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LQ bg ok
no kiai in tv size ok
addressed most of the things in discord so only minor thing came up i think
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ndPZvjBidEk official video instead because i cant put booklets here it's full nsfw so you're missing はな in artist
00:04:656 (1,2,3) - I think only 1/1 and 1/2s will work nicely in this part because it's most quiet part so far but 2 3/4s are kinda intenser than how it should be imo, maybe shorten the sliders into 1/2, simply works prob. 00:11:387 (3,4) - is also 2 3/4s im ok with this but old maps don't really use this a lot just saying i'll try to keep the second one listed cuz the vocals really extends p much
00:35:041 (5) - would make a pause by stacking it onto 00:35:426 (1) - or put the circles further? it's readable but the rhythm doesn't look clearn stacked on 00:35:426 (1) -, i hope it's betta
00:49:849 - circle here might be a good material to accelerate the intensity here!! also I actually came up with an idea that to do CTRL+G on the sliders 00:50:810 (1,2,3,4) - because the flow 00:50:426 (5,6,1) - feels not intuitive and out of place compared to the rest of the map? you don't really have to emphasize it and the flow after they're ctrl-g'd plays c00l combo'ing towards 00:52:349 (1,2,3,4) - tried, tell me if it's gud now
01:15:233 - I actually feel like to have a circle or even a triplet here since the spacing 01:14:849 (4,1) - has triggered me again xD triple'd :sunglasses:
01:25:233 (4) - Haha ball i love this one!!
00:25:810 (4) - this is sex gae
00:57:156 (1) - this cirlce may bother newer players as only 1/2 blank after a spinner is pretty quick lol tried somethin
01:02:733 (6) - would just put this along the slider curve for a better flow owo is this really necessary? would destroy the aes
00:24:656 (2) - this rhythm is weird since the rhythm suddenly goes for the background sound and ignoring the vocals that you've been following for https://delisha.s-ul.eu/MM5KI4Yb rhythm like this feels more decent to catch everything you wanted here so give it a shot pretty cool, added
00:49:272 (5) - I think this does do nothing here, extend the slider into 3/2 may work well for the sound in the song, the vocals etc.. sure
01:00:233 (1,2) - maybe should tilt them some more, it's currently unbalanced with how the sliders are mapped around, and that causes some awkward playability https://delisha.s-ul.eu/lceRv12q done
01:05:810 - a circle? you haven't had any blank thats longer than 1/1 before yes!
01:31:003 (1,2) - 01:32:349 (3,4) - you could stack these notes like you did for 00:24:464 (1,2) - it will look clearner, you can do this for 01:24:464 (4,1) - 01:29:080 (2,3) - only if you want though it makes the map neater didn't change the last two cuz i changed stuff on that section so it wouldn't look so good
only thing I've noticed is the chorus is less intense than the other part, like 00:57:926 (3) - can be a 1/2 repeat slider instead for the vocals, a circle at 01:01:003 - and so move 01:01:195 (2) - by 1/2 tick, so you remove the slider where was at 01:01:580 - but add a circle at 01:01:964 - instead, to make the rhythm more suitable with how this section is normally mapped out, it's still up to you but increasing the intensity at THE KIAI is a definitely good idea!
tried something with major focus on vocals, tell me if it's betta!!
haha combo is inconsistent actually feels like you can just make everything as long as possible
setting is edgy can u go with like ar3 od2 hp2 or whatever ok
00:17:349 (5) - what slider is it similar to 00:05:041 (4) - on rhythm, it's rotated like this cuz the original pattern didn't support a linear one :/
00:28:118 (4) - I personally think how you didn't tilt the slider on 00:30:810 (2) - is pretty cool but 00:28:118 (4) - flows kinda odd according to how 00:26:580 (2,3) - flow, consider tilt the (4) a bit? tilt
01:09:272 (1,2) - 01:24:656 (1,2) - should swap the nc because you usually put a nc wheres the last note before a 1/1 blank fixed
Delis wrote:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ndPZvjBidEk official videoconsider changing ur combo colors cuz they don't rly fit ur bg fixed
00:11:195 - to 00:12:733 - im not quite sure what rhythm youre following here and it kinda just seems out of place, if it's a low frequency i can't hear it so you kinda have to tell me what you're following here oh, those pauses were a tribute to Alacat's diff, i find it pretty cool and the pauses help newbies in some way and after that things get more intense and stuff
00:21:580 - also this pause i can't really tell what you're following so pls clarify fixed this one
tbh kinda the first part with pauses I don't really get cuz they kinda just sound like they're making their own rhythms since quite a few strong sounds are being ignored
00:25:810 (4,1) - consider not stacking this since every stack you've done indicated 1/2, having a 1/1 pause can be confusing now stacked with 00:26:772 (2) - instead
00:44:656 (1,2) - im not really liking this stack since you're coming out of consecutive 1/2 stacks so maybe try to move 2? insane players can distinguish these things, also 00:44:656 (1) - this beat has a potential to a pause after it, so stacking would be the more appropriate imo
01:32:541 (2,3) - tbh low key triggering that this isn't perfectly linear lol fixed this thing