2nnt wrote:

Hi~

Easy
00:17:875 (4) - Move the turn on a tick, like this? eh? o.o
00:26:375 (1) - Add finish? Ok
00:27:375 (1) - Remove finish and new combo? Ok
00:28:375 (3) - Add new combo? Ok
00:55:125 (1) - Move the slider end on grid up by one square? (Grid Level 4) Ok
00:56:875 (4) - Move the reverse arrow down by one square? (Grid Level 4) Ok
02:10:375 - 02:42:375 - 30 seconds break, all I can ask here is to add something. Maybe
02:58:125 (1) - Same as at 00:55:125 Ok
02:59:875 (4) - Same as at 00:56:875 Ok

Normal
The break at around 2 and half minutes is way better than the 30 seconds break in Easy. Maybe you should add break like in this difficulty in the Easy instead of that long break?

Hard
00:42:375 (3) - Add finish? Ok
01:04:875 (5) - Add new combo? Ok
01:06:125 (1) - Remove new combo and add finish to slider end? No
01:22:375 (1) - Add finish? Ok
01:29:875 (2) - ^ Ok

If you go on vocals here:

01:56:875 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:57:125 (2) - Add new combo?
01:58:875 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:59:125 (2) - Add new combo?
Same with part at 02:04:875 and the last chorus.
This is just my opinion and might sound weird though.

If you go on beat here:

01:56:375 (6) - Add new combo?
01:56:875 (1) - Remove new combo? Ok
01:58:375 (5) - Add new combo? Ok
01:58:875 (1) - Remove new combo? Ok
Same with part at 02:04:875 and the last chorus.
This is just my opinion and might sound weird though.

02:23:875 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add claps to some of these (or all if you like of course)? Ok
02:26:375 (6) - Add finish? Ok


Coward Haku
This seems to be fine~
Bye~

Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end.

Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read.

1. 00:02:125 (1) - Remove the clap from slider's end here and replace with finish? Fits more for the song's opening imo
2. 00:02:875 (3) - Starting from here, imo it will be much wiser to put the whistle every 2/1 starting from 00:02:875 - I know your current whistle is consistent already, but the fact that it's placed 1/1 before the downbeat (on the red tick) sounds quite awkward (if you listen carefully, the vocals goes high on 2/1 before the downbeat, thus allowing the whistle to fit more)
3. 00:02:875 (3,4) - I think, it will be much more intuitive if you put both slider's start following the previous distance snap, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:08:875 (3) - This slowdown looks like they're actually 1/2, really - I know players won't slider break that easily here, but 0.75x will definitely be more intuitive here instead of 0.5x ~
5. 00:12:375 (2) - Not perfectly fit with 00:11:375 (4) when CTRL+H'ed, but it's barely noticeable xD
6. 00:16:375 (1) - Don't put the whistle 1/2 after your previous one here - it's best to place no hitsound here (due to the vocals itself isn't going too strong here) imo
7. 00:19:625 (3,4,5) - (optional) Use repeating slider here? It will emphasize the diamond pattern here instead of stacks imo
8. 00:24:125 (8,1) - Err... I don't like how these two flows personally, maybe you can let the encircle magic works here: (if you do this, (1) will also encircle (3))
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:28:375 (2) - Same here about the slowdown. Using 0.75x to get intuitivity won't hurt, I guess xD
10. 00:32:125 (1) - Hmm? Do you really need the 1/4 short slider here? There's almost nothing to follow on 00:32:530 - I prefer a single circle here, however if you decided not to change this, (optional) I'd rather curve it to the different direction (downward) because the flow is better like this imo~
11. 00:38:875 (2) - The whistle on slider's end sounds really out of place, really - it should be on slider's start instead
12. 00:46:625 (2) - (optional) Judging from your patterns around here, I prefer to stack this above (3) instead, but this is purely optional
13. 00:50:125 (5,1,2,3,4) - The jump from (4) to (5) is quite sudden imo, I think if you want to create a jump here you should continue the jump after to let the flow continue:
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 00:56:375 (4,1) - Here also, stack (4) above (1)? This will make (2,3,4) plays more naturally imo
15. 01:05:875 (8) - Is it intentional to put this note so far from (6)'s start? Moving this around two grids left so (6,7,8) will form a solid triangle isn't that hard, though...
16. 01:10:125 (2) - The whistle should be here instead of (3) - this is because previously on 01:07:125 (2), you put the whistle here (on the red tick) instead of (4)
17. 01:24:625 (3) - Missing clap here? xD
18. 01:26:625 (2,3,4) - Again about the stacking here, I really recommend to use a repeating slider instead because stacking like this will somewhat ruin your hexagon formation in play mode
19. 01:33:125 (6) - Stopping the whistles here isn't a good idea, really - definitely sounds like something's missing without the whistles' existence
20. 01:43:875 (4) - The 0.38x slowdown here looks very forced, pretty much because it's unintuitive - even with multipliers around 0.5x or so, you'll get much more intuitivity:
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 01:53:375 (4,2) - Is it's intentional to stack these two unperfectly like this? imo, manual stacking isn't really required here because they're apart by 3/2 and your AR is fast enough
22. 02:03:125 (3) - Again, stopping the whistles isn't a good idea - I think you should put the whistle again starting from this slider's start
23. 02:13:125 (3,4) - Switch these two's position and CTRL+R (4)? To follow the vocals, the 1/1 slider should go first - and this is the easiest solution possible without changing the arrangement
24. 02:18:375 (1) - (optional) Add new combo here to split the combo? Compared to your previous combo streaks, 11 in this point is the most, and there's a cymbal sound from the song here (which tells that here comes a new part)
25. 02:26:125 (6) - Stack this to (4) and arrange (7) to form a solid triangle like this? imo, this jump will look less forced (especially compared to your previous jump pattern from (5) to (6)) :
    
