844 Is VERY ugly to see and read. Try to do something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/178845 After that fix spacing 'till 19.479 - Fixed but another way.
Couldn't find so many errors. The problem is about generals

Normal:
AAAAAAAAAAAAW man. HPDR 3 cirlces bigger, AR 3 and OD 3 -What? o_o I'm meant to raise it or what because I don't really understand this sentence. If so, I won't do it anyways. It's a NORMAL, these are standard values for a normal difficulty.

6.622. Spacing? - A jump.
35.063. (1.2.3.4) NO, this is awful and unreadable. Make something else. Fixed.
47.531 ^ Same here - Not confusing in any way.
1.05.063. Eh, 1/4 beats in a normal aren't good. do something like: http://puu.sh/8osa - Let's kill all the creativity and leave just 1/2 plain difficulty. It fits so I keep it.
1.06.622 Same here - ^
1.09.349. Aaaaaaw again. If u use slowdowns spacings is closer. Apply this slider as never used slowdown (that I advers u not to use in normal.easy diffs) put it at x390 y375 (for move that slider there u have to remove grid snap) - You can't miss this slider EVEN with hr+dt put on, unless you move your cursor in the against side of the screen.
1.34.576 Yeah, no 1/4 beats. - Enough said above.
Yeah, it's too hard. Really. - SS'd it with HR+Hid+DT in the FIRST play right after the mapping. Still means something.

Hyper: Nothing bad on generals

55.323. Put slider under (8) - Why?!
Nothing more. I think It's too confusing anyway. - ^

Another: Can't find something specific wrong. The problem are the stream's ahesthetyc. I think theyre a bit ugly, but I'm talking about my tastes.

I don't really like this map. But with more work/help it could be really great! Hope my mod was useful. If u didn't understend something feel free to catch me in game. If u don't fix something just tell me why. I think my work is finished here. Wait for your mod!
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0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

my result

SPOILER

star~ xD

giuyl-nyah wrote:

one of my fav songs by dj TAKA (because he is dj TAKA? ouo) anyway this map is really awesome.

1. Song folder - remove osb.file
2. Preview Point - It is not unified. ( Normal diff:83375 , Other diff:778 ) Please unify it in all diff. ><
3. KIAI TIME - Different Hyper and Another diff. plz change 01:51:476⇒01:51:427
4. Inherited Points - Why are you using separate S:C1 and S:C2 and N;C2 ? http://puu.sh/aCvZ The folder also does not have the custom Soft-hitsound 1&2 and Normal-hitsound 2 . I think that you use only N and S and N:C1. ( or Forgotten full submission? )

• You are a pro mapper. but why the DS is not a constant? I of the new mapper do not understand it

1. 01:22:596 (1,1) - slider comes after a kick slider is difficult for a beginner. ><
2. 01:49:868 (1) - spinner start 01:49:674

1. 01:34:576 (2,3) - 1/4 timing stack is difficult for a beginner.
2. 01:49:089 (2) - remove one repeat. and 01:49:868 (1) - tick move to 01:49:674 and 01:50:063 (1) - tick move to 01:49:868~01:51:427.

• good map :3

1. 00:08:959 (1) - remove NC
2. 00:12:076 (1) - ^
3. 00:16:557 (2) - add NC
4. 00:17:336 (2) - ^
5. 00:31:946 (1,1,1,1,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aCHJ
6. 00:36:427 (2) - I prefer grid x128,y64 and 00:36:622 (1) - x240,y64
7. 01:13:245 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aCIE

kosiga wrote:

hi~ fartownik

from my queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song folder - remove osb.file
2. Preview Point - It is not unified. ( Normal diff:83375 , Other diff:778 ) Please unify it in all diff. ><
3. KIAI TIME - Different Hyper and Another diff. plz change 01:51:476⇒01:51:427
4. Inherited Points - Why are you using separate S:C1 and S:C2 and N;C2 ? http://puu.sh/aCvZ The folder also does not have the custom Soft-hitsound 1&2 and Normal-hitsound 2 . I think that you use only N and S and N:C1. ( or Forgotten full submission? )

[Beginner]

• You are a pro mapper. but why the DS is not a constant? I of the new mapper do not understand it

1. 01:22:596 (1,1) - slider comes after a kick slider is difficult for a beginner. ><
2. 01:49:868 (1) - spinner start 01:49:674

[Normal]
Same as Beginner diff

1. 01:34:576 (2,3) - 1/4 timing stack is difficult for a beginner.
2. 01:49:089 (2) - remove one repeat. and 01:49:868 (1) - tick move to 01:49:674 and 01:50:063 (1) - tick move to 01:49:868~01:51:427.

