1. Dreams (1.51 stars, 12 notes)

Jayel wrote:

Hi, from my queue.

ALL suggestions.

[Dreams]

Change hitsounds from the beginning to 00:22:068 into 'Soft' ones. Done
I think you used too much hitsounds in this map. Consider removing some or lowering the volume of the hitsounds. I'll try lol

00:05:401 (3) - NC Done
00:10:734 (5) - ^ Done
00:14:734 (7) - ^ Done
00:20:401 (8) - ^ Done
00:48:068 (3) - NC Done
00:53:401 (5) - ^ Done
00:58:734 (7) - ^ Done
01:02:734 - Unnecessary break. Done
01:22:901 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Done
01:24:401 (9) - NC Done
02:00:068 (6) - NC Done
02:08:068 (8) - ^ Done
02:13:401 (10) - ^ Done
02:18:734 (13) - NC, AND Done
02:21:068 (1) - remove NC. Done
02:24:068 (5) - NC. Done
03:12:068 (7) - ^ Done
03:17:401 (8) - ^ Done
03:22:734 (8) - ^ Done
03:38:734 (8) - NC, AND Done
03:40:234 (1) - remove NC. Done
03:44:068 (6) - NC. Done
04:06:401 (6) - Nice heart. Lol Thanks!

That's it. Good luck!

hypercyte wrote:

Hello from my queue (I did say modding v2 only but i'll mod since i'm nice)

General

In general I think your object placement needs work, as the map seems very messy and unorganised. I'd recommend looking at other maps and try seeing how they made their maps look nice and neat. I do, however, like your use of slider velocity changes to emphasise certain parts. I'll try and fix that

Dreams
00:15:401 (2,3,4) - This is a bit unexpectedly intense for a slow part of the song. The sounds you mapped are really quiet too, so I think it'd be better to replace this part with two 1/4 beat sliders, so you map the more significant sounds. Done

00:30:901 (7) - Move this slider up a bit to be linear with 00:30:734 (6) - (I think x:90 and y:160 works well) Done

00:31:901 (1) - Move this slider down to x:70 and y:130, and then stack 00:32:234 (2) - with the slider head of 00:31:401 (9) - Done

00:34:568 (2,3) - I think you could make these sliders parallel. If you put them side by side, you can see they're not parallel. I think it'd look nicer if they're parallel fully. Done

01:24:401 (3) - Remove this slider, you can map something nicely here. Here's what I suggest: https://i.gyazo.com/d7b5b3353e93a5d1e01 ... ca45d4.gif
And if you hit sound this too, it'd sound really good! Done and changed it's hitsound to whistle. If you feel it should be changed to a different hitsound, don't be afraid to notify me

01:14:068 (9) - Remove the reverse on this slider, and place a circle at x:375 y:122, and also make the new circle a new combo, and remove the NC here 01:15:068 - Done

01:32:901 (4) - Remove this, and add a 1/4 beat repeating slider, and a circle and make this circle a new NC like before. Here's an image for what i mean https://i.imgur.com/9RZSmS4.png
(there are other places like these, I couldnt mention them all. Look at all the measures on the timeline (Measures are the "big" white ticks https://i.imgur.com/nLS9DaH.png) Done


That's all for my mod, gl with your map c:

Lissel wrote:

Hello! from my Xmas Q!

[Dreams]

00:21:068 (4,5) - these sliders could be more better if you move the 4 or 5 a bit far Done
00:23:568 (7) - new combo here? (NC) Done
00:24:234 (9) - move a bit far pls Done
00:33:568 (8) - NC Done
00:34:401 (1) - remove NC Done
00:34:901 (3) - NC Done
00:36:401 (7) - NC Done
00:37:901 (11) - not neccesary for a great jump here Fixed
00:39:734 - missed sound Done
00:39:901 Same here Done
01:10:401 (5) - Stack this with 01:09:401 (2) - the slider-end Done
01:11:234 (8) - NC here Done
01:16:401 (8) - NC Done
01:21:401 (6) - necesary need NC Done
01:23:401 (4,5,6,1) - I guess it's a lot of difficulty here, because you are using 1/8, that's make your map very har to play Fixed
01:26:401 (2) - Blank this with 1: firts you have to move to x:316 y:224, after that, use this: Done

Recomended to this

01:35:568 - missed sound Done
01:35:734 - Same here Done
01:35:901 - Same here Done

Sorry for not mod the rest of your map, I think I gave you a lot of mod. Yeah it's fine you did part of it, it's a long map, i can understand why.
Nice song!
GL

1. 00:15:401 (4,1,2) - looks pretty bad because of the overlap, try avoiding it when you're not that much familiar with
   
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2. 00:36:068 - place it differently
   
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3. 00:55:734 (2) - use the space you have.
4. 01:02:734 (3) - hm
5. 01:54:484 (2) - starts too late
6. 02:08:068 (1,2,1,2) - no shit, but besides that the hitsound is horrible you shouldn't use this sound in such cute parts. the whole part tho. I assume you're mapping with some custom skin, what you shouldn't do. Always let it sound good with the default skin or add custom sounds. In general I'll give you the tip to map with the default skin to have perfect skin sizes in mapping.
7. ...

