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YURiKA - Shiny Ray -TV size-

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Akitoshi
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Joined August 2014
Akitoshi
SPOILER

Pachiru wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:13:261 - Not fan about the break here, especially when it can be mapped. i find mapping vocals is lame here :< Instruments were really weak
  2. 01:15:884 (5,2) - Avoid this overlap, it's kind of bothering snapping was different so /shrug

ShogunMoon wrote:

  • Aki's Normal
  1. add preview point xd blame tristan xd
  2. 00:08:015 (1) - why this isn't a finish like before? also blame tristan
  3. 01:12:278 (4) - nc? for the sake of measurement maybe not

Marianna wrote:

Normal
  1. 00:08:015 (1,2) - It would be really good if you followed the sequence you followed in 00:02:769 (1,1) - since they are the same violin sounds, so there is no reason to change it right here. 00:02:769 (1,1,1,2) - Making them equal would give the session more consistency. | 00:09:163 (3) - The same thing applies here, you used a different form in the two previous sequences 00:03:917 (2,3,2,3) - . You can say that you changed here because of Finish, however, you also used finish in 00:03:917 (2) - I can get your point, but as the song is really repetitive on intro, I wanted to add few variation on 2nd batch of loop

  2. 00:28:343 (4) - I do not really understand what you're following. If you are following the vocals something like that would be much better since you have used this to follow the vocals in another part of the song 00:31:622 (1,2,3,4) - .
    Actually I heard this in 25% and I got to hear the background beat, so this is completely optional. yea, gonna consider it

  3. 00:52:769 (1) - It's something that would not change much, but it would be great if it end in 00:54:081 - since it would emphasize the vocal and you could map an important beat of the song here 00:54:573 - ok

  4. 01:25:556 (4) - How about an NC to emphasize the end of the song and follow the consistency of the other diffs? sure

Milan- wrote:

aki¿s normal
-00:12:606 (3) - 3/2 would be nice here too, cuz melody ends at 00:13:097 - ye
-01:09:655 (2,3,4,1) - mabye liek http://puu.sh/y5tJq/0792cac416.jpg did sth

Shiratoi wrote:

[akitoshi's normal]
00:04:409 (3) - maybe start this note here 00:04:573 - since it sounds like youre following the violin? applies to 00:04:573 - as well there's violin on my current place tho
00:12:606 (3) - agree with mod above, 3/2 sounds much better imo since the more prominent sound is at 00:13:097 - ya
00:30:638 - make this clickable as well because of these 00:30:966 (3,4) - or make 1/1 reverse slider because of similar sound? i don't think i need to make this clickable as song isn't that intense yet
01:01:622 (3) - maybe move the slider by half a beat to the right and add a note here 01:01:622 - cuz 01:01:786 - is super noticeable and i dont think youre following the vocals for the whole kiai (01:00:474 (1) - ?) vocals is confused
00:58:343 (2,3) - maybe change to sliders?? or add a 1/2 slider here 01:05:065 - . idk something to differentiate between these two since 01:04:737 (5,6) - is obviously more prominent not my taste :<
01:15:556 (4,5) - this would also work as sliders too imo since sound is similar to 01:14:901 (3) - avoiding slider spam
01:21:458 (1) - make the rhythm like 01:16:212 (1) - for consistency? as explained on prev mod, for variation as it's so repetitive

Realazy wrote:

[Akitoshi's Normal]

00:57:196 (5) - i think it'd be better to turn this into a 1/1 slider since, unlike 00:55:884 (3) -, the sliderhead is on vocals, so shortening the slider to follow the drums sounds a bit weird let me think about this
01:02:278 (4,5) - i suggest turning this into another 1/1 slider as the vocals are pronounced the same as 01:01:622 (3) - and it'd also give a bit more rest for newer players considering the next pattern is much harder circles are easier than sliders
01:05:065 (6) - a 1/2 slider would probably give a better effect here to emphasize how the music stops instantly on the red tick hell ye

thanks bois

sotarks add vid on my d pls
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54491
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
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[Metadata]
Title:Shiny Ray -TV size-
TitleUnicode:Shiny Ray -TV size-
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA
Creator:Sotarks
Version:Akitoshi's Normal
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:little witch academia LWA opening op tv size
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Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Sotarks
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fixed some stuff guys, really busy atm can't get through everyone to reply, but checked everything! if you guys has concers feel free to poke me in forum pm
fixed the time +15 offset looks better
added video to rizen's
updated all diffs!
map is ready to go
Daycore
918 posts
Joined January 2015
Daycore
Hello! ~ M4M / Map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/662778

