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Alina Puscau - When You Leave (Numa Numa)(Nightcore Mix)

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Suimya
H - I - I - I <--- this unrankble, plz make easy or something~
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riffy
Easy in progress.
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riffy
Mod please >_______<
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riffy
Testeasy finished >__<
Lucy-Kaede
Newbie mod from #modreqs :P

General
If your beatmap ends at 01:24:075, I would recommend you trim the mp3 (you can add a fade effect close to the end to make it sound better) closer to this time.
My appologies, I see the harder maps use the extra time. Ignore this ^

Testeasy
00:43:334 (1) - End this at 00:43:889 to better match the vocals?
00:44:260 (2) - If you shorten the slider, you can add a hit circle here to keep the rythm up.
00:50:556 (2) - End at 00:51:297
00:51:852 (3) - Extend to end at 00:53:149
01:06:852 (5,6,7,8) - Stacking can sometimes be hard for new players to see, but its fine how it is :P

Foxshift's Normal
00:43:149 (1,2,3,4) - This doesnt seem to match up.. (See below)
00:43:334 (1) - Start one at this time "my" and use a repeating slider for the "way from lun"
Like this

If you swap to this slider, obviously you will need to rearrange the spacing of the next few notes xP

Good so far! :)

Sorry just these 2 difficulties for now. (I might take a look at the others when i've done what I need to do)
Topic Starter
riffy
Thanks~ Fixed
NekoMimiMode
irc mad
SPOILER
14:47 <NekoMiniMode> : 00:03:891 (4,5,6) -
14:47 <NekoMiniMode> : не нужен
14:48 <NekoMiniMode> : 00:07:778 (2) - не люблю длинные реверсные, сделай лучше 2
14:48 <NekoMiniMode> : просто мод расписывать не буду
14:48 <NekoMiniMode> : так тебе напишу
14:49 <NekoMiniMode> : мб в начале вобще зампать в 1\2
14:49 <NekoMiniMode> : 1\4 перебарщивает как-то
14:49 <NekoMiniMode> : пардон
14:49 <NekoMiniMode> : 1\1
14:53 <NekoMiniMode> : и вобще я приверженец культа слайдеров
14:53 <NekoMiniMode> : поэтому мне катострофических их не хватает
14:53 <-Bakari-> : D:
14:53 <-Bakari-> : А я их не очень
14:54 <NekoMiniMode> : 00:42:225 (5,6,7,8) -
14:54 <NekoMiniMode> : это ромб не должен повторять предыдущий
14:54 <NekoMiniMode> : очень тяжело пройти такое
14:54 <NekoMiniMode> : сделай из него квадрат например
14:55 <NekoMiniMode> : 00:49:910 (3) -
14:55 <NekoMiniMode> : 1 тик вперед же
14:56 <NekoMiniMode> : а вобще предлогаю тебе за мапать начало под голос например, а потом мапать под музыку, а не
14:56 <NekoMiniMode> : под голос
14:57 <NekoMiniMode> : ах да еще я не особо люблю реверсные слайдеры большие
14:58 <-Bakari-> : D:
14:58 <NekoMiniMode> : 02:02:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - очень тяжелый о5 же паттерн
14:58 <-Bakari-> : там же вроде мап идет под музыку везде
14:58 <NekoMiniMode> : ну да
14:59 <NekoMiniMode> : 02:05:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - сущий ад \ :D /
14:59 <NekoMiniMode> : этот и предыдущий можешь не трогать
14:59 <NekoMiniMode> : просто я говорю про сложность
15:00 <NekoMiniMode> : 02:09:817 (5,6,7) - если делаешь триплы в линию, то лучше бери 0.9 спейсинг
15:00 <NekoMiniMode> : 02:11:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - лучше придать здесь формы
15:01 <NekoMiniMode> : 02:38:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 3 повтора
15:02 <NekoMiniMode> : просто когда делаешь повторяющиеся паттерны в виде квадратов или треугольников страйся
15:02 <NekoMiniMode> : либо делать смещение, либо менять форму, либо не делать более 2 повторов, довольно сложно
15:02 <NekoMiniMode> : проходить такое :>
Topic Starter
riffy
Ох, новую страницу занял :<
thanks
i da 2 kudosa
Hellzero
Kotek-
00:00:927 (1) - одиночное НК, зачем? :\
00:06:112 (1) - а ну ка не ленись и сделай все по пацански http://puu.sh/athN
00:14:260 (4,1) - поменять НК местами
Вообще надо бы НК как то в порядок привести. Убрать рандом и например каждое большое белое деление - НК.
00:24:260 (1) - ...
00:28:704 (1) - ^
00:51:667 (1) - ^
00:59:445 (1) - http://puu.sh/atif закрутила : D
01:38:704 (1,2) - что то со спейсингом не то
01:42:223 (4) - НК имо
01:47:686 (16) - лучше начать с (15) и закончить на 01:49:075 да и комбу не помешало бы разбить.