    SPOILER

    
26. 02:44:875 (1) - Because basically the vocal goes stronger on (2)'s start, dim this slider's end by using 60% inherit section to get a damper effect?
27. 02:53:375 (1) - Why all of the hitsounds (except finish) vanish here? I think it's best to put the hitsounds as you did on the previous choruses, unless this part is intentionally not hitsounded yet
28. 03:11:125 (5) - (optional) Stack this above (6) instead to let this flow more naturally along with (4)?
29. 03:18:875 (4) - Placing this under (3)'s track is very hard to read (although not impossible lol) - I prefer arrangement like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
30. 03:22:125 (1) - I like your heart formation here, but it's kinda ruined because of the stacking here - to avoid this, I think it's better to stack this above (5) instead
31. 03:25:375 (x) - I can still hear a cymbal sound coming from the song here, so... start the spinner 1/4 after and add a circle here (with finish)? (you can just easily arrange (2,3,4) in a straight diagonal line, though)
32. 03:28:375 (1,1) - Extend the first spinner by 1/4, and start the second spinner 1/4 after (I think this is obvious enough, the vocals are going this way)
33. 03:55:875 (5,7) - They aren't perfectly placed in the center (especially if you observe the slidertick), but this is barely noticeable

1. 0,75x flow faster than what I want, 0.5x flowed better...
2. I'll change some hitsound... yay for "I had ended and remembered I posted the last version and it wasn't ... " but yeah, i'm reading the suggestion trying them and deciding. (Yeah, hitsound aren't complete)
3. I may have corrected things in different ways
4. The under-track slider shall be fair game, totally... and anyway who can play with Hidden can really see it
5. the various formation are not really ruined by stacking, especially in the heart as the sliders are stacked under one notes, they do start from the same point
6. 03:28:375 (1,1) - It's correct as it's now. Thymeka say"... la verità~~" and the spinners are the 2 "~". I'm firstly following vocals and after drums, not the other way.

Crok425 wrote:

Sorry, man. Your map is good, I can't see anything but a few things.

[Coward Haku]
02:46:000 I don't like how that slider's placed.

[Hard]
03:25:125 Instead of there, put it 03:25:375.

Philippines wrote:

• Coward Haku

1. 00:04:375 (2) - This slider is unrankable.
   Why? is this not readable or anything?
   
2. 00:06:125 (1,2) - Stack these two notes.
   It's mirrored from a stack after
   
   
3. Oh and delete the two unused Timing Points on this diff.
   No unused timing points. (timing points are red lines). They're called uninherited

Philippines wrote:

• Normal

1. 01:16:125 (1) - Remove new combo. No
   
   
2. 01:20:125 (1) - ^. No
   
   
3. 01:28:375 (1)- Please move this closer to the next note. Ok
   
   
4. 02:27:375 (1,2,3,1,2,3).. - I suggest (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6..) Ok
   
   
5. Overall Difficulty -1Ok

• Hard

1. 01:06:125 (1) - Remove new combo. No
   
   
2. 01:01:875 (4,5) - I don't know if this is rankable, but whether or not, I advice you to change it. Why this should not be rankabile?
   
