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GATALIS - Good Luck Lilac

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Saileach
525 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Saileach
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 24 March 2018 at 1:36:19 PM

Artist: GATALIS
Title: Good Luck Lilac
Source: アニメガタリズ
Tags: lasse ambient akitoshi bariton kibbleru -_rain_- animegataris Anime-Gataris
BPM: 192
Filesize: 2772kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akitoshi's Normal (2.3 stars, 200 notes)
  2. Ambient's Insane (4.62 stars, 366 notes)
  3. Anime (6.02 stars, 409 notes)
  4. Bariton's Easy (1.66 stars, 116 notes)
  5. Hard (3.46 stars, 273 notes)
  6. Kibb's Extra (5.74 stars, 366 notes)
  7. Lasse's Extra (5.41 stars, 389 notes)
Download: GATALIS - Good Luck Lilac
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Check out the OP by Underforest @ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/681714


Anime went from 6.7 to 6 stars haha...

Kibb's Extra by Kibbleru
Lasse's Extra - by Lasse
Ambient's Insane - by Ambient
Akitoshi's Advanced - by Akitoshi
Bariton's Easy - by Bariton

colin#3310 on discord is gay
Last edited by Saileach , edited 32 times in total.
Ambient
579 posts
Joined August 2013
Ambient
ANIMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Lasse
Beatmap Nominator
3,596 posts
Joined June 2011
Lasse
https://0paste.com/16763.txt

sr ended up a bit lower but should still be fine
will copy hitsounding when it's done
Mordred
532 posts
Joined October 2015
Mordred


nods
Bariton
296 posts
Joined October 2012
Bariton
hewwo
Saileach
525 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Saileach
Metadata Source:
https://i.imgur.com/JzEC6oX.jpg
https://twitter.com/animegataris/status ... 3877388288
Foxy Grandpa
709 posts
Joined January 2015
Foxy Grandpa
hey guys its me dakini brave back with another brand new track dont forget to like, favorite and subscribe for more thanks for watching guys
dsco
287 posts
Joined April 2014
dsco
thank goodness this is v1

title is messed up on hard diff, its the only diff with the japanese transliteration.

bariton's easy
00:16:539 (3) - lil subjective but i think this shape can be done better
00:40:446 (1,2,3) - this rhythm is very sparse compared to the map, it makes the kiai feel boring in comparison. i think you could do something more interesting with the rhythm here (repeating)

akitoshi's normal
00:51:071 (2,3) - don't feel this rhythm works well since the important red tick vocal sound between both 1/2 and 2/3 isnt mapped and the tail of 3 works much better as a circle
01:06:071 (2,3) - a little picky but this is the only time you use a rhythm like this with a 1/2 slider so it sticks out, up to you

hard
dont forget to fix title
00:07:086 (1) - unless someone is already quite beyond the skillset this diff is aimed at, this spinner is far too short. i have to flail to get 300 on HR
00:09:821 (4,5) - i like patterns like this but its the only time you stack consecutive sliders so it doesn't fit the map imo. tho u could work it in other places
00:41:696 (1,3) - fix stack
01:04:196 (1,2) - could blanket these fairly easily
01:26:071 - duplicate green point

ambient's insane
00:05:133 (5) - should be 1/6 (also 01:22:633 (4) - )
00:06:227 (5) - would fit better as two circles imo
00:07:946 (1,4) - easy blanket opportunity, shapes clash as is
00:10:446 (1) - butt slider
00:18:883 (5,1,2,3) - this movement doesn't flow well imo, particularly 2-3
00:21:383 (5,2) - overlapping these would fit this section's jumps better
00:35:133 (5,6,1) - using such an odd pattern/sharp angle for this rhythm is liable to be misread, i dont think it fits well since you space stacked circles at small distances elsewhere i.e. 00:36:539 (5,1,2) - (or dont stack them like 00:49:821 (6,7,8) - which is pretty easily readable)
00:54:821 (3,1) - blanket
01:00:367 (10,1) - botched spacing, should be 0.8x
01:16:071 (6,7,8) - could look better
01:16:539 (1,2) - space more? kinda anticlimactic
01:22:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:05:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dont see why these are mapped with such different rhythms. at the very least, 01:23:258 (2) - 's tail should be clickable