Sorry if I wrote something wrong because English is not my main language

Akitoshi's Normal
00:39:506 (1) - I think it looks better
00:44:752 (1,2) - I don't know but I think that these sliders looks odd, can Akitoshi make.. um.. beautiful sliders here?
01:13:276 (6,3) - Maybe stack this slider with 6th circle?

Rizen's Hard
00:08:686 (3,4) - I don't know but I think that it's hard to read
01:06:719 (4,1) - This slider looks bad, so make something like this ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9410035
01:08:194 (6,1,3) - Stack the end of the 3rd slider with the end of the 6th slider

Good luck with map! ;)
Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Nao Tomori
[extra]
00:07:375 (4,5,6) - wtf is this lol

just put circle > triple into the repeat. also the drum clap on the blue tick sounds really off

00:29:506 (2) - delete, theres nothing important here to map. lower density in calm part is nicer

00:30:981 (7,8) - slider here for same reason..

00:38:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can u make the rotation in the different direction from the previous pattern cuz different instrument?

01:00:981 (2,3,4) - ctrl g rhythm is much better with the vocals

why the fuck are all the sliders in the kiai so curved??
looks like ass

01:25:571 - dude nice strong beat on slider end
[insane]
00:56:883 (2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is literally not following anything, can u follow vocals properly?
http://puu.sh/y8QJJ/4740559773.jpg from 00:56:391 (1) -

01:03:276 (2,4) - this looks so overly curved compared like everything else wtf

[rizen]
00:03:932 (1) - u can put like small jumpps on these things imo, still fine on this diff.

try and reduce the rhythm density a bit on the more 1/2 slider spammy parts. compare 00:24:916 - to aki's diff, it's way more dense lol

same with the kiai. basically constant 1/2 gaps is a bit too much considering aki uses 1/1 everywhere. try and add 1/1 gaps every 2 measures at the very least, a bit more and it would be optimal.

00:59:178 (1,2,3,4) - for example can be a 1/1 slider into a 1/1 gap > 1/2 slider > circle. or 00:57:211 (4) - can be deleted
or 01:02:784 (4) -
and so on

[aki]
00:29:014 (1,2) - tbh circle only for 1 sounds better. and 2 oversimplifies imo, try and make it more dense a bit

00:31:637 (1,2,3,4) - compare to this

00:54:260 - tbh end spinner here
Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Sotarks

Naotoshi wrote:

[extra]
00:07:375 (4,5,6) - wtf is this lol

just put circle > triple into the repeat. also the drum clap on the blue tick sounds really off

00:29:506 (2) - delete, theres nothing important here to map. lower density in calm part is nicer

00:30:981 (7,8) - slider here for same reason.. nah prefer my pattern here

00:38:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can u make the rotation in the different direction from the previous pattern cuz different instrument?not rly like my flow here

01:00:981 (2,3,4) - ctrl g rhythm is much better with the vocals

why the fuck are all the sliders in the kiai so curved??
looks like ass you look like ass

01:25:571 - dude nice strong beat on slider end
[insane]
00:56:883 (2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is literally not following anything, can u follow vocals properly?
http://puu.sh/y8QJJ/4740559773.jpg from 00:56:391 (1) -

01:03:276 (2,4) - this looks so overly curved compared like everything else wtf curve is fine
thx

@Rus_Brony_osu I didn't order any M4M :S
jeanbernard8865
600 posts
Joined December 2014
jeanbernard8865
d

normal
01:07:047 (2) - snare is clearly audible at 01:07:211 so missing out on it feels weird especially since 01:09:670 (2) - does catch it right after

hard
  1. 00:27:047 (2) - this is the only instance within the phrase where you have vocals mapped to passive rhythm ( except for 00:23:768 (1,2) which is understandable here since its used as a transition from the spinner ), while the snare that is prioritised here is left out of focus at 00:30:653 (2) which is contradictory. Since you want to focus the vocals id go for making them active rhythm here as well ; if you want to keep that 1/1 gap you can always stack a circle on it beforehand ( since you do it when you have active 1/2 that is not exclusively mapped to vocals )

