This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 25 мая 2012 г. at 13:57:55

Artist: ATB
Title: My Everything
Tags: morphina trance Future Memories Loctav
BPM: 165
Filesize: 5362kb
Play Time: 02:44
Difficulties Available:

1. Insane (5 stars, 396 notes)
2. Loctav's Taiko (4,89 stars, 655 notes)
3. morphina's Easy (2,4 stars, 128 notes)
4. morphina's Insane (5 stars, 392 notes)
5. Normal (4,35 stars, 206 notes)

Download: ATB - My Everything
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map.
Special thanks to morphina (a lot of thanks) and kazumikos. ^ ^
Enjoy!

Easy, morphina`s by morphina
Hinova, Neon by [lln]
lead-in warning added ~
Taiko diff added **

Всякие общие штуки

1. Фон надо обрезать до 1024х768
2. У тебя в начале целых двадцать восемь процентов пустого места. Это больше, чем 20, так что лучше либо замапать, либо обрезать музыку, иначе кто-то рано или поздно набежит с предложением обрезать mp3. Собственно, уже.
3. Выставь превьюшку на какой-нибудь хороший момент, например, 00:48:234, и не забудь это на всех дифках одинаково сделать.

Normal

1. 01:10:027 (3) - вытяни красный узелок вправо и вверх, чтобы не таким острым изгиб был
2. 01:34:754 (1) - свисток на конец
3. 02:35:845 (5) - тоже островатый
4. 02:43:118 (2) - и этот исправь
5. 02:44:572 (3) - илипосле этой ноты закончи киай (ты забыла), или убери его, потому что на других дифках его нет
6. 02:44:936 (1) - а конец спиннера можно заглушить

morphina's

1. 00:58:027 (6) - не очень хорошо: начало слайдера спрятано под другим слайдером
2. 01:34:390 (6) - после этого слайдера слишком короткий перерыв, замапай его
3. 02:44:572 (1) - можно сделать фонтанчик киая, как на остальных дифках

Neon

1. 01:08:572 (8) - вывалилась из стопки, положи поровней. Если не получается, смени Distance snap на 0 и попробуй снова
2. 01:11:572 — фонтанчик надо тут закончить, раз он уж есть
3. 01:21:481 (2) - закончи на белом тике, а то неясно, где он именно кончается
4. 01:31:481 (8) - неплохой, но могут попросить переделать, я б «развернул»
5. 01:38:936 (7) - подровняй ему спинку, а то горбатый
6. 01:57:299 — добавить ноту?
7. 02:12:208 (5) - так и задумано, чтобы она выглядывала из-под предыдущей ноты?
8. 02:22:208 (4) - как-то не очень смотрится
9. 02:35:845 (6) - новое комбо тут, вместо следующего
10. 02:44:754 (1) - сделай финиш потише

Да, насчёт имён дифок. Лучше б под что-то общее подогнать, например, morphina's Easy, Normal, Hard, Morphina's Insane.

TicClick, спасибо, лс отправлен. .)
kazumikos, aha. .)
I will be grateful. ^ ^

Hellzero, thank you.
updated

kazumikos, thank you.
updated

не бросай.

Спс.
Попытаюсь. .)

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General:
Hmm, Neon diff have a different offset with other diffs, plz make them same with each other.
please make your diffs KIAI the same, Hinova have different KIAI with Neon.


Morphina's easy:
Issues
Plz make the diff name, easy to: Easy.
0.5 slidertick is unrankable now, plz make it 1.
others fine.


Hinova:
Hitsound
02:35:481 (2) - clap instead of finish here? sounds better for me.


morphina`:
Issue
ehh....interesting diff name.
slidertick 0.5 again, plz change to 1.

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:51:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think these fit the music very much, playing werid for me and can't find a reason to stream here.
02:07:299 (3,4,5,6) - ...feel a little uncomfortable when playing this. maybe add a note at 02:07:572?
02:10:754 (6) - this slider arrow is a little hidden by the comboburst of 02:10:027 (3), I almost miss at here, maybe move it out for a little bit to make players read this more easily?


