Hey hey hey its meThank you very much !01:09:780 (5) - I think you could make this into a short slider that ends on 01:09:983 and it would better fit the sounds + not be too hard for a cup difficulty i prefer to keep a simple timeline, adding a short slider will create a small jump to (1) that is stronger than 01:11:604 (5,1) -
01:19:104 (4) - I would like to see this note on the opposite side of the previous (3) where the previous (2) is and then move this 01:19:509 (5,6,1) - section farther right, creating a more flowing jump that also emphasizes the loud sound here 01:19:104 (4) - ex: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10473416 (might still need tweaking for distances) sure00:00:861 (3,4) - I feel like this distance should be farther spread, especially given the spacing used here 00:01:874 (6,1) - and here 00:03:495 (6,1) - they are not the same, we can clearly hear that the voice is different at 00:01:874 (6,1) -
00:38:969 (5,6,1) - This feels very uncomfortable to hit, the spacing between 00:39:172 (6,1) - is very far. I personally think that removing the note on 00:39:172 (6) - would be the best bet as I don't think that needs to be mapped in a salad and it isn't a very important note flow-wise either done
01:05:118 (8,1) - jump here is too far nerfed
01:05:624 (2,3,4,5,6) - this section feels so awkward and i dont think it fits the song, remap this using maybe repeat sliders as there are 3 sounds in each part added a circle for triplets
01:06:943 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - It feels very weird rhythmically to go from mapping the heavy drums in the first section 01:06:943 (1,2,3,4,5) - to mapping the violin without drums here 01:08:564 (1,2,3,4) - , I would make this more consistent and choose one the violin on the second part are clearly stronger and more highlighted than before, I prefer to keep them for more diversity.
01:24:577 (9,1) - reduce this spacing just a tiny bit nerfed from 2.60x to 2.50x
01:30:050 (4,1) - feels like a far jump for a calm section well you can pass it easily without dash so I think it's fine
01:57:010 (7,1) - jump between these notes feels far because of the notes prior being very quiet, it seems like a misleading jump that could be reduced but it might also just be good to keep the jump the way it is to maybe fit the song better i want to keep this spacing in order to create a "surprise" effect that fit well with the song.00:00:861 (3,4) - same as salad same thing
00:16:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - this feels inconsistent as this 00:16:672 (1,2) - and this 00:17:483 (4,5) - are the same sound but are completely different patterns, I would suggest keeping the first pattern throughout by using it in the 2nd section and doing something different that spans from left>right with these 4 sliders 00:18:293 (1,2,3,4) - It is not inconsistent because the timeline is the same than 00:06:942 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:10:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc. I use this timeline to highlight the voice. You need to take it as a whole pattern, not sound by sound.
00:22:753 (4,1) - I know this looks nice for editor aesthetics but i think it should be reduced slightly in distance for a friendlier walk pattern w/ no dash needed, as it is right now you can just barely hit it w/o dashing nerfed from 1.50x to 1.40x
01:18:192 add another note here i would say 1/4 HDash on platters are unrankable
01:24:374 (5,6) - I would like to make this into a repeat slider utilizing that sound in the middle of 5-6 would be inconsistent, I use 1/4 for violon sound only.
I'll come back and edit this with Rain/Turii mod tommorow as it is already late tonight