Yukari Tamura - MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ne! · forum

Shmiklak

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Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2017-10-21T17:32:47+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, November 27, 2020 at 4:40:22 PM

Artist: Yukari Tamura
Title: MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ne!
Tags: marvollo m_a_r_v_o_l_l_o christmas new year wajinshu marianna hazu- defenderdjulus armin a_r_m_i_n komore akitoshi corinn deppyforce daycore
BPM: 180
Filesize: 15616kb
Play Time: 01:20
Difficulties Available:

A r M o l l o's Insane (5.16 stars, 335 notes)
Corinn's Normal (2.28 stars, 155 notes)
Daycore's Hard (3.47 stars, 227 notes)
Deppy's Very Easy (1.07 stars, 31 notes)
Expert (5.68 stars, 347 notes)
Hazu's Easy (1.77 stars, 80 notes)
Komore's Expert (6.08 stars, 378 notes)
Marianna's Insane (4.51 stars, 319 notes)
Waji's Expert (5.85 stars, 388 notes)

Download: Yukari Tamura - MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ne!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Merry Christmas!

Insane:
00:05:764 - 00:27:097 - 00:55:097 - A r M i N

Last edited by Shmiklak 2020-11-27T11:40:58+00:00, edited 60 times in total.

Azinlen

328 posts

Joined May 2016

Azinlen 2017-10-27T16:33:24+00:00

Привет из in-game но все же слот на q

Hazu's Easy

00:05:764 (1) - maybe x:352 y:108
00:30:930 (3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407634
01:13:097 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407643
01:18:597 (1) - i think spinner start from there 01:18:430 -

Djulus' Hard

Я не вижу смысла в синем комбо.
00:02:430 (1) - мб https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407665 ?
00:08:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - как по мне лучше yot tak: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407688
00:13:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - тоже самое ^^
00:22:097 (3) - вот так и хочется еще два раза нажать видя что это слайдер)) Подумай над этим.
00:48:264 (5,6) - выглядит неоч. <
00:54:264 (2) - мб слайдер тута на пять тиков?
01:17:597 (2,3) -выглядит неоч. x2

Collab Insane

A r M i N's part:
00:48:264 (1) - maybe circle and one there 00:48:597 - ?

Marianna's Insane

00:05:764 (1) - 00:16:430 - I think it's need mapped too
00:20:430 (1,2) - maybe slider there 00:20:764 - ?
00:21:097 - same 00:21:430 -
00:53:430 (4) - you used this pattern, why don't use this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407780 ?

Expert

00:34:264 (2) - мб https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407801 ?
00:46:097 (2) - хмм https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407806 ?

waji's Expert

00:02:430 (1) - хмм https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407819 ?
00:05:097 (1) - xmm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407828 ?
00:26:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - мне не нравится, просто легко и k r a c u v o https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407848
00:29:097 - СТРИМ от сюда начинается :/

see you in ranked next время!

Last edited by Azinlen 2017-10-27T18:17:25+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-10-27T17:24:17+00:00

Greetings! Modding a chosen single difficulty as per your request.
important note: suggestions in this color means i highly recommend you to apply them to your map.

[Expert]
whilst this entire difficulty is mostly fine, i don't really understand all of your rhythm choices. for example, same strong drums sound happens multiple times in the song, but you chose to map only few of those sounds even though they are exactly the same drums and that means they have same musical value. even though this is not that much of a deal, as you might be doing this for diversity in rhythm usage. i still think it should be somewhat more consistent throughout the map. there's also your rhythm usage at 00:21:264 - 00:21:764 if you listen carefully, you'll get that there's a sound on every single 1/4 notes between these timestamps and they're all so similar that they should sound all the same to the players who are. but again, you only chose to map few (3) of them. I honestly find this one the most nonsensical of them all, because this one is so obvious that the sounds are right next to each other, yet you still chose to map only 3 of them in the middle of the whole part.

00:10:764 (6) - try to seperate the head from 00:10:430 (5) ? the sound on this is really strong and it should be emphasized more than just increasing slider velocity here, also it would be better to highlight the difference of sounds between 00:10:430 (5,6) and 00:10:764 (6,1) this way: http://puu.sh/y8w0B/3a66a8888b.jpg

00:15:764 (6) - this slider is kind of 'failing' at following the hold sound of this part. there are 2 easy ways to fix this slider:
1) extend this slider to 7/8 beat length and use slower slider velocity on it, to make it more obvious that it is following the long hold sound in the background.
2) change this into 2x 1/2 beat length sliders to make the upbeat at 00:16:097 - clickable, because it is as strong as the beat on 00:15:764

00:20:430 (1,2,3) - the rhythm here is different than before; the beats have stronger sounds. it should be mapped differently from your normal usual rhythm usage in the verse, to emphasize them properly. those beats should feel different than the other parts before this, maybe try changing 00:20:430 (1,2,3) - to just a 1/1 length reverse slider so those beats will get highlighted more. while you're at it, i suggest you try to increase the slider velocity on this slider as well if you applied my suggestion to make them stand out even more! after this, you also get a chance to map 1/4 melodies on 00:21:347 - which you had skip for some reason, assuming this map is supposed to be ''pp map'' based on your creator's words, making this a proper 7 notes 1/4 stream will definitely give more pp to players who can play it with full combo. it will also be a nice 'health regeneration point' for hard rock players as well. since this map's hp drain is extremely high and almost impassable without full combo-ing with hard rock mod on. this will make the map more forgiving to those players and also gives them more pp!

00:23:430 (2,3) - if you look at this object placement closely, you will notice that when the approach circle appears at the 00:23:347 - timestamp, the (3) slider fails to covering the previous slider's head for a perfect blanketing combo. from this screenshot, http://puu.sh/y8wuj/e050d6ea1d.jpg, you can see that the tail of (3), which is currently at the coordinates (130,277) is not overlapping with the approach circle, whilst (3)'s head is being overlapped with the approach circle perfectly. in order to improve aesthetics of this pattern, i suggest you to move the slider tail to the coordinates (130,275) or to put it simply: move it 2 pixels upwards. this will make the blanket combo looks perfect and greatly improves the aesthetics of this pattern

00:25:264 (5,1) - after i looked at this placement, i'm assuming that you're trying to place the circle (5) at the exact same location of where slider (1) 's tail will land on, so that it would perfectly being stacked on top of each other to make a pleasant-looking aesthetics pattern. but after closer inspection of this particular pattern multiple times, i've noticed that the circle (5) is not exactly perfectly right on the same spot that (1)'s tail is currently going to land on. to improve this, move the circle (5) upwards by 1 pixel (to the coordinates (189,53)) for them to be on the exact same location without any edges of the hitcircle sticking out on a side of the slider tail.

