1. Alwaysyukaz
2. ASPIRIN
3. Backfire
4. Cocoaaa
5. Dinocrit
6. Diva Days
7. Nardoxyribonucleic
8. neonat
9. Poii
10. Protonori
11. [R]
12. rew0825
13. salchow
14. Stefan
15. Thousand
16. Vulkin

1. Song Source
2. osu!taiko NSM Beatmapping Contest runner up

Protonori wrote:

From my modding queue~
Remember that these are mostly suggestions. Feel free to ignore them.

[Muzukashii]
AiMod: There's an unsnapped object at 01:41:430. There's also a "File missing" (all diffs) which may be related to the (WIP?) storyboard. ✔ -
Fixed, thanks.

00:33:973 - Add d, so the pattern length matches 00:34:621? ✔ - Ok, I agree.
00:39:162 - Add d to make pattern length match 00:39:811. ✔ - ^

[Oni]
AiMod: There's an unsnapped object at 01:40:781. ✔ - Fixed, thanks again.

00:09:162 (61,62,63,64,65) - dkdkd, like you used in Inner Oni? I think it matches the music. ✔ - Yap, this pattern is cool. Changed.
00:19:541 (28,29,30,31,32) - ^ ✔ - ^
00:29:919 (28,29,30,31,32) - ^ ✔ - ^
...etc. I shouldn't repeat myself too much lol

01:06:567 (31) - d? ✖ - It doesn't correspond to consistency.


[Inner Oni]
Quick comment concerning the SV:
It was a bit hard to tell the difference between 1/6 and 1/4 [ex: 00:09:162]. I would suggest reducing SV when you use 1/6. ✖ - I like this SV change.

00:11:433 (9) - Use d instead? ✔ - Make dkkdk pattern here.
00:14:270 (38) - k, to emphasize the pitch change at 00:14:352? ✖ - This stream is mirrored. I used k in next similar stream.
00:16:297 (6,7,8) - ddk? You used this pattern at 00:21:487, and there is no difference in the music. (It also sounds better than dkk imo). ✔ - It was done for variation, but okay, changed.
00:29:676 (35,36) - Use kd instead? ✔ - Changed.
00:33:000 (12,13,14) - Use kdk? The pitch for these triples is always [high, low, high], so I think they should all end in k. The only exception is:
00:33:649 (18,19,20) - this triple, where the pitch is simply ascending. You already used ddk, so I would suggest dkd for this. ✖ - I like mirrored patterns, lul.

Good luck with ranking this!

[R] wrote:

yo

[Kantan]
00:36:081 - change kat to emphasize don forward ✔ - Ok, changed.
00:50:027 - add note or 00:51:648 - delete, for a good build up ✔ - Added d here.

[Futsuu]
00:45:810 - u may change xx xx to xxx x to follow the drum ✔ - Ok, I agree. Btw this makes more variability.
01:10:783 - change kat ? ✖ - This sound is the same as the previous one
00:10:135 - change don, to give difference between other kat (and emphasize note forward) ✖ - So strong sounds of drums.

[Muzukashii]
00:19:865 - | 00:20:027 - delete, muzukashii need some 2/1 break once ✔ - Changed.
00:30:243 - ^ ✔ - ^

[Oni]
00:10:135 - change don ✔ - Ok, changed it in all diffs.
00:33:973 - change don ? ✔ - Yes, it's better.
00:36:162 - move 00:36:162 - to make drum sound more clear ✔ - Changed to kkd pattern here.
00:36:243 - can change don if ^ applied ✔ - ^.
00:50:027 - delete ? the pitch you follow stop here ✔ - Agree. Btw this corresponds to consistency much better.

maybe just that from me
good luck

Vulkin wrote:

2nd part of my horribly late mod

-Muzukashii-
00:18:081 (45) - Maybe k? so it makes contrast with the dkdkdk afterwards
00:28:459 (45) - ^
Can't say much about this one, its pretty good

-Oni-
00:09:162 - Maybe kdkdk ddk instead? its a bit easier to hit imo, and follows the pitch a bit better, maybe
00:19:541 - ^
00:29:919 - ^
Abundance of Mono-Triplet remind me of muzu diff x), maybe change a few of the ddd/kkk to ddk, kdk, etc?
01:01:053 - ddkkd kkd maybe? so it follows the dkdkdkd youre doing with the sound sample
01:11:432 - kkddk ddk for the same reason as above maybe?
01:43:622 (92) - Not sure about this note, maybe delete?

-Inner Oni-
00:31:135 - I think a k could fit here too owo
the 1/6 dkdkdkdkdkdkd they fit, but they also feel a bit odd for me, maybe kdkdkdkdk could work?

The diffs in general are too good imo
good luck!!

rew0825 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue!

