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Hanasaka Yui (CV: M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover [OsuMania]

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RiP46
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, September 15, 2018 at 6:53:10 AM

Artist: Hanasaka Yui (CV: M.A.O)
Title: Harumachi Clover
Source: OneRoom
Tags: One Room カントク Kantoku tvsize
BPM: 142
Filesize: 1447kb
Play Time: 00:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lv.13 - 4Key (2.51 stars, 217 notes)
  2. Lv.5 - 4Key (1.38 stars, 83 notes)
  3. Lv.8 - 4Key (1.91 stars, 149 notes)
Download: Hanasaka Yui (CV: M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Plz Mod This w

Plz Re Download If U Download This Map Before 9/13/2018
Thanks To - Aries - For The Hitsound

Modder
riunosk
FadillSan
Hestia-
AlisceaSparku
FAMoss
atian540
Tailsdk
SyShawn
Salty Mermaid
Faputa
- Aries -
Arcwinolivirus
[ L u k a s ]
SpectorDG
Chouyaa
Dudehacker
-MysticEyes

riunosk
helo 1234
modding everything anyway since its only 30s
general
hitsounds are way too loud at 100%, try reducing to 50%
ODHP suggestion for all diffs
Lv. 5 > maintain at 7,7
Lv. 8 > 7.5,7.5
Lv. 13 > 8,8
55555
00:28:383 (28383|1,28383|2) - putting these at 12 would play out better
short and sweet
88888888
00:01:341 (1341|1,1341|0,1341|3) - sound isn't strong enough to warrant a triple
00:04:721 (4721|2,4721|1,4721|3) - ^
00:05:989 (5989|1,6200|1) - unnecessary stack
00:09:791 (9791|2,9791|3,9791|0) - same as before // will not mention
00:11:059 (11059|0,11270|0,11481|0) - avoid this as its very unnecessary in this kind of chart
Minor issues but generally fine
13 13 13 13 13 13 13 13 13 13 13 13 13
00:03:876 (3876|3,4087|3,4298|3,4510|3,4721|3) - anchor, very much unnecessary
00:06:200 (6200|1,6411|1,6622|1,6834|1) - ^
00:07:679 (7679|2,7890|2,8101|2,8312|2,8524|2) - ^
00:18:031 (18031|1,18242|1,18453|1,18665|1) - ^
00:19:510 (19510|1,19721|1,19932|1,20143|1,20355|1) - ^
00:28:277 (28277|2,28383|2) - this minijack is unnecessary
Unusually anchory
gud luk for renk
nice song too
Topic Starter
RiP46

riunosk wrote:

helo 1234
modding everything anyway since its only 30s
general
hitsounds are way too loud at 100%, try reducing to 50%
ODHP suggestion for all diffs
Lv. 5 > maintain at 7,7
Lv. 8 > 7.5,7.5
Lv. 13 > 8,8
55555
00:28:383 (28383|1,28383|2) - putting these at 12 would play out better
short and sweet
88888888
00:01:341 (1341|1,1341|0,1341|3) - sound isn't strong enough to warrant a triple
00:04:721 (4721|2,4721|1,4721|3) - ^
00:05:989 (5989|1,6200|1) - unnecessary stack
00:09:791 (9791|2,9791|3,9791|0) - same as before // will not mention
00:11:059 (11059|0,11270|0,11481|0) - avoid this as its very unnecessary in this kind of chart
Minor issues but generally fine
13 13 13 13 13 13 13 13 13 13 13 13 13
00:03:876 (3876|3,4087|3,4298|3,4510|3,4721|3) - anchor, very much unnecessary
00:06:200 (6200|1,6411|1,6622|1,6834|1) - ^
00:07:679 (7679|2,7890|2,8101|2,8312|2,8524|2) - ^
00:18:031 (18031|1,18242|1,18453|1,18665|1) - ^
00:19:510 (19510|1,19721|1,19932|1,20143|1,20355|1) - ^
00:28:277 (28277|2,28383|2) - this minijack is unnecessary
Unusually anchory
gud luk for renk
nice song too
Thank You Sir :D
ill add it
FadillSan
Hello~
NM req from my queue~
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Lima
00:05:143 (5143|0) - move to 2
Delapan
00:18:031 (18031|1) - move to 1
00:18:242 (18242|0) - remove this for consistency
00:22:256 (22256|1) - move to 3
00:22:362 (22362|2) - move to 4
00:22:467 (22467|3) - move to 1
00:23:946 (23946|2) - move to 2
00:24:052 (24052|1) - move to 1
00:24:158 (24158|0) - move to 3
Tiga Belas
00:27:538 (27538|2) - move to 2
00:27:749 (27749|1) - move to 1
Suggestion for 00:27:960 (27960|1,28383|3,28383|2,28383|0) - : https://puu.sh/y0fRs/4cd292e65e.jpg
Hope that's help :3
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
RiP46