1. Don't ever use 100% volume sound in the song setup, it's way too loud. Maybe think about the soft sampleset too.
2. Use distance snap. !!! This is so important in mapping, you won't believe. Adjust a good distance and map with it. Sometimes you'll need to adjust it and you can just do that by pressing the alt key to have the distance spacing thing at the top right corner.
3. Don't copy parts and paste them somewhere again. Be creative instead.
4. Change the slider velocity in the timing tab to something different than 1,40. It's up to you, but don't exaggerate it!
5. Turn off grid snap, you don't need it.
6. Use 1/2 or 1/4 in the beat snap divisor.
7. Learn about good placement of objects by taking a look at maps you like and want to learn of. If you have a favourite mapper, go into their editor and just learn from the things the mapper did. That helps a lot with the time.

1. 02:08:068 (1) - don't use whistles on entire slider bodies, it's jarring and annoying
2. In some places you spam finishes is way over the top. It doesn't particular follow a certain musical layer and again it be be jarring listening to finishes over and over again. It's 99% it's better to just stick to add finishes where there in the song
3. You don't need as many kiai breaks as you have
4. Try and keep NC lengths consistent (at least in the same sections). For example 02:00:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this combo length is 1 measure long and 01:26:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - is 2 measures long. A good rule of thumb (99% of the time) for insane diffs is to have them 1 measure long (preferably starting on every big white tick as well).

Lyawi wrote:

Heya, coming from my queue

[Dreams]

1. 00:15:401 (4,1,2) - looks pretty bad because of the overlap, try avoiding it when you're not that much familiar with
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:36:068 - place it differently
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:55:734 (2) - use the space you have.
4. 01:02:734 (3) - hm
5. 01:54:484 (2) - starts too late
6. 02:08:068 (1,2,1,2) - no shit, but besides that the hitsound is horrible you shouldn't use this sound in such cute parts. the whole part tho. I assume you're mapping with some custom skin, what you shouldn't do. Always let it sound good with the default skin or add custom sounds. In general I'll give you the tip to map with the default skin to have perfect skin sizes in mapping.
7. ...

Okay, this is hard to mod. I'll be honest to you and tell you that your beatmap won't get ranked like that, even when you're getting mods. You still need to practice a lot and I can just give you tips on your way.

1. Don't ever use 100% volume sound in the song setup, it's way too loud. Maybe think about the soft sampleset too.
2. Use distance snap. !!! This is so important in mapping, you won't believe. Adjust a good distance and map with it. Sometimes you'll need to adjust it and you can just do that by pressing the alt key to have the distance spacing thing at the top right corner.
3. Don't copy parts and paste them somewhere again. Be creative instead.
4. Change the slider velocity in the timing tab to something different than 1,40. It's up to you, but don't exaggerate it!
5. Turn off grid snap, you don't need it.
6. Use 1/2 or 1/4 in the beat snap divisor.
7. Learn about good placement of objects by taking a look at maps you like and want to learn of. If you have a favourite mapper, go into their editor and just learn from the things the mapper did. That helps a lot with the time.

Don't give up, you're just still at the beginning. When I started mapping, my maps looked much more horrible. Hope you understand my mod.

Kisses wrote:

1. 02:08:068 (1) - don't use whistles on entire slider bodies, it's jarring and annoying It'll take a bit, but i'll try and fix it.
2. In some places you spam finishes is way over the top. It doesn't particular follow a certain musical layer and again it be be jarring listening to finishes over and over again. It's 99% it's better to just stick to add finishes where there in the song I'll try to fix
3. You don't need as many kiai breaks as you have will fix
4. Try and keep NC lengths consistent (at least in the same sections). For example 02:00:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this combo length is 1 measure long and 01:26:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - is 2 measures long. A good rule of thumb (99% of the time) for insane diffs is to have them 1 measure long (preferably starting on every big white tick as well). mk

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ok bye

-CPR- wrote:

I think remove the heart-shaped slider at the end and remove the long spinner at the end which goes on 'till after the song ends, keep the spinner but just shorten it a bit.

Apart from that great job on the map, looks great and seems like you put a lot of effort into it.