lasse's extra
00:55:446 - imo for the pattern starting here 00:55:758 (2,3) - should manual stack and 00:55:758 (2,2) - should be 2x manual stack (and so on with all), as it gives the illusion its done incorrectly, in a way, to me, since some overlaps are perfect and some arent.
01:05:446 (1,2) - fix stack and then move 01:06:227 (2) - 1px right
01:08:883 (6,2) - fix stack
00:40:758 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - dont see why these are grouped in 3s, 00:41:071 (4) - seems to me more emphasized than 00:41:227 (1) - and you group 01:01:071 (1,2,3,4) - in 4s
01:12:321 (1,1) - why not extend past tail instead of past the head, so they can have perfect slider bodies like 00:17:321 (5,1) -
01:20:133 (2) - nazi move up 1px
00:05:446 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 01:22:946 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - grouped differently but same rhythm

kibbleru's extra
00:13:258 (2,3) - this is kinda massive, especially contextually. nearly the size of kiai jumps
00:54:977 (3,4) - odd that you don't follow vocals here
00:55:446 (1,2) - fix stack
00:57:321 (1) - why is this 1/2? if its for the bass drum, that also occurs here: 00:56:071 (1) - (i think both should be 3/4)
01:01:539 (2,3) - fix stack
01:01:696 (1,2) - 01:05:446 (1,2) - elsewhere you use a 1/1 slider, not sure the reason for 3/4

anime
00:05:133 (5) - should be 1/6
00:06:383 (5,3) - overlap?
00:14:039 (1) - rotate -4 around selection center so bodies match
00:15:914 (3,1,2) - shape clash
00:22:633 (6,1) - most everywhere else you stack these slider tails on the circle
00:29:821 (2,3,4,5) - 00:31:071 (3,5) - overlap these to match kiai / verse?
00:38:883 (1) - not a fan of how this overlaps the previous circles, looks messy
00:42:946 (1,2) - don't like this 1/4 spacing, looks messy. either tighten it up or avoid any overlap (repeating)
00:47:789 (6) - too little emphasis on this imo. compare to 00:43:414 (3,4,5) - which don't have any important sounds and are much more spaced
00:53:727 (6,7) - if rhythm was ctrl+g'd it fits better imo
00:56:696 (1,2,3) - why different rhythm than 00:55:446 (1,2,3) - ? doesnt fit well
01:17:946 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - no offense but this looks like shameless attempt to spam the easiest 1/2 jumps possible thats vaguely supported by the music. you could have all circles, but at least emphasize the vocal melody in some way, or make the patterns more interesting / related to the music more? idk..
01:22:946 (1,2,1,2,3) - 00:05:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - compare
01:26:149 (1) - look at the rhythm in other extras
Lasse
Beatmap Nominator
3,596 posts
Joined June 2011
Lasse
dsco

dsco wrote:

lasse's extra
00:55:446 - imo for the pattern starting here 00:55:758 (2,3) - should manual stack and 00:55:758 (2,2) - should be 2x manual stack (and so on with all), as it gives the illusion its done incorrectly, in a way, to me, since some overlaps are perfect and some arent. i just did perfect stacks now, there is enough time between the sliders that it should be rankable
01:05:446 (1,2) - fix stack and then move 01:06:227 (2) - 1px right
01:08:883 (6,2) - fix stack
fixed both but I expect others will randomly break lol
00:40:758 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - dont see why these are grouped in 3s, 00:41:071 (4) - seems to me more emphasized than 00:41:227 (1) - and you group 01:01:071 (1,2,3,4) - in 4s every anime tv size extra needs randomly arranged jumps that don't follow the song it's just how I interpret vocal stuff there, don't think that's an issue
01:12:321 (1,1) - why not extend past tail instead of past the head, so they can have perfect slider bodies like 00:17:321 (5,1) - won't really fit here I think
01:20:133 (2) - nazi move up 1px d
00:05:446 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 01:22:946 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - grouped differently but same rhythm did something with first