FadillSan wrote:

Hello~
NM req from my queue~
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Lima
00:05:143 (5143|0) - move to 2
Delapan
00:18:031 (18031|1) - move to 1
00:18:242 (18242|0) - remove this for consistency
00:22:256 (22256|1) - move to 3
00:22:362 (22362|2) - move to 4
00:22:467 (22467|3) - move to 1
00:23:946 (23946|2) - move to 2
00:24:052 (24052|1) - move to 1
00:24:158 (24158|0) - move to 3
Tiga Belas
00:27:538 (27538|2) - move to 2
00:27:749 (27749|1) - move to 1
Suggestion for 00:27:960 (27960|1,28383|3,28383|2,28383|0) - : https://puu.sh/y0fRs/4cd292e65e.jpg
Hope that's help :3
Good Luck~
Added Thanks Bro~
Updated! :D
Hestia-
hihi
[Lv. 5]
00:11:481 (11481|3) - Move to 00:11:270 -
[Lv. 8]
00:04:932 - Add 2
00:15:073 - Add 4
00:16:763 - Add 3
00:18:453 - Add 1
[Lv. 13]
00:07:996 - Add 3
00:08:101 (8101|2) - Move to 4

poi
Topic Starter
RiP46

Hestia- wrote:

hihi
[Lv. 5]
00:11:481 (11481|3) - Move to 00:11:270 -
[Lv. 8]
00:04:932 - Add 2
00:15:073 - Add 4
00:16:763 - Add 3
00:18:453 - Add 1
[Lv. 13]
00:07:996 - Add 3
00:08:101 (8101|2) - Move to 4