Neon:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:10:027 (5) - maybe add a note combo here due to the slider speed change?
others fine for me.

seems these are all for me, pretty good for a 1st map, star and good luck^^

Hello!

morphina's easy
Nymph asking you to capitalize the diff name isn't required.
But he's right about the tick rate, and I suggest tick rate 2.

Hinova
No issues~

morphina's
As Nymph is trying to make you do, kiai doesn't need to be the same. This is a guest diff.
A good amount of your streams don't make any sense, but are just there to.. increase the difficulty of the map?
Also, a good amount of your slider overlays don't look "pretty" in a sense.
The obnoxious spacing changes aren't very... nice.
00:58:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing between 3 and 4? Um, what?
01:09:118 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:18:754 (1,2) - These two sliders are amazingly hideous together. Copy 1 and horizontal flip it as 2.
01:47:845 (1,2) - ^ or remake both sliders to look better
02:04:208 (2,3,4) - ^ pretty sure this can be better as well
02:07:299 (3,4,5) - I would say rearrange, or maybe even stack this triple. The slider before hand is blocking the readability.

Your use of whistle hitsounds at the end of the diff... Why start then?

Neon
Offset is different on this diff compared to the others? Fix this by changing the offset of this one to match the others, or make the other diffs run this offset.

00:53:663 (3,4,1) - This seems more like an anti-jump when being played. Space it out a bit?
01:04:754 (2) - Endpoint isn't snapped to grid. Move up a grid.
01:37:299 (3,4) - stack 4 on 3
01:47:845 (5,6) - horizontal flip 6 from 5
01:52:572 (1,2,3) - is this meant to be a triangle? if so, move 3 two grids over
01:56:027 (1,2,3,4,5) - horizontal flip 5 from 1

Nymph, dkun, thank you!

Offset is different on this diff compared to the others?

oh, done, done, it was a little test.
updated

hi ATB >:3

6th mod from own queue

Timing~

BPM: 165,000
Offset: 48202 (-7)
ok check the mod then change the offset, timings on mod may vary

morphina's

00:51:390 (4) - delete for have a 3 notes stream, the 5 streams note is not following the song as well, a 3 stream and 1 1/2 sounds better.
01:02:754 (1) - make it just 1 repeat and ad a note on 01:03:118 - for simmilar reason on up
01:06:572 (3) - nice double clap pattern, but you are not using it after, delete the clap or use this double clap pattern on the incoming mapset
01:09:481 (6) - clap for keep the double clap :d
01:11:481 - add a green timeline with 80%~90% volume for make the finish on spinner moar niticable, try it sounds good
01:12:027, 01:12:390 - rise up the volume of this 2 green timelines to 50% ?
01:16:936 (5) - the spacing between this and previous circle is not so nice, make it moar spaced?
02:01:208 (4) - delete? xd
02:11:845 (4,1) - unsuitable jump, there is no sound on the song that notice a jump here
02:21:299 ~ ok here the whistle is not a great idea, sounds well but is too louding, just get down the volume a bit, like 40%
02:46:027 - 60% volume :d

Neon

01:12:936 (4) - finish
01:14:390 (5) - finish
01:15:663 (3) - finish on end of slider
01:17:118 (5) - finish
01:17:299 (6) - finish on start of slider

Hinova

00:59:481 (5) - make it part of the next combo
01:26:027 (1) - no whistle on start, whistle on repeat, no whistle on end of slider
01:27:481 (3) - add whistle on repeat
01:32:390 (2) - no whistle
01:34:754 (1) - whistle on start of slider
01:36:754 (4) - whistle
02:25:663 (1) - no clap on repeat

morphina's easy

- >:


well this map is very good on general, good hitsounds, concistant mapset, why you dont ask for moar mods?
for awesome hitsounds and nice song please acept my noob star >.<
I wish can make a taiko diff for you, but Im a bit busy right now, when I be free Ill be back for make a taiko, if you acept of course
good luck xd

ikari_kyon, thank you!
Some changes, expect finishes in Neon.
I think this varation sounds better ^ ^

updated

[General]
offset 48209 => 48214 I think..
Kiai time for each difficulty is different... keep them same

[Morphina]
01:18:390 (timing section) not needed, delete it
01:16:663 (3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217397 feels better for me
02:01:481 (1) - I don't think this is a good idea O.O
02:31:663 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - redo the pentagon shape = maye like this? :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217399

[Neon]
01:11:572 (timing section) not needed, delete it
01:19:754 (timing section) not needed, delete it
01:43:481 (timing section) not needed, delete it

[Hinova]

[Morphina's Easy]


Nice, Sorry I can't star I have no kudosu O.O//

Thank you!
Our offset seems better.
Some changes.