00:27:097 - it looks like that you have failed to create an impression that this verse of the music is weaker than the previous. you used same slider velocity (x0.75) for this verse, which is exact same as the last while the previous verse is noticeably a lot stronger and denser, which makes it obvious that it has more musical values. in order to highlight this volume change in the music, i highly suggest you that you use noticeably lower slider velocity on this verse (for example, more than x0.15 lower. anything below x0.6 will do). this way the song will be followed by the overall speed of the map in that part more correctly.

00:39:764 (1,1,1) - the sound on downbeat at 00:40:430 (1) - is stronger than any of these 3. so the spacing from 00:40:097 (1) - to 00:40:430 (1) - should be bigger than the spacing from 00:39:764 (1) - to 00:40:097 (1) - instead, as bigger jumps or bigger spacing on notes can mean "bigger value" in the music. and you've been mapping with similar concept like that throughout the whole map, so i don't see any reason that it shouldn't be applied here? maybe you wanted something different, but you chose a bad place to add diversity to when it doesn't fit to do so in my personal opinion.

00:42:264 (4,5,6) - the triple here are mapped on snare sounds, which is stronger than the last triple combo, 00:42:014 (2,3) . you also failed to emphasize the important and the strength of the snare here. this is what you can do: align the circles of the second set of triples, 00:42:264 (4,5,6) - to make a movement for the players. that way, these notes will be correctly emphasizing that the sounds on these are more stronger than the last. the reason that it is the most important to do so here is because these 2 set of sounds with different worth is right next to each other, which makes the contrast between these way more noticeable than any other of the 2 same sound set with some kind of more distance between them. so contrast is the important part of which sounds that you need to emphasize on each part of the song, don't forget to keep this in mid for your future mapping projects as well, since these are universal and does applies to most of the maps.

00:44:764 (2) - how about extending this to a 3/4 beat long slider? that way the slider will emphasize the stronger vocal shout better than just a shape change which you are currently using. and since you did emphasize the other strong vocal by making it an "extended slider" as well, at 00:47:097 (1) . so it would perfectly makes more sense if you emphasize these strong shouts also. this suggestion also applies to the following timestamps: 00:46:097 (2) , 00:55:430 (2) and 00:56:764 (2) since they all have very, very similar rhythmic values. and they all also sounds the same.

00:53:764 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - not sure what you're trying to pull off here, but these circles aren't being mapped on any discernible sound. keep in mind that osu! is a rhythm game, thus means that rhythm is its most prioritized aspect of the game. so make sure you're mapping on a proper rhythm, or at least the one that is comprehensible for players to understand. while this may be able to justified with the saying that "it's for the sake of building up to the next kiai time" but it is in fact still on a unhearable sound that doesn't form exactly a ''rhythm". and it should really be changed to something more understandable for players to feel more comfortable playing through the map which has been following a "more sensible" rhythm throughout the whole map, for a far more better consistency.

01:05:097 (3,4) - the sounds here are completely different than those on the last 3 previous measures that you have mapped with 1/2 sliders. and to highlight the sound different correctly, i suggest you use a different rhythm here. for example, changing these 2 sliders to 4 sliders on head and tail of both sliders instead would have fit more because those drums are totally strong enough to support my suggested suggestion nicely without rhythmic contradictions.

01:05:930 (2) - the drums here are clearly stronger than all these: 01:07:597 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) , in terms of volume. which means that the slider (2) isn't emphasizing the strength that those drums deserve properly. that means you should change it to 1/4 triple circle with bigger distance snap usage than that this pattern, 01:07:597 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) is currently using. so that it will emphasize the strong drums properly, thus it makes them get the recognition they deserve more than just an easy-to-play 1/4 reverse kickslider. this also applies to the one at 01:06:430 (2) ,since they are basically the same.

01:14:847 - this issue is the one that is similar to the one about this time 00:21:264 - 00:21:764 , in the first paragraph. the drum sounds between this time length: 01:14:597 - 01:15:097 ,are all the same yet you only chose to map the first one without the others for a no comprehensible reason. as i've already explained how problematic this could be in the first paragraph, it's up to you to decide what to do about this pattern. but to be honest, just making a small stream here would be the most logical way to address this particular issue.

01:17:597 (5,1) - this movement feels incredibly bad to play, since you will have to pause from the previous jump and still have to hit another note in the linear-ish flow. this will feel extremely awkward to play and doesnt not fit with your whole concept of "flow" throughout the map at all. please try to either stack the circle (1) under the previous circle (5) instead for stopping flow without awkward rhythm differential movements, or try to arranged a more enjoyable flow by forming an acute angle between these circles: 01:17:430 (4) , 01:17:597 (5) and 01:17:930 (1) .

01:18:430 (4) - this one is also similar to my suggestion at 00:39:764 (1,1,1) , but this one is even more important to address than the one at 00:39:764 (1,1,1) because it happened in a shorter time period so the contrast is more noticeable than the one at 00:39:764 (1,1,1) . in order to follow the music properly and highlight the strongest sound at the end-of-the-song downbeat, the spacing at 01:18:264 (3,4) should have been a lot bigger than 01:18:097 (2,3) to emphasize the said rhythm properly.

that's pretty much it, good luck with the map.

Last edited by Deppyforce 2017-10-27T17:25:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2017-10-27T17:25:07+00:00

Azinlen wrote:
waji's Expert
00:02:430 (1) - хмм https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407819 ?
00:05:097 (1) - xmm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407828 ?
00:26:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - мне не нравится, просто легко и k r a c u v o https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407848
00:29:097 - СТРИМ от сюда начинается :/ 00:29:014 (2) - тут звук есть)
see you in ranked next время!