poi
Thankyou~

Updated :D
AlisceaSparku
oh riunosk modded this one
20:15 RiP46: helo aliscea do u have some time to NM?
20:15 AlisceaSparku: yas sure
20:16 *RiP46 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442908 Hanasaka Yui (CV:M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover]
20:16 RiP46: this one plz
20:16 AlisceaSparku: o i have this
20:16 AlisceaSparku: LOL
20:16 AlisceaSparku: do you mind if i tell my suggestions in this chat?
20:17 RiP46: sure tho but can u write later on my beatmap post?
20:17 RiP46: need Star Priority XD
20:17 AlisceaSparku: yeah we can just copy the log and i can post it there
20:17 RiP46: good then owo
20:18 *AlisceaSparku is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442908 Hanasaka Yui (CV:M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover [Lv.13]]
20:19 AlisceaSparku: are the 1/2 jacks in this map for vocals
20:19 AlisceaSparku: or just for pattern variation?
20:20 RiP46: actually i mix the melody and vocal XD
20:20 AlisceaSparku: hold on gonna go to that part later
20:20 AlisceaSparku: 00:00:496 (496|1) - by sacrificing a bit of comfortability and flow, you can follow the pitch relevancy for the vocals, which is in my opinion better to play
20:21 AlisceaSparku: since 00:01:129 (1129|1) - is a lower-pitched vocal than 00:00:496 (496|1) -
20:21 AlisceaSparku: so move 00:00:496 (496|1) - to 3
20:22 AlisceaSparku: 00:03:453 - 00:04:721 - im pretty sure there should be 1/2 LNs for the melody/instrument?
20:22 RiP46: got it
20:23 AlisceaSparku: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9355585
20:23 AlisceaSparku: like that
20:23 AlisceaSparku: 00:06:622 - new LN here i believe, also with 00:07:045 -
20:23 AlisceaSparku: then 00:07:256 (7256|1,7679|0) - into one LN
20:23 AlisceaSparku: to follow that instrument
20:24 RiP46: i think its start from 003876 for the 1/2 LN
20:25 AlisceaSparku: nah it starts at 00:03:453 -
20:25 AlisceaSparku: it should actually start at 00:03:242 - but the change is inaudible
20:25 AlisceaSparku: that part is definitely the same with 00:16:763 -
20:26 AlisceaSparku: you can hear the difference
20:26 RiP46: ok wait
20:26 RiP46: yep u are right
20:26 RiP46: ill fix it
20:27 AlisceaSparku: okioki
20:27 RiP46: next next
20:28 AlisceaSparku: 00:30:496 - i'd end the 3 LNs here for the fade out
20:28 AlisceaSparku: idk its a personal opinion
20:28 AlisceaSparku: but it seems like its too early to end the LNs
20:29 AlisceaSparku: 00:14:017 - 00:14:862 - for this stair pattern it feels really weird because it doesn't follow pitch relevancy
20:30 AlisceaSparku: other than that, here's a general mod
20:30 RiP46: should i make it into zig zag pattern?
20:30 AlisceaSparku: you can just reverse its direction
20:30 AlisceaSparku: so it follows pitch relevancy
20:31 AlisceaSparku: along with the drum roll, the melody gradually increases
20:31 RiP46: ok
20:31 AlisceaSparku: ok general mod for this diff
20:31 AlisceaSparku: try to avoid stuff like this 00:07:890 (7890|3,8101|3,8312|3) -
20:31 AlisceaSparku: 00:11:059 (11059|1,11270|1,11481|1) - , 00:19:510 (19510|3,19721|3,19932|3) - , etc
20:32 AlisceaSparku: it might make the meap more appealing in terms of comfortability
20:33 RiP46: change one not spot or delete one of it?
20:33 AlisceaSparku: just avoid notes from stacking too much
20:33 AlisceaSparku: for example at 00:07:890 (7890|3,8101|3,8312|3) -
20:33 AlisceaSparku: you can rearrange it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9355645
20:34 AlisceaSparku: it creates great transitioning between notes
20:35 RiP46: ok fixed
20:36 AlisceaSparku: yeah thats it for this diff
20:36 *AlisceaSparku is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442910 Hanasaka Yui (CV:M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover [Lv.8]]
20:37 AlisceaSparku: um
20:37 AlisceaSparku: inconsistency in note counts?
20:37 AlisceaSparku: 00:05:989 (5989|0) - only single note for snare but others like 00:08:524 (8524|3,8524|0) - are doubled
20:37 AlisceaSparku: 00:15:707 (15707|3,15707|1) - is only a kick but it has two notes
20:38 AlisceaSparku: quite a lot actually
20:39 RiP46: ok ill fix it
20:39 AlisceaSparku: please do rearrange the pattern as well
20:39 AlisceaSparku: without the sliders it'd look like all stair pattern throughout the map
20:40 AlisceaSparku: and you can probably buff the LNs and put breaks between the continuous 1/2 single notes
20:41 RiP46: so rearrange it with less slider?
20:41 AlisceaSparku: hold on i give example
20:42 AlisceaSparku: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9355699
20:42 AlisceaSparku: nerf the single notes like that
20:42 AlisceaSparku: because imo continuous 1/2 single notes are
20:42 AlisceaSparku: repetitive
20:42 AlisceaSparku: then buff the slider parts
20:42 AlisceaSparku: like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9355702
20:43 RiP46: ohh ok i got it
20:43 AlisceaSparku: only example but you can follow it
20:43 AlisceaSparku: and its easier to make note counts consistent as well
20:44 AlisceaSparku: i think i dont have any else to say for this diff
20:45 *AlisceaSparku is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442909 Hanasaka Yui (CV:M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover [Lv.5]]
20:46 AlisceaSparku: 00:28:383 - 3 notes for this one looks very, very emphasized for an easy diff
20:46 AlisceaSparku: i suggest to remove the single note
20:47 AlisceaSparku: 00:11:481 - i know you lack space but i do recommend to make this a double note at least
20:47 AlisceaSparku: actually nvm
20:47 AlisceaSparku: disregard that
20:47 AlisceaSparku: 00:23:101 - add note here
20:47 AlisceaSparku: 00:24:791 - same
20:48 AlisceaSparku: 00:27:960 (27960|2) - turn this to LN when you removed that single note from 00:28:383 -
20:48 AlisceaSparku: only that i think
20:50 RiP46: done
20:50 RiP46: thanks :3
20:54 AlisceaSparku: no problem
20:55 AlisceaSparku: lemme just post this
Topic Starter
RiP46