  2. 01:24:096 (1,2) - could be 2 circles into a slider like 01:25:080 (3,4) since this is the end of the map

insane
01:15:571 (3,4,5) - eh, not fond of the reading aspect of this, since your other instances of this rhythm dont have the same type of overlap which might be confusing for the player ( eg 00:12:293 (3,4,5) )

Melancholy
00:50:489 (2,3) - this is the first instance of wide angled jump in the map, but i dont hear any change in the music justifying that ( the rest of the map uses exclusively acute angles )

pls wait til you answer before kd
Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Sotarks

AyanokoRin wrote:

[insane]01:15:571 (3,4,5) - eh, not fond of the reading aspect of this, since your other instances of this rhythm dont have the same type of overlap which might be confusing for the player ( eg 00:12:293 (3,4,5) ) this is pretty ez pattern tbh
[Melancholy]00:50:489 (2,3) - this is the first instance of wide angled jump in the map, but i dont hear any change in the music justifying that ( the rest of the map uses exclusively acute angles ) Sorry prefer to keep this angle, wanna give emphasis to clap.
thx!
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi
reply

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

00:39:506 (1) - I think it looks better slight curves best
00:44:752 (1,2) - I don't know but I think that these sliders looks odd, can Akitoshi make.. um.. beautiful sliders here? it's the best pair after the 00:42:129 (1) - so ye
01:13:276 (6,3) - Maybe stack this slider with 6th circle? not stacked but avoided

Naotoshi wrote:

[aki]
00:29:014 (1,2) - tbh circle only for 1 sounds better. and 2 oversimplifies imo, try and make it more dense a bit fixed the 1. 2 looks fine as is since the other choice left is i'll create 1/2 train on that calm part lul

00:31:637 (1,2,3,4) - compare to this and nerfed this one instead

00:54:260 - tbh end spinner here god im so confuseddddd

AyanokoRin wrote:

01:07:047 (2) - snare is clearly audible at 01:07:211 so missing out on it feels weird especially since 01:09:670 (2) - does catch it right after they are consistently skipping beat with 01:06:063 - on 01:05:571 (1) - so its gonna be daijobu

thankies boyes

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Rizen
1,662 posts
Joined August 2013
Rizen
spread is shit

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

Hello! ~ M4M / Map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/662778

Sorry if I wrote something wrong because English is not my main language

[Rizen's Hard]00:08:686 (3,4) - I don't know but I think that it's hard to read it's just overlaps
01:06:719 (4,1) - This slider looks bad, so make something like this ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9410035 current is fine, an ellipse slider
01:08:194 (6,1,3) - Stack the end of the 3rd slider with the end of the 6th slider ?? there's no 6th slider

Good luck with map! ;)

Naotoshi wrote:

[rizen]
00:03:932 (1) - u can put like small jumpps on these things imo, still fine on this diff. hate small jumps but remapped iwth wider spacing because the spread of this mapset is as absent as my university marks

try and reduce the rhythm density a bit on the more 1/2 slider spammy parts. compare 00:24:916 - to aki's diff, it's way more dense lol

same with the kiai. basically constant 1/2 gaps is a bit too much considering aki uses 1/1 everywhere. try and add 1/1 gaps every 2 measures at the very least, a bit more and it would be optimal.

00:59:178 (1,2,3,4) - for example can be a 1/1 slider into a 1/1 gap > 1/2 slider > circle. or 00:57:211 (4) - can be deleted
or 01:02:784 (4) -
and so on

AyanokoRin wrote:

[hard]
  1. 00:27:047 (2) - this is the only instance within the phrase where you have vocals mapped to passive rhythm ( except for 00:23:768 (1,2) which is understandable here since its used as a transition from the spinner ), while the snare that is prioritised here is left out of focus at 00:30:653 (2) which is contradictory. Since you want to focus the vocals id go for making them active rhythm here as well ; if you want to keep that 1/1 gap you can always stack a circle on it beforehand ( since you do it when you have active 1/2 that is not exclusively mapped to vocals ) fixed

