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Thank you for the mod.yuzu__rinrin wrote:
hi!
from my queue~
[general]I tried extending the spinner to 05:01:938 but that doesn't work anyway. The drain time does not include the spinner.
- unrankeble
Because the drain time does not meet 5 minutes.
You can avoid spinner by extending it to 05:01:938 -.
[Inner Oni]Also changed.
- 00:10:081 (26) - change k
low pitch.
It is also possible to maintain color consistency with 00:06:652 (16) - .
Changed k to d on first one.- 00:22:938 - (kkkd)-k-d → (kkkdddk) (1/6snap)
I think that it is better to follow as the sound continues.
I want to avoid using kkkddd pattern.- 00:26:366 - ^
- 00:29:795 - ^
- 00:33:224 - ^
- 02:36:652 - ^
Same here, that's a bit too much 1/6.- 00:47:474 (252,253,254,255,256) - kddk-k
00:47:474 - 00:47:795 - 00:48:009 - These include sharp cymbal sounds, so setting it to k results in a color scheme that is more suitable for the song.
Good point! Changed.- 01:01:188 (351,352,353,354,355) - ^
^- 01:05:581 (380,384) - change k
These include sharp cymbal sounds, so setting it to k results in a color scheme that is more suitable for the song.
and, The flow improves by interwoven k.
That's pretty good. Changed.- 01:08:581 (405) - change k
Because the sound becomes higher, set this part to k.
And you can show the next D as a stronger sound.
That's better. Changed.- 01:14:152 - add k
molody follow please. w
Whoops, deleted that by accident. Added.- 02:57:009 - ^
^ #copypaste- 01:17:366 (467) - change d
You can expect the effect that makes the sound of the next piano stand out.
That's a nice change!- 03:00:223 (62) - ^
^- 01:31:831 (570,571) - ctrl+g
01:31:831 - piano, 01:31:938 - Drum kick.
Because the sound of Drum is heavy, I think that piano also sounds beautiful by setting it to d.- 03:14:688 (167,168) - ^
- 03:38:688 (347,348) - ^
Changed.- 01:34:081 -
try this img. melody follow pattern.
Changed to dk[dddk]d[kkkd]- 03:16:938 - ^
- 03:40:938 - ^
^^^- 02:06:224 (774) - change k
high pitch follow. (Compared with 02:06:652 (775) - )
that's all
good luck~!
I know that it should be over 5 minutes, but look at this.yuzu__rinrin wrote:
before
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After
If it sees in the forum,will not be included in the drain time, but if it is over 5 minutes in the game it is rankble.
example) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/572614
It's okay! it helped!agu wrote:
I'm bored as hey not a good mod but whatever
00:30:331 - maybe change this to d to make the pattern less awkward, also consistent with stuff like 00:28:509 - Changed!
00:37:295 - change this to k imo fits the pitch, feel free to make the following kdk to dkd if you think that complements the change more
00:39:009 - same as above
00:40:724 - same - i'll keep those as it is for now.
02:29:795 - this pattern is......I read you don't want to use kkkdddk so change it to kkkdkkd probably - lol idk what that is xd.. I'll change it.
02:40:616 - d similiar to my first suggestion - sure! it's the same later on too
sorry for the short mod
Thank you for the mod! It helped quite a bit.Cocoaaa wrote:
from my modding queue (I forgot say it X)))
oh I see 5:01Inner Oni:O cool song nice for DTsome point I hear oo oooo please try to chack and fix
00:09:438 move to 00:09:009 - Done!
00:17:152 maybe can add k - Done!
00:34:938 try dk? high sound it's here 00:35:045
00:38:366 ^ - okay
00:44:366 channg to kkdkd? before and later is kdkkd - i want to have some variety in patterns. There is no reason to have a specific pattern.
00:54:224 change to k it's feel better - I'm not sure about that.
00:58:081 kkdkd? - again, it's just for variety.
01:04:938 ^ - i'll keep it as it is
01:06:116 add d - Done!
01:12:652 try my pattern - i'll keep it the same
01:13:402 I hear sound. please add k - done!
01:16:616 here - it feels a little awkward for me, but i might change it later
01:20:688 add note - added d
01:31:509 I hear 1/6 .try - changed to kdkk[dkkk]kddk
02:29:795 why you don't use - this is the second appearance. i want it a bit more difficult. might change in the future
02:46:938 try it - changed to dk[kkkd] because every 1/1 beat i put a d
02:55:295 like 01:12:652 - keeping it the same again
04:22:081 kkdkd?