Kiai in my diffs the same now,
morphi`s diffs are guest diffs and have own kiai
updated

:3
wrote u some mod earlier~

Neon

I think this map is good as first map XD.

some suggestions to your placement:

for pattern like this: 01:00:572 (3,4), it's better to make them not touch each other like: or you can also do it like: if you want to keep the distance spacing. it looks much better while playing. there are a lot of them you can try to make some change (01:02:936 (2,3) ,01:07:845 (5,6,7,8),01:09:118 (2,3,4) and so on). just like to say do not rely too much on distance snap (in fact I use distance snap almost only for streams, most of time it's off)

01:16:208 (4) - place it in the same position as 01:14:754 (1) ?
02:30:390 - try rhythm like this: (02:32:208 (3) - this will be removed and you need to rethink the arrangement here)
02:35:299 (3) - 1/2 earlier and stack it with 02:34:936 (2) ?


morphina's

01:36:208 (1) - end it on white tick...blue tick here is weird to me...
01:36:754 (2) - lol this usage of this 3/4 repeat slider is totally wrong imo...where there is a drum should be a NOTE. just make them like
01:43:663 (1) - remove note
01:44:572 - this drum shouldn't be skipped. start the slider here and add a circle on 01:44:390
01:47:845 (1) - end it on white tick


Hinova

good distance snapped map though it's too boring to me...also the rhythm is too simple
but mod can't help cuz at the beginning this diff was designed to be like this...

01:48:936 (5) - new combo


morphina's easy

I think you use too much soft sample for the first and second last part...and the whistle in normal sample sounds really weird on them.I'd like to suggest simple hitsound in easy diff.

Sandpig, thank you!

just like to say do not rely too much on distance snap

In future, yes.

Some changes~
updated

Hi there ! Here is my Mod

General:

- Inconsistency in Tags:
*[Hinova] : morphina trance Future Memories
*[morphina's easy] : morphina trance
*[Neon] : morphina trance Future Memories
*[morphina's] : morphina trance Future Memories

The tags should be the same for every difficult

- As someone previously said the Kia Times should be the same for all he difficults fix it or fix it

[morphina's easy]

01:06:390 (1) - Add clap
Guess its fine

[Hinova]

00:48:209 (1) - Add finish
00:59:845 (2) - ^
01:44:027 (2) - Add whistle
02:09:663 (3) - Add finish
02:16:936 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider

[Neon]

00:48:208 (1) - Add finish
00:59:845 (4) - ^
01:11:481 (8) - ^
01:34:027 (6,7) - Should be like this http://puu.sh/fH3X so remove this 01:34:754 (8)
01:56:572 (4,5) - Add whistle
01:57:663 (6) - Add note whit whistle

[morphina's]

01:47:845 (1) - Make a 1/1 slider http://puu.sh/fH6j

Nice mapset ! Hope it was helpful

Good Luck! And Star!

[Te][Amo], thank you!
updated
Kiai the same now and some changes.

nekonomitsu, thank you for your time anyway. **

O hai, thanks for your request in the queue.
Now it's my task to mod your map. Keep in mind, that these are only suggestions.
There we go.

First of all, I love this song somehow. It's so calm and tranquilizing. *sighs*

[General]

I really needed to lol at the "Please SKIP" notification.
Anyway. I'd start mapping the song from 00:26:390 - on.

[Storyboard]

You should crop the lngleadin.png as far as possible. I felt so free and did so.