AlisceaSparku wrote:

oh riunosk modded this one
20:15 RiP46: helo aliscea do u have some time to NM?
20:15 AlisceaSparku: yas sure
20:16 *RiP46 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442908 Hanasaka Yui (CV:M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover]
20:16 RiP46: this one plz
20:16 AlisceaSparku: o i have this
20:16 AlisceaSparku: LOL
20:16 AlisceaSparku: do you mind if i tell my suggestions in this chat?
20:17 RiP46: sure tho but can u write later on my beatmap post?
20:17 RiP46: need Star Priority XD
20:17 AlisceaSparku: yeah we can just copy the log and i can post it there
20:17 RiP46: good then owo
20:18 *AlisceaSparku is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442908 Hanasaka Yui (CV:M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover [Lv.13]]
20:19 AlisceaSparku: are the 1/2 jacks in this map for vocals
20:19 AlisceaSparku: or just for pattern variation?
20:20 RiP46: actually i mix the melody and vocal XD
20:20 AlisceaSparku: hold on gonna go to that part later
20:20 AlisceaSparku: 00:00:496 (496|1) - by sacrificing a bit of comfortability and flow, you can follow the pitch relevancy for the vocals, which is in my opinion better to play
20:21 AlisceaSparku: since 00:01:129 (1129|1) - is a lower-pitched vocal than 00:00:496 (496|1) -
20:21 AlisceaSparku: so move 00:00:496 (496|1) - to 3
20:22 AlisceaSparku: 00:03:453 - 00:04:721 - im pretty sure there should be 1/2 LNs for the melody/instrument?
20:22 RiP46: got it
20:23 AlisceaSparku: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9355585
20:23 AlisceaSparku: like that
20:23 AlisceaSparku: 00:06:622 - new LN here i believe, also with 00:07:045 -
20:23 AlisceaSparku: then 00:07:256 (7256|1,7679|0) - into one LN
20:23 AlisceaSparku: to follow that instrument
20:24 RiP46: i think its start from 003876 for the 1/2 LN
20:25 AlisceaSparku: nah it starts at 00:03:453 -
20:25 AlisceaSparku: it should actually start at 00:03:242 - but the change is inaudible
20:25 AlisceaSparku: that part is definitely the same with 00:16:763 -
20:26 AlisceaSparku: you can hear the difference
20:26 RiP46: ok wait
20:26 RiP46: yep u are right
20:26 RiP46: ill fix it
20:27 AlisceaSparku: okioki
20:27 RiP46: next next
20:28 AlisceaSparku: 00:30:496 - i'd end the 3 LNs here for the fade out
20:28 AlisceaSparku: idk its a personal opinion
20:28 AlisceaSparku: but it seems like its too early to end the LNs
20:29 AlisceaSparku: 00:14:017 - 00:14:862 - for this stair pattern it feels really weird because it doesn't follow pitch relevancy
20:30 AlisceaSparku: other than that, here's a general mod
20:30 RiP46: should i make it into zig zag pattern?
20:30 AlisceaSparku: you can just reverse its direction
20:30 AlisceaSparku: so it follows pitch relevancy
20:31 AlisceaSparku: along with the drum roll, the melody gradually increases
20:31 RiP46: ok
20:31 AlisceaSparku: ok general mod for this diff
20:31 AlisceaSparku: try to avoid stuff like this 00:07:890 (7890|3,8101|3,8312|3) -
20:31 AlisceaSparku: 00:11:059 (11059|1,11270|1,11481|1) - , 00:19:510 (19510|3,19721|3,19932|3) - , etc
20:32 AlisceaSparku: it might make the meap more appealing in terms of comfortability
20:33 RiP46: change one not spot or delete one of it?
20:33 AlisceaSparku: just avoid notes from stacking too much
20:33 AlisceaSparku: for example at 00:07:890 (7890|3,8101|3,8312|3) -
20:33 AlisceaSparku: you can rearrange it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9355645
20:34 AlisceaSparku: it creates great transitioning between notes
20:35 RiP46: ok fixed
20:36 AlisceaSparku: yeah thats it for this diff
20:36 *AlisceaSparku is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442910 Hanasaka Yui (CV:M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover [Lv.8]]
20:37 AlisceaSparku: um
20:37 AlisceaSparku: inconsistency in note counts?
20:37 AlisceaSparku: 00:05:989 (5989|0) - only single note for snare but others like 00:08:524 (8524|3,8524|0) - are doubled
20:37 AlisceaSparku: 00:15:707 (15707|3,15707|1) - is only a kick but it has two notes
20:38 AlisceaSparku: quite a lot actually
20:39 RiP46: ok ill fix it
20:39 AlisceaSparku: please do rearrange the pattern as well
20:39 AlisceaSparku: without the sliders it'd look like all stair pattern throughout the map
20:40 AlisceaSparku: and you can probably buff the LNs and put breaks between the continuous 1/2 single notes
20:41 RiP46: so rearrange it with less slider?
20:41 AlisceaSparku: hold on i give example
20:42 AlisceaSparku: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9355699
20:42 AlisceaSparku: nerf the single notes like that
20:42 AlisceaSparku: because imo continuous 1/2 single notes are
20:42 AlisceaSparku: repetitive
20:42 AlisceaSparku: then buff the slider parts
20:42 AlisceaSparku: like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9355702
20:43 RiP46: ohh ok i got it
20:43 AlisceaSparku: only example but you can follow it
20:43 AlisceaSparku: and its easier to make note counts consistent as well
20:44 AlisceaSparku: i think i dont have any else to say for this diff
20:45 *AlisceaSparku is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1442909 Hanasaka Yui (CV:M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover [Lv.5]]
20:46 AlisceaSparku: 00:28:383 - 3 notes for this one looks very, very emphasized for an easy diff
20:46 AlisceaSparku: i suggest to remove the single note
20:47 AlisceaSparku: 00:11:481 - i know you lack space but i do recommend to make this a double note at least
20:47 AlisceaSparku: actually nvm
20:47 AlisceaSparku: disregard that
20:47 AlisceaSparku: 00:23:101 - add note here
20:47 AlisceaSparku: 00:24:791 - same
20:48 AlisceaSparku: 00:27:960 (27960|2) - turn this to LN when you removed that single note from 00:28:383 -
20:48 AlisceaSparku: only that i think
20:50 RiP46: done
20:50 RiP46: thanks :3
20:54 AlisceaSparku: no problem
20:55 AlisceaSparku: lemme just post this
Thanks Alicea owo
FAMoss
ayy lmao

