1. Easy (0.87 stars, 83 notes)
2. Hard (4.94 stars, 442 notes)
3. Lunatic (5 stars, 528 notes)
4. Normal (4.07 stars, 155 notes)

x847606653 wrote:

没有做完的图放到Work In Progress比较好哦0.0个人意见是只要做一段，重复的部分切掉

1. Offset : 1730
2. osb. file deletion
3. Should I add the skin of the spin?
4. Stack recommends 4
5. Is the CTB skin necessary?

1. 00:04:680 (x) - add note?
2. 00:55:957 (x) - add note?
3. 00:56:170 (1) - It is finish first
4. 00:19:840 (6,7) - I think that a timing is not correct
5. 01:04:680 (1,2) - Please repeat it
6. 01:05:319 (5) - add new combo?
7. 01:08:084 (5) - ^
8. 01:09:787 (1) - It is finish first
9. 01:14:893 (6,7,8,9,10) - Give me it as spacing
10. 01:15:744 (10,11) - I see the one that I matched neatly
11. 01:18:936 (10) - add new combo
12. 01:23:404 (1) - It is finish first
13. 01:24:467 (4,5,6) - I see the one that I matched neatly
14. 01:30:212 (2) - add new combo?
15. 01:35:318 (5) - add new combo
16. 01:37:021 (1) - It is finish first
17. 01:42:978 (9,10) - I see the one that I matched neatly
18. 01:46:170 (10) - add new combo
19. 01:48:936 (5) - ^
20. 01:49:361 (6,7) - I see the one that I matched neatlyv
21. 02:06:063 (6) - add new combo
22. 02:25:319 (6) - ^
23. 02:48:936 (1,2) - I see the one that I matched neatlyv
24. 02:51:702 (x) - add note?
25. 02:51:915 (1) - It is finish first
26. 03:10:638 (6) - add new combo
27. 03:03:829 (5) - ^
28. 03:05:532 (1) - It is finish first
29. 03:17:447 (5) - add new combo
30. 03:19:149 (1) - It is finish first
31. 03:31:063 (5) - add new combo
32. 03:32:766 (1) - It is finish first
33. 03:34:255 (4) - add new combo
34. 03:40:638 (5) - ^
35. 03:44:681 (5) - ^
36. 03:46:063 (9) - remove note
37. 03:46:382 (x) - add note
38. There were many places that you should repeat neatly

1. 00:13:616 (4) - add new combo
2. 00:17:021 (3) - The end does not match in a timing
3. 00:18:723 (5) - add new combo
4. 00:29:574 (2) - ^
5. 00:56:170 (3) - ^
6. There was much difficult placement in Easy
7. 01:50:638 (x) - When I make it a little more, how?
8. I think that a map is short. If it is me, I add Normal or Hard

Haruhi_sama wrote:

tittle应该是 ZUN - Toono Gensou Monogatari

Yui wrote:

Haruhi_sama wrote:

tittle应该是 ZUN - Toono Gensou Monogatari

咦.. 不是 「 遠野幻想物語 ～ Rakonto de Sonorado Pejzago」 么><

噗..用输入法打了下果然是- - ..那么改一下好了><

Haruhi_sama wrote:

有RANK版本的。。。Toonko做的

Haruhi_sama wrote:

好图 没什么问题
只有少了个easy...求GDeasy

Haruhi_sama wrote:

[attachment=0:c4447]Esy.7z[/attachment:c4447]快速完成。里面所有东西都要解压到歌曲目录。我加了slider音效

x847606653 wrote:

KIAI TIME可以移到00:55:797~01:50:691

EASY
00:48:988(6)往上一个GRID
01:11:116(1)NC
01:12:818(1)NC

NOMAL
00:16:223(2)这个NOTE有点别扭，去掉试试？
00:17:925(2)^
01:10:882(1)NC
01:17:499(1)^
01:31:116(1)^
01:14:807(1)^

HARD
HD-1,AR-2,OD-1
02:15:372(2)换一种处理方式，有点跟节奏对不上

LUNATIC
AR-1，HD-1
我MOD不能= =1

就这样，水平有限，加油少年

spboxer3 wrote:

[genenal]
注意一下kiai是必須放在正確timing上的~
看了一下你的post好像Easy是Haruhi_sama做的對嗎0.0 如果是的話要在Tag的部分加上他的ID喔

[Easy]
kiai部份 00:13:563 - 結束 00:15:265 - 沒對齊
kiai部份 01:09:733 - 結束 01:23:244 - ^
kiai部份 01:23:350 - 結束 01:36:861 - ^
kiai部份 01:36:967 - 結束 01:50:638 - ^
01:15:797 (1) - 離中間太遠了~在Easy裡面是會被挑的

[Normal]
kiai同樣需要改
後面多餘的綠線刪掉吧...