[Hyper]

• good map :3

[Another]

1. 00:08:959 (1) - remove NC
2. 00:12:076 (1) - ^
3. 00:16:557 (2) - add NC
4. 00:17:336 (2) - ^
5. 00:31:946 (1,1,1,1,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aCHJ
6. 00:36:427 (2) - I prefer grid x128,y64 and 00:36:622 (1) - x240,y64
7. 01:13:245 (1,2) - Suggestion of the rhythm http://puu.sh/aCIE

That' all~

very hard map but mapset is good . Star☆

Good luck ~

1. The kiai time end on Another & Hyper are different with Beginner and Normal

1. 01:45:193 (1,2,1,2,1,1) - The overlaps don't look very good, maybe arrange them into something like this then this
2. 01:49:868 (1) - Add finish on this spinner, there is one the music and beside you've used finish on this particular place on Hyper & Another

1. The name "Normal" doesn't fit with this difficulty, of the 1/2 short slider and how the object are covered by the hitburst making them hard to see. Probably rename this to Advance or any other custom name
2. 00:20:599 & 00:20:989 - remove these 2 timing section, they are unnecessary
3. 00:29:609 (2,3,4) - First time playing this rhythm is very unexpected, probably because how 2 ended on 1/4 (there's another 3/4 slider like this but it has 1 repeat thus it's easier to follow) I suggest to change 3 & 4 into a slider, this will at least give some room if player is surprised from the 2
4. 00:57:076 (1) - Add finish
5. 01:05:063 (2,1) - These 2 sliders don't fit & awkward. There's no beat or anything on the 1/4 where those sliders end, thus they don't sound good. I suggest to use a 1/2 slider or 2 circles on 1/1 & 1/2 beat
6. 01:12:466 (1) - Remove NC
7. 01:34:576 (2) - Another 1/4 beat object that doesn't fit with the music. For this one I suggest to use a different rhythm, something like this
8. 01:44:414 (3) - The repeat is covered by the previous object's hitburst and this is unrankable. Try arranging them diagonally, kinda like this
9. 01:50:063 (1) - same as spinner on the Beginner diff

1. 01:07:596 (6) - This is kinda tricky and surprising and considering the difficulty of the map (this is equal to Hard right?) I suggest to change this into circles
2. 01:46:752 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I want MOAR <3

1. 00:30:485 (1) ~ 00:31:946 (1) - The spacing on the streams on this part is very big, it's playable but imo the flow is not very good. I suggest to use 1x DS (distance snap) for them
2. 00:56:881 (1) - Finish?
3. 01:15:972 - I'm sure that this normal sample set is not intentional, the normal slider slide sounds weird
4. 01:13:732 (2,3) - Hmm quite hard too read this, maybe change these into a slider?

Sallad4ever wrote:

sorry for the late reply

[General]

1. The kiai time end on Another & Hyper are different with Beginner and Normal - Fixed

[Beginner]

1. 01:45:193 (1,2,1,2,1,1) - The overlaps don't look very good, maybe arrange them into something like - Fixedthis then this
2. 01:49:868 (1) - Add finish on this spinner, there is one the music and beside you've used finish on this particular place on Hyper & Another - Fixed

[Normal]

1. The name "Normal" doesn't fit with this difficulty, of the 1/2 short slider and how the object are covered by the hitburst making them hard to see. Probably rename this to Advance or any other custom name
2. 00:20:599 & 00:20:989 - remove these 2 timing section, they are unnecessary - Fixed
3. 00:29:609 (2,3,4) - First time playing this rhythm is very unexpected, probably because how 2 ended on 1/4 (there's another 3/4 slider like this but it has 1 repeat thus it's easier to follow) I suggest to change 3 & 4 into a slider, this will at least give some room if player is surprised from the 2 - Fixed
4. 00:57:076 (1) - Add finish - Fixed
5. 01:05:063 (2,1) - These 2 sliders don't fit & awkward. There's no beat or anything on the 1/4 where those sliders end, thus they don't sound good. I suggest to use a 1/2 slider or 2 circles on 1/1 & 1/2 beat - I like them as they currently are.
6. 01:12:466 (1) - Remove NC - Fixed
7. 01:34:576 (2) - Another 1/4 beat object that doesn't fit with the music. For this one I suggest to use a different rhythm, something like this - Fixed
8. 01:44:414 (3) - The repeat is covered by the previous object's hitburst and this is unrankable. Try arranging them diagonally, kinda like this - Fixed
9. 01:50:063 (1) - same as spinner on the Beginner diff - Fixed

[Hyper]

1. 01:07:596 (6) - This is kinda tricky and surprising and considering the difficulty of the map (this is equal to Hard right?) I suggest to change this into circles - Fixed
2. 01:46:752 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I want MOAR <3 - YES

[Another]

1. 00:30:485 (1) ~ 00:31:946 (1) - The spacing on the streams on this part is very big, it's playable but imo the flow is not very good. I suggest to use 1x DS (distance snap) for them - I like this part as it currenly is.
2. 00:56:881 (1) - Finish? - Fixed
3. 01:15:972 - I'm sure that this normal sample set is not intentional, the normal slider slide sounds weird - Fixed
4. 01:13:732 (2,3) - Hmm quite hard too read this, maybe change these into a slider? - Fixed

I would rather if you can search more mod for Normal diff, but if you don't want to then please call me back

Sallad4ever wrote:

I can play Hyper all day just for 01:46:752 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
Anyway, here's your BUBBLE!!!

Good Luck~

Alace wrote:

streams kill me
ranked

Hernan wrote:

Great map

-kevincela- wrote:

Hernan wrote:

Great map