  2. 01:24:096 (1,2) - could be 2 circles into a slider like 01:25:080 (3,4) since this is the end of the map nah needed to simplify rhythm
pls wait til you answer before kd

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Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
3,089 posts
Joined December 2014
Nao Tomori
extra
00:02:784 (1,1) - why is there a nc here

01:01:145 (3,4) - can u make the follow points lead into the slider better? make the slider like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9424499

01:25:407 (3) - why is there a fullscreen jump here now?_? just do same as 01:24:752 (2,3) -
insane
00:07:375 (3) - normal sampleset on 1st repeat??
00:07:784 - this drum clap just sounds terrible dude put it on the white tick or get rid of it entirely plz

00:38:850 (9) - add nc cuz u switch to strings?

rizen
00:05:735 (2,3,1) - try and make this similar visual spacing?

00:07:375 (3,4) - kinda weird to ignore that drum roll like this, add a circle in at least imo
Rizen
1,662 posts
Joined August 2013
Rizen
appied both ty

code
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Shiny Ray -TV size-
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA
Creator:Sotarks
Version:Rizen's Hard
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:little witch academia LWA opening op tv size aqpw a_q_p_w akitoshi corinn rizen
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Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Sotarks
all fix
updated
Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
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Joined December 2014
Nao Tomori
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Doormat
2,049 posts
Joined September 2013
Doormat
oh hey it's that one anime nobody really watched because it was on netflix

[Hitsounding]
  1. 00:08:030 (1) - 00:23:768 - 00:36:883 - 01:13:604 (1) - where's the finish hitsound for that cymbal crash
  2. 00:04:998 (4) - 00:36:473 (9) - 00:38:768 (8) - auto clap sounds too loud for this sound imo, a drum addition clap would work better imo
[Akitoshi]
  1. 00:48:850 (3,4,5) - mmm rhythm sounds a bit awkward, could try something like this, which i feel fits the drums more appropriately
    SPOILER
[Rizen]
  1. manual break end at 00:20:899 - intentional? doesn't look like it is :s
  2. 00:55:899 (3,1) - 1/1 gap here sounds a bit awkward in my opinion; you could try making the (3) a 1/2 repeat slider?
  3. 00:57:211 (4,1) - ^similar to the above; i feel a 1/2 repeat slider for the snare would work pretty well
  4. 01:01:145 (3,1) - ^similar to the other two, but you might need to change this pattern a bit to accommodate, so i understand if you don't want change this
[Insane]
  1. 00:23:604 - could place a triple here for piano emphasis
  2. 01:07:375 (7) - switching to strictly drums here is kind of an odd choice when the (1-6) follows vocals pretty smoothly. maybe try dividing this into a 1/2 slider + circle to maintain vocal rhythm? it also fits in well with drums
[Extra]
  1. 00:06:063 (4,5,6) - try using equal spacing on these notes; equal sound emphasis is being placed on them so it'd be neat. (hint: equilateral triangle for bonus aesthetic points)
  2. 00:23:604 - could place a triple here for piano emphasis
  3. 01:01:965 (2,4) - the circular movement here would be much more comfortable if you changed these two in the timeline. right now the movement from (3)->(4) is awkward as fuck because it doesn't have the same emphasis as (1)->(2) when it really should :/
    SPOILER
  4. 01:01:637 (1,2,3,4) - if you go with the above suggestion, you might as well change the shape here so that they're all the same slider shape for better aesthetics lol
    SPOILER
  5. 01:16:063 (7,1) - something something blankets
Rizen
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Sotarks
3,493 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Sotarks
@doormat applied all exept the 2nd thingy on insane, i prefer following the drums here fits better imo.
fixed hitsounds too!
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi
applied, thanks doormat! 

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54491
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 23753
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Shiny Ray -TV size-
TitleUnicode:Shiny Ray -TV size-
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA
Creator:Sotarks
Version:Akitoshi's Normal
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:little witch academia LWA opening op tv size aqpw a_q_p_w akitoshi corinn rizen
BeatmapID:1450272
BeatmapSetID:685287

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:2.8
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"OP.avi"
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Doormat
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Joined September 2013
Doormat
ok
Sotarks
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Joined May 2014
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Sotarks
thx dude
Rizen
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Rizen
good for loved ranked
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