Играется хорошо ._. лайк ит
Topic Starter
riffy
/o/ Fixed
Rewondernard
[General]
Если ты используешь в одной сложности теги o-zone FoxShift Roddie Kotek-,
то обязан добавить их во все.
Kiai time
Примерно раздели во всех сложностях Игровое время на две или три части,и вставляй Kiai на слух или в реально нужных местах.Просто у тебя почти во всех сложностях,а особенно в [Leave me] и [Kiss me] подряд стоит Kiai time.Это просто странно выглядит.

[Leave me]

00:12:778 Слайдер совсем не в ритм.

00:17:964 - 00:20:556 Расположи слайдеры как-нибудь иначе.

00:32:593(4) удали биток,и смести далее идущий слайдер на его место на это же время.
00:38:519 добавь биток (4) + clap.

00:40:926 и 00:41:297 (4,5) удали битки,замени на слайдер с 00:40:741 по 00:41:112.

00:41:482 добавь биток прям поверх начала слайдера(6).

00:49:445[/u ] слайдер(1) укороти до [u]00:49:815 и добавь биток на 00:50:186.

Повторяющийся слайдер на 00:50:556 укороти на 1 повтор,а слайдер на 00:51:852 смести 00:52:038,и увеличь до 00:53:149.

Слайдер на 00:53:519 укороти до 00:53:889,удали биток (5).Поставь лучше сюда слайдер с 00:54:260 по 00:54:630.

Слайдер 00:54:815 смести на 00:55:001 и укороти до 00:55:741,а на 00:56:112 ставь биток.

Биток 01:00:001смести на 00:59:815,а вместо (кривого кстати битка под номером 4) поставь слайдер с 01:00:186 по 01:00:556.
Слайдер 01:00:926 укороти на 2 повтора.добавь биток на 01:02:038.

Ну а начиная со слайдера 01:13:519,который должен быть укорочен до 01:13:889,у тебя сбиты все битки и слайдер не в такте.
Смести все объекты с 01:14:445 по 01:18:334 на белый тик 01:14:260,а слйдер 01:18:284 увеличь на 1 повтор.
На 01:19:815 не хватает битка.

Хух,ну вот с одной сложностью разобрался.
Если надо,то наверно смогу пробежаться по всем остальным сложностям.
Но не все за раз! :)
Topic Starter
riffy
Thanks for mod.

Added Kotek-'s SB
WawaGoose
i love this song
Topic Starter
riffy
mod please ><
tutuhaha
I think this timing maybe is this ._.
BPM:162
Offest:915

1/4th of the song is not mapped, It is Unrank maybe ._.