   
3. 01:38:875 (3,3) - ^. ^
   
   
4. 02:23:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why not move this to the center? Ok
   
   
5. 03:04:875 (4,5) - Like what I said. Why this should not be rankabile?

[/list]

1. Remove audio in your video to save some space
2. Seems [Coward Haku] suppose to be harder than [Hard] but it's only 4.82 star and [Hard] is 4.83...

1. 00:26:375 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better
2. 00:58:375 (1) - ^
3. 00:50:375 (x) - You can raise you volume since here until kiai end
4. 01:14:375 (1) - Finish instead
5. 01:22:375 (1) - ^
6. 01:30:375 (1) - ^
7. 01:46:375 (x) - Drag break to here
8. 01:54:375 (1) - Maybe finish? And also, you can raise volume until kiai end
9. 02:10:375 - 02:42:375 - This break is way too long, try map 02:10:375 - 02:26:375 part
10. 02:47:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - They are not in a line, well maybe you put them like this on purpose
11. 02:49:500 (x) - Insert break here
12. 02:53:375 (1) - Maybe finish? And also, you can raise volume until kiai end
13. 03:01:375 (1) - Yup, finish
14. 03:25:375 (1) - End with finish
15. 03:46:375 (1) - ^
16. 03:41:875 (1,1,1,1) - These 4 spinners are boring :/, why not try put some notes or slider instead?

1. 00:26:375 (1) - Finish instead of clap sounds better
2. 01:14:375 (2) - ^
3. 01:22:375 (2) - ^
4. 02:27:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh, no, this kind of jumps in normal is not a good idea, it could only appear in the hard of insane diff. :<
5. 03:09:375 (1) - ^
6. 03:28:375 (1) - End with finish

1. 00:33:375 (4) - No slow donw here to fit your partten?
2. 00:36:375 (6) - New combo to distinguish slow down slider? Slow down thought was nice and could be fun, but I strongly recommended you do a new combo for all your slow down sliders, or it would be hard to tell when they slow down
3. 00:59:875 (4) - It's not perfectly stack with the slider end of 00:59:125 (3), on purpose?
4. 02:41:875 (5) - This jump seems too far, try exchange 12 and 34?
5. 02:46:000 (2) - This one sounds odd, maybe start from 02:46:125 red tick and ends 02:46:375?
6. 02:48:875 (3) - I feel this speed up is meanless
7. 03:18:875 (4) - 1/3 part of slider path is hidden by previous slider, not so good
8. 03:28:375 (1,1) - Use one spinner instead seems better, the short 03:28:375 (1) one looked awkward

1. 00:57:125 (5) - Spacing
2. 01:06:125 (1) - Why slow donw here?
3. 01:06:625 (1) - I don't get why here a spinner, and ends 01:10:125...and why there's no break after it?
4. 02:15:875 (1) - This slider sounds weird, end at 02:16:875 then add a note at 02:17:125 would be better
5. 03:00:125 (5) - Spacing
6. 03:17:125 (x) - Add a note here, feel lack of a sound
7. 03:16:625 (1) - Meanless new combo
8. 03:25:125 (1) - This spinner should start at 03:25:375, end at 03:27:125 is fine, so you need to add another note at 03:25:125
9. 03:28:375 (1) - End with finish
   The finish sound you used in this diff is nice, but full of 1/2 beat notes and slider is just boring, try more other rhythm would be nice

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. Remove audio in your video to save some space
2. Seems [Coward Haku] suppose to be harder than [Hard] but it's only 4.82 star and [Hard] is 4.83...

[Easy]

1. 00:26:375 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better Ok
2. 00:58:375 (1) - ^ Ok
3. 00:50:375 (x) - You can raise you volume since here until kiai end Ok
4. 01:14:375 (1) - Finish instead Ok
5. 01:22:375 (1) - ^ Ok
6. 01:30:375 (1) - ^ Ok
7. 01:46:375 (x) - Drag break to here Ok
8. 01:54:375 (1) - Maybe finish? And also, you can raise volume until kiai end Ok
9. 02:10:375 - 02:42:375 - This break is way too long, try map 02:10:375 - 02:26:375 part Done with to nice sliders and some beat ^^
10. 02:47:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - They are not in a line, well maybe you put them like this on purpose No, its a error, thanks
11. 02:49:500 (x) - Insert break here Ok
12. 02:53:375 (1) - Maybe finish? And also, you can raise volume until kiai end Ok
13. 03:01:375 (1) - Yup, finish Ok
14. 03:25:375 (1) - End with finish Ok
15. 03:46:375 (1) - ^ Ok
16. 03:41:875 (1,1,1,1) - These 4 spinners are boring :/, why not try put some notes or slider instead?Deleted