Пасиб олл фиксес

Azinlen

328 posts

Joined May 2016

Azinlen 2017-10-27T18:15:17+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
Azinlen wrote:
waji's Expert
00:02:430 (1) - хмм https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407819 ?
00:05:097 (1) - xmm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407828 ?
00:26:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - мне не нравится, просто легко и k r a c u v o https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407848
00:29:097 - СТРИМ от сюда начинается :/ 00:29:014 (2) - тут звук есть)
see you in ranked next время!
Пасиб олл фиксес

<3 wajinshi

Azinlen

328 posts

Joined May 2016

Azinlen 2017-10-27T18:19:08+00:00

P.S 3 раза обновил мод:
1. A r M i N для него с рашан на энглиш преведено.
2. Исправил ошибку в слове было paet стало part
3. Удалил > в начале мода для Hazu-

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2017-10-27T19:17:35+00:00

hi

expert
00:15:764 (6) - mmh dunno if you're trying to follow the bell sound or those drums sounds. if you're following whistle, better to extend until 00:16:347 -, and if you're following drums, pls dont skip the sound on 00:15:930 -
01:18:430 (1) - what about nc for emphasize?

marianna
00:05:764 - dont be lazy pls, map this part
00:27:014 (4,1) - we dont really expect such a spacing as this one, pls reduce it
00:32:430 (1,2) - aaa it can lead to misreadings imo
00:36:930 (3,4) - same here, what about nc one of the two?
00:37:680 (8,1) - why theres no jump here? as u did 00:29:680 (11,1) - etc.

collab insane
00:48:930 (3) - nc for sv change pls
ok its not finished
[]
gl

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-10-27T19:20:30+00:00

Azinlen wrote:
Привет из in-game но все же слот на q
Hazu's Easy
00:05:764 (1) - maybe x:352 y:108 ya
00:30:930 (3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407634 It would be difficult to do a blanket with 00:32:430 (1) -
01:13:097 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407643 Isn't really necessary imo but I fix this.
01:18:597 (1) - i think spinner start from there 01:18:430 - Isn't really necessary imo.

Thx~

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Venix

Global Moderator

1,927 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-10-27T21:32:43+00:00

Hi there

[Expert]

00:02:430 (1) - This beat seems to be stronger than previous ones, I'd consider to space this note more than 00:00:597 (2,1) - 00:01:097 (2,1) - 00:01:597 (2,1) - these ones. // 00:04:764 (2,1) - Same goes here.
00:07:764 (4) - I'd prefer to add new combo beacause of strong SV change. // 00:13:097 (4) - Same here.
00:08:764 (3) - 00:09:430 (6) - What are you think about making these shapes the same, will look less random and more consistent.
00:10:764 (6) - Honestly, this note flows a bit weird and looks a bit random. I'd change this shape to circlular one like this.
00:12:430 (1,2,3) - This spacing looks very overgeneralized, on previous jumps you used to emphasise claps like 00:11:430 (3) - this or 00:12:097 (6) - this by increasing spacing on these beats. Here you didn't it, I prefer to space 00:12:764 (3) - this one more than 00:12:430 (1,2) - these ones to fix this issue.
00:20:764 - This beat seems to be too strong to put it on slider end. What are you think about using 1/2 slider + circle like you did 00:21:097 (3,4) - here, on similar rythm? // 00:22:430 (4) - Same goes here. // 00:23:764 (3) - And here. // 00:29:097 (4) - Here too I guess.
00:31:930 (6,7,8,9) - To keep your rhythm consistency here you should put circle 00:32:014 - here, beacuse sound is the same with 00:32:180 - this one, but here you have placed a circle so I prefer to change it to stream of course or at least delete 00:32:180 (8) - this circle. // 00:37:514 - Same here, it feels very weird while playing.
00:51:597 (4) - Seems like this slider is missing finish on head.
00:53:764 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - To be honest here you haven't strong 1/4, which should be ephasised by stream, it just feels weird during gameplay because it's a bit unexpectable on this place. If you really want to keep the stream, place it 00:54:264 - here, but before I prefer to put a slider.
01:14:680 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This rythm change looks a bit weird, I prefer to keep one which you used previously.
01:18:264 (3) - This circle seems to be a bit unnecessary, sound is just too quiet.

Good luck!

Djulus

570 posts

Joined September 2014

Djulus 2017-10-28T13:04:58+00:00

Azinlen wrote:
Привет из in-game но все же слот на q
Djulus' Hard
Я не вижу смысла в синем комбо. попрошу у шмика
00:02:430 (1) - мб https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407665 ? не
00:08:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - как по мне лучше yot tak: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9407688 aga
00:13:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - тоже самое ^^ да
00:22:097 (3) - вот так и хочется еще два раза нажать видя что это слайдер)) Подумай над этим. не, итс емфазис такой я сделал в подобных местах таких как 00:23:097 (2,1) - итд
00:48:264 (5,6) - выглядит неоч. < почему?
00:54:264 (2) - мб слайдер тута на пять тиков? не
01:17:597 (2,3) -выглядит неоч. x2 почему?

спасибо за мод
@M a r v o l l o пожалуйста, поменяй комбоколоры

апдейт

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schoolboy

571 posts

Joined July 2016

schoolboy 2017-10-28T17:08:08+00:00

done
tried something new so pls tell me if you want me to change/nerf something
also pls put waji's bg

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Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2017-10-28T17:53:31+00:00

didn't expect so many mods in a day lmao. well, I should reply.
Azinlen
00:34:264 (2) - просто ровно скучно
Deppyforce
will reply later, I need to contact with you.
Irohas
fixed all
Venix
00:07:764 (4) - i dont really want to put NCs because these sv changes aren't very heavy and they are snapping related so must be reading great
00:10:764 (6) - this slider's sv is higher than others' so using some weird angles should work better
00:20:764 - This beat seems to be too strong to put it on slider end. What are you think about using 1/2 slider + circle like you did 00:21:097 (3,4) - here, on similar rythm? // 00:22:430 (4) - Same goes here. // 00:23:764 (3) - And here. // 00:29:097 (4) - Here too I guess. applied for 00:20:430 (1) - others must be as they are to emphasis the vocals, the beats arent really strong
00:53:764 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i dont think so tbh, but i will think
[]
thanks guys

EDIT:
Deppyforce
00:10:764 (6) - I don't really want to space this 1/4 even if it has so strong sound.
00:44:764 (2) - I prefer 1/2 tbh

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-10-30T00:03:08+00:00

cool short reply

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2017-10-30T14:51:49+00:00

Will mostly go over general stuff since some of the difficulties are not ready at all yet. You still do need quite some mods.
[Komore]

That bg is not very sfw lol
00:18:430 (5,6,1) - The spacing should actually be opposite here lol. 00:18:430 (5,6) - this has double the spacing than 00:18:930 (6,1) - While the louder sound in song is on 00:19:097 -
00:37:764 (1,2,1,2) - The song doesn't loose intensity at ALL 00:38:264 - but your spacing on these circles is twice as less. I mean its ok to do it for visuals or for variation but the decrease is too much, prolly increase it a bit or just make it equal to first two circles because that works even better
00:54:430 (2,3,1) - The flow on this pattern is really uncomfortable to play because the movement from 2->3->1 is almost linear (ofcourse everyone would just click head of 3 and move towards next note) so yea, you can try to make the angle here not-so-wide for better playability
01:06:597 (4,5) - The song calms down and all yeah but the vocal still exists there and considering about the existence of that vocal, the circle has real low spacing, you can move this to around 150,320 and it will still make a nice triangle pattern with 01:06:097 (4,4,5) - and it will also give more impact to 01:06:930 (1) - which is also nice
01:08:597 (2,3) - Personally i dont agree with momentum breakers like these at all. It seriously did throw me off during testplay. Even stuff like 01:11:097 (1,2,3) - works better