General
Ganti
Artist : 花坂結衣(CV:M・A・O)
Title : 春待ちクローバー
tag : One Room カントク Kantoku TV Size One Room
Pastikan ber metadata, dan jangan hapus title asli nya

Lv.8
00:13:594 (13594|2) - jadiin ln sampe 00:13:594 (13594|2) -
00:24:791 (24791|2) - pindahin ke 1 karena agak sempit

Lv.13
00:04:298 - add di 3 ~ sama kaya 00:03:453 - D:
00:12:749 - tambah note 4 karena sama hentakan di 00:11:904 -
00:11:481 (11481|2) - ln nya sampe 00:11:481 (11481|2) -
00:12:960 (12960|3) - geser ke 3
00:14:122 (14122|1) - hapus
00:14:228 (14228|2,14334|3) - geser ke 2
00:21:094 - seharusnya di sini ada note
00:24:052 - ^
00:25:531 (25531|0) - delete ini
00:28:066 (28066|1) - ^
Topic Starter
RiP46

FAMoss wrote:

ayy lmao

General
Ganti
Artist : 花坂結衣(CV:M・A・O)
Title : 春待ちクローバー
tag : One Room カントク Kantoku TV Size One Room
Pastikan ber metadata, dan jangan hapus title asli nya

Lv.8
00:13:594 (13594|2) - jadiin ln sampe 00:13:594 (13594|2) -
00:24:791 (24791|2) - pindahin ke 1 karena agak sempit