[Normal]

1. 00:26:375 (1) - Finish instead of clap sounds better Ok
2. 01:14:375 (2) - ^ Ok
3. 01:22:375 (2) - ^ Ok
4. 02:27:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh, no, this kind of jumps in normal is not a good idea, it could only appear in the hard of insane diff. :< Fixed
5. 03:09:375 (1) - ^ Fixed
6. 03:28:375 (1) - End with finish Ok

[Hard]

1. 00:57:125 (5) - Spacing Ok
2. 01:06:125 (1) - Why slow donw here? Removed
3. 01:06:625 (1) - I don't get why here a spinner, and ends 01:10:125...and why there's no break after it? Removed
4. 02:15:875 (1) - This slider sounds weird, end at 02:16:875 then add a note at 02:17:125 would be better Ok
5. 03:00:125 (5) - Spacing Ok
6. 03:17:125 (x) - Add a note here, feel lack of a sound Ok
7. 03:16:625 (1) - Meanless new combo Ok
8. 03:25:125 (1) - This spinner should start at 03:25:375, end at 03:27:125 is fine, so you need to add another note at 03:25:125 Ok
9. 03:28:375 (1) - End with finish Ok
   The finish sound you used in this diff is nice, but full of 1/2 beat notes and slider is just boring, try more other rhythm would be nice

Easy and normal need more efforts on hitsound, they sounds irregular to me, hitsound in [Coward Haku] is the most nice one, so try add hitsound like that, there is a simple method to add hitsound like add clap on the 2nd and 4th white tick in a bar and add finish at long white tick, try it on

Breeze wrote:

[Coward Haku]

1. 00:36:375 (6) - New combo to distinguish slow down slider? Slow down thought was nice and could be fun, but I strongly recommended you do a new combo for all your slow down sliders, or it would be hard to tell when they slow down Should be fair game ? no, that's not a decent reason by itself. I don't want to use NC differently in some parts
2. 02:41:875 (5) - This jump seems too far, try exchange 12 and 34? but it do follow the pitch, changed with 3 slider u,u
3. 03:28:375 (1,1) - Use one spinner instead seems better, the short 03:28:375 (1) one looked awkward
   The spinners like this do follow voice on the map ( an Ah-ahhh)

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]

00:16:375 - D? It produces a contrast in tone difference with the next K
I opened the editor and founded it already to be a K, lol

00:24:375 - d corresponding to the bass
Changed

00:25:125 - the duplets does not sound well with the music
I prefer keeping them

00:30:375 - end the sentence as the music indicated? k ddk sounds better
I completely changed the pattern to a xxxx xx , so i did a similar thing with the successive one at 00:33:875

00:42:375 - I'll suggest a mild slow down rather than this, or start the slow down 1/4 later so that overlapping is avoided
01:46:375 - same as 0:42
Moved the slow down by 1/4

01:05:375 - streams 3 in a group does not sound well because the beats are 4 in a group. Try kdddkdk refer to the music.
03:16:125 - ddkdddkdd
It took a while to decide, but at the end i considered your suggestion and changed both of them

01:18:000 - dk?
Sounds better

01:22:625 - these 4-plets don't really fit with music too...
Hmm, i re-listened to them and i just changed 01:26:375 (1) - kddk to kddd, still i'm going to keep them

02:29:375 - remove the break artificially in .osu
Done


03:25:125 - ddk then start spinner 1/2 later
Not sure if i understood well here, i changed the final part of the pattern to a ddk, but the spinner should be starting the same at 03:25:375 , right now it's connected by 1/4 from the end of the stream; in Rokodo's Guidelines is an exception, dunno if it's rankable or not now

-most of the pattern here sounds ok, but the 1/6 should be removed and some remapping maybe needed over there.
Well, i know that those 1/6 feels weird, but i won't change them as it is the essence of the map; without those that will be a regular plain map.
I'm not using them to raise the global difficulty of the map, but more as something that brings a bit of originality on mapping.
And about gameplay, the song is both HRable and DTable in my opinion

• 
  Your video has audio data. You have to remove it and full-submit.