posting update with 1 mod already since I also did some own polishing and slider end muting etc
https://0paste.com/17115.txt
Bariton
296 posts
Joined October 2012
Bariton
dsco

dsco wrote:

bariton's easy
00:16:539 (3) - lil subjective but i think this shape can be done better in my opinion is fine
00:40:446 (1,2,3) - this rhythm is very sparse compared to the map, it makes the kiai feel boring in comparison. i think you could do something more interesting with the rhythm here (repeating) the kiai is relatively quiet compared to the rest of the map, slower(?)
Saileach
525 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Saileach

dsco wrote:

thank goodness this is v1 If u want v1, you can always upload on fallback

title is messed up on hard diff, its the only diff with the japanese transliteration. That's how its meant to be for all diffs i just fked up is all

hard
dont forget to fix title
00:07:086 (1) - unless someone is already quite beyond the skillset this diff is aimed at, this spinner is far too short. i have to flail to get 300 on HR I'm just gonna remove the spinner and have a gap
00:09:821 (4,5) - i like patterns like this but its the only time you stack consecutive sliders so it doesn't fit the map imo. tho u could work it in other places I like the pattern too but i get what u mean, gonna remove
00:41:696 (1,3) - fix stack AAAA
01:04:196 (1,2) - could blanket these fairly easily done
01:26:071 - duplicate green point dont even know how that happens

anime
00:05:133 (5) - should be 1/6 yeah
00:06:383 (5,3) - overlap? intentionally off
00:14:039 (1) - rotate -4 around selection center so bodies match sure
00:15:914 (3,1,2) - shape clash stacked it
00:22:633 (6,1) - most everywhere else you stack these slider tails on the circle fixed
00:29:821 (2,3,4,5) - 00:31:071 (3,5) - overlap these to match kiai / verse? yeah
00:38:883 (1) - not a fan of how this overlaps the previous circles, looks messy 100% accident, meant to be on the purple one
00:42:946 (1,2) - don't like this 1/4 spacing, looks messy. either tighten it up or avoid any overlap (repeating) tightened for all
00:47:789 (6) - too little emphasis on this imo. compare to 00:43:414 (3,4,5) - which don't have any important sounds and are much more spaced The vocals on the 2nd set u linked hold more emphasis in my opinion while there are no vocals holding emphasis on the 1st
00:53:727 (6,7) - if rhythm was ctrl+g'd it fits better imo fixed
00:56:696 (1,2,3) - why different rhythm than 00:55:446 (1,2,3) - ? doesnt fit well fixed
01:17:946 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - no offense but this looks like shameless attempt to spam the easiest 1/2 jumps possible thats vaguely supported by the music. you could have all circles, but at least emphasize the vocal melody in some way, or make the patterns more interesting / related to the music more? idk.. The diff is called anime soooo... on the other hand i did nerf them by .2 or so stars now
01:22:946 (1,2,1,2,3) - 00:05:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - compare I like the variation
01:26:149 (1) - look at the rhythm in other extras This one is a tough cookie tbh, not sure if u modded the updated or not, but im using kibbs rhythm, and there doesnt seem to be an agreement on what is the right rhythm
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

dsco wrote:

akitoshi's normal
00:51:071 (2,3) - don't feel this rhythm works well since the important red tick vocal sound between both 1/2 and 2/3 isnt mapped and the tail of 3 works much better as a circle mb fixed
01:06:071 (2,3) - a little picky but this is the only time you use a rhythm like this with a 1/2 slider so it sticks out, up to you its fine iguess
thankies!