Lv.13
00:04:298 - add di 3 ~ sama kaya 00:03:453 - D:
00:12:749 - tambah note 4 karena sama hentakan di 00:11:904 -
00:11:481 (11481|2) - ln nya sampe 00:11:481 (11481|2) -
00:12:960 (12960|3) - geser ke 3
00:14:122 (14122|1) - hapus
00:14:228 (14228|2,14334|3) - geser ke 2
00:21:094 - seharusnya di sini ada note
00:24:052 - ^
00:25:531 (25531|0) - delete ini
00:28:066 (28066|1) - ^
Thanks Bang Modnya, Bermanfaat owo
Tapi Ane Bingung Dibagian Ini Maksutnya Gimana Ya?
00:11:481 (11481|2) - ln nya sampe 00:11:481 (11481|2) -
FAMoss

RiP46 wrote:

Thanks Bang Modnya, Bermanfaat owo
Tapi Ane Bingung Dibagian Ini Maksutnya Gimana Ya?
00:11:481 (11481|2) - ln nya sampe 00:11:481 (11481|2) -
LN di col 3 sampe 00:12:327 -
tadi salah tulis T_T
Yukari_Sama
hii NM req

hmmm singkat padat dan jelas ini song :v

1|2|3|4

General
  1. ?? wrong dimension of BG,gambarnya jadi pecah2
  2. maybe you can try this BG >>>>> https://puu.sh/y3y0C/1202f8e0a0.jpg

LV .13
  1. 00:00:284 (284|3) - col 2
  2. 00:00:918 (918|0) - col 3
  3. 00:01:129 (1129|1,1341|2) - move 1 col to left
  4. uuh ini dari 00:01:341 ke 00:03:031 menurutku terlalu fokus di 24,coba kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9364811 soalnya buat ngikut yg di part ini 00:04:721 -
  5. 00:03:242 (3242|3) - col 2
  6. 00:05:566 (5566|2,5777|3) - ctrl+J
  7. 00:08:101 - ini juga sama kayak kasus no 3, di 34, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9364876
  8. 00:10:214 loh ini kok 3 note ? padahal yg lainya 2 note
  9. 00:11:904 - same
  10. 00:15:073 (15073|0,15284|1) - ctrl+J
  11. 00:15:918 (15918|3) - col1 biar balance
  12. 00:28:383 (28383|0,28383|2,28383|1) - has ended at here 00:30:284 -

LV. 8
  1. 00:02:186 - kek gini lebih ena https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9370614
  2. 00:03:453 (3453|1) - col 1 biar ga stack di col 2
  3. 00:04:721 (4721|0,4721|1,4721|2) - ini kok 3 note ? padahal ga ada suara symbal / suara yg keras,suggest aja del di col 2
  4. 00:05:143 (5143|0) - col 4
  5. 00:05:566 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9370634
  6. 00:08:101 (8101|0,8101|3,8101|1) - ini 3 note,sedangkan 00:09:791 (9791|3,9791|0) sama 00:11:481 (11481|1,11481|2) - 2 note,kan suara symbal,buat konsistensi aja,bisa di delet 1 note yg di 3 note itu / add note di 2 note itu
  7. 00:09:580 (9580|3,9791|3) - ini di sini jack, 00:11:270 (11270|0,11481|1) - ini ga, coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9370655
  8. 00:15:284 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9370677
  9. 00:18:665 (18665|2,18876|3) - ctrl+J

dah ya segitu aja
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
RiP46

atian540 wrote:

hii NM req

hmmm singkat padat dan jelas ini song :v

1|2|3|4

General
  1. ?? wrong dimension of BG,gambarnya jadi pecah2
  2. maybe you can try this BG >>>>> https://puu.sh/y3y0C/1202f8e0a0.jpg

LV .13
  1. 00:00:284 (284|3) - col 2
  2. 00:00:918 (918|0) - col 3
  3. 00:01:129 (1129|1,1341|2) - move 1 col to left
  4. uuh ini dari 00:01:341 ke 00:03:031 menurutku terlalu fokus di 24,coba kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9364811 soalnya buat ngikut yg di part ini 00:04:721 -
  5. 00:03:242 (3242|3) - col 2
  6. 00:05:566 (5566|2,5777|3) - ctrl+J
  7. 00:08:101 - ini juga sama kayak kasus no 3, di 34, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9364876
  8. 00:10:214 loh ini kok 3 note ? padahal yg lainya 2 note
  9. 00:11:904 - same
  10. 00:15:073 (15073|0,15284|1) - ctrl+J
  11. 00:15:918 (15918|3) - col1 biar balance
  12. 00:28:383 (28383|0,28383|2,28383|1) - has ended at here 00:30:284 -