• 
  OD should be 2~3.

1. 00:32:125 (2) - Having many repeats is a bit confusing for newbie. So try to use the pattern below instead?
   
2. 00:42:375 (x) - Since there is a cymbal sound in the back, how about adding a note here and put finish?
3. 00:53:125 (1) - Same as 00:32:125 (2).
4. 01:20:125 (3) - ^
5. 01:22:375 (1) - Remove finish from the end. It doesn't fit so much.
6. 01:30:375 (1) - Don't use a jump on the easiest diff. And remove finish from the end.
7. 01:36:125 (2) - Same as 00:32:125 (2).
8. 01:38:375 (1) - Add finish to the top since there is a cymbal sound.
9. 01:57:125 (1) - Same as 00:32:125 (2).
10. 02:02:375 (1) - Add finish to the top.
11. 02:05:125 (1) - Same as 00:32:125 (2).
12. 02:25:875 (3) - Add finish to the end.
13. 02:56:125 (1) - Same as 00:32:125 (2).
14. 03:04:125 (1) - ^
15. 03:12:125 (1) - ^
16. 03:20:125 (1) - ^

• 
  AR-1.

1. 00:08:125 (4) - Using a slider which has many repeats is not so good for gameplay. Try the pattern below? This one fits the vocal more and better for gameplay imo.
   
2. 00:18:375 (1) - Because of other difficulties, you should add finish to this as well.
3. 00:53:125 (1,2) - Same as 00:08:125 (4).
   
4. 01:20:125 (1) - ^
5. 01:24:125 (5) - ^
6. 01:46:375 (7) - Add finish.
7. 01:57:125 (1) - Same as 00:53:125 (1,2).
8. 02:02:375 (1) - Use finish instead of clap.
9. 02:14:375 (2) - Not good to stack here.
10. 02:18:375 (2) - ^
11. 02:27:375 (1~) - To hit the long chain-of-circles is too hard for normal-player. Try to change some stuff to a slider please. Or remove (4) of each combos(if you fix like this one, you also have to change the spacing).
12. About the last KIAI - Since you copy&paste'd the previous pattern, I suggest you same stuff as above.

1. 00:16:375 (1) - Why don't you use finish here?
2. 00:32:875 (1) - Remove new combo.
3. 00:41:375 (1) - Add finish.
4. 00:42:875 (1) - Finish sound doesn't fit here. Remove it?
5. 00:46:125 (6,1) - Add finish to the end of (6), and remove it from (1).
6. 00:47:875 (1,3) - ^, also switch new combos.
7. 00:51:625 (4,5,6) - Looks weid. Use consistent spacing here please.
8. 01:06:125 (1) - Add finish to the end.
9. 01:51:875 (1,3) - Same as 00:47:875 (1,3).
10. 02:44:375 (5,1) - Switch new combo.
11. 02:46:375 (3,1) - ^
12. 02:48:375 (2) - Add new combo.
13. 03:09:875 (2,3) - Too narrow spacing. Use consistent spacing.
14. 03:12:125 (2) - Stack it with (6) correctly.
15. 03:17:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use consistent spacing.
16. 03:23:625 (4,1,2) - ^

1. 00:04:375 (2) - This slider is unrankable because the player cannot read the way.
2. 00:06:125 (1,2) - Stack them correctly.
3. 00:08:125 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:40:875 (7) - 0.50xSV seems too slow for me. 0.75xSV is enough. And don't change the SV on the way of slider.
5. 01:07:875 (5,6,7,8) - It's more beautiful if you put them with same spacing like the stream.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:28:875 (3) - Too confusing because of this change of SV. At least you should add a new combo here.(It's better to change the pattern though.)
7. 01:43:375 (3,4,5) - The stack looks broken due to stack leniency when playing. Try to use self-stack on these notes.
8. 02:22:375 (6) - The player cannot expect this change of SV. Use 0.75xSV or add a new combo please.
9. 02:54:625 (5) - This slider doesn't follow the music(vocal) well. Try below one instead.
   
10. 03:18:875 (4) - Kinda unreadable because of overlapping. Try to avoid overlapping if you can.
11. 03:21:375 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 01:43:375 (3,4,5).
12. 03:57:875 (T) - What are these green line?