Open FoxShift's Normal's notpad
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
change to SliderMultiplier:1
it is bug ._.
Topic Starter
riffy
offset 926
thanks to Kotek-
Roddie
Topic Starter
riffy
yeah. fixed
Mod please :D
Minos2012
IRC
17:18 <Minos2012> : hi, I just have a look on your map
17:18 <-Bakari-> : hi, thx
17:18 <Minos2012> : Find some problem
17:18 <Minos2012> : Your easy
17:18 <Minos2012> : diff
17:19 <Minos2012> : 00:33:149 (5) -
17:19 <Minos2012> : DSchanged
17:19 <Minos2012> : 00:35:371 (3,1) -
17:19 <Minos2012> : 00:50:556 (2) - here too close
17:20 <Minos2012> : When I have a try on it I fail to read it correctly
17:21 <-Bakari-> : sorry. lags :<
17:23 <Minos2012> : Just DS problem in the diff
17:23 <Minos2012> : You can check it one by one
17:24 <-Bakari-> : thanks :>
17:24 <Minos2012> : DS 0.8X is used in your diff and you can select one note
17:25 <Minos2012> : You can find the prev and next at the right front corner
17:32 <Minos2012> : 00:50:556 (2,3,4) - here what about change like this?
17:33 <Minos2012> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/209072
17:34 <Minos2012> : And the hitsound is as follow
17:34 <Minos2012> : 00:50:555 - finish and clap
17:34 <Minos2012> : 00:50:740 - clap
17:35 <Minos2012> : 00:50:925 - finish clap
17:35 <Minos2012> : 00:50:925 - clap
17:35 <Minos2012> : 00:51:111 - clap ...025 is clap and finish
17:36 <Minos2012> : 925
17:36 <Minos2012> : 00:51:296 - finish
17:36 <Minos2012> : 00:51:666 (3) - finish
17:36 <Minos2012> : oh that's too many note= =
17:37 <Minos2012> : 00:52:037 (4) - W F C
17:37 <Minos2012> : W stands for whistle F stands for finish C stands for clap
17:38 <-Bakari-> : ok.
17:38 <Minos2012> : 00:52:222 - 00:52:592 - W C
17:39 <Minos2012> : 00:52:407 - WFC
17:39 <Minos2012> : 00:52:777 - WF
17:39 <Minos2012> : 00:52:963 - 00:53:148 - F
17:40 <Minos2012> : Um...It's just my suggestion.
17:40 <Minos2012> : I think it will sound sweeter in this way.
17:41 <-Bakari-> : Yeah. Thank you :3
17:42 <Minos2012> : Um...01:24:260 (4) - I think your map finished here?
17:42 <Minos2012> : And you should cut your .mp3 file
17:42 <-Bakari-> : but other diffs...
17:43 <Minos2012> : Oh, i got it
17:46 <Minos2012> : You can change some hitsound in your diff .
17:48 <Minos2012> : 00:16:482 (1,2,3,4) - for example you have all used clap here
17:48 <Minos2012> : It's quite noise
17:50 <-Bakari-> : 1 - finish 2 - finish 3 - clap 4 - clap
17:50 <-Bakari-> : like this?
17:50 <Minos2012> : 00:12:593 (1) - here add whistle 00:13:148 - C
17:50 <Minos2012> : 00:16:852 (2,4) - add clap
17:53 <Minos2012> : Um...Maybe it's easy diff , and some whiteline is empty. so it's hard to use hitsound
17:55 <Minos2012> : Normally , add clap on the 2nd or 4th white line
17:57 <Minos2012> : And finish is always used in the first whiteline
17:59 <Minos2012> : Um,As a new mapper, i think that's all i can do for you = =
18:00 <-Bakari-> : i think i should give kudosu
18:01 <-Bakari-> : post log in betmap's thread :D
18:01 <Minos2012> : = = um..I don't know how to save that..
18:02 <-Bakari-> : /savelog

That's a star for you :)

Good luck~!
Topic Starter
riffy
mod please
macponpon
good MAP :D
There is only one worrisome point.

[Roddie's Hard]
02:14:814 (1)~(3) - The direction made symmetrical looks beautiful.

Roddie

macponpon wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
02:14:814 (1)~(3) - The direction made symmetrical looks beautiful. Okay. Fixed.
Thanks. And also, I've done some changes on a few patterns.

Download: Alina Puscau - When You Leave Me (Nightcore Mix) (-Bakari-) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Elly-chan
tell me when you update so i can do my mod post

edit: hey, roddie, i was adding that in my mod post >:( don't say anythin' else till i post my mod post! rawr
Roddie
Oi!

Add my username, Kotek- and FoxShift in the tags.

Don't kudosu post this.
Topic Starter
riffy
Oh..I'll add tags a bit later.
Now i'm waiting for Elly-chan's mod. /o/

OMG 6 PAGES D:
Elly-chan
When You Leave, My Colors Fade To Gray.. Numa-Numa-Yei, Numa-Numa-Numa-Yei... Every Word Of Love I Used To Say... Now I Paint It Every Day.

