Heya.
Don't really care for the kudos, I'm just doing an inspection.
I think the extras are just a bunch of fun.
I don't really mind the hard, but the aesthetics could generally be polished up (a lot actually so I'd go ask for one of those hehe)
I also applied my aesthetics modder to the mapset, here's the output
Play nice kids, it's just a GAME!!!
(srsly tho)
Don't really care for the kudos, I'm just doing an inspection.
Play NOW!!!Difficulty name is misleading. I don't physically need to play now, this is clickbait
Rhythmic Choices
Rhythmic Choices
- 00:10:803 (1,2,3) - 01:22:927 (1,2,3) - I know exactly what you are mapping to, but those sounds aren't that long, they are 1/1 long. It's unhearable once you hear it the first time. This kinda rhythm. Shouldn't be hard to adjust the slider shapes to fit with it.
- 00:23:393 (5) - I think it would be cool to remove this note as it makes the end of the last jump section feel more impactful. It just ends pretty strongly instead of tapping more and it feels better to myself. Not an important change, but I'd like it anyway. (You could also just change 00:23:238 (4) - into a slider if you wished)
- 00:54:481 (1) - I'm a fan of ending this slider slightly earlier at 00:55:103 - and putting a note at 00:55:259 - since you get to actually tap the vocal that leads into the kiai, and the slider ends on a previously missed sound. See this or this for ideas of how to do that nicely.
- 01:03:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - (this is gonna pop back up in spacing I'm sure). These 3/4 sliders are kiiinda out of place. It would actually follow the vocals perfectly if 01:03:652 (4) - was 1/2 long, and you could keep the first one at 3/4 length then. This rhythm.
I'm not really sure of the reason of the slowing sliders anyway, feels kinda random since it was never done before. - 01:07:384 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1) - Did you really decide to copypaste this whole section when it ends differently? 00:59:300 (1,2,1,2,1) - and 01:09:249 (1,2,1,2,1) - have clearly different lyrics and pitches to play with, at least try a new jump pattern with those or rhythm with those, something to distinguish the two.
Spacing and stuff like that:
00:19:974 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Those two notes here are way lower spaced than every other case in this section that is before a spaced triple. See: 00:15:000 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 00:17:798 (1,2,1,2,3) - Would be nice to space them a bit more.
00:25:259 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - These confuse me for spaced triples nearly every time hahaa. I think people would appreciate if you distinguished the look of those from the spaced triples before. Perhaps increasing spacing only just a little to this spacing which would keep the idea and not be confusing either. Or you could stack them, it's up to you.
00:28:212 (1,2,3) - and 00:29:456 (1,2,3) - this section of the music is relatively quiet and calm but these jumps feel really hard and quick. It's fine to have the smaller, easier jumps in the section, but only these would I say should be toned down a little. There isn't much backing I think to make them so hard.
00:50:595 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Normally I'm meant to complain about PP jumps here, but really I'm just sad this doesn't have symettry. It's so close to being symettric all around! I actually went ahead and [url=https://puu.sh/yU4ic/cb95000bff.osu] made a .osu with just that part of the map,
but with the symmetries fixed[/url] so you can just put that in the map here and it'll look more cool. (oh it increases the SR by 0.02 but that shouldnt matter)
01:01:476 (3,4,1) - This tiny spacing in this kiai makes me cry inside a little.
01:03:031 (1,2) - 01:03:652 (4,5) - WOAH THESE 1/4 SNAPS WOAH CALM DOWN
01:14:844 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Personally, I like this kinda stuff. It's awkward to play, with the big jump to the 6 note, but a tiny one to the start of the star. However, this map has had relatively easy patterns, and this doesn't seem to fit into that. Moving the star over and angling it in a way like this image fits more neatly into the previous style of the map. As said again, I like this kinda stuff, but it just is awkward given the rest of the map is pretty much straight forward stuff.
01:24:948 (2,3,4,5) - You put really strong hitsounds on all of these and the music is pretty climatic at this point. Why make the first three notes some of the smallest spacing in the entire map, right at the end, when it's meant to be really epic? This end feels more sad than epic to me. Put some JUMPS IN THERE!
Dub's Light Insane
00:09:404 (1,2,3) - Wouldn't it make more sense to continue the rhythm of 00:08:316 (1,2,3) - just before it? The note and extended slider? That's the sound that the guitar is making to me. Actually it's the only rhythm I can hear that you would want to map to. I is confused.
00:32:253 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - haha rhythms like this confuse my fingers I should quit this game
00:34:274 (4,1,2,3) - Any way you could make the spacing on these consistent?
00:42:513 (3,4,5,6,1) - I like the idea of the two stacks here. However you have put strong hitsounds on them. So if you're gonna stack them, then I'd recommend you space the stacks further, otherwise the strong hitsounds feel out of place and wasted. Even just this much more distance at least makes sense with the hitsounding.
00:34:274 (4,1,2,3) - Any way you could make the spacing on these consistent?
