1. bLaTzK's Normal (3,26 stars, 160 notes)
2. Dunskin's Taiko Oni (4,94 stars, 775 notes)
3. Easy (2,33 stars, 167 notes)
4. Hard (4,84 stars, 314 notes)

Broetchen8441 wrote:

Map's timing got totally fucked up after update ._.

p3n wrote:

Broetchen8441 wrote:

Map's timing got totally fucked up after update ._.

New MP3 (thx DarkDunskin!). Re-download should fix it

1. Starting [bLaTzK's Normal] later~
2. Fix the green time lines please
3. Added the fixed SB to attachment
4. EDIT: I only know the song titled as 'Escape from the City' from the old sonic games... Mistake of yours or did they rename it?

bLaTzK wrote:

[*]EDIT: I only know the song titled as 'Escape from the City' from the old sonic games... Mistake of yours or did they rename it?[/list]

theMikeAG wrote:

Hey... Sorry I haven't finished my difficulty yet, I've been really busy with various projects. I really like what you have here so far.
Also your offset here is rather crappy, so here's a better one.
Offset: 2309

Lanttu wrote:

[Broetchen vs p3n]
00:25:898 (3,4,5) - Move these one grid right and one grid down (level 3)
00:29:821 (5,6,7) - Too much overlap in my opinion, maybe something like this? (also moved (4) one grid down.)
00:54:052 (1,2) - One level 4 grid to right so it doesn't do the tiny overlap with the next combo?
00:54:975 (1,2) - ^, but one level 4 grid left, obviously.
00:55:898 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, dundundun. Also, (4) new combo?
01:16:206 (6) - New combo?
01:19:898 (7,8,9) - This spacing was a bit confusing for me at first, new combo on (7)?
02:20:590 (6) - New combo? of course ><

red parts are broetchen's parts. waiting for him to change stuff.

[Hard]
00:44:821 (7) - New combo? I think it is better to leave this part in one combo as it really is "one combo" to play
01:45:744 (7) - ^? ^
01:50:359 (3,4) - New combo on both of these would look cool to me~ :3 But works like this also. great idea, done

[Easy]
02:17:129 (3) - Why silenced end? ;_; Doesn't work very well in my opinion. changed from silence to normal finish - works either way for me


I guess that's it. Nice work, I like this<3 I may take another look at this map later, now I need to go to sleep. Have my star~

Lanttu wrote:

[Broetchen vs p3n]
00:25:898 (3,4,5) - Move these one grid right and one grid down (level 3)
00:29:821 (5,6,7) - Too much overlap in my opinion, maybe something like this? (also moved (4) one grid down.)
00:54:052 (1,2) - One level 4 grid to right so it doesn't do the tiny overlap with the next combo?
00:54:975 (1,2) - ^, but one level 4 grid left, obviously.
00:55:898 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, dundundun. Also, (4) new combo?
01:16:206 (6) - New combo?
01:19:898 (7,8,9) - This spacing was a bit confusing for me at first, new combo on (7)?

Tony wrote:

[Normal]
I see you used a lot of circles on blue ticks, that's a bit to hard for normal players to read imo - You call that a lot? Ok... Anyway, it's not an Easy anymore so i think at that point you can slowly start reading those 1/4's.
00:23:013 (5,6) - try not touch slider borders. space them a bit - It alrady has x0,94 by using x0,90 distance snaping. In your pic is a distance of x1,04, so not this one. They are slightly touching each other like other objects, so what?... I don't believe that this one is so bad.
00:23:590 (6) - clap at end does not fit imo! try whistle instead? - Not sure if it sounds better. Both sound good there but changed it.
01:18:052 (1,1) - those spinners do not fit at all there. better map that part - Done'd
01:40:206 (1) - that anti-jump really sucks. it's even underlapping the previous slider. Space it please - Omg, that one was unintended... Fixed.

Tony wrote:

[General]
wow! I like the Artist! ( Tony :> )

[SB]
I suggest that in future to add a folder named SB where you can put all the elements. The song folder will be a lot more organized.
yeah it's just 5 files so I didn't bother

[Easy]
lack of hitsounds... I think you can add more normal finishes (they fit the song great imo) I'm always lazy when it comes to hitsounds...added some more
00:15:283 (3,4) - it does not follow the rhythm right! try something like this?[img]I know that...but to avoid 1/2 notes that was the best I could come up with...changed to something different for now
00:50:360 (1,1) - add a repeat on each slider and remove NC from second slider? I think it is ok the way it is..slow pace for easy diff
00:54:052 (1,2,3,4) - it does not follow the rhythm right! try something like this? [img] It follows the baseline and again the thing with the 1/2 notes. no changes for now until someone tells me baseline follow is a no go for easy diffs
01:43:898 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:50:821 (4) - stack it with (2) the little difference in position is to avoid stacking bug
01:53:129 (2) - move this a bit down! the distance is confusing for newbies done
01:54:975 (1,2,3,4) - it does not follow the rhythm right! try something like this? [img] again the same baseline follow as before
02:07:898 (5) - try not to touch the end of the slider with the slider border
http://puu.sh/bA9D
02:07:898 (5,1) - try to not use jumps in easy diffs and underlaps in the same time. Remember that newbies barely can read notes.the slider is visible for ~1.5s and the overlap is cleared for ~0.5s before the note so it shouldn't be any problem even for the easiest diff. The jump is a really small one...if this will be OK with the BATs I'll like to keep it that way as it is still very easy but at the same time provodes a small challenge for beginners.
02:24:513 (1) - remove NC ok

[Hard]
combo pattern is really messed up. I'm gonna give you some suggestions, but you need to fix them by yourself too.
00:05:129 (1) - remove NC
00:09:052 (5,6) - stack those 2 with (2) and (3).
00:42:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - please try a better shape. I think it would be better if you add sliders there too hmm ok maybe the beatpattern is a bit too much for "hard"...changed
00:44:821 (7) - add NC?
01:16:206 (5) - ^
01:22:090 (5) - ^
01:24:975 (1) - remove nc?
01:50:359 (1,1) - ^

[Collab diff]
00:21:052 (2,3,4) - so unreadable... hmm ok I think about changing it


Broetchen's parts:
01:24:975 (3,4,5,6,1) - keep the same distance in that stream. 6-1 is way too close
01:33:975 (3) - move that in center of the screen?

