Riko (CV: Tomita Miyu), Reg (CV: Mariya Ise) - Deep in Abyss

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00:06:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - you apparently tried to fix things here but I really would say the spacing usage between the combos should be the other way around (I mean the smaller spacing for 00:06:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and the bigger for 00:07:151 (1,2,3,4) - ) because this is more like representing the piano by spacing rather than you doing for the hitsounds accordingly aka the drums. and for the sake of playability because the smaller spaced stream section plays quite awkward to jump onto the slider.

00:10:596 (1) - I have no clue why a new combo is here, a single combo along with the equally spaced stream looks a mess. I assume the new combo for 00:10:707 (1) - is probably supposed to emphasize the piano notes but that only makes 00:10:596 (1) - useless as a note as well. https://delisha.s-ul.eu/zBaWiA1W reworking the rhythm like this way will improve the aesthetic + would be more obvious what you're trying to do on this.

00:17:596 (5) - is this jump really something? the rhythm here is randomly mapped with a 1/4 reverse slider which forces the players sightread this a bit, overlap it with the spacing like 00:16:484 (1,2) - has.

00:27:373 (5) - tbh whistle fits

00:31:596 (5) - is spaced too much?? don't think the jump does do anything special in the first place but this unnecessarily placed away with such a huge spacing, could decrease it at least where the follow points don't show up.

00:39:929 (2,3) - 00:40:818 (6,7) - these circles still can be spaced up more the intensity from the monstrata alt patterns to this it's incredibly a big change when the violins and the little bigger drums are the only reason you ended up making this gap.

01:00:484 (7) - making a jump from 01:00:373 (6) - could give a better flow and somewhat consistency with the other patterns here

01:16:707 (1) - this overlap with 01:16:263 (3) - is really gross to me, literally you can do anything to avoid https://delisha.s-ul.eu/l9rlq8PA / https://delisha.s-ul.eu/iWEE3zJQ theres a lot of the ways to map it better
kwk
fixed everything
last point did some other pattern

thx delis
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Topic Starter
Kaifin
all updated
Karen
what is bgplaceholder.png

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00:03:484 (7) - the sound ends 00:03:818 - here imo so try extend the slider?
00:21:707 (5,1) - pretty weird that you don't space them when you did something different 00:14:596 (5,1) - here
00:38:596 (4,1) - spacing could be larger than 00:38:707 (1,2) - this to emphasize 00:38:707 (1) - this note
Topic Starter
Kaifin

Karen wrote:

what is bgplaceholder.png woops removed it

top
00:03:484 (7) - the sound ends 00:03:818 - here imo so try extend the slider? sure i extended it and lowered the sv a little to keep the pattern
00:21:707 (5,1) - pretty weird that you don't space them when you did something different 00:14:596 (5,1) - here spaced and changed up the pattern a bit, now i think its a much better pattern
00:38:596 (4,1) - spacing could be larger than 00:38:707 (1,2) - this to emphasize 00:38:707 (1) - this note shifted its position + angle slightly,
i didn't want the emphasis to be too big but hopefully now its more noticeable
thank you, all applied, i moved 00:46:707 (1,2,1,2) - down slightly as well so that the transition from 00:46:040 (1,2,3) - would play a bit better as well
Karen
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KittyAdventure
Congratulations! :0
riptiondesc
Cool set

I initially failed like 10 times on kwk's diff at 01:07:151 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - without having any HP issues elsewhere

but I'm probably just too weak xd - a rank 200k has a pass

obviously this pattern isn't meant to be comfortable to hit

noticed HP for top diff was lowered to 6 and it's 6 on kwk's so maybe something to consider for spread... it's probably fine tho since kusano's diff is HP 6 too
Topic Starter
Kaifin
thank you everyone!

@ription the hp on the kwk diff is fine, i havent seen anyone else run into issues with it yet but i will keep it in mind for the future, thanks for the feedback
Doormat
oh, been meaning to check this but then exams lol. grats though!
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