So far so good, I also adjusted the SB-code in your storyboard to fix the now appearing size change. Just replace the already existing .osb
http://puu.sh/gb0R

[morphina's easy]

I'd rename this map to "morphina's normal". Since this isn't an Easy diff.
I would also replace the whistle. Maybe you should find a custom hitsound for the normal-hitwhistle.wav
For this map, whistles are just too loud and were very annoying to me here.

00:48:936 (2) - some shape adjustments, maybe? http://puu.sh/gb3Y

416,128,48936,2,0,B|416:214|296:214|296:302,1,220,2|12
120,301,50390,2,0,B|119:214|239:214|239:127,1,220,2|12

00:51:845 (1,2,3,1) - maybe u should do this: http://puu.sh/gb4y
00:54:027 (1,2,3,4,1) - another readjustment. http://puu.sh/gb5M

195,78,54027,5,12
195,253,54754,2,0,B|139:273|91:233,1,110,2|0
8,206,55481,2,0,B|33:152|95:147,1,110,8|0
96,64,56208,2,0,B|142:24|198:44,1,110,2|0
261,107,56936,5,12

00:58:390 (3) - http://puu.sh/gb81

168,256,57663,1,2
343,256,58390,2,0,B|279:184|383:136|343:48,1,220,8|2

00:59:845 (1,2,3,4,1) - readjust/resnap some stuff to make it like this: http://puu.sh/gb8Z
01:06:390 (1) - I'd unstack this one.
01:33:299 (1) - this overlay is ugly, maybe you find a better way?
01:34:027 (2) - another reshape?

272,224,94027,2,0,B|296:184|384:184|384:184|416:120,1,164.999995082617,0|2

01:36:208 (1) - ^
01:37:299 (2,3) - ugly overlay :<
02:27:118 (1,2,3) - please move the (3) and (4): http://puu.sh/gbdO and then http://puu.sh/gbe6

[Hinova]

At all, I don't like these edgy sliders. But this could be, because I think they are ugly in general.
But at all, most sliders are uneven and messy shaped. You should readjust the shapes to make them more even OR you should reshape many of them to create more variety.
When I mentioned, that the slider is strangely shaped, I don't really like to suggest a shape because I don't even know how it was intented to be.

00:51:118 (1,2,3,1,2) - http://puu.sh/gbhe ?
01:14:390 (2,3) - this one looks messy - you should reshape the (2) or move the 3. I suggest the first option.
01:21:663 (4) - shape adjustment

336,120,81663,2,0,B|264:56|240:160|168:96,1,180

01:30:027 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/gbpo ?
01:34:754 (1) - this slider is just not fitting with his shape in the general concept of such an edgy map.
01:39:845 (4,5) - remove (5) and add a return to (4)? plays way better.
01:40:572 (1,2,3,4) - do this maybe: http://puu.sh/gbqy
01:50:754 (1) - should be reshaped, too.
01:54:027 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/gbqX ?
01:56:572 (4) - messy shape.
02:04:208 (2,3,4) - 02:04:208 (2,3,4) - ?
02:06:027 (2) - messy shape.
02:06:027 (2,3,4) - spacing.
02:10:027 (4) - messy shape.
02:12:572 (4) - ^
02:14:027 (1) - move the slider end point one grid up. (grid level 3)
02:16:936 (1) - messy shape.
02:21:299 (3) - ^
02:28:208 (4) - snap with shift-key to (3)
02:30:027 (2) - messy shaped. And move it a bit to the left.

At all, many patterns seem unadjusted and chaotic. Maybe you should try to move some of them to create a way more wonderful pattern (especially within the combos)

[Neon]

This one is far better mapped. I like it. But some stuff was pretty disturbing. I try to point up most of them. Most of them are hitobject-timing stuff, some kick sliders were just not fitting to the music.
Also you should reduce spacing between objects with a 1/4 timing snap to each other. Some sliders need remastering to be perfect.
All in all, decent work. Keep it up.