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Title:Good Luck Lilac
TitleUnicode:グッドラック ライラック
Artist:GATALIS
ArtistUnicode:GATALIS
Creator:DakiniBrave
Version:Akitoshi's Normal
Source:アニメガタリズ
Tags:lasse ambient akitoshi bariton -_rain_- animegataris Anime-Gataris
BeatmapID:1456501
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schoolboy
571 posts
Joined July 2016
schoolboy
01:26:149 - make sure snappings are the same here

top diff
00:12:633 (6,7) - this jump is kinda way too much imo, (7) has only weak vocals on it, but also it has the same spacing as this 00:12:633 (6) - clap, which is kinda wrong. you can probably stack (6) with (7) or do something like this https://puu.sh/yeFpc/de6519bf84.png to emphasize the vocals but the second thing will require some adjustments so it up to you i guess
00:19:352 (2,3) - well if you are following vocals here, you should probably ctrl+g the rhythm because rn slider end lands on the new part of lyrics 00:19:664 - which sounds a bit strange. in the previous part 00:09:352 (2,3) - this rhythm had more sense since all three sounds were vocals
00:22:789 (7) - same as 00:12:633 (6,7)
00:24:821 (4,5) - just a personal preference, but maybe you will do something like this https://puu.sh/yeFTE/bbc6450f2d.png? because right now visual spacing between 00:24:508 (3,4) - is kinda low and thats pretty noticeable
00:27:633 (1,2) - spacing is way too huge since vocals arent that strong, consider making it lower
00:29:821 (2,3,4,5) - (2) probably should be out of this pattern to emphasize the vocals on 00:29:977 (3,4,5) -
00:32:946 - probably sv should be bigger because music is denser?
00:44:196 (1,2) - 00:42:946 (1,2) - do the same spacing?
00:47:633 (5,6) - this spacing felt too low for this part after all those fullscreen jumps
00:47:946 (1,2) - rhythm like 01:07:946 (1,2,3,4) - feels much better because right now you are mapping instruments that are not dominant for you and skip vocals when the whole kiai is built on them. anyway you should choose between those 2 since different rhythms on the same moments is >:(
01:11:071 (3) - due to vocals circles are better for this imo

kibb
00:12:946 (1,2,3,4) - nice pattern but 00:13:258 (2,3) - this spacing is definitely not for a calm part lol
00:22:789 (5,1) - increase the spacing here? finish in the music needs some more spacing
00:32:633 (4) - maybe ctrl+g? 00:32:633 (4,1) - this spacing is too big for a 1/4 gap rn
00:37:321 (3,4,5,6) - those jumps should be either bigger than 00:34:821 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:34:821 (1,2,3,4) - these circles should be sliders because rn i cant really get the reason why stronger vocals have lower spacing :(
00:42:946 (1) - <3
00:49:821 (5,6,7) - was a bit unpredictable when i was playing this, its not unplayable, but maybe you could decrease it a bit?
01:03:414 (2,3,4) - maybe https://puu.sh/yeGSm/34da6306b3.png ? just a suggestion tho
01:21:305 - i guess this should be mapped instead of 01:20:992 (2) - due to 01:18:727 (3,4,5,1,2,3) -

lasse
00:24:821 (3,4) - sounds are kinda strong, dont think its a good idea to stack those notes, maybe try x=469 y=246 for 00:24:977 (4) -
00:34:508 (3) - maybe make this different from 00:34:821 (4,5) - to show that 00:34:821 (4,5) - have same vocals on them?
00:39:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be polished a bit i guess
00:40:758 (1) - increase the spacing here? to make it similar with 00:45:446 (1,1) -
00:55:446 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - cool
00:57:321 (1,2) - kinda nazi, but still
01:26:071 (1,2,3,4) - 2 other extras use 1/4 here, but not sure if your option sounds worse..