Oni

1. 00:01:217 (8,9) - How about move to 00:01:136 and change to k both? Look it better follow the melody. ✖ - Nah, don't like it.
2. 00:06:406 (41,42) - Same as above ^. ✖ - ^
3. 00:09:162 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - How about change to ddddk kkd? Look it better but is fine if you refuse because it my feeling :3. ✖ - Changed it to kdkdk ddk pattern.
4. 00:11:433 (7,8,9,10) - 00:16:622 (7,8,9) - 00:21:811 (7,8,9) - 00:27:000 (7,8,9) - I want this change to similar like first ;w; It's look better because the start melody of this is instead more than finish melody and I want the note is opposite with the before note. (Ex. ddk kkd or dkd kdk) ✔ - Ok, I like your suggestion, but I change it a little different.
5. 00:48:405 (2) - How about change this to d and 00:48:946 (5,6) - change to kd. For make 00:48:405 to 00:49:378 opposite pattern? I think it's better. ✖ - I think, pattern like this is a little difficult for Oni.
6. 00:52:946 (34,35,36) - 00:58:135 (7,8,9) - 01:03:324 (7,8,9) - 01:08:513 (7,8,9) - Same as heading (4) but I suggest to change notes like this. (Ex. ddk kdd or dkk kkd) ✖ - No, I use a completely different logic here. I use K only on red lines and nowhere else.
7. 01:16:621 (27,28,29,30) - Change to k d d k? The note on (27) is highest sound, (28,29) I think melody is similar and (30) is different with (28,29) so It should change to that. ✖ - Yes, but they are strong bass sounds.
8. 01:34:457 (34,35,36) - 01:39:647 (67,68,69) - Same as heading (4). ✖ - ^

Muzukashii

1. 00:18:081 (45) - Change to k? The melody is similar like before note. ✔ - Accepted.
2. 00:28:459 (45) - Same as above ^. ✔ - ^
3. 01:21:810 (22,23) - Ctrl+g? I think first note sound is higher second. ✖ - Strong sound of drum at 01:21:972 (23)

Kantan

1. 00:32:513 (2,3,4,5) - How about change to d dkd? Look it follow the melody as well. ✔ - Yeah, it's better.
2. 01:14:026 (2,3,4,5) - Same as above ^. ✔ - ^

That's all from me. Good luck Shoot star :3

salchow wrote:

NM mod from my queue

Kantan

00:02:676 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would probobly nerf this part just a bit, because there is kai part right after the begining. ✔ - Yap, I did it.

00:46:459 (2) - You should consider removing k because there is no sound. ✖ - I add it to be consistant with 00:46:459 (2) - .

01:27:972 (2) - ^ ✖ - ^

00:58:459 (16,17,18,19,20) - Meh, bit unconsistant. Just copy paste this pattern 00:53:270 (7,8,9,10,11) But quite unsure. ✖ - I did this for more variability.

01:08:837 (11,12,13,14,15) - ^ ✖ - ^


The ending part you can leave just as it is.


Futsuu

00:02:676 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Like kantan, but you could add some breaks in there. ✔ - ^.

00:14:028 (13) - I would remove d and leave a break 24:406 (13) - ^ ✔ - I removed this note.

probably6 - you should probobly map this sound. I don't understand, what should I map. Lul

00:49:702 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Right here you can make a build up instead (instructions):

00:49:378 : - use k 00:50:027 - use k 00:50:675 (6,7,8) - 1/1 kdk pattern 00:51:648 (13,14,15) - reverse the pattern to kkd ✔ - I removed these notes to make build up: 00:49:702 (5,6)

01:31:864 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^ ✔ - ^


Muzukashii

00:50:675 (13) - remove da k, cause it fits better to me. ✔ - Accepted.

01:32:188 (13) - ^ ✔ - ^


Oni

Cant play oni


Inner oni

Cant play inner oni

Diva Days wrote:

[ Futsuu]

This diff is pretty well done.

00:41:270 (36) - the kat should be on 00:41:432 ✔ - Wow, it's cool rhythm! I like it.
01:22:783 (36) - ^ ✔ - ^

additonal suggestion :

00:20:838 - the pattern for variety, but how about this : keep kkd, then change next triples to kdk ✖ - kdk doesn't fit here, I think.

[ Oni]

This diff is pretty well done.

00:16:297 - kkd isn't match with song, although u did it for variety. ✔ - Ok, changed.
00:27:162 - ^ ✔ - ^
00:32:351 (7) - change to don, it's same sound as (6) like u did it on 01:13:702 ✔ - Changed.

i really can't find error, take my star!

