1. Don't you think the note on 00:02:842 should be moved earlier to 00:02:700 since that's when the sound is?
2. You also ignore the same sound on 00:04:964 and the sliderhead at 00:05:106 doesn't represent any sound in the song. My suggestion: remove 00:05:106 (1,2) and replace with a note at 00:04:964 and a reverse slide at 00:05:389 like this:
3. Another similar issue with the slider at 00:07:370. Maybe remove it and replace with a 3/4 slider starting at 00:07:228 like this:
4. This is a bit subjective, so feel free to ignore this one. The objects at 00:12:464 (2,3,4) don't fit the persisting instrument and voice sounds, I think. Maybe replace them with a note at 00:12:464, a spinner from 00:12:747 to 00:13:596, and a note at 00:13:879. Or scrap the note at 00:13:879 and just make the spinner last until then
5. 00:19:681 - why not add a note at this part, to represent the "na" syllabe.
6. There's an unrepresented sound at 00:40:766. Maybe add a note here or remove the note at 00:41:332 and add a 0.80 speed slider like this:
(it's supposed to look like a nagi but meh I'm bad at slider shapes)