nice extras, good luck!
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
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Ambient
579 posts
Joined August 2013
Ambient
fixed everything, thanks dsco! :D

updateee
osu file format v14

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Saileach
525 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
Saileach

Komore wrote:

01:26:149 - make sure snappings are the same here Everyone has their own take on it but i do agree it should be consistent and am more of a fan of kibbles take

top diff
00:12:633 (6,7) - this jump is kinda way too much imo, (7) has only weak vocals on it, but also it has the same spacing as this 00:12:633 (6) - clap, which is kinda wrong. you can probably stack (6) with (7) or do something like this https://puu.sh/yeFpc/de6519bf84.png to emphasize the vocals but the second thing will require some adjustments so it up to you i guess I like the overlap on 7 and i feel since it is going back to a place already established, it loses some emphasis via that.
00:19:352 (2,3) - well if you are following vocals here, you should probably ctrl+g the rhythm because rn slider end lands on the new part of lyrics 00:19:664 - which sounds a bit strange. in the previous part 00:09:352 (2,3) - this rhythm had more sense since all three sounds were vocals I kinda like the clickable drum though, ill look into it
00:22:789 (7) - same as 00:12:633 (6,7) Same reasoning as before
00:24:821 (4,5) - just a personal preference, but maybe you will do something like this https://puu.sh/yeFTE/bbc6450f2d.png? because right now visual spacing between 00:24:508 (3,4) - is kinda low and thats pretty noticeable sure
00:27:633 (1,2) - spacing is way too huge since vocals arent that strong, consider making it lower sure
00:29:821 (2,3,4,5) - (2) probably should be out of this pattern to emphasize the vocals on 00:29:977 (3,4,5) - I switched to drums here since i felt they were more dominant in this section
00:32:946 - probably sv should be bigger because music is denser? sure
00:44:196 (1,2) - 00:42:946 (1,2) - do the same spacing? sure
00:47:633 (5,6) - this spacing felt too low for this part after all those fullscreen jumps i'll probs nerf the jumps tbh
00:47:946 (1,2) - rhythm like 01:07:946 (1,2,3,4) - feels much better because right now you are mapping instruments that are not dominant for you and skip vocals when the whole kiai is built on them. anyway you should choose between those 2 since different rhythms on the same moments is >:( ok ok ill fix
01:11:071 (3) - due to vocals circles are better for this imo fixed


nice extras, good luck! Thanks, you too!
MrMan
501 posts
Joined June 2014
MrMan
NM mod from my queue.

I'm just gonna mod the Anime diff (Great diff name).

Anime
00:20:133 (6) - Reading this always gives me the impression that the next slider starts on the Right side of the play area. Maybe Ctrl+H and re-position it back.

01:00:133 (5,6,7,8,1) - I can't really agree with the sharp angle on this section of the stream.

01:26:149 (1) - The sound you're following here starts on the white tick. (If this was intentional, then I suggest moving this slider onto the white tick and lowering the volume on the first beat and raising it for the rest of the repeat slider, if that made sense.)

Yea that's all i could spot. Sorry that this wasn't a very worth while mod, especially if you disagreed with my points.

Good luck
Saileach
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Saileach

-CerealBox- wrote:

NM mod from my queue.

I'm just gonna mod the Anime diff (Great diff name).

Anime
00:20:133 (6) - Reading this always gives me the impression that the next slider starts on the Right side of the play area. Maybe Ctrl+H and re-position it back. For a 6 star im sure this is fine, if players at this level dont have basic reading skills then that's on them

01:00:133 (5,6,7,8,1) - I can't really agree with the sharp angle on this section of the stream. ill change

01:26:149 (1) - The sound you're following here starts on the white tick. (If this was intentional, then I suggest moving this slider onto the white tick and lowering the volume on the first beat and raising it for the rest of the repeat slider, if that made sense.) id rather have the strong part clicked than the weaker part and just ignore the other part, its pretty inconsistent across the diffs if that is 1/4, 1/3 starts on white etc, ill have to figure something out.