Alina Puscau - When You Leave Me (Nightcore Mix)

(General)
  1. Quick little discussion in #modhelp. Pondering on my own. PM with agnes. More looking into it. The Title Of This Map Is Incorrect! Please, Consult Many Other People, But The Title I Could Get My Hands On ATM That I Believe Is Correct Is 'Alina Puscau - When You Leave Me (Numa Numa) (Nightcore Mix)'. Refer to THIS to not duplicate the map or make a mistake while full-submitting.
  2. 00:47:592 - Make The Preview Here On Every Map and Full Submit.
  3. Remove the Countdown from Roddie's hard. If you do not wish to do this, add a countdown in every difficulty, then.
  4. Please, just remove an audio lead-in in general. It is not needed since all of the maps have an intro that they didn't map.
  5. You have an inconsistency of tags throughout all of your difficulties. Please, on every difficulty, include the following tags: 'o-zone FoxShift Roddie Kotek-'
  6. Please pick which combo colors you want to use and use them in every difficulty. FoxShift's Normal and Your Difficulty, (Bakari's), both have four combo colors that differ from Roddie's hard and Kotek-'s difficulties,which have three different-colored combo colors.
  7. Please, keep consistant kiai times throughout every difficulty. Every difficulty has different kiai times! This is a No-No!
(Leave Me)

- This Is The Only Difficulty In The Entire Mapset With a Name Like This. Please, It'd Be Easier To Just Rename It Easy. So, yeah. Rename the difficulty name to 'Easy'?
- Some Unsnapped Timing Points. Please Resnap Them All.

Hitsound and Combo mods


  • The Best Thing To Do Is Delete All Of The Hitsounds On Every Note (Edit --> Reset All Samples --> Yes) and Consult Somebody good at hitsounds to help you hitsound your map. Seriously, it Needs help. Badly.
  1. 00:34:074 (5) - New Combo.
  2. 00:41:481 (5) - New Combo.
  3. 00:44:629 (3) - New Combo.
  4. 00:49:444 (1) - Remove New Combo, and then Add the New Combo at 00:50:185.
  5. 00:53:518 (5) - New Combo. At 00:54:259, Remove New Combo.
  6. 00:59:444 (2) - New Combo. Remove New Combo at 01:00:925
  7. 01:06:481 (4) - New Combo.
  8. 01:10:555 (4) - New Combo.
  9. 01:18:703 (3) - New Combo. At 01:19:814, Remove the New Combo. Then, Finally, Add a New Combo at 01:20:185.
  10. 01:21:666 (4) - New Combo.
  11. 01:22:777 (1) - Remove New Combo. Add a New Combo at 01:23:148.
  1. 00:08:703 (Spinner) - Start this Spinner on 00:09:629 like all of the other difficulties for consistency. Also, end it at 00:11:296. It sounds better that way. If you do that (Which You Really Should), add a note at 00:12:037 and 00:12:407.
  2. 00:15:000 (1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3, 4, 1) - I'd prefer for you to use more flow in your mapset then crappy boxy patterns~ For example, do something like this: http://puu.sh/cNKO
  3. 00:19:444 (2) - Make a different slider shape. The current one makes a horrible transition.
  4. 00:24:259 (1, 1) - I'd prefer if the sliders were like this so that they appear and flow better. http://puu.sh/cNPr . Make the the beat pattern that comes after the slider get blanketed
  5. 01:24:074 - Why. Just... Why. The mapping ends at 50% of the audio, and at the beginning you started at 5% (If You Didn't Fix My First Mod On This Difficulty Yet.) Map the entire song (Which Goes Up To 02:40:925).

(FoxShift's Normal)

- 135 Hitobjects Aren't Snapped. Please, Go To Timing --> Re-snap All Notes
- Some Unsnapped Timing Points. Please Resnap Them All.
- Also, did you forget to use spacing at some parts or something?