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue. Sorry for taking long time.

[General]

• 
  Your video has audio data. You have to remove it and full-submit.

[Easy]

• 
  OD should be 2~3.

1. 00:32:125 (2) - Having many repeats is a bit confusing for newbie. So try to use the pattern below instead?
   
2. 00:42:375 (x) - Since there is a cymbal sound in the back, how about adding a note here and put finish?
3. 00:53:125 (1) - Same as 00:32:125 (2).
4. 01:20:125 (3) - ^
5. 01:22:375 (1) - Remove finish from the end. It doesn't fit so much.
6. 01:30:375 (1) - Don't use a jump on the easiest diff. And remove finish from the end.
7. 01:36:125 (2) - Same as 00:32:125 (2).
8. 01:38:375 (1) - Add finish to the top since there is a cymbal sound.
9. 01:57:125 (1) - Same as 00:32:125 (2).
10. 02:02:375 (1) - Add finish to the top.
11. 02:05:125 (1) - Same as 00:32:125 (2).
12. 02:25:875 (3) - Add finish to the end.
13. 02:56:125 (1) - Same as 00:32:125 (2).
14. 03:04:125 (1) - ^
15. 03:12:125 (1) - ^
16. 03:20:125 (1) - ^

[Normal]

• 
  AR-1.

1. 00:08:125 (4) - Using a slider which has many repeats is not so good for gameplay. Try the pattern below? This one fits the vocal more and better for gameplay imo.
   
2. 00:18:375 (1) - Because of other difficulties, you should add finish to this as well.
3. 00:53:125 (1,2) - Same as 00:08:125 (4).
   
4. 01:20:125 (1) - ^
5. 01:24:125 (5) - ^
6. 01:46:375 (7) - Add finish.
7. 01:57:125 (1) - Same as 00:53:125 (1,2).
8. 02:02:375 (1) - Use finish instead of clap.
9. 02:14:375 (2) - Not good to stack here.
10. 02:18:375 (2) - ^
11. 02:27:375 (1~) - To hit the long chain-of-circles is too hard for normal-player. Try to change some stuff to a slider please. Or remove (4) of each combos(if you fix like this one, you also have to change the spacing).
12. About the last KIAI - Since you copy&paste'd the previous pattern, I suggest you same stuff as above.

[Hard]

1. 00:16:375 (1) - Why don't you use finish here?
2. 00:32:875 (1) - Remove new combo.
3. 00:41:375 (1) - Add finish.
4. 00:42:875 (1) - Finish sound doesn't fit here. Remove it?
5. 00:46:125 (6,1) - Add finish to the end of (6), and remove it from (1).
6. 00:47:875 (1,3) - ^, also switch new combos.
7. 00:51:625 (4,5,6) - Looks weid. Use consistent spacing here please.
8. 01:06:125 (1) - Add finish to the end.
9. 01:51:875 (1,3) - Same as 00:47:875 (1,3).
10. 02:44:375 (5,1) - Switch new combo.
11. 02:46:375 (3,1) - ^
12. 02:48:375 (2) - Add new combo.
13. 03:09:875 (2,3) - Too narrow spacing. Use consistent spacing.
14. 03:12:125 (2) - Stack it with (6) correctly.
15. 03:17:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use consistent spacing.
16. 03:23:625 (4,1,2) - ^

Not bad, but still needs more works to get ranked.
Take a star :3

Suzully wrote:

[Coward Haku]

1. 00:04:375 (2) - This slider is unrankable because the player cannot read the way.
   
   Why players can't read it? Shouldn't you be able to tell if you can play it? Shouldn't an Insane player, the target of the diff, be able to tell?
   Don't just make slider unrankable when the rules say you can't read them.
   There are a bunch of sign you can read it: a the path is readable. the way it'll go is not certainly the way it meet the tick.
   
2. 00:06:125 (1,2) - Stack them correctly.
3. 00:08:125 (1,2) - ^
   
   Don't you know that auto-stacking make them worser or leave them the same?
   
4. 00:40:875 (7) - 0.50xSV seems too slow for me. 0.75xSV is enough. And don't change the SV on the way of slider.
   
   Perfectly playable, and slowed for the same reason. And changing SV during slider don't bug anything as the Slider is constructed in a certain point.
   
5. 02:22:375 (6) - The player cannot expect this change of SV. Use 0.75xSV or add a new combo please.
   