00:42:513 (3,4,5,6,1) - I like the idea of the two stacks here. However you have put strong hitsounds on them. So if you're gonna stack them, then I'd recommend you space the stacks further, otherwise the strong hitsounds feel out of place and wasted. Even just this much more distance at least makes sense with the hitsounding.
tohoo! (tohooz insane)
I must be missing map specific hitsounds because this hitsounding is weird to me
But I guess if it's your thing and I'm not missing any then go for it
(00:32:409 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You really like claps dont ya?)
But I guess if it's your thing and I'm not missing any then go for it
I think the extras are just a bunch of fun.
I don't really mind the hard, but the aesthetics could generally be polished up (a lot actually so I'd go ask for one of those hehe)
I also applied my aesthetics modder to the mapset, here's the output
Lab Aesthetics Mod!
Results given in [x, y] formats
[Cuc's Advanced!]
Object at 00:27:746 - should be placed at: [451, 63] currently at: [452, 64] to move in line with slider at time 00:27:901 -
Object at 00:57:746 - should be placed at: [409, 383] currently at: [408, 384] to move in line with slider at time 00:58:057 -
[Dubturt's Light Insane!]
Object at 00:06:450 - should be placed at: [135, 339] currently at: [136, 340] to move in line with slider at time 00:06:917 -
Object at 01:03:497 - should be placed at: [287, 349] currently at: [291, 351] to blanket slider body at time 01:03:031 -
[Easy!]
Object at 00:26:347 - should be placed at: [471, 239] currently at: [472, 240] to move in line with slider at time 00:25:725 -
[FiddleBlue's Extra!]
Object at 00:25:414 - should be placed at: [385, 364] currently at: [387, 360] to blanket slider body at time 00:24:948 -
Object at 00:27:901 - should be placed at: [163, 243] currently at: [160, 246] to blanket slider body at time 00:27:435 -
Object at 00:57:901 - should be placed at: [306, 213] currently at: [304, 210] to blanket slider body at time 00:57:435 -
[Fruity's Extra!]
Object at 00:14:378 - should be placed at: [403, 103] currently at: [403, 106] to blanket slider body at time 00:13:911 -
Object at 00:21:062 - should be placed at: [203, 138] currently at: [204, 139] to move in line with slider at time 00:21:217 -
Object at 00:42:823 - should be placed at: [396, 272] currently at: [400, 272] to blanket slider body at time 00:43:134 -
[Hard!]
Object at 00:54:171 - should be placed at: [255, 129] currently at: [255, 133] to blanket slider body at time 00:54:481 -
Object at 01:06:295 - should be placed at: [372, 144] currently at: [377, 143] to blanket slider body at time 01:05:829 -
[July's Normal!]
Object at 00:07:072 - should be placed at: [366, 45] currently at: [367, 46] to move in line with slider at time 00:06:450 -
Object at 00:10:025 - should be placed at: [279, 33] currently at: [280, 34] to move in line with slider at time 00:09:559 -
[pacsu's Beginner!]
Object at 00:27:590 - should be placed at: [131, 96] currently at: [130, 97] to move in line with slider at time 00:28:212 -
[Play NOW!!!!]
Object at 00:15:777 - should be placed at: [369, 337] currently at: [369, 334] to blanket slider body at time 00:16:243 -
Object at 00:16:088 - should be placed at: [369, 337] currently at: [370, 334] to blanket slider body at time 00:16:243 -
Object at 00:24:171 - should be placed at: [353, 368] currently at: [354, 369] to move in line with slider at time 00:24:326 -
Object at 00:38:160 - should be placed at: [311, 328] currently at: [310, 329] to move in line with slider at time 00:37:538 -
Object at 00:39:248 - should be placed at: [176, 155] currently at: [177, 156] to move in line with slider at time 00:39:715 -
[tohooz's Insane!]
Object at 00:04:119 - should be placed at: [272, 144] currently at: [273, 145] to move in line with slider at time 00:03:652 -
Object at 00:06:450 - should be placed at: [392, 92] currently at: [386, 90] to blanket slider body at time 00:06:139 -
Object at 00:08:005 - should be placed at: [429, 200] currently at: [428, 203] to blanket slider body at time 00:08:316 -
Object at 00:08:782 - should be placed at: [429, 200] currently at: [428, 203] to blanket slider body at time 00:08:316 -
Object at 00:09:403 - should be placed at: [228, 315] currently at: [231, 317] to blanket slider body at time 00:08:937 -
Object at 00:26:968 - should be placed at: [501, 105] currently at: [502, 106] to move in line with slider at time 00:26:658 -
Object at 00:33:652 - should be placed at: [140, 212] currently at: [142, 214] to blanket slider body at time 00:33:186 -
Object at 00:39:715 - should be placed at: [147, 125] currently at: [144, 126] to blanket slider body at time 00:40:025 -
Object at 00:49:352 - should be placed at: [293, 327] currently at: [292, 330] to blanket slider body at time 00:49:041 -
Object at 00:57:435 - should be placed at: [439, 100] currently at: [443, 100] to blanket slider body at time 00:57:746 -
Object at 01:00:233 - should be placed at: [493, 176] currently at: [497, 177] to blanket slider body at time 00:59:922 -
Object at 01:19:663 - should be placed at: [349, 74] currently at: [353, 76] to blanket slider body at time 01:19:818 -
Stacked objects won't work correctly often, so take those with salt.