LV. 8
  1. 00:02:186 - kek gini lebih ena https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9370614
  2. 00:03:453 (3453|1) - col 1 biar ga stack di col 2
  3. 00:04:721 (4721|0,4721|1,4721|2) - ini kok 3 note ? padahal ga ada suara symbal / suara yg keras,suggest aja del di col 2
  4. 00:05:143 (5143|0) - col 4
  5. 00:05:566 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9370634
  6. 00:08:101 (8101|0,8101|3,8101|1) - ini 3 note,sedangkan 00:09:791 (9791|3,9791|0) sama 00:11:481 (11481|1,11481|2) - 2 note,kan suara symbal,buat konsistensi aja,bisa di delet 1 note yg di 3 note itu / add note di 2 note itu
  7. 00:09:580 (9580|3,9791|3) - ini di sini jack, 00:11:270 (11270|0,11481|1) - ini ga, coba https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9370655
  8. 00:15:284 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9370677
  9. 00:18:665 (18665|2,18876|3) - ctrl+J

dah ya segitu aja
Good Luck~
Terimakasih Atas Koreksi Nya Mastah ;) :lol:
Tailsdk
Mod from my queue
Lv.13
00:03:453 - ony make double here
00:20:566 (20566|1) - maybe find a way to move this note its in a really uncomfortable spot
missing a note here 00:25:003 -
Lv.8
00:19:721 (19721|2) - move this one
couldn't find much else but have a star aswel
Topic Starter
RiP46

tailsdk wrote:

Mod from my queue
Lv.13
00:03:453 - ony make double here
00:20:566 (20566|1) - maybe find a way to move this note its in a really uncomfortable spot
missing a note here 00:25:003 -
Lv.8
00:19:721 (19721|2) - move this one
couldn't find much else but have a star aswel
Thanks For The Mod owo
Also Thankyou Very Much For The Star owo
SyShawn
from my Q

Lv 13

just think the hold notes in this places, should follow the violins
you can use other patterns if you don't like these
Salty Mermaid
Hello, nm from the beautiful modding queue.

Lv.5
  1. 00:11:270 (11270|2) - I'd suggest to delete this note, since you didn't put any at 00:09:580.
  2. 00:24:369 (24369|1) - You could delete this note it makes a nice little pattern.
  3. 00:26:059 (26059|1) - Same with this one.

Lv.8
  1. This diff is a little bit messy, tbh. For example, here 00:05:989 (5989|0,5989|1) - you put a double for the sound, it's fine. but then right after, here 00:06:834 (6834|3) - you only put a single note. Sometime you map the voice, sometime you map the like drum sound and switch between them without any logical pattern. Also here 00:05:989 (5989|0,5989|1,7890|1,8101|1) - there is a little jack,, but not tehe00:09:580 (9580|2,9791|3) - nor there 00:11:270 (11270|0,11481|2) - , but here 00:12:960 (12960|1,13172|1) - yes. And then at 00:22:256-, you suddenly start using 1/4 although you could have add 1/4 notes at plenty of other places in the diff, like here 00:11:376 (11376|1) -. I'd suggest rearranging the whole diff with those things in mind, shouldn't take too long, since the song is only 30 seonds.
  2. Oh and there's a sound on which you simply didn't put any sound at 00:07:256. Add notes.

Lv.13
  1. 00:12:749 (12749|0,12749|3,12749|1) - Only a double here.
  2. 00:14:017 (14017|0,14017|3,14017|2) - Same
  3. 00:14:017 (14017|2,14228|1) - ctrl + h those two notes, to avoid this 00:13:383 (13383|2,13594|2,13805|2,14017|2) - .
  4. 00:22:045 (22045|2) - To col 2.
  5. 00:23:524 (23524|0) - To col 4.
  6. 00:23:946 (23946|3) - To col 1.
  7. 00:24:052 (24052|0) - To col 3.
  8. 00:24:158 (24158|2) - To col 1.

So that's it for the mod. Good luck.
Topic Starter
RiP46

SyShawn wrote:

from my Q

Lv 13

just think the hold notes in this places, should follow the violins
you can use other patterns if you don't like these
Thanks For The Mod , Added owo

Salty Mermaid wrote:

Hello, nm from the beautiful modding queue.