[Waji]

00:10:597 - Don't get a reason to why this is ignored, Theres clearly a hi hat sound there and if you are trying to emphasize the snare then theres still an echo of that snare on this beat
00:44:764 (1) - For all other patterns like this you had kick slider but you have a simple 1/2 slider here, why not a kicked slider here too since its pretty much the same thing in the song
00:50:264 (3) - 00:51:597 (3) - You are literally halving the sv and it can really throw players off during gameplay ,The sv change shouldnt be this drastic imo. its totally unnecessary. However if you plan on keeping this then just put nc on these for easier readability
00:54:264 (2,3) - I know the screen does'nt allow you to place 3 anywhere further , you can simply change its direction while keeping the flow. My point is that this can seriously have higher spacing because the song is going CRazy, Comparing this spacing to your previous notes and the upcoming stream 00:54:847 (2,3,4,5) - it almost feels like that beat doesn't even exist
01:03:347 (1) - You don't need this nc
01:11:097 (1) - You are actually supposed to make vocals clickable here not 01:11:430 (2) -

[Expert]

00:37:597 (7,1,2) - The movement between these notes is pretty much straight and its really uncomfortable to play. Also on top of that 00:37:764 (1) - This can have more spacing because right now, spacing between 1 and 2 is like double to spacing between 7 and 1. The song emphasizes both beats 00:37:764 - 00:37:930 - equally so the spacing should be somewhat similar too
01:00:430 - Honestly this is the most intense part of the whole kiai and you mapped it with 1/2 slider spam . hype killer. The part is actually executed in a more intense way (and in a better way) in the lower difficulty lol

[Collab Insane]

00:36:430 (1,2,3,4) - I assume you are following vocals because thats what these circles are trying to represent. In this pattern, 3 has the highest spacing while it is the only circle that supports no vocal at all. All the other three vocals on 00:36:430 - 00:36:597 - 00:36:930 - are emphasized in song but they have lowest spacing ;/
00:53:764 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Try nerfing this part lol its actually much harder than the pattern in extra difficulty

[Marianna]

00:45:764 (1) - You should seriously try making 00:46:097 - Clickable because that "yea" vocal is one of the most emphasized sound in the whole song
Same for 00:55:097 (1) - 00:56:430 (1) -
Cute difficulty, Other than those jump streams tho lol

[Djulus]

00:18:930 (4,1) - You have the notes on downbeats emphasized with extra spacing in other cases but not this one, Mistake?
00:22:430 (4,1,2,3,4) - What is this DS lol. Having 00:22:430 (4,1) - this more spacing than 00:22:930 (1,2) - makes sense but the spacing you actually used here is like half the spacing you used in rest of the map. Right after that you have a jump between 00:23:097 (2,3) - which is totally unnecessary
00:24:264 (5,1) - And here 00:24:430 (1) - this should have more spacing for emphasis purposes but you did it for 00:23:764 (4,5) - instead
00:31:764 (6,7) - The repeat slider ends on upward direction so try putting the circle above it
00:44:430 (2) - NC for kiai start maybe

[Revi]

00:18:764 (5,6,1) - This thing is something i am totally against with, well firstly this is just dumb for a normal difficulty. mostly when you are mapping these kinds of patterns, you stack sounds that are weak and leave the louder sounds spaced, (Thats mostly for higher difficulties) If you are trying to follow the same concept here then 00:18:764 (5,6) - THESE are the ones that should be stacked and 00:19:097 (1) - this one should be left spaced
00:40:764 (2,3,4) - The rhythm is really misleading here. Like r e a l l y misleading. The song emphasizes http://puu.sh/yaHgy/44daa1402d.jpg these sounds while you are following http://puu.sh/yaHhf/81ed3a0cfb.jpg these sounds. 00:41:430 - This sound doesn't even stand out here and yet you decided to map it instead of others that are more important
00:45:097 - The vocals start to gain intensity here and they are repeated on 1/2 ticks continuously here. I suggest you actually map 00:45:264 - instead of 00:44:597 -
00:45:764 (4) - 00:46:597 - ^ seriously tho what is so important at 00:45:930 - this beat that you are trying to follow which doesn't stand out to you at 00:46:597 -

Easy looks ok
I do believe the rhythm in normal is just weird and feels random in a lot of parts. There is still a lot to be improved in this set yet

Lama Poluna

796 posts

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Lama Poluna 2017-10-30T15:36:35+00:00

Artist: 田村ゆかり
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Title: MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU…ね！
Romanised Title: MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU…ne!

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Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2017-10-30T15:54:56+00:00

fixed, thanks @DeRandom Otaku

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Shmiklak

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Shmiklak 2017-10-30T16:35:21+00:00

applied everything on my diffs

schoolboy

571 posts

Joined July 2016

schoolboy 2017-10-30T19:40:54+00:00

my hs copier broke pls send help

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DeRandom Otaku wrote:
[Komore]
That bg is not very sfw lol not anymore
00:18:430 (5,6,1) - The spacing should actually be opposite here lol. 00:18:430 (5,6) - this has double the spacing than 00:18:930 (6,1) - While the louder sound in song is on 00:19:097 - imo it fits the low spacing emphasis for vocals that i did 00:17:597 (4,1) - here or 00:22:930 (6,1) -, so id like to keep this one. tho i changed spacing on 00:16:930 (2,3) - to fit my ideas
00:37:764 (1,2,1,2) - The song doesn't loose intensity at ALL 00:38:264 - but your spacing on these circles is twice as less. I mean its ok to do it for visuals or for variation but the decrease is too much, prolly increase it a bit or just make it equal to first two circles because that works even better ok, increased the spacing and also made it more symmetrical
00:54:430 (2,3,1) - The flow on this pattern is really uncomfortable to play because the movement from 2->3->1 is almost linear (ofcourse everyone would just click head of 3 and move towards next note) so yea, you can try to make the angle here not-so-wide for better playability tried to do smth, also reworked jumps that were right before those kicksliders
01:06:597 (4,5) - The song calms down and all yeah but the vocal still exists there and considering about the existence of that vocal, the circle has real low spacing, you can move this to around 150,320 and it will still make a nice triangle pattern with 01:06:097 (4,4,5) - and it will also give more impact to 01:06:930 (1) - which is also nice now its on the sliderend
01:08:597 (2,3) - Personally i dont agree with momentum breakers like these at all. It seriously did throw me off during testplay. Even stuff like 01:11:097 (1,2,3) - works better stacked those manually

i reworked the last jump section so its more playable now

Djulus

570 posts

Joined September 2014

Djulus 2017-10-31T03:26:38+00:00

fixed everything

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osu file format v14

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A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