01:04:208 (1,2,3) - u should use this timing.
01:08:936 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/gbBI ?
01:20:572 (9) - messy shaped.
01:22:390 (5) - perfect the shape.
01:26:936 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing is wrong here. maybe do this? http://puu.sh/gbCQ
01:31:118 (1,2,3) - move them up a bit.
01:33:118 (2,3,4) - reduce distance spacing within the triplets (to x0.9 maybe?)
01:34:027 (1,2,3) - ^
01:38:936 (3) - perfect the shape.
01:44:027 (6) - move it down a bit?
01:49:481 (2,3,4) - this looks pretty messy. maybe you should move the 4 or think of anything better.
01:53:118 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/gbEP ?
02:02:299 (2) - remove?
02:07:663 (3,4,5) - reduce spacing inbetween.
02:11:118 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/gbFO ?
02:12:390 (6) - messy shaped.
02:24:118 (7,8) - reduce spacing.
02:27:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/gbGp ?
02:30:390 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/gbHk ? also hitsounds sound odd here, maybe you check this.
02:33:481 (2,3,4) - reduce spacing.
02:39:663 (10,2,3,4) - this pattern looks uneven to me.

[morphina's]

Please name it "morphina's insane" or something. This name seems so incomplete to me ;___;

All in all, the diff plays pretty strange. Some parts are overmapped. Let me point out stuff I've seen so far.
Same issue than in [Neon]. Reduce the spacing within 1/4 patterns.
I don't want to go too deep here because my playing skills are limited that I can't really decide on this map, if it's just me or if the pattern really plays strange.

00:51:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - overmapped.
01:03:481 (4,5) - inaccurate timing.
01:06:027 (2,3,4) - ugly overlay
01:09:663 (7) - move the 7 to the middle of 5 6 and 8
01:32:936 (3,1) - inaccurate timing. http://puu.sh/gbOy
01:35:208 - remove break.
01:36:208 (1) - end slider on white tick.
01:36:208 (1) - seems overmapped to me.
01:44:390 (8) - inaccurate timing.
01:47:845 (1) - end slider on white tick.
01:59:481 (1,2) - remaster this overlap.
02:01:299 (5,1) - unstack.
02:21:299 and ongoing - eww, this whistles. They are ugly on this song. ;__;
02:25:663 (1) - change slider direction to perfect the pattern.
02:31:663 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing!


That's all I like to mention. This map has potential. Just try to do your best to perfect every pattern and slider shape and I guess you'll get this to the next level.
Good luck!

Hi, requested from modding queue...

General

- Kiai time for 4 mapsets are not consistent - http://puu.sh/gfkQ

morphina's easy

00:50:390(3) - at the end of the slider, remove finish.
00:56:936(1) - remove finish
00:59:845(1) - ^
01:02:754(1) - ^
02:26:027 - remove circle?

Hinova

01:04:754 - add a circle here

morphina's insane

01:35:027 - remove break here...


In the end, I found that your insane have many overmapped notes, so please fix it....
Now, I shall take my leave....

Loctav, hillaryzx, thank you!

..updated Hinova (oh, i believe it is better now)
Other diffs we will update later.

after a long time..
updated

Hello~

morphina's diff

01:34:936 - ~ 01:36:027 - : boring~

01:55:118 (1) - : cancel new combo

02:01:481 (1) - : hard plz change

02:26:572 (1,2) - : I think it's so far

02:24:754 (2) - delete whistle

02:39:299 (2) - delete whistle

02:42:208 (2) - : delete whistle

Neon diff

01:10:572 (6) - : move x 160, y 128

01:41:118 (2) - : so close

02:02:390 (2,3,4) - : litte far ( Just I think )

02:05:118 (4,5,6) - ^

02:43:663 (1,2,3) - ^

thx~

hello~[lln]:) MOD></



morphina's easy
✩00:54:027(1)-1grid down
✩00:56:936(1)-1grid outer
✩00:59:845(1)-^
✩01:02:754(1)-1grid left
✩01:19:845(2)-^
✩01:37:663(3)-^
✩01:54:754(3)-1grid right
✩02:00:572(6)-1grid down
✩02:22:754(3)-^
✩02:26:390(5)-1grid left
✩02:28:208(2)-1grid down
✩02:35:845(1)-^