02:02:360 (9) - like I said in easy. It does not look so good if you touch the borders I think it looks pretty cool this way
02:14:821 (5) - stack this with (1)
overall this diff is a lot more better than the others

good luck with this! Broetchen8441's style is Insane XD

01:24:975 (3,4,5,6,1) - "keep the same distance in that stream. 6-1 is way too close"; changed
01:33:975 (3) - "move that in center of the screen?"; i'll keep it like this, since it's 1 & 2 just mirrored

qwertykool wrote:

Okay, three things, first, I really like the map, second: this song was also by both Tony, and Cash Cash : D And lastly, why is there a kiai between 00:50:360 and 00:50:375 on Easy? Other than those, love it, faved, keep it up! : D

because I am using something called "bad mapping style" that is just using a short KIAI for the fountain

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

Some Suggestions
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Easy

you should add more hitsound as is lot lack hitsound you did put finish only 00:22:667 (1)
yes I finally did something about those hitsounds

00:46:667 (1,2) - i can see my self is incosienty spacing http://puu.sh/cf3s so maybe fix spacing? 0,04x is not that much but fixed anyway
01:33:744 (2,3,4) - i did test play but the hitburst is big and can ugly overlaps then the newbie will be hard read this will better if this http://puu.sh/cf5D this just need clean hitburst and overlaps IMO then better gample or try remap you owm I'll try and come up with a custom hitburst then
01:51:283 (1,2) - i can see myself is bad symentric and bad symentric arc the ARC most perfect if use 5 point but 4 point too if you use grid 4 IMO anyway try perfect symentric? made more symmetric but had to reduce spacing a bit

look good but pleasse add hitsound hai hai

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Hard

00:20:360 (1,2,3,4) - this part is really read and lot hard i feel like insane as (1) and (2) is cool but (3),(4) this just hard i tough are 1/2 pleasse try unstack imo changed

cool for me
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Broetchen vs p3n

stuff aswome



you have Easy and hard should add more hitsound and another is fine
that all i think and good luck
bye bye

p3n wrote:

qwertykool wrote:

Okay, three things, first, I really like the map, second: this song was also by both Tony, and Cash Cash : D And lastly, why is there a kiai between 00:50:360 and 00:50:375 on Easy? Other than those, love it, faved, keep it up! : D

because I am using something called "bad mapping style" that is just using a short KIAI for the fountain

• Timing: Offset 44 is better for me, try it. Don't forget to resnap green lines/elements/SB if you decide to follow my suggestion.
  I guess you fixed the offset because your .mp3 file was wrong and against the rules of ranking. But you forgot to resnap the SB too, infact it starts so soon:
  
  SPOILER

  

1. 00:33:744 (4) - Since the clap should be here: 00:34:206, remove the clap from the end of this slider, it sounds so bad.
2. 00:37:436 (4) - ^
3. 01:36:052 (5) - Nazi mod, move this slider to x208 y144 and fix waypoints in this way:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:34:667 (4) - The same above, remove clap
5. 01:38:359 (4) - ^
6. 02:07:898 (5) - This slider in this way is better imho:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   128,160,127898,2,0,B|169:54|248:21|368:16|464:152|368:320|216:320|144:192|240:128|264:160,1,560,4|0

1. 00:13:206 Add a circle?
2. 00:13:436 (1,3) - Ehm, end these slider on the white tick, since this is a normal and also because the sound is bad:
   
3. 00:19:321 (5) - Move to 00:19:436 (Try to listen it with 50/75% playback rate and see how it is off with the song. Blue ticks have to be used only in the hard/insane/etc. for the streams, or in the normal too only if you use a slider and not a beat that is hard for a normal.)
4. 00:44:244 (5) - This and others again >.< Use 1/2 snap divisor to make a normal diff .-.
5. 01:27:975 (5) - Improve the shape of this slider:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   160,144,87975,2,0,B|88:200|144:304|216:296,1,210,2|8

6. 01:44:821 (3) - Extend to 01:45:283

1. 00:05:013 There is a "missed" sound here so I think it's better if you add a note here or simply move the 00:05:129 (4) here.
2. 00:09:052 (5) - Overlap with 00:07:667 (3)
3. 01:21:052 (3) - Overlap with repeat of 01:19:898 (1)
4. 01:43:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - For who doesn't know the song this is very hard to understand when the player has to click on the beat, since this isn't a regular jump snapped with distance snap. So, let set some new combo to make it easier. 01:44:590 (3) NC, 01:45:513 (6) NC, 01:46:436 (4) NC.
5. 02:04:321Add break time
6. [02:08:129 (4) - Fix the second waypoint of this slider:
   

1. 02:14:821 (5) - Overlap with 02:13:783 (1)
2. Seems enough ok