Lv.5
  1. 00:11:270 (11270|2) - I'd suggest to delete this note, since you didn't put any at 00:09:580.
  2. 00:24:369 (24369|1) - You could delete this note it makes a nice little pattern.
  3. 00:26:059 (26059|1) - Same with this one.

Lv.8
  1. This diff is a little bit messy, tbh. For example, here 00:05:989 (5989|0,5989|1) - you put a double for the sound, it's fine. but then right after, here 00:06:834 (6834|3) - you only put a single note. Sometime you map the voice, sometime you map the like drum sound and switch between them without any logical pattern. Also here 00:05:989 (5989|0,5989|1,7890|1,8101|1) - there is a little jack,, but not tehe00:09:580 (9580|2,9791|3) - nor there 00:11:270 (11270|0,11481|2) - , but here 00:12:960 (12960|1,13172|1) - yes. And then at 00:22:256-, you suddenly start using 1/4 although you could have add 1/4 notes at plenty of other places in the diff, like here 00:11:376 (11376|1) -. I'd suggest rearranging the whole diff with those things in mind, shouldn't take too long, since the song is only 30 seonds.
  2. Oh and there's a sound on which you simply didn't put any sound at 00:07:256. Add notes.

Lv.13
  1. 00:12:749 (12749|0,12749|3,12749|1) - Only a double here.
  2. 00:14:017 (14017|0,14017|3,14017|2) - Same
  3. 00:14:017 (14017|2,14228|1) - ctrl + h those two notes, to avoid this 00:13:383 (13383|2,13594|2,13805|2,14017|2) - .
  4. 00:22:045 (22045|2) - To col 2.
  5. 00:23:524 (23524|0) - To col 4.
  6. 00:23:946 (23946|3) - To col 1.
  7. 00:24:052 (24052|0) - To col 3.
  8. 00:24:158 (24158|2) - To col 1.

So that's it for the mod. Good luck.
Thanks For The Mod! I'll Rearrange After School owo
Faputa
From my Queue,
o/


[General]
⏩Make sure to add hitsounds to the notes. You need to have hitsounds if for ranked.
⏩Delete one tag One Room It appeared twice in the tags.
⏩Change the source to OneRoom Instead of One Room, because it is joined character from the source.

[Lv.5]
⏩00:26:904 (26904|2,27115|0,27327|1,27538|2,27749|0) - Its quite overloaded here, you should make it less dense or it may shock players.


[Lv.8]
⏩00:15:284 (15284|2,15284|1,15496|3,15707|2,15918|3,16129|1,16129|2,16341|3) - I think you should be consistent with the first phase, make the rhythm like 00:01:341 (1341|3,1341|1,1763|3,1763|2,2186|1,2397|3,2608|2,2608|1,2820|3) - . That’s to delete 00:15:496 (15496|3) - .
There are many parts with this issue but I’ll not list them out, find them yourself :v


[Lv.13]
⏩00:20:566 (20566|3,20672|0,20777|3) - The flow here isn’t comfortable I think, at least changing the positions of these three, or change the hold places if you want. Right now it affects the playing of the whole part until the next hold so I think you should definitely check it out.
⏩00:25:003 (25003|1) - I think it is okay removing this note considering there aren’t significant sounds here just as other places.


Short mod because the maps are quite neat, and there’s only 30s ;w;
Good luck with the set!
Topic Starter
RiP46

Faputa wrote:

From my Queue,
o/


[General]
⏩Make sure to add hitsounds to the notes. You need to have hitsounds if for ranked.
⏩Delete one tag One Room It appeared twice in the tags.
⏩Change the source to OneRoom Instead of One Room, because it is joined character from the source.

[Lv.5]
⏩00:26:904 (26904|2,27115|0,27327|1,27538|2,27749|0) - Its quite overloaded here, you should make it less dense or it may shock players.


[Lv.8]
⏩00:15:284 (15284|2,15284|1,15496|3,15707|2,15918|3,16129|1,16129|2,16341|3) - I think you should be consistent with the first phase, make the rhythm like 00:01:341 (1341|3,1341|1,1763|3,1763|2,2186|1,2397|3,2608|2,2608|1,2820|3) - . That’s to delete 00:15:496 (15496|3) - .
There are many parts with this issue but I’ll not list them out, find them yourself :v


[Lv.13]
⏩00:20:566 (20566|3,20672|