   But the player's should know I used an hold slider during voice holds (aka gorgheggi)
6. 03:18:875 (4) - Kinda unreadable because of overlapping. Try to avoid overlapping if you can.
   
   Nah, It's justified

Take a star :3

- [Neo's Taikoward] : Combo1 : 0,128,255 
Combo2 : 255,86,4 
Combo3 : 0,128,255 
Combo4 : 255,86,4 
Combo5 : 0,128,255 
Combo6 : 255,86,4 
Combo7 : 0,128,255 
Combo8 : 255,86,4

Chewin wrote:

Ciao, dalla mia queue ;3

[General]
Neo non capisco il bisogno di mettere più volte lo stesso colore nelle combo colour:

- [Neo's Taikoward] : Combo1 : 0,128,255 
Combo2 : 255,86,4 
Combo3 : 0,128,255 
Combo4 : 255,86,4 
Combo5 : 0,128,255 
Combo6 : 255,86,4 
Combo7 : 0,128,255 
Combo8 : 255,86,4

Usali solo una volta lolz.
Nella hard termina il primo kiai time in: 02:11:875 come nelle altre difficoltà. Ok
~

[Easy]
00:32:375 (3) - Potresti aggiungere un finish alla fine di questo slider per consistenza con 00:30:375 (1) Ok
00:51:375 (3) - Io farei in questo modo, segue meglio il ritmo e la voce ed è più semplice per una easy: Non mi piace D:

00:59:375 (3) - Se hai seguito sopra.^
01:01:125 (1) - Troppi repeats per una easy, i beginners non sanno quando dover lasciare, fai così:
Ok
01:04:125 (2) - Rimuovi circle, il ritmo resta sempre ottimo. Ricorda che questa è una easy e devi farla il più semplice possibile ;3 Ok
01:15:125 (2) - ^ Ok
01:23:125 (2) - ^ Ok
01:25:875 (1) - Siccome stai seguendo la voce, questo slider dovrebbe iniziare in 01:26:375 (1) e rimuovere un repeat Ok
01:30:375 (1) - Riducilo di 1/2, fino alla white long tick praticamente
01:55:125 (2) - Rimuovi circle Ok
02:00:125 (2) - ^ Ok
02:03:125 (2) - ^ Ok
02:11:875 (1) - Muovi il primo waypoint 1 grid a destra per farlo perfettamente simmetrico
02:15:875 (1) - Senza usare il grid snap, muovi il redwaypoint centrale in x:172 y:128 Ok
02:54:125 (2) - Rimuovi circle Ok
02:59:125 (2) - ^ Ok
03:02:125 (2) - ^ Ok
03:04:125 (1) - Troppi repeat, come ho scritto sopra, fai come prima ;3 Ok
03:10:125 (2) - Aaah copy pasted part <.< rimuovi circle qui e nelle altre parti che ti ho scritto, è inutile che le riscrivo Ok
03:25:500 (1) - Spinner troppo lungo secondo me °D° No, sta bene. Non posso mettere tre spinner per scandire i tre diversi vocalizzi, sarebbero un po’ difficili per una easy
La mappa è veramente buona, però ci sono troppe note di troppo per una easy, quelle che stanno sulle red tick che ho scritto sopra ti consiglio di cancellarle. Il ritmo 1/1 per una easy è meglio.

[Normal]
00:02:125 (1) - NO. Assolutamente non puoi mettere un circle prima dell'offset. Rimuovilo Perché non potrei? La voce, che è ciò che seguo, parte prima dell’offset, quindi comincio da lì
00:08:125 (4) - Dovresti usare NC qui per consistenza con la parte precedente Ok
00:12:125 (4) - ^ Ok
00:16:375 (6) - ^ Ok
00:31:125 (2) - Distance snap questo circle plz. Meglio evitare jumps in una normal. Muovilo tra il (3) e lo slider precedente Ok
02:34:375 (4) – Nc Ok
Troppi overlap secondo me <.<


[Hard]
Why NC everywhere D:
00:48:125 (5) - 1 grid sinistra e 1 sopra, per simmetria. Ok
01:52:125 (5) - 1 grid su per simmetria col 3 Ok
A parte tutte ste NC, la mappa è abbastanza buona

E' tutto, buona fortuna, spero ti sia di aiuto

Chewin wrote:

Non puoi perchè so che è unrankable. Forse mi sbaglio, ma al 90% sono sicuro lol (Intendo la nota prima del'offset)