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- aimod
- where's the vid?
- the diff name tsukiko-chan doesn't suit so well tbh
- spread isn't balanced enough from Insane and tsukiko-chan. even for Normal and Hard too
- in Normal, a lot of green lines are really useless, based on the volume settings there only. should've remove those and arrange them well
- hitsounds weren't being made properly
- start the 2nd kiai at 01:25:468 - , not 01:25:114 - for an emphasize
- 00:01:468 (2,3,4) - try this http://puu.sh/yjstR/a5214eb049.jpg
- 00:12:056 (1,2) - this sounds like Easy diff for me. could make sth like http://puu.sh/yjsyt/cde793f7f2.jpg or u can make it on ur own
- 00:14:879 (3,4) - i'd make it to 1/2 reverse if i were u
- 00:17:703 (1,2) - same one here. should be like http://puu.sh/yjsC9/44caaf8a57.jpg
- 00:21:232 (5,6,1) - watch your DS
- 00:21:938 (1,3) - i wouldn't recommend you overlapping this, as it will lead them misreading this to combo break for beginners
- 00:23:350 - this part... seeing those 2 combos each there doesn't suit so well tbh. go with 4 instead by removing 00:24:762 (1) - 00:27:585 (1) - 00:30:409 (1) - NC there. oh also, 00:23:350 (2) - should be NC
- 00:30:409 (1) - why not 1/2 reverse or 1/1 slider instead?
- 00:35:350 (2,1) - in aesthetic way, blanket this properly
- 00:45:938 (5) - NC this, 00:47:350 (1) - remove NC
- 00:47:350 (1,2,3) - this doesn't suit well tbh. how about this for vocal? http://puu.sh/yjsNJ/45b3edbdc3.jpg
- 00:50:173 (1,2,3) - this too
- 00:51:585 (1,1) - 1/2 reverse or 1/1 slider
- 00:57:232 (1,2) - uhh, timing like this would be a pain to play with. try this http://puu.sh/yjsR8/62cf4282f3.jpg
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- 00:18:232 (2,3,1,2) - this view isn't interesting to see and would be a bit of problem for them reading this
- 00:28:291 (2,1) - this overlap could lead to sth that amateur players won't like it by 00:28:997 (1) -
- 00:54:761 (1,1,1) - i wouldn't recommend u NC those each other, but only 00:55:820 (1) - suits well
- 01:06:938 (1) - if this weren't a reverse slider, it'd fit well as it was emphasize the vocal there
- 01:09:938 (1) - this rhythm didn't suit well for me, as there wasn't any note at 01:10:026 - . could be this instead http://puu.sh/yjtCM/e4ae7a99da.jpg
- 01:24:585 (5,6) - stacks
[light i]
- sounds like "Insane" for me based on this diff
- 00:45:938 (1,2) - i'd use 1/1 sliders there for the vocal. 00:48:761 (1,2) - too
- 00:54:409 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - notice that (1) is a downbeat. the spacing between (2) to (1) is low, but (1) to (2) is high. sth like this could work for example http://puu.sh/yjtMK/3059b177bc.jpg
- 01:05:173 (5) - there isn't anything to follow on 01:05:261 - due to an absence of a note there. removing 1/4 slider could work and replace it as a note
- 01:25:467 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - stacks? aw come on, you can do better than that. at least i've provided u an example like 00:54:409 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
- 00:24:585 (5,1) - stack this instead
- 00:27:585 (1,2) - ^
- 00:39:585 (3) - the vocal's pitch is high and fits for an emphasize, like this for example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9514943
- 00:43:820 (3,4,5,6) - i wouldn't make the spacing this low and easier to play if i were you
- 00:50:173 (2,3,4,5) - for a calm part here, this should've been easier to play, like pentagon form flow
- 00:54:409 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - you can totally make it pretty in view like this for example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9514954
- 01:05:173 (5,6,7) - woah what's all this 1/4 sliders here? should've been this for a perfect rhythm to follow http://puu.sh/yju14/d0862efdfa.jpg
- 01:09:232 (6) - there isn't any note at blue tick for this 1/4 slider
- 01:13:820 (5,6,1) - didn't see this one coming, as u never did this one before. plus, this didn't suit rly well for a song like this. just stack it normally like u did on 00:50:879 (1,2,3) - for example
- 01:16:291 (3,4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/yju5g/79528909b3.jpg
- 01:21:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - this is totally overmap tbh, as the notes weren't present as u did here. the right rhythm is this http://puu.sh/yju7d/92f07a62ce.jpg
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