Louis Cyphre wrote:

Mod4Mod as your queue said.

[General]
- The official music video made by Shynola, so i think you should Shynola in tags. if I could actually find the video, I would do so :p
- I suggest to use standard green color (0.255.0) I liek mah green
- set preview time here 00:54:545 -. It's more awesome I like the current preview. its my favorite part of the song.
- I strongly recomend to use Grid lv.4 to make easier smooth and delicious sliders. Ive never been ablet o make amazing sliders in grid 4 due to my inability to read the grid correctly. I will never be a Krisom or a narakucrimison ;_;
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[Light]
OD~HP +1 sure
00:18:194 (1) - add finish sure
00:22:233 (1) - add finish at start sure
00:22:233 (1) - i'd remove second red dot in the slider http://puu.sh/82qH I was going for the squareness sir.
00:24:252 (3) - ^ ^

[Challenge]
I don't agree with jumps here, they don't feet the song at all, especially 1/4 jumps like 00:25:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:29:806 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:33:845 (6,7) - 00:37:884 (1,2,1) - 00:51:516 (2,3,4)

can't find anything else, i like easy normal and hard, but Challenge seems for me a bit overdone, sorry ;w;

Hi there. Here's your Mod. <3

GENERAL

1. Hit sounds are too loud. Try using 80%.
   
   
2. 00:02:038 - Lower the volume every 1/1 beat until slider ends. I suggest 100% > 80% > 60% > 40%

Light

1. 01:12:721 - Change to sliders instead? You can keep this.

STANDARD

1. 00:04:814 - One grid down.
   
   
2. 00:22:990 - One grid right.
   
   
3. 00:25:010 - One grid left.
   
   
4. 00:45:962 - One grid down.
   
   
5. 00:48:739 - ^
   
   
6. 00:58:584 - One grid right.
   
   
7. 01:06:659 - ^
   
   
8. 01:12:721 - Change to sliders instead? You can keep this.

EXPERT

1. HP Drain -2 / -1
   
   
2. Overall Difficulty -2
   
   
3. 00:17:436 - This is a big jump. Reduce spacing.
   
   
4. 00:18:194 - ^
   
   
5. 00:22:233 - Weird pattern. Try this: http://puu.sh/ejcX. If you do this, don't forget to stack (4) on (2).

CHALLENGE

1. Overall Difficulty -6
   
   
2. HP Drain -1 (You can keep this though)
   
   
3. 00:17:815 - Try to make a straight line on this one. Like this: http://puu.sh/eje6
   
   
4. 00:25:893 - (2,3) One grid down. (4,5) Two grids down. (4) One grid left. (5) One grid right.
   
   
5. 00:29:932 - Do the same thing as above, just flip it vertically.
   
   
6. 00:34:097 - Big jump. Try moving this closer from the previous note.
   
   
7. 00:38:136 - ^ ( But I suggest you just scale them down)
   
   
8. 00:46:467 - Unequal Spacing. Make them consistent.
   
   
9. 00:51:894 - Use CTRL+R on this.
   
   
10. 00:59:468 - ^

That's all. Good luck on getting it ranked. <3

Philippines wrote:

Hi there. Here's your Mod. <3

GENERAL

1. Hit sounds are too loud. Try using 80%. my current volume sounds fine to me.
   
   
2. 00:02:038 - Lower the volume every 1/1 beat until slider ends. I suggest 100% > 80% > 60% > 40%

that effect doesnt work well with this song.

Light

1. 01:12:721 - Change to sliders instead? You can keep this.

why?

STANDARD

1. 00:04:814 - One grid down. done
   
   
2. 00:22:990 - One grid right.
   done
   
3. 00:25:010 - One grid left.
   done
   
4. 00:45:962 - One grid down.
   nope
   
5. 00:48:739 - ^
   nope
   
6. 00:58:584 - One grid right.
   done
   
7. 01:06:659 - ^
   nope
   
8. 01:12:721 - Change to sliders instead? You can keep this.

why?

EXPERT

1. HP Drain -2 / -1
   not happening.
   
2. Overall Difficulty -2
   not happening.
   
3. 00:17:436 - This is a big jump. Reduce spacing.
   not really.
   
4. 00:18:194 - ^
   not really.
   
5. 00:22:233 - Weird pattern. Try this: http://puu.sh/ejcX. If you do this, don't forget to stack (4) on (2).

I like this pattern.

CHALLENGE

1. Overall Difficulty -6
   subtract by 6? ahahahaha no
   
2. HP Drain -1 (You can keep this though)
   nope.
   
3. 00:17:815 - Try to make a straight line on this one. Like this: http://puu.sh/eje6
   there is a reason I left the line not straight.
   
4. 00:25:893 - (2,3) One grid down. (4,5) Two grids down. (4) One grid left. (5) One grid right.
   errr why?
   
5. 00:29:932 - Do the same thing as above, just flip it vertically.
   again why?
   
6. 00:34:097 - Big jump. Try moving this closer from the previous note.
   purposely big
   
7. 00:38:136 - ^ ( But I suggest you just scale them down)
   purposely big
   
8. 00:46:467 - Unequal Spacing. Make them consistent.
   they are equal.
   
9. 00:51:894 - Use CTRL+R on this.
   nope.
   
10. 00:59:468 - ^

nope

That's all. Good luck on getting it ranked. <3

Philippines wrote:

I meant change OD of Challenge to 6. lol, sorry.

Zelos wrote:

Needs more MAT