A r M i N 2017-10-31T12:54:05+00:00

@Azinlen Thats not my part lol
@Ren I put such high spacing on 3 cause of the Snare on it

thanks for mods guys :3

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2017-10-31T16:31:53+00:00

Fixed all

Tarrasky

1,203 posts

Joined March 2014

Tarrasky 2017-10-31T18:29:05+00:00

few tips

Djulus

00:03:597 (3,4,1) - Try do a blanket if wasn't proposital
00:13:597 - You can add a circle like 00:08:264 (5) - for consistence
00:26:430 (4) - maybe plays better you do like 00:13:764 (1,2,3) -
Do the same spacing 00:48:264 (5,6,1) -00:58:930 (1,2,3) - , can be confuse if you change the spacing, i know you have done to do emphasis in vocal, but looks kinda hard to identify this fpr 1/1 transition with 0,9x spacing, example 00:48:597 (6,1) - have a next distance like 00:50:097 (6,1) - but is 1/1 and the other 1/2
01:05:264 (4,5,6) - this doesn't sounds a triple for me

Marianna

00:26:680 (4,1) - Isso é jogável em Insane? pra mim parece jogabilidade de Extra, já que é stream 180 bpm, pode ser muito dificil pra quem joga essa star, talvez um spacing a mais como por exemplo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9439599 mas um completo jump é mt agressivo pra um Insane (00:29:347 (7,8) - desse jeito ta ótimo)
00:36:930 (3,4,5) - é rankeável mas eu n acho nada legal o low spacing no 1/1, talvez colocar isso na mesma distância do 00:36:430 (1,2) - pode ser bem interessante, pois ia ser consistente aki 00:36:597 (2,3) - e aki 00:37:264 (4,5) -
00:57:097 (4,5,6,7) - talvez esse padrão https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9439627 seja legal pra dar ênfase no vocal. só uma dica
00:44:430 (1,2) - unico momento em q vc faz esse padrão, nos outros 00:45:764 (1,2) - 00:55:097 (1,2) - algum motivo em especial pra isso? eu acho q ia ficar legal fazer consistente

other diffs seems fine, gl ^^

Djulus

570 posts

Joined September 2014

Djulus 2017-10-31T18:37:50+00:00

you did me tarrasky :>, fixed all
check hs shmoklok please

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- Frontier -

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Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2017-11-01T13:28:37+00:00

Hello there! So you've asked me for a mod through private message. I won't make a wall of text here, however, because I also have some work to do.

[General]

Unused Hitsounds: drum-hitwhistle2.wav, soft-hitclap2.wav
You might change 12e.png and BG.png's file type to .jpg to save the space.
Since djulus is already had on defenderdjulus, having djulusm again might be useless. You might consider removing this from tags unless there is a reason behind this.
01:18:597 (1) - Since there is no any discernible crescendo sound or hold sound to having the spinner at here, so this spinner shouldn't exist here. This spinner is having in most difficulties throughout map. Consider removing it please.
01:15:264, 01:15:430, 01:15:764, 01:17:930, 01:18:097, 01:18:430 - The finishes don't make sense to me since it doesn't use for the previous part which has the same instrumental and vocal rhythm, maybe mistake? If you gonna add it, you should add for the previous part for consistency.

[Deppy's Very Easy]

00:27:097 - Since the cymbal sound here is pretty audible, adding a hitobject to be clickable at here could express the sound better.
00:55:097 (1) - There is the same rhythm as 00:44:430 (1) -, so making the hitsound here the same would make it more consistent.
01:00:430 (1) - I like what you're trying to make it follows the rhythm by adding the edge here. <3

[Hazu's Easy]

Using perfectly red color might be too harmful for eyes. Might consider lowering a bit.
00:37:764 (1,3) - The slider of 00:37:764 (1) - is disappearing when 00:39:764 (3) - appeared. So it turns out being overlapped each other, which is pretty ugly lmao. You might change the position to prevent it from being overlapped, maybe this pattern could fix the issue.

[Corinn's Normal]

Is there any reason using Corinn's Normal for this mapset? I haven't seen any MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ne!'s mapset having your difficulty in.
00:21:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part almost has the same instrument and vocal rhythm as 00:16:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -, but why the first ones have no 1/2 hitobjects and the secone ones have? Might consider making them the same for consistency.
00:44:097 - You might have a clap on this point here since the instrumental has a clap sound here, refer to ranked mapset.
01:13:764 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part totally has the same instrument and vocal rhythm as 01:08:430 (1,2,3) -, and 01:11:097 (1,2,3) -, but why they are mapped so differently? Consider making them the same for consistency between map!

[Djulus' Hard]

Consider removing widescreen support since your map has no storyboard used.
00:19:097 (5) - Adding nc at here would make it more consistent, as you add nc every big white tick since 00:16:430 -.
00:22:930 (1,2) - The nc should be swapped, as the same reason as above.
00:30:930 (3) - This might also add nc at here as 00:28:264 (1) - did.
00:43:264 (1) - This part here is literally a crescendo sound and there is no any sound here. Using 3/2 slider with a reverse is totally doesn't make sense here since there is no any sound located at 00:43:764 - and 00:44:264 -. Using 7/2 slider would express the song better.
00:46:430 (3) - This part is also have vocal located in 00:46:430 - and 00:46:597 - as 00:45:097 (3,4) -, but why they are mapped differently? Consider making them the same for consistency. (I mean, 00:46:430 (3,4,5) - should be swapped.)
00:48:264 (5,6) - This pattern could make the players think that this is 1/2 gap since you use a mostly similar spacing at 00:46:930 (5,1) -. You could try to move 00:48:597 (6) - further to avoid the confusion. You might apply at 00:58:930 (1,2) - also.
01:04:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - This has almost the same instrument and vocal rhythm as 01:01:764 (1,2,3,4) -, but why they are mapped differently?

[Marianna's Insane]

00:05:764 - Skipping to map this part feels sloppy zzz. You should map this part for cohesion between mapset.
00:23:430 (2) - This part totally has the same instrument and vocal rhythm as 00:22:097 (2,3) - , but why they are mapped so differently? Consider making them the same for consistency between map!
00:32:597 (2,2,2) - These land on indiscernible sound!
Deppyforce wrote:
not sure what you're trying to pull off here, but these circles aren't being mapped on any discernible sound. keep in mind that osu! is a rhythm game, thus means that rhythm is its most prioritized aspect of the game. so make sure you're mapping on a proper rhythm, or at least the one that is comprehensible for players to understand. while this may be able to justified with the saying that "it's for the sake of building up to the next kiai time" but it is in fact still on a unhearable sound that doesn't form exactly a ''rhythm". and it should really be changed to something more understandable for players to feel more comfortable playing through the map which has been following a "more sensible" rhythm throughout the whole map, for a far more better consistency.