Yea that's all i could spot. Sorry that this wasn't a very worth while mod, especially if you disagreed with my points.

Good luck
thanks for the mod xd
defiance
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defiance
very accurate diff name
_handholding
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_handholding
v1
sdafsf
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sdafsf
[ anime]
  1. 00:11:383 (4,1) - the movement emphesis on 1 is kinda big. i would put 4 on the left
  2. 00:11:383 (4,2,3) - check your autostacks. id manually stack those.
  3. 00:12:477 (5,6,7) - these being all in the same pattern doesnt seem right. i would move 7 away to signalise that its a new sound
  4. 00:12:946 (1,2,3) - 00:10:446 (1,2,3) - comparing these the difference is kinda harsh especially considering 00:13:571 (3) - is most spaced and doesnt even have a vocal on it. im guessing you follow the vocals because those are the only thing that would call for contrast between the 2 combos
  5. 00:37:477 (4,5,6) - id reduce spacing ehre to make the following stand out more

    im not really sure if you prioritise vocals or drums in this map. but its really well structured.
    alsoanime

[ kibbo tangery]
  1. 00:50:133 (7,1) - making 7 a slider kinda takes away a lot of the strength you mapped in similar spots
  2. 00:50:914 (2,3) - these sliders are really unintuitve to me. the other red tick 1/2 sliders had vocals on them but these dont seem right

    seems good

[ lasse]
  1. 00:50:914 (1) - this is the only 1/2 vocal you didnt map clickable. also the pattern suggests its the same as 00:51:227 (2) - which its not because of the vocal rhythm

    lasse gds

solid af set
Lasse
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Lasse
Komore

Komore wrote:

lasse
00:24:821 (3,4) - sounds are kinda strong, dont think its a good idea to stack those notes, maybe try x=469 y=246 for 00:24:977 (4) - following vocals in this part so making the sound clickable already makes it stand out from passive ones, jump doesn't fit cause no vocal
00:34:508 (3) - maybe make this different from 00:34:821 (4,5) - to show that 00:34:821 (4,5) - have same vocals on them? I think the placement already does that
00:39:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be polished a bit i guess tried, blame slider to stream
00:40:758 (1) - increase the spacing here? to make it similar with 00:45:446 (1,1) - transition into chorus works better like this and idc much about passive spacing in general
00:55:446 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - cool
00:57:321 (1,2) - kinda nazi, but still fixed
01:26:071 (1,2,3,4) - 2 other extras use 1/4 here, but not sure if your option sounds worse.. might be better now lol

nice extras, good luck!

sdafsf: I can only hear new syllable on head o:
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thank
https://0paste.com/18184.txt

btw soft finish on 01:00:446 (1) - and 01:17:946 - sounds way nicer than drum things imo
Saileach
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Topic Starter
Saileach

sdafsf wrote:

[ anime]
  1. 00:11:383 (4,1) - the movement emphesis on 1 is kinda big. i would put 4 on the left sure
  2. 00:11:383 (4,2,3) - check your autostacks. id manually stack those. its not thaaaaat bad
  3. 00:12:477 (5,6,7) - these being all in the same pattern doesnt seem right. i would move 7 away to signalise that its a new sound moved to 1 slider tail
  4. 00:12:946 (1,2,3) - 00:10:446 (1,2,3) - comparing these the difference is kinda harsh especially considering 00:13:571 (3) - is most spaced and doesnt even have a vocal on it. im guessing you follow the vocals because those are the only thing that would call for contrast between the 2 combos lowered spacing
  5. 00:37:477 (4,5,6) - id reduce spacing ehre to make the following stand out more sure

    im not really sure if you prioritise vocals or drums in this map. but its really well structured.
    alsoanime if this gets ranked with this diff name im gonna be sooooo glad

solid af set ty bb

Lasse wrote:

btw soft finish on 01:00:446 (1) - and 01:17:946 - sounds way nicer than drum things imo
sure
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