04:25:509 ^
04:35:795 ^
04:39:224 ^ - those are for variety. map can't have same patterns all the time. it's boring that way.
but I think you need more mod
some pattern not match with song
good luck
Thanks for the mod!Protonori wrote:
From my modding queue~
[General]
Check AiMod. The ending of first kiai isn't snapped. This is intentional 1ms delay so that the last note doesn't go behind the kkkkkk thing.
[Inner Oni]
02:23:581 (816) - Delete to be consistent with 02:16:724. - Okay.
02:27:759 (828) - Change to d for consistency with 02:29:473. - It's the same as i do before. Stays.
02:30:331 (850) - Change to d? It flows better imo. - it was d before, changed to k. i'll keep it for now as it is.
02:33:223 - Shouldn't you use 7 notes of 1/6 here, like you did at 02:29:795? I put 7 note pattern later, but not here. Just for consistency.
03:52:938 - Add SV lines here. It's very brief, but I don't think you should let the overlap at 03:53:366 happen. - Done.
04:27:545 - Add k for consistency? - the last note was supposed to be a finisher, and i don't do xxX patterns. Thanks for pointing that out.
04:44:366 (827,828,829,830) - dkdd? I think it matches the music. - Done.
Good luck with ranking this!
_DUSK_ wrote:
Worst mod ever, here goes xD
03:49:402 - add a finisher here? Adds a stronger effect to the song
03:49:723 ^ - since it's the strongest part of the song, i think it's gonna work
03:07:295 - kd here? high pitch and then a low pitch sound in the music - done
03:24:866 - change to k? High pitch here - i'll keep it the same for now
03:52:081 - dkk? sounds better - i'll stay at dkd because there's the kick sound and i wanna keep the 1/2 snap on d
03:52:295 - change to d if the above change is made - i changed this anyway lol
03:55:724 - Change to k? sounds better and there will be less repetition of dkddk - yeah i like that more actually
04:02:582 - ^ - ^
04:30:224 - change to k? sounds better - stays the same
Good luck with ranking this
Thanks for the mod, it was really helpful!Marm wrote:
heya, mod as requested from my queue o/frozen world
- 01:08:795 - from this part to the kiai try to focus more on the piano, it seems like there's lacking notes here. You can make longer streams to fill the sounds on some parts like 01:13:188 - , 01:13:402 - and 01:13:831 - . This for example -> 01:14:259 - is a good part for a break but those back then and some other ahead (you can probably notice them) should be filled. - i put a few more notes there, i think this will work, i didn't want to make long streams there and put some breaks because that felt better imo, but if you think its better to fill that, i'll do it
- 02:20:152 (809) - this sounds better if deleted tbh. there's no drum sound here and you already did a kd pattern a few moments ago on 02:18:866 - . Removing it follows the music in a better way and also contrasts on the solo kat. - sure. i have a bad habit of slowly making the patterns more complex despite the song haviing the same intensity throughout
- 02:23:581 (816) - same as above. - done
- 02:51:652 - same as the first suggestion as it's a similar part. You could also make this part even harder as it's the second part that is before the main kiai. - again, i tried to put more notes in there, hope this is okay
- 03:03:652 - nice place for a sv buildup before the kiai. If you don't change the sv on the first note of the kat 1/6 then you'd have exactly 10 notes. Adding +0.01sv on each should make it smooth as the sv here is 1.1x and in the kiai 1.2x. This would also be more consistent with the sv slowdown at the end of the kiai. - applied to both kiais
- 03:17:152 - this 1/6 is in a wrong place tbh. Try making a kddkddk 1/6 pattern starting from 03:17:366 - until 03:17:795 - instead, it fits better with the piano. - as the piano sounds are high, i wouldn't do kddkddk, because i don't think it fits too well, but i changed it to (kkkk)k
- 03:28:509 - would also be good if you smooth the sv. This time adding +0.02sv as the difference is 0.2x. - done
- 03:41:152 - same as 03:17:152 - . - same
- Try making the beginning and the end with a lower sv. It looks nice with the intensity of the song. 00:00:224 - and 04:20:795 - as 0.9x. You could also slowly increase sv at the end in the "wooooooooosh" sound from around 04:36:224 - to make the last 1/6s easier to read. - the bpm is low enough that i don't really want to make a low SV
- If you like the idea of making the second and last kiai harder then I have some suggestions like making 03:14:902 - 1/6 instead of 1/4 as the piano allows it.; - done
- Increase the lenght of the streams and finish them on important/strong sounds or let the important/strong sounds be single notes as they stand out from the rest. - yeah, i'll look into that if people complain
Looks promising! From the suggestions above I think the one regarding the piano notes before the kiai is the most important one so focus more on that.
Good luck on this map, I want to see it ranked soon o/