That's pretty much of it, I think the map could be better. eee
GL~

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-11-01T13:32:03+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
[Deppy's Very Easy]
00:27:097 - Since the cymbal sound here is pretty audible, adding a hitobject to be clickable at here could express the sound better. ok
00:55:097 (1) - There is the same rhythm as 00:44:430 (1) -, so making the hitsound here the same would make it more consistent. shmik do hitsounds
01:00:430 (1) - I like what you're trying to make it follows the rhythm by adding the edge here. <3 thanks

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Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2017-11-01T13:59:24+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
[Marianna's Insane]
00:05:764 - Skipping to map this part feels sloppy zzz. You should map this part for cohesion between mapset. Fixed

Tarrasky wrote:
few tips

Marianna

00:26:680 (4,1) - Isso é jogável em Insane? pra mim parece jogabilidade de Extra, já que é stream 180 bpm, pode ser muito dificil pra quem joga essa star, talvez um spacing a mais como por exemplo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9439599 mas um completo jump é mt agressivo pra um Insane (00:29:347 (7,8) - desse jeito ta ótimo) Fixed

Thanks for modding

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Djulus

570 posts

Joined September 2014

Djulus 2017-11-01T16:49:00+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
Hello there! So you've asked me for a mod through private message. I won't make a wall of text here, however, because I also have some work to do.

[General]
Unused Hitsounds: drum-hitwhistle2.wav, soft-hitclap2.wav
You might change 12e.png and BG.png's file type to .jpg to save the space.
Since djulus is already had on defenderdjulus, having djulusm again might be useless. You might consider removing this from tags unless there is a reason behind this.
01:18:597 (1) - Since there is no any discernible crescendo sound or hold sound to having the spinner at here, so this spinner shouldn't exist here. This spinner is having in most difficulties throughout map. Consider removing it please.
01:15:264, 01:15:430, 01:15:764, 01:17:930, 01:18:097, 01:18:430 - The finishes don't make sense to me since it doesn't use for the previous part which has the same instrumental and vocal rhythm, maybe mistake? If you gonna add it, you should add for the previous part for consistency.

[Djulus' Hard]
Consider removing widescreen support since your map has no storyboard used.
00:19:097 (5) - Adding nc at here would make it more consistent, as you add nc every big white tick since 00:16:430 -.
00:22:930 (1,2) - The nc should be swapped, as the same reason as above.
00:30:930 (3) - This might also add nc at here as 00:28:264 (1) - did.
00:43:264 (1) - This part here is literally a crescendo sound and there is no any sound here. Using 3/2 slider with a reverse is totally doesn't make sense here since there is no any sound located at 00:43:764 - and 00:44:264 -. Using 7/2 slider would express the song better.
00:46:430 (3) - This part is also have vocal located in 00:46:430 - and 00:46:597 - as 00:45:097 (3,4) -, but why they are mapped differently? Consider making them the same for consistency. (I mean, 00:46:430 (3,4,5) - should be swapped.) 00:46:764 (4,5) - this is strongest sound and its should be clickable imo
00:48:264 (5,6) - This pattern could make the players think that this is 1/2 gap since you use a mostly similar spacing at 00:46:930 (5,1) -. You could try to move 00:48:597 (6) - further to avoid the confusion. You might apply at 00:58:930 (1,2) - also.
01:04:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - This has almost the same instrument and vocal rhythm as 01:01:764 (1,2,3,4) -, but why they are mapped differently? cuz it's not same sounds and i mapped instrumental not a vocal lol
eee
GL~

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TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU…ね！
Artist:Yukari Tamura
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
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Shmiklak

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Shmiklak 2017-11-01T17:38:29+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
Hello there! So you've asked me for a mod through private message. I won't make a wall of text here, however, because I also have some work to do.

[General]
Unused Hitsounds: drum-hitwhistle2.wav, soft-hitclap2.wav
You might change 12e.png and BG.png's file type to .jpg to save the space.
Since djulus is already had on defenderdjulus, having djulusm again might be useless. You might consider removing this from tags unless there is a reason behind this. web searching won't find the map if i type djulus without this tag
01:18:597 (1) - Since there is no any discernible crescendo sound or hold sound to having the spinner at here, so this spinner shouldn't exist here. This spinner is having in most difficulties throughout map. Consider removing it please. every diff should have at least one spinner as said in RC.
I'm leaving this up to mappers, if they want to place it, then why not
01:15:264, 01:15:430, 01:15:764, 01:17:930, 01:18:097, 01:18:430 - The finishes don't make sense to me since it doesn't use for the previous part which has the same instrumental and vocal rhythm, maybe mistake? If you gonna add it, you should add for the previous part for consistency.

That's pretty much of it, I think the map could be better. eee
GL~

thanks

elena2705

530 posts

Joined May 2012

elena2705 2017-11-01T17:46:31+00:00

Hi

Waji's Expert

00:05:430 (1) - на самом деле это не такая уж проблема, но мне кажется, что будет более эстетичнее, если поднять этот слайдер до Х:148 У:134
00:20:680 (2) - не понятно, лучше либо по центру поставить кружечек, либо так же как и было, только на следущем слайдере х:247 у:142
01:06:930 (1) - по звукам все правильно, но блин, не ясно, когда нажимать...01:06:764 - тут лучше сделать ноту. Все таки вся песня в подобном стиле. Тогда с этой новой ноты можно сделать новое комбо, 01:07:264 (1) - и тут тогда тоже новое комбо. Получается весьма круто, для такого сильного момента
01:12:264 (1) - почему новое комбо?? Мне кажется, просто ошибка
В целом очень круто сделано!!!