Backfire wrote:

[General]
The weird OD's are ok in practice but look funny to me, I'd say simple .5x variants are better than doing it through a format.
Why is the top open on the background? I don't feel like there is any need for it, you can just like, use normal background. I forget the term for it lmao
✔ - Changed OD to 3.8 in Futsuu diff and 5.3 in Oni diff.
[Kantan]
00:46:459 - Kind of just personal preference but I like the d k d k difference, so changing this to d is better for me.
01:27:972 - ^
✔ - OK, all accepted.
Not much to talk about with this diff, it's simple and fine. Fits spread well, it seems.

[Futsuu]
I kind of dislike a lot about this diff but not in the way that is constructive, I just personally hate this pattern (kdd) so it's not worth it for me to talk about it.
In a lot of spots I felt like it could have followed melody more properly instead of forcing kkd and kdd diversity, but it's ok. This is not a bad thing, and I am not complaining, just telling you why I won't mod this diff since it's not constructive for me to do so. Though I will say this -> OD4 is better than the odd number OD you have.
✖ - I like kdd pattern and OD grows by arithmetic progression to make spread better so I don't want to change it.

[Muzukashii]
00:50:675 - Moving this to 00:50:837 - matches the melody which you are mapping more properly
01:32:188 - Delete to match above?
✔ - Changed.

[Oni]
00:00:082 - 00:10:460 - I feel like this section is not properly matching the intensity of the music. It starts off too fast, too dense. I recommend completely restructuring with heavy 1/2 instead, to transition into 1/4 at the kiai. Plus it just sounds awkward, how there is missing sections that start off as k k.
✔ - Agree, I remaped this part.

[Inner Oni]
Same goes as oni, for the intro.
I'm not a big fan of the wiggly notes in the beginning, I feel like they aren't going all-in (not crazy enough), so they seem pointless. It's just for fluff, I understand, but I dunno if I like it like I said. The ones later in the map are crazy enough, but rank-ability seems weird imo, not something I am good for talking about.
✔ - Remaped intro and maked SV-changes less crazy.


This was a really terrible mod because I think with these simplistic songs, it's impossible to map it very badly, especially when you've had a lot of mods already and you came second in the contest anyway. Just get it ranked lol

Stefan wrote:

[Inner Oni]
00:13:054 - 00:14:392 - I think the SVs could be reverted so it is slower first, then faster instead of the opposite. Also I would add additional SVs at 00:14:392 - and 00:13:014 - . In total this should look like this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/HMMUOSGF.png ✔ - Yes, it was originally so. I don't know why I changed it. (Fixed) But all the same I think that higher picks must be 1.00x SV.
00:46:216 (3) - I'd consider the note to be kept good at 00:46:702 - as don note. kat on 00:46:216 - is pretty strange and doesn't add up much. ✔ - It's really much better! Thank you!
00:51:284 - I think for this stream it'd be enough to remove this line since the peak of the SV stream is imo ugly and makes it look less pretty. ✔ - I agree, changed.
01:32:797 - ^ ✔ - ^
00:51:973 - 01:11:432 - Fantastic idea, really. That is a really smart idea to make use of that technique. Thanks ^_^

[Oni]
00:15:973 (2,3) - would have them swapped, the transistion from kat to don and back to kat (with 00:16:297 (4) - ) works more naturally. ✔ - Ok, changed it.
00:21:162 (2) - could follow that idea and be don instead. ✖ - I fixed those dk mistakes, so nah.
00:48:648 (3,5,7) - I don't see why they should be snapped on 1/4 when they are 1/3 and be in the oni difficulty after all. ✔ - This is already 1/3.
01:30:161 (3,5,7) - ^ ✔ - ^
01:40:781 (44) - object isn't snapped. Either way I always suggest to make use of the 'Resnap all Notes' function, in the timing tab. Just be careful if you use that in Inner Oni. ✔ - Oh, I didn't notice, thanks.

[Futsuu]
01:17:918 (9) - Inner Oni ~ Muzukashii have used a finisher for that spot, I find it weird you didn't consider adding it here as well. ✔ - Fixed.


[Kantan]
00:36:405 (9) - I think it's safe to use a finisher note, like all other difficulties. ✔ - Fixed.
01:17:918 (9) - ^ ✔ - ^


call me back w

neonat wrote:

Muzukashii

00:08:352 (39) - remove? To emphasize the music at 00:08:514 (40,41,42,43,44) -
00:30:730 (27) - shift to 00:30:405 - it's part of the music that rises up in the pitch alongside 00:30:567 (26) - also it will then separate 00:30:891 (28,29,30) - giving it more impact to lead up to the next section

Oni

00:48:405 (2) - this beat felt odd because the triplet rhythm started already, it would probably feel more natural if it already followed on the 1/3 lines like 00:48:621 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:29:918 (2) - likewise here, similar to 00:48:405 (2)