Hi. Saw the new diff and want to help you get it ready before christmas, so here's a mod. No kudosu necessary since this is a continuation.
00:28:657 (3,1) – see how this is close? You could be symmetric at 00:30:532 (1,3) - and make it similarly that close
http://puu.sh/yMyq4/8d6e3b5c1b.jpg00:34:282 (1,2,3,1,2) – There's quite a few 2/1 breaks around here which feels weirdly calm. It's hard to desribe why, but after 00:38:969 (2) – the pause feels like it's stopping the map from doing stuff. I kind of like making this a (2) a 1/1 slider. You could also put a circle at 00:37:563 – since that would be a better place to fill in the rhythm. Same for similar sections at 01:36:157 (1,2,3,1,2) – etc.
01:15:532 (3,4) – this ½ rhythm is a bit more confusing than the rest of the difficulty. Consider using a ½ slider which plays itself, so it might be easier:
http://puu.sh/yMyjI/8d4affb434.jpg. Also 02:17:407 (3,4) – etc.
01:02:407 (1,3) – These don't quite blanket as nice as it could, make (3) less curvy and it will match (1) a bit better.
03:11:313 (4) – Consider deleting so that there's a break in rhythm? Especially if you reject 00:34:282 (1,2,3,1,2) – because this is a big difference in the interpretation of the song and how to add rest. If so, be aware of 03:18:813 (4) -
Good luck, and merry Christmas!