Hitsound and Combo mods
  1. 00:18:703 (2) - You Forgot A Whistle! ^^
  2. 00:24:259 (1, 2) - You Forgot To Add Whistles.
  3. 00:28:703 (5) - New Combo.
  4. 00:30:185 (2, 3) - You Forgot Whistles. If You Didn't, It Sounds Better Like This Anyways.
  5. 00:31:481 (1, 3) - Whistles, Please.
  6. 00:33:148 (1, 2) - Whistles.
  7. 00:38:333 (1) - Remove New Combo. Add a New Combo at 00:39:074.
  8. 00:41:481 (1, 3) - Whistles!
  9. 00:43:148 (4) - New Combo.
  10. 00:47:037 (5) - Clap.
  11. 00:50:555 to 00:53:148 - Why a New Combo Spam? Suggestions:
    ~
    -00:50:925 Remove New Combo
    -00:51:296 Remove New Combo
    -00:52:407 Remove New Combo
    -00:52:777 Remove New Combo
    -00:53:148 Remove New Combo
    ~
  12. 01:00:185 (1) - Finish.
  13. 01:04:259 (4) - Either New Combo Here or At Three. Your Choice.
  14. 01:06:111 (2) - Obvious Finish Is Obvious. (Just Kidding! But Yeah, Add a Finish Like Previously)
  15. 01:13:518 (3) - Finish.
  16. 01:15:000 (2) - Finish Here Instead of at 01:15:370
  17. 01:16:481 (2) - Finish Here Instead of at 01:16:851
  18. 01:19:444 (2) - Whistle.



  1. 01:24:074 - Why. Just... Why. The mapping ends at 50% of the audio, and at the beginning you started at 5% (If You Didn't Fix My First Mod On This Difficulty Yet.) Map the entire song (Which Goes Up To 02:40:925).

(Roddie's Hard)
Hitsound and Combo mods

  • The Normal Hitsounds sound rather large and not-fitting for this map, but whatever. If you wish to keep them loud, be my guest. also, ow.. these whistles.. my ears ;n;..
  1. 01:13:518 (1) - Remove New Combo
  2. 01:45:370 (7) - New Combo
  3. 01:45:925 (1) - Remove New Combo
  4. 01:43:148 (1) - Finish.
  5. 01:43:888 (3) - Finish.
  6. 01:44:259 (4) - You Forgot A Whistle~
  7. 01:44:629 (6) - If You Refuse To Do The Finish Hitsound Mods, add a Whistle here because you forgot it. Otherwise, if you don't, Finish.
  8. 01:48:333 (6) - New Combo.
  9. 01:51:296 (1) - Whistle?
  10. 02:22:407 (3) - New Combo. at 02:23:148, Remove New Combo.
  11. 02:24:259 (2) - New Combo.
  1. 00:24:722 (Section) - I don't understand why you didn't map anything here. While test playing this, I expected notes right after the spinner, but you didn't put any there. Unless you have a valid reason, I suggest for you to place a note at 00:24:814, make a slider that starts at 00:25:000 and ends on 00:25:185, and make a slider that starts at 00:25:370 and ends on 00:25:555.
  2. 00:29:074 (3) - How about spacing this out? You were doing it previously, (Like at 00:27:592 and 00:26:111), so I see no reason why to stop the consistency of this pattern.
  3. 00:43:148 (3) - Long Kick Sliders Like This are Completely Boring, sometimes unpredictable, and most of the time, they don't fit. In this case, I'd go with it doesn't fit and it is completely boring. Instead of using a bland repeat slider like this, how about you end the slider on the first repeat (00:43:333) and just add three regular notes at 00:43:518, 00:43:703, and one at 00:43:888.
  4. 01:10:555 (Spinner) - How about instead of starting the spinner here, you start it at either 01:10:833 or the white tick immediately after that? ( So It Would Be Like This http://puu.sh/cNx1 )
  5. 01:16:666 (4) - Add a small curve? It makes it flow a tinsy-winsy bit better ^^
  6. 01:15:740 (1) - In it's current position, it kind of flows bad. If you lowered it and readjusted the spacing after that, it will flow better. ( http://puu.sh/cNyz )
  7. 01:17:777 (2) - Is this purposely not stacked correctly?
  8. 01:21:481 (4) - this should be stacked on top of 01:21:666 due to what you did at 01:20:000.
  9. 01:18:703 (1) - Maybe shift this over a few grids so (5) isn't overlapping (1)'s slider border?
  10. 02:03:333 (2) - Maybe curve this a bit to the left? o/
  11. 02:17:407 (x) - Perhaps add a note here? (Also, maybe add one at 02:17:592 and at 02:17:777?)
  12. 02:30:185 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - Putting these notes into a pattern like this flow better and relate to what you did at 02:28:333, which keeps consistency. ( http://puu.sh/cNAJ )