Hinova
✩00:49:663(4)-1grid down http://puu.sh/hDEI
✩00:56:572(6)-^
✩00:57:663(2)-1grid left
✩00:59:845(2)-1grid outer
✩01:04:936(5)-1grid down
✩01:06:027(1)-1grid outer
✩01:16:572(2)-1grid down
✩01:20:754(2)-^
✩01:22:936(6)-^
✩01:25:299(4)-^
✩01:31:118(5)-1grid outer
✩01:41:118(2)-^
✩01:49:299(2)-1grid down
✩01:50:390(4)-1grid right
✩01:55:499(1)-1grid down
✩02:00:572(5)-1grid outer
✩02:02:027(2)-^
✩02:03:118(2)-1grid down
✩02:04:754(2)-^
✩02:10:754(5)-^
✩02:11:845(2)-1grid outer
✩02:20:936(2)-1grid left
✩02:25:299(6)-2grid outer
✩02:27:481(3)-1grid right
✩02:30:754(3)-1grid down
✩02:35:481(2)-1grid right
✩02:36:936(4)-^
✩02:38:027(2)-1grid outer



I am sorry to be poor at Mod　TAT

Nice MAP~<3

O hai.

Download: ATB - My Everything ([lln]) [Loctav's Taiko].osu

Please remove storyboard on this Taiko diff and add this background template (only for this difficulty)

For this, you need to paste the content of the .osb file to each dedicated places in every single .osu file.
Just replace the whole [Events] part of each .osu with the content of the .osb.

After that, open the Taiko difficulty, switch to "Design" tab and click "Diff. specific" - after that, you can add the Taiko template.
Don't forget to delete the .osb then

After that, do a full submit.



Please inform me for incoming mods.
If you need further assistance, tell me. I'll help you.

Loctav, thank you! * *

Please inform me for incoming mods.

I understand, I will.
And so..

Added Taiko diff from Loctav.
full submitted
Some changes in osu diffs will be later.

hi, will try to give suggestion on arrangement etc
red:must fix

general: weird kiai time lol
difficulty spread was ..., why 2 same level insane?(almost same score also) especially one is from your guest who made a easy as well...

comment: awesome effort had been done for a first mapper

uncheck the letterbox during breaks in the storyboard option for all diffs.


easy
plz dont use so much spinner next time
00:54:754 (2,3,4) - these were somehow funny to me
01:32:572 (4) - make like how slider 3 was made after 2
make the spinner end at 2:46,027 thats where other diff. ends

hinova
00:56:209 (5,6,7) - get rid of these... too much for this diff
01:39:845 (4) - change the direction where the repeat goes, cause may lead player to think : is there 1 more repeat?
02:44:936 (1) - silence this spinner plz

Insane
00:56:208 (3,4) - grid those down a bit would look prettier
02:19:299 (3,4,5,1,2) - could make all these a antijump
delay the last spinner by 1 tick, add a note there...

neon
01:02:936 (2) - 01:58:208 (2) - third dot could grid right a bit to blanket the note better
01:58:936 (4) - same
do some jumps will make this diff even better

thats it , good luck on ranking

Add "Loctav" to the tags.

No kds for this, please.

L_P, thank you!
Some changes in my diffs.
Morphi`s diffs.. later.

Loctav, done.

>_<
I wish i could have more time for this.

Request from my modding queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[General]
The lead in is so long , lol ! But interesting?

[Morphina's Easy]
01:26:027,01:36:180,02:45:999's blue line have effect ?!

00:54:754 (2,3) -touch each other almost

[Hinova]
Most of the problems is slider shape not very nice

00:56:572 (6) - clap
01:00:936 (4) - not beautiful
01:10:027 (4) - ^
01:21:663 (4) - ^
02:14:754 (2) - ^
02:25:663 (1) - ^
02:43:118 (1) - not symmetry

[Morphina's Insane]
I think ... OD-1 will easier

00:57:481 (5,6) - touch each other almost
01:02:754 (1) - finish at start ?
02:07:663 (6) - cover completely

[Neon]
01:11:572,01:43:481's green line ?!

00:56:754 (6,4) - cover completely ?!
01:04:208 (1,2) - touch each other,you can let (1) curve


good song
and sorry to my poor English