[Cuc's Advanced!]
Object at 00:27:746 - should be placed at: [451, 63] currently at: [452, 64] to move in line with slider at time 00:27:901 -
Object at 00:57:746 - should be placed at: [409, 383] currently at: [408, 384] to move in line with slider at time 00:58:057 -
[Dubturt's Light Insane!]
Object at 00:06:450 - should be placed at: [135, 339] currently at: [136, 340] to move in line with slider at time 00:06:917 -
Object at 01:03:497 - should be placed at: [287, 349] currently at: [291, 351] to blanket slider body at time 01:03:031 -
[Easy!]
Object at 00:26:347 - should be placed at: [471, 239] currently at: [472, 240] to move in line with slider at time 00:25:725 -
[FiddleBlue's Extra!]
Object at 00:25:414 - should be placed at: [385, 364] currently at: [387, 360] to blanket slider body at time 00:24:948 -
Object at 00:27:901 - should be placed at: [163, 243] currently at: [160, 246] to blanket slider body at time 00:27:435 -
Object at 00:57:901 - should be placed at: [306, 213] currently at: [304, 210] to blanket slider body at time 00:57:435 -
[Fruity's Extra!]
Object at 00:14:378 - should be placed at: [403, 103] currently at: [403, 106] to blanket slider body at time 00:13:911 -
Object at 00:21:062 - should be placed at: [203, 138] currently at: [204, 139] to move in line with slider at time 00:21:217 -
Object at 00:42:823 - should be placed at: [396, 272] currently at: [400, 272] to blanket slider body at time 00:43:134 -
[Hard!]
Object at 00:54:171 - should be placed at: [255, 129] currently at: [255, 133] to blanket slider body at time 00:54:481 -
Object at 01:06:295 - should be placed at: [372, 144] currently at: [377, 143] to blanket slider body at time 01:05:829 -
[July's Normal!]
Object at 00:07:072 - should be placed at: [366, 45] currently at: [367, 46] to move in line with slider at time 00:06:450 -
Object at 00:10:025 - should be placed at: [279, 33] currently at: [280, 34] to move in line with slider at time 00:09:559 -
[pacsu's Beginner!]
Object at 00:27:590 - should be placed at: [131, 96] currently at: [130, 97] to move in line with slider at time 00:28:212 -
[Play NOW!!!!]
Object at 00:15:777 - should be placed at: [369, 337] currently at: [369, 334] to blanket slider body at time 00:16:243 -
Object at 00:16:088 - should be placed at: [369, 337] currently at: [370, 334] to blanket slider body at time 00:16:243 -
Object at 00:24:171 - should be placed at: [353, 368] currently at: [354, 369] to move in line with slider at time 00:24:326 -
Object at 00:38:160 - should be placed at: [311, 328] currently at: [310, 329] to move in line with slider at time 00:37:538 -
Object at 00:39:248 - should be placed at: [176, 155] currently at: [177, 156] to move in line with slider at time 00:39:715 -
[tohooz's Insane!]
Object at 00:04:119 - should be placed at: [272, 144] currently at: [273, 145] to move in line with slider at time 00:03:652 -
Object at 00:06:450 - should be placed at: [392, 92] currently at: [386, 90] to blanket slider body at time 00:06:139 -
Object at 00:08:005 - should be placed at: [429, 200] currently at: [428, 203] to blanket slider body at time 00:08:316 -
Object at 00:08:782 - should be placed at: [429, 200] currently at: [428, 203] to blanket slider body at time 00:08:316 -
Object at 00:09:403 - should be placed at: [228, 315] currently at: [231, 317] to blanket slider body at time 00:08:937 -
Object at 00:26:968 - should be placed at: [501, 105] currently at: [502, 106] to move in line with slider at time 00:26:658 -
Object at 00:33:652 - should be placed at: [140, 212] currently at: [142, 214] to blanket slider body at time 00:33:186 -
Object at 00:39:715 - should be placed at: [147, 125] currently at: [144, 126] to blanket slider body at time 00:40:025 -
Object at 00:49:352 - should be placed at: [293, 327] currently at: [292, 330] to blanket slider body at time 00:49:041 -
Object at 00:57:435 - should be placed at: [439, 100] currently at: [443, 100] to blanket slider body at time 00:57:746 -
Object at 01:00:233 - should be placed at: [493, 176] currently at: [497, 177] to blanket slider body at time 00:59:922 -
Object at 01:19:663 - should be placed at: [349, 74] currently at: [353, 76] to blanket slider body at time 01:19:818 -
Stacked objects won't work correctly often, so take those with salt.
Play nice kids, it's just a GAME!!!
(srsly tho)