didn't finish the mods for easy or normal because they need way more work and more mods, and i can't fix everything up myself since they are way out of repair, so...

Sorry, This Map Is In No Condition To Get a MAT Check nor a BAT Check Yet due to the Easy and Normal difficulty. Sorry. Anyways, Cheers!
Topic Starter
riffy
Some little fixes
-Bakari-
Applied mod (Only my diff) | new combo-colours (My Diff) | new preview/timing points (My Diff) | Deleted Kotek- (sorry :( )| Renamed Song |
Elly-chan
i made an oopsie on the title. It's supposed to be: 'Alina Puscau - When You Leave Me (Numa Numa) (Nightcore Mix)'. yeah, no 'me'. sorry! >w<

~~~ Stuff You Forgot To Add (@Bakari) ~~~

00:09:629 (Spinner) - Start the spinner here, and add a Finish!

no kds
Topic Starter
riffy
>.< reuploading... Give me some time.

Edit: reuploaded | now i'm waiting for FoxShift's and Roddie's update :D
Edit2: and yeah, i'll update tags later
Roddie
Topic Starter
riffy
Fixed
Tags :D
Roddie's Hard


Thanks to Roddie and Elly-chan /o/

FoxShift's Normal still in progress

Edit: Easy fixed (again)
Elly-chan
I hope my mod was helpful xD
Topic Starter
riffy
Really helpfull mod
map much better now /o/ thank you again :3
FoxShift

Elly-chan wrote:

(FoxShift's Normal)
  1. 00:18:703 (2) - You Forgot A Whistle! ^^ Fixed
  2. 00:24:259 (1, 2) - You Forgot To Add Whistles. Fixed
  3. 00:28:703 (5) - New Combo. Fixed
  4. 00:30:185 (2, 3) - You Forgot Whistles. If You Didn't, It Sounds Better Like This Anyways. Fixed
  5. 00:31:481 (1, 3) - Whistles, Please. Fixed
  6. 00:33:148 (1, 2) - Whistles. Fixed
  7. 00:38:333 (1) - Remove New Combo. Add a New Combo at 00:39:074. Fixed
  8. 00:41:481 (1, 3) - Whistles! Fixed
  9. 00:43:148 (4) - New Combo. Fixed
  10. 00:47:037 (5) - Clap.
  11. 00:50:555 to 00:53:148 - Why a New Combo Spam? Suggestions:
    ~
    -00:50:925 Remove New Combo Fixed
    -00:51:296 Remove New Combo Fixed
    -00:52:407 Remove New Combo Fixed
    -00:52:777 Remove New Combo Fixed
    -00:53:148 Remove New Combo Fixed
    ~
  12. 01:00:185 (1) - Finish.
  13. 01:04:259 (4) - Either New Combo Here or At Three. Your Choice. Fixed
  14. 01:06:111 (2) - Obvious Finish Is Obvious. (Just Kidding! But Yeah, Add a Finish Like Previously)
  15. 01:13:518 (3) - Finish.
  16. 01:15:000 (2) - Finish Here Instead of at 01:15:370
  17. 01:16:481 (2) - Finish Here Instead of at 01:16:851
  18. 01:19:444 (2) - Whistle.
Done. Thanks.

Download: Alina Puscau - When You Leave (Numa Numa) (Nightcore Mix) (-Bakari-) [FoxShift's Normal].osu
FoxShift
Небольшой мод ^^

Easy:

У тебя совсем нету хитсаундов, добавь хотябы хлопки. Поправь неровные слайдеры.

  • 00:15:001 (1,2,3) - Немного не ровный спейсинг.
    00:24:259 (1) - Слайдер заканчивается на красном тике, а должен на белом, на 00:25:370.
    00:25:740 (2) - ^
    00:27:223 (3,4,5) - Спрятаны за слайдером, новичку тяжело обнаружить.
    00:56:482 (1) - Ох не нравится мне этот слайдер... Может быть так? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217543
    01:10:556 (1) - ^ Аналогично
Topic Starter
riffy

FoxShift wrote:

Небольшой мод ^^

Easy:

У тебя совсем нету хитсаундов, добавь хотябы хлопки. Поправь неровные слайдеры. Их и не будет. Ищу норм расстановщика хитсаундов

