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Neuromonakh Feofan - Feofan

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 октября 2017 г. at 13:54:56

Artist: Neuromonakh Feofan
Title: Feofan
Tags: drum bass
BPM: 190
Filesize: 3672kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. poydem so mnoy (5,5 stars, 540 notes)
Download: Neuromonakh Feofan - Feofan
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AlexTroIIPsy
<3
The map is good (For a multiplayer) but it can be better
There are lots of spacing issues
Its kinda messy too , Some notes feel kinda random sometimes
U need a better organization on the Playfield
i like ur style tho , i hope u'll be a great mapper (If u want to take mapping serious :3 )
Also good luck if u want to reach the top#1 of ur country ^W^
Whenever u want a mod u can ask me

Mod or something like that
Suggestion: Add a 195 bpm timing point on 0 offset and then add the 190 bpm timing point on 307 offset and put the first note on 1/1

Like this one

00:00:622 (2) - hmmm New Combo here :3
00:00:939 (4,5) - Try to put those on the same distance as those 00:00:622 (2,3) -
(Click this one 00:00:622 (2) - And on the top right corner u'll see "Prev/Next" , This shows the distance between the previous note and the next note
The numbers on "Next" should be the same or at least similar to the "Next" of this one 00:00:939 (4) -
00:00:622 (2) - This one is 1,90x
00:00:939 (4) - and this one is 1,42x
OwO
Ok now , 00:00:622 (1,2,3,4,5) - THIS is a pattern u used thats followed by this pattern 00:01:886 (1,2,3) -
00:03:149 (4) - (NC here btw)
00:03:149 (4,5,6,7,8) - This one is the same as this one 00:00:622 (1,2,3,4,5) - but the following pattern is here 00:04:412 (1,2,3,4) -
What do i mean with this , 00:00:622 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:01:886 (1,2,3) - / 00:03:149 (4,5,6,7,8) - and 00:04:412 (1,2,3,4) -
The distance of this note 00:01:254 (5) - to this 00:01:886 (1) - (First 2 patterns) is 1,70 and this one 00:03:781 (8,1) - is 0,24
Its a huge difference , u should at least use something aroung the 1,7 u used b4
(its a good thing that u know how to make patterns tho , Gj)
00:06:307 (4,5) - The distance here ispretty good tho
^W^
Besides the spacing issue , 00:00:622 (1,2,3,4) - Compare this movement to this 00:03:149 (4,5,6,7) -
The first example is kind of a zig zag jump , Its nice and have a good flow
The second one isnt bad , its actually pretty good and have a nice flow too but its not the same flow
This is only the first section of the map and those sounds are pretty similar and repetitive so u should use the same movement on both parts

Now check those 00:01:886 (1,2,3,4) - 00:04:412 (1,2,3,4) - 00:06:939 (5,6,1,2) -
What i said b4 also applies to this pattern and others too (Same section of the song with similar sounds u use a similar pattern)
But not only that , look at the numbers
its 1 2 3 4 / 1 2 3 4 / 5 6 1 2
The pattern is the same but the new combos are different , Put NC's on notes when they need enphasis , when they r the first note a new section of the song or if there isnt anything important to enphasis try to put NC every bit white tick

The big white ticks will almost always appear after 3 normal white ticks
But

Not always , it depends on few settings like this image shows
But u can ignore it , 90% of times it'll be like the first image

00:11:360 (5,6,7,8) - The tripple is too close to the slider
00:12:623 (4,5,6,7) - This one is better for example
Why is it too close?
cuz normal players when they see something like this 00:11:360 (5,6,7,8) - They'll think that the tripple comes right after the the slider but it doesnt , there is a small time gap b4 u should click it
00:15:149 (1,2,3,4) - Same with all others like those
00:34:097 (4,5,6) - This one tho is good , its close to the slider but there is no time gap after the slider ends

00:31:886 (7,8,9) - in this tripple , The last note (9) is a bit further away from 8 compared to 7
They should have the same distance unless u want to give enphasis to a sound UwU
Example OwO:
Imagine that here is a tripple 01:38:359 - (beggining) 01:38:517 - (End) , This imaginary tripple could have the last note a bit futher away from the others (Maybe more than just a bit if u want) because there is a stronger sound here 01:38:517 -

There r more things to talk about but im bad at explaining those ( Hope u understood evertything in this mod , i think Its kinda confusing tbh :c )

In General , u need to improve the aesthetics and maybe a lil bit of rythim
Why rythim?
Here for example:
01:20:043 - 01:20:122 - 01:20:201 - 01:20:280 - 01:20:359 -
All of those could have notes making this a small stream with 5 notes
This song have lots 1/4 beats , Try to pay attention to them
(U can ignore them sometimes tho , its called undermapping if im not making any mistake)
Bad mod btw , i need to get better at modding ;-;
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