[Hard]
一樣kiai部份 不過多了一條
kiai部份 01:36:967 - 結束 on 01:50:638 - 沒對齊
01:22:180 (2) - 太長了 有點overmap了
02:03:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ...不是Hard該出現的東西阿QAQ

[Insane]
和Hard一樣的kiai部份
00:09:201 (4,5) - 這個返回很瞎眼...建議改NC或改排法
00:14:520 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - 這會被罵的
00:17:074 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^個人是不建議這樣的排法 因為真的蠻麻煩的
01:00:052 (4,5,6,7) - 這種真的不好讀...光看就很彆手了所以:(
01:13:669 (4,5,6,7) - 這邊也是一樣摟~
01:22:818 - 這邊可以加一個note 比較不會覺得空空的~
01:50:052 - ^
02:13:457 (6) - 建議排好看一點 不然以後回來看之前的map會覺得很後悔的(如果Ranked的話)
02:17:499 (1) - 最後這轉盤擺的有些不合適...


有些不是紅字的部份就不是一定要改的 但是紅字的就是規則摟~沒改可是會出問題的

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding ur map because of ure request

General:
Why is the beat snap divisor at 1/3. some notes r unsnapped.

Easy:
00:20:478(4) - this kick slider has too many repeats. beginners wont know when this slider will end. so i suggest that to add a slider and end it till 00:20:903 and then add a circle at 00:21:329
00:59:627(1) - add a clap at the end of the slider
01:02:180(2) - add a clap at the beginning of the slider
01:03:882(4) - add a clap
01:04:773(6) - add a clap at the beginning and at the end of the slider
01:06:010(7) - remove the clap
01:16:648(3) - end it at 01:20:052
01:20:903 - add a circle here and make it a NC
01:21:329(2) - remove NC if u follow the suggestion above
01:50:691(1) - this spinner is way too long. beginners wont be able to endure this spin. add circles and sliders instead

Normal:
00:39:201(6) - NC
00:52:818(5,6) - ^ for (5) and spacing
00:58:776(6) - NC
01:13:244(6) - ^
01:26:861(6) - ^
01:40:478(6) - ^

Hard:
00:34:095(1) - Why is the arrow facing the other way?
00:47:712(1) - ^

Lunatic:
00:17:499(4,5) - people may think that (4) is a slider and not a circle and the slider tick cant be seen. i suggest that u move (4) and (5) somewhere else
01:21:755(1,2) - hidden repeat slider
01:48:989(1,2) - ^

this is the best i can do. GL

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

From my queue

Good map!! All suggestions~

[General]
Add the name of the character (I don't know = =) in the tags. Many people search songs with it

[Skin]
You should add a full set of spinner, rather than approach circle only. Or simply request the default skin...
It does not look good on my skin (Marisa Kirisame v1.4 by MLGnom)

[Easy]
00:13:669 (2) - move higher
00:17:074 (2) - ... there is something wrong with the reverse arrow = =
00:53:669 (3) - ^?
00:20:478 (4) - longer, 1reverse
00:57:074 (2,3) - some gap between the sliders
01:43:882 (1,1) - overlap. can read, but does not look good

[Normal]
00:14:520 (5) - remove clap on the end
00:18:350 (3) - clap?
00:30:691 (1) - put the white point at the center
00:51:116 (3,4,5) - recheck spacing
00:53:882 (6) - circle on the white line
00:57:074 (3) - clap on the reverse arrow too?
01:00:478 (8) - ^
01:10:691 (2,7) - ^
01:24:308 (2,7) - ^
01:22:606 (5) - whistle on the head

[Hard]
00:08:563 (1) - reverse arrow is hidden of the previous hitburst
00:10:691 (3,4) - spacing? no need to jump here
01:14:946 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard to read for a Hard
02:03:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...what, it's much harder than Hard.
02:08:989 (2,1,2,3,4) - ... and spacing?

[Lunatic]
00:08:137 (3) - finish
00:13:669 (1) - remove clap
00:14:308 (4) - finish
01:20:265 (2) - whistle