  • 00:15:001 (1,2,3) - Немного не ровный спейсинг.
    00:24:259 (1) - Слайдер заканчивается на красном тике, а должен на белом, на 00:25:370.
    00:25:740 (2) - ^
    00:27:223 (3,4,5) - Спрятаны за слайдером, новичку тяжело обнаружить.
    00:56:482 (1) - Ох не нравится мне этот слайдер... Может быть так? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217543
    01:10:556 (1) - ^ Аналогично
Остальное поправляю.
spboxer3

[general]

  1. you have 3 *.osb in your folder. you need delete unused osb and full submit again
  2. Inconsistency PreviewTime. you need to integrat them
  3. Inconsistency Countdown.^
  4. End kiai time from: 02:15:740 -
  5. your SB will cover score board. so maybe change other way.

[Easy]

  1. 00:09:629 (1,1) - too far spacing in easy mode. because easy just for new player. It's too difficult for them (around center)
  2. 00:19:444 (2,1) - Some overlaps of notes/sliders in here don't look good.
  3. 00:28:704 (1,2,3) - spacing
  4. 00:44:630 (1,2,3) - ^
  5. 00:59:814 (2,3,4,5) - too messy. Umm... don't let them too close (or too cover). It's really too ugly ;_;
  6. 01:48:333 (1,1) - too far spacing in easy mode (around center)
  7. 01:55:740 (2,1) - overlaps
  8. 01:57:592 (2,3) - ^
  9. 02:06:111 (4) - new combo
  10. 02:06:851 (6,1) - don't cross. It's confuse for new player
  11. 02:07:592 (1) - remove NC (new combo)
  12. 02:07:592 (1,2) - don't jump in easy
  13. 02:10:185 (3,4) - overlaps
  14. 02:15:000 (1,1) - too far spacing in easy mode (around center)
  15. 02:40:925 - maybe add a note and use finish hitsound here ?

[FoxShift's Normal]

  1. 00:40:185 (1) - remove NC and add to 00:40:555 (2) -
  2. 00:41:481 (1) - remove NC
  3. 00:50:555 (1,2,3) - too cover here
  4. 00:52:037 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 01:54:259 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 02:20:185 (2,3) - change finish hitsound

[Roddie's Hard]

  1. AR+1 looks better then now?
  2. 00:25:000 - add some slider or note here. because It's hear like need some object.
  3. 00:44:074 (1) - start at 00:43:888 - ? sound like great then me.
  4. 01:25:740 - when Easy and Normal didn't add Break. I think you need add some object for this way.

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.


ok~that's all
you need find more modder to help you~
good luck~ ;)
Topic Starter
riffy
Easy:
All fixed
Thank you /o/

Hm..It's a small storyboard. I think it's ok. Sorry :>
Please help me :<
FoxShift

spboxer3 wrote:

[FoxShift's Normal]

  1. 00:40:185 (1) - remove NC and add to 00:40:555 (2) - Fixed
  2. 00:41:481 (1) - remove NC Fixed
  3. 00:50:555 (1,2,3) - too cover here Fixed
  4. 00:52:037 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
  5. 01:54:259 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
  6. 02:20:185 (2,3) - change finish hitsound
Done. Thanks.

Download: Alina Puscau - When You Leave (Numa Numa) (Nightcore Mix) (-Bakari-) [FoxShift's Normal].osu
Roddie
Hey!

I tried to download your map and all I'm getting is your Easy. Full submit with every difficulty. I think that would solve it.
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