Expert

00:07:764 (4) - даже не знаю... Мне совершенно не нравится...Выглядят не кругло что ли... Впечатление все портят https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/TdY6KBx.jpg Ведь приятно же, когда такие красивые змейки))) И я советую поменять все на такие змейки. Потому что в таких местах как это 00:59:597 (3,4,5) - теряются бланкеты(((
00:10:764 (6) - ну такое...https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/4Z06hHN.jpg???
00:21:097 (4,5,6) - почему бы не сделать без оверлэпа https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/IuvlCRc.jpg? Ничего почти не изменится, но ведь так приятнее)))
00:30:264 (2,3) - почему бы не сделать эти 2 слайдера одинаковыми, копипаст плз
00:54:764 (1) - я не думаю, что нужно делать новое комбо. Это как бы продолжение предыдущих быстрых трех слайдер-киков. Просто понятнее будет так
01:18:514 (1) - не очень понимаю смысл последнего спиннера. В некоторых уровнях его нет. А если уж и оставлять, то 01:21:764 - тут конец+ поставить сюда же зеленую палку, в которой звук будет 5%

Collab Insane

00:18:430 - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/avlBFuW.jpg it's more beautiful
00:20:764 (2,3) - make sliders the same, I mean copypaste
00:46:097 (2) - this slider make as here: 00:44:764 (2)
00:55:430 (2,3,4) - flow is bad... Honestly, I tried to fix this a very long time, so you also should think about this. This is my version:
https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/xAThSlD.jpg
Last spinner: put a green line in last of the spinner and reduce volume to 5%

Sorry, ARMIN, it's my fault. I didn't look, what person made this diff((

Marianna's Insane

00:07:430 (2) - 00:12:763 (2) - i think you missed the strong sound in the center of these sliders, especially the second slider
00:15:764 (4) - should be slider, maybe smth like this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/5aqLlFW.jpg?
00:26:430 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - don't know, but i don't like this pattern and changing DS in the stream. You highlight new phrase using NC. It doesn't need changing DS. And players will not be confused))) https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/IVJ7oJg.jpg? And after this=>
=>00:27:597 (2) - this object is too close the previous one. It's confusing...
00:29:097 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - also, but here it looks better) Like this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/zdnlFJp.jpg?
00:36:430 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is not good idea...https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/RgW0jdt.jpg?
01:06:764 (3) - i think here should be note. Firstly, because of your pattern. Secondly, because of music. And it's better to play with this note

Djulus' Hard

00:48:597 (6) - почему так близко? Это не понятно
00:16:097 (4,5,1,2,3) - этот паттерн неудачный, а именно флоу. Не знаю, может так https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/JUpmT21.jpg
00:58:930 (1,2,3) - тоже очень близко расположены
01:05:264 (4,5) - почему бы не сделать такhttps://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/YeFJ7ou.jpg ведь красивее же

Really cool map!!! When ranked?????

Good luck

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A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

A r M i N 2017-11-01T20:49:07+00:00

@elena

YA NE ZNAYU RUSSKI
and the flow on the screenshot seems kinda strange

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-11-01T21:03:00+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
Hello there! So you've asked me for a mod through private message. I won't make a wall of text here, however, because I also have some work to do.

[Hazu's Easy]
Using perfectly red color might be too harmful for eyes. Might consider lowering a bit. idk about colors... blame marvollo
00:37:764 (1,3) - The slider of 00:37:764 (1) - is disappearing when 00:39:764 (3) - appeared. So it turns out being overlapped each other, which is pretty ugly lmao. You might change the position to prevent it from being overlapped, maybe this pattern could fix the issue. Yeah I know, it's intended. xd
That's pretty much of it, I think the map could be better. eee
GL~[/notice]

thx
@M a r v o l l o You didn't update my diff lol p/6322866

- Frontier -

1,854 posts

Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2017-11-02T01:10:43+00:00

M a r v o l l o wrote:
every diff should have at least one spinner as said in RC.

that's a guideline _(:vJL)_ you don't have to follow it
it's your decision tho

Djulus

570 posts

Joined September 2014

Djulus 2017-11-02T04:37:57+00:00

elena2705 wrote:
Hi
Djulus' Hard

00:48:597 (6) - почему так близко? Это не понятно потому что играть было приятнее.
00:16:097 (4,5,1,2,3) - этот паттерн неудачный, а именно флоу. Не знаю, может так https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/JUpmT21.jpg как по мне хорошо играется
00:58:930 (1,2,3) - тоже очень близко расположены выше
01:05:264 (4,5) - почему бы не сделать такhttps://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/YeFJ7ou.jpg ведь красивее же не

Really cool map!!! When ranked?????
Good luck

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2017-11-02T10:34:37+00:00

elena2705 wrote:
Hi

Expert

00:07:764 (4) - даже не знаю... Мне совершенно не нравится...Выглядят не кругло что ли... Впечатление все портят https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/TdY6KBx.jpg Ведь приятно же, когда такие красивые змейки))) И я советую поменять все на такие змейки. Потому что в таких местах как это 00:59:597 (3,4,5) - теряются бланкеты((( мой стиль заключается в создании подобных волн, не могу с этим ничего поделать(
00:10:764 (6) - ну такое...https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/4Z06hHN.jpg??? хорошо, но я предпочту такой вариант
00:21:097 (4,5,6) - почему бы не сделать без оверлэпа https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/IuvlCRc.jpg? Ничего почти не изменится, но ведь так приятнее)))
00:30:264 (2,3) - почему бы не сделать эти 2 слайдера одинаковыми, копипаст плз они и не должны быть одинаковыми, я не люблю так
00:54:764 (1) - я не думаю, что нужно делать новое комбо. Это как бы продолжение предыдущих быстрых трех слайдер-киков. Просто понятнее будет так не соглашусь
01:18:514 (1) - не очень понимаю смысл последнего спиннера. В некоторых уровнях его нет. А если уж и оставлять, то 01:21:764 - тут конец+ поставить сюда же зеленую палку, в которой звук будет 5%

Collab Insane

00:18:430 - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/avlBFuW.jpg it's more beautiful не
00:20:764 (2,3) - make sliders the same, I mean copypaste они и так, просто угол разный (в экстре кстати тоже такой прикол)
00:46:097 (2) - this slider make as here: 00:44:764 (2) и так сойдет, идея именно в красном якоре
00:55:430 (2,3,4) - flow is bad... Honestly, I tried to fix this a very long time, so you also should think about this. This is my version:
https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/xAThSlD.jpg
Last spinner: put a green line in last of the spinner and reduce volume to 5%

Sorry, ARMIN, it's my fault. I didn't look, what person made this diff((

Really cool map!!! When ranked????? Soon I hope
Good luck

спасибо

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2017-11-02T14:23:49+00:00

aВсе пофиксила спасибо!

eyes

601 posts

Joined January 2016

eyes 2017-11-02T18:49:02+00:00

Deppy's Very Easy
00:05:764 - new combo maybe for consistency with other diffs

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-11-03T13:45:40+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
[Corinn's Normal]
Is there any reason using Corinn's Normal for this mapset? I haven't seen any MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ne!'s mapset having your difficulty in. Naming Akitoshi's Normal everywhere makes me want to shoot myself
00:21:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part almost has the same instrument and vocal rhythm as 00:16:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -, but why the first ones have no 1/2 hitobjects and the secone ones have? Might consider making them the same for consistency.
00:44:097 - You might have a clap on this point here since the instrumental has a clap sound here, refer to ranked mapset. added cymbals instead for personal preference, also M a r v o l l o copied hitsound even I did one for myself -_ -
01:13:764 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part totally has the same instrument and vocal rhythm as 01:08:430 (1,2,3) -, and 01:11:097 (1,2,3) -, but why they are mapped so differently? Consider making them the same for consistency between map! background is actually getting intense, also it'll be way too repetitive if i still copy the same rhythm ;3

thanks !

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21,113,48597,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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232,12,63431,1,8,0:2:0:0:
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194,195,64097,1,8,0:2:0:0:
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Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-11-03T22:21:33+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
added cymbals instead for personal preference, also M a r v o l l o copied hitsound even I did one for myself -_ -

he gya

eyes wrote:
Deppy's Very Easy
00:05:764 - new combo maybe for consistency with other diffs

no combo is way too short already lol

deadpon3

531 posts

Joined April 2013

deadpon3 2017-11-04T14:42:44+00:00

sup

Djulus' Hard

00:48:097 (4,5,6) - terrible to read, please more distance on 00:48:597 (6) - :/

a

00:58:930 (1,2) - same

01:18:097 (4) - end of that slider seems not to follow anything important, could you lower the volume here please?

Marianna's Insane

00:48:930 (1) - maybe move this a bit lower not to make such distance nerf so suddenly with 00:48:764 (3) - ?

z

00:54:264 (1,2,3,1) - personally I don't like the pattern, weird distance and it has no emphasis on the short break before the 1/4 kicks in, how about you'd ctrl g one of the sliders and place the objects like this

d

00:57:430 (6,7,1) - the spacings here look a bit dirty, why not make them equal to emphasise linear pattern?

01:00:097 (2) - the vocal here deserves more spacing than this forced blanket imo, just a little bit more

n

01:01:764 (1,2,3) - it was jumpy and cool untill now, why?

Collab Insane

00:20:430 (1,2,3) - I'd like to see some SV changes with these vocals :3

00:50:264 (2) - just my opinion here but I don't like the idea of following vocals in such difficulty during the intensive drums and other stuff part, feels undermapped :////

00:51:597 (2) - ^

00:53:764 (1,2,3,4,5) - The first three repeaters make the player stand still almost the whole time playing them, wouldn't be such a big deal if the distance on 00:54:764 (4,5) - weren't that sharp. I'd like to see some more movement on 00:53:764 (1,2,3) - maybe don't follow DS and make it like that

w

00:46:097 (2) - also this "YAY" deserves a small SV increase imo, just by 0.1x :^) same with 00:44:764 (2) - 00:55:430 (2) - 00:56:764 (2) - cool change and it doesn't really hurt the map in any way

Expert

00:02:097 (2) - imo the slider's end is too loud, it doesn't follow anything

00:04:764 (2) - ^

00:10:764 (6) - that's some sudden SV increase here, NC for better reading? (I mean it's fucking 1,5x right after 1,0

DDD) and the shape looks pretty ugly with the number "6" on it, "1" looks WAY better

00:44:764 (2) - same as previous diff, pls increase SV on the "YAY" for better emphasis

Waji's Expert

00:20:430 (1,2,3) - oh god why is the note almost stacked to the 00:20:430 (1) - slider, that's the worst way to make such patterns ;w; please make it either closer to 00:20:764 (3) - or somewhere near middle of the sliders

01:04:930 (1,2,3,4) - it feels odd to have the followpoint going that much to the right after a spaced triple rotated with this angle

w

maybe this

zzzzzz

or a straight, direct followpoint instead?

Komore's Expert

Why does that diff have CS3,8? xDD 2 Experts before had 4,3 uwu

powodzenia M a r v o l l o kolego!!!11

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-11-04T14:53:46+00:00

Mod before update, if anything of here is already fixed just ignore.

General

Disable Widescreen Support in Waji's Expert, Komore's Expert and Collab Insane.
From Hard diff to Expert diffs: you can silence the end of 3/4 sliders.

Djulus' Hard

00:13:597 (5) - More spacing without any reason, all other sounds are much stronger and more prominent than this, I recommend move 00:13:597 (5) - under 00:12:597 (2) - It also creates consistency with the spacing of 00:08:264 (5) -
00:29:097 (3,4) - It feels weird since they are following the same sound but it stops abruptly in 00:29:430 (4) - It's better that both be the same sliders.
00:30:930 (3) - NC, consistency with 00:28:264 (1) -
00:31:764 (6,7) - Same as 00:29:097 (3,4) -
00:36:430 (1,2,3) - The spacing is very deceptive, too much for a Hard diff, 00:36:097 (3,1) - is a 1/2 spacing while 00:36:597 (2,3) - is a 1/1 spacing, but 00:36:097 (3,1) - actually have to much spacing, I think you need to decrease the spacing of 00:36:097 (3,1) -
00:44:430 (2) - NC? Very strong sound and start of kiai.
00:48:264 (5,6,1) - Again, deceptive spacing.
00:53:264 (4,1) - This overlap looks so bad. xd
00:59:264 (2) - Move this a little bit up.

Marianna's Insane

00:02:430 (3) - NC? It would be better because it's a pretty strong sound and it creates consistency with 01:10:430 (1) -
00:05:097 (3) - Same as ^
00:27:097 (1,2,3) - 00:29:764 (1,2,3,4) - There is some reason for them to be different? xd Actually the sounds and the vocals that are there are very similar.
00:36:930 (3) - It's too hard to read, NC?
00:59:597 (1) - Isn't really needed NC here, it's a low sound and it's an easy to read pattern.

Collab Insane

00:26:764 (2) - I think you can move this a little bit up xd like x:344 | y:236.
00:36:430 (1,2,3,4) - The bigger spacing should be between 00:36:430 (1,2) - and 00:36:764 (3,4) - The sound of 00:36:764 (3) - it's not very noticeable imo.
00:48:930 (3,4) - This blanket can be better xd
01:18:430 (1) - Just my opinion this its very far :d

Expert

00:53:097 (1,2) - Compared with the spacing of the other jumps 1/2 this is lower xd you can increase the spacing a little bit.
00:54:430 (1,1) - Really this need NC? xd although it looks pretty.
00:59:597 (3,4,5) - Blanket?

Waji's Expert

00:37:764 - 2 timing points here xd delete one.
00:05:097 (5) - NC? Consistency with 00:02:430 (1) -
00:52:930 (2) - This jump is too big xd

Komore's Expert

00:54:430 (1,1) - Same as Expert diff.
01:05:264 (1,1,1) - Same as ^

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