AngelHoney wrote:

濕潤哥就一煞筆

1. AR +1
2. 00:45:578 (3,1) - Change this into a slider. This is a weird beat that is hard to follow. Making that a slider will make it easier for beginners.

1. AR +1

1. The 5% timing sections are still a problem. They are effectively silencing the objects, which is just about unrankable. This is a rhythm game, so the objects should have sound.
2. Consider AR +1. 8 or 9 will work with this difficulty, but 9 seems like it fits more. It's up to you.
3. 00:34:092 (7) - Remove 1 repeat. This'll stop unneeded sliderbreaking.
4. 00:51:835 - Add circle?
5. 01:08:549 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These are way too close together. It's far too hard to read. Space it out more.
6. 01:18:321 (1) - Add 2 repeats, it seems you forgot two.

• 
  I have gotten better at playing, so I'm able to evaluate this difficulty properly now.
  
  This difficulty's strengths are its slider stream jumps, not its circle stream jumps.

1. 00:46:521 (34,1) - This sudden jump in spacing is very frustrating with circles. Either decrease the spacing so the two are touching or turn (33,34) into a slider.
2. 00:56:121 (18) - Remove this circle. It creates a painful circle stream jump that the difficulty would be better off without.
3. 01:28:864 - Add a circle at x:56 y:352. I think you forgot one there
4. 01:51:492 (9,1) - This sudden jump in spacing is very frustrating with circles. Either decrease the spacing so the two are touching or turn (8,9) into a slider.
5. 01:52:178 (8,9) - This sudden jump in spacing is very frustrating with circles. Either decrease the spacing so the two are touching or turn (7,8) into a slider.
6. 01:53:721 (4) - Remove circle. It doesn't fit with the other stacks here.

Charles445 wrote:

I think we can get this ranked soon. Just need a few more changes.

Normal

1. AR +1 Fixed
2. 00:45:578 (3,1) - Change this into a slider. This is a weird beat that is hard to follow. Making that a slider will make it easier for beginners. Fixed

Hard

1. AR +1 Fixed

Hyper

1. The 5% timing sections are still a problem. They are effectively silencing the objects, which is just about unrankable. This is a rhythm game, so the objects should have sound. Fixed
2. Consider AR +1. 8 or 9 will work with this difficulty, but 9 seems like it fits more. It's up to you.
3. 00:34:092 (7) - Remove 1 repeat. This'll stop unneeded sliderbreaking.
4. 00:51:835 - Add circle?
5. 01:08:549 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These are way too close together. It's far too hard to read. Space it out more.Fixed
6. 01:18:321 (1) - Add 2 repeats, it seems you forgot two. Fixed

Fear

• 
  I have gotten better at playing, so I'm able to evaluate this difficulty properly now.
  
  This difficulty's strengths are its slider stream jumps, not its circle stream jumps.

1. 00:46:521 (34,1) - This sudden jump in spacing is very frustrating with circles. Either decrease the spacing so the two are touching or turn (33,34) into a slider.
2. 00:56:121 (18) - Remove this circle. It creates a painful circle stream jump that the difficulty would be better off without.
3. 01:28:864 - Add a circle at x:56 y:352. I think you forgot one there
4. 01:51:492 (9,1) - This sudden jump in spacing is very frustrating with circles. Either decrease the spacing so the two are touching or turn (8,9) into a slider.
5. 01:52:178 (8,9) - This sudden jump in spacing is very frustrating with circles. Either decrease the spacing so the two are touching or turn (7,8) into a slider.
6. 01:53:721 (4) - Remove circle. It doesn't fit with the other stacks here.

Call me back when you make these changes.

Philippines wrote:

Current Score Spread:

Normal [592k] > Hard [1,074k] > Hyper [9,747k] > Fear [18,969k]

I'm really not feeling great with the score distance from Hard and Hyper. D:

1. 00:56:207 (1) - ちょっと空きすぎているので1grid上へ。
2. 01:16:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音量上げてfinishをつけるか、ノーマルサウンドに変えるかでもう少し強調していきたいところです。
3. 01:30:835 (1) - finishよりはwhistleの方が合っています。
4. 01:36:149 (4) - どこの音にも乗っていません。削除してしまって良いと思います。
5. 01:48:321 (1) - 始端にfinish。
6. 01:51:749 (2,3) - ^

1. 00:35:635 (1) - 始端にfinish。
2. 01:18:835 (6) - ^ 終端に。
3. 01:48:321 (2) - ^ 始端に。
4. 01:52:435 (1) - これもノーマルサウンドでfinishつけた方が合っていると思います。

1. 00:06:492 (7,8) - Finish sound fits (8) rather than (7).
2. 01:19:521 (1) - Why not add finish here?
3. 00:32:721 (2,1) - There is too short time after a kick slider having a big jump so it's really difficulty to play here. Hum...try Ctrl+H/J on 00:32:978 (1,2,1,2), and Ctrl+Shift+R on 00:33:664 (1,2,1,2) then rotate by 60°. I guess the flow won't be broken even if you use this pattern instead.
4. 00:42:492 (18) - Add new combo at the downbeat during the stream. It makes the gameplay better.
5. 00:45:235 (19) - ^
6. 00:47:978 (13) - ^
7. 00:50:721 (13) - ^
8. 00:53:464 (16) - ^
9. 01:42:150 (5,1,1) - Add new combo to (5) and remove them from two (1)s.
10. 01:48:321 (3) - Add new combo.

Suzully wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:35:635 (1) - 始端にfinish。
2. 01:18:835 (6) - ^ 終端に。
3. 01:48:321 (2) - ^ 始端に。
4. 01:52:435 (1) - これもノーマルサウンドでfinishつけた方が合っていると思います。

Call me back after fix.

all fixed~ ty

Suzully wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:56:207 (1) - ちょっと空きすぎているので1grid上へ。done
2. 01:16:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音量上げてfinishをつけるか、ノーマルサウンドに変えるかでもう少し強調していきたいところです。。done
3. 01:30:835 (1) - finishよりはwhistleの方が合っています。。done
4. 01:36:149 (4) - どこの音にも乗っていません。削除してしまって良いと思います。。done
5. 01:48:321 (1) - 始端にfinish。。done
6. 01:51:749 (2,3) - ^。done

[Hard]

1. 00:35:635 (1) - 始端にfinish。
2. 01:18:835 (6) - ^ 終端に。
3. 01:48:321 (2) - ^ 始端に。
4. 01:52:435 (1) - これもノーマルサウンドでfinishつけた方が合っていると思います。

[Fear]

1. 00:06:492 (7,8) - Finish sound fits (8) rather than (7).。done
2. 01:19:521 (1) - Why not add finish here?。done
3. 00:32:721 (2,1) - There is too short time after a kick slider having a big jump so it's really difficulty to play here. Hum...try Ctrl+H/J on 00:32:978 (1,2,1,2), and Ctrl+Shift+R on 00:33:664 (1,2,1,2) then rotate by 60°. I guess the flow won't be broken even if you use this pattern instead.
4. 00:42:492 (18) - Add new combo at the downbeat during the stream. It makes the gameplay better.
5. 00:45:235 (19) - ^
6. 00:47:978 (13) - ^
7. 00:50:721 (13) - ^
8. 00:53:464 (16) - ^
9. 01:42:150 (5,1,1) - Add new combo to (5) and remove them from two (1)s.
10. 01:48:321 (3) - Add new combo.
    Fixしなかったところ保留したいです、自分がプレイ時に感じがいいから

Call me back after fix.

Suzully wrote:

[Fear]

1. 00:32:721 (2,1) - There is too short time after a kick slider having a big jump so it's really difficulty to play here. Hum...try Ctrl+H/J on 00:32:978 (1,2,1,2), and Ctrl+Shift+R on 00:33:664 (1,2,1,2) then rotate by 60°. I guess the flow won't be broken even if you use this pattern instead.

Suzully wrote:

Suzully wrote:

[Fear]

1. 00:32:721 (2,1) - There is too short time after a kick slider having a big jump so it's really difficulty to play here. Hum...try Ctrl+H/J on 00:32:978 (1,2,1,2), and Ctrl+Shift+R on 00:33:664 (1,2,1,2) then rotate by 60°. I guess the flow won't be broken even if you use this pattern instead.

I still think this pattern should be fixed. The player will feel it's too sudden and surprising when playing first. You needn't to follow my suggested patten, but please do something you like to make the gameplay better.

Philippines wrote:

wtf is this? ok nevermind, congrats.

Bass wrote:

I kinda disagree having this mapset with Fear difficulty ranked, this is just like some parts feels placed randomly and it feels like 2008 map. Rest of difficulites feels ok enough.

I believe this map could be done better and be more polished.

btw. I am not here to "KILL MAPPERS' SPIRIT" because I myself approve of "mapping is an art" but everything HAVE borders.

Bass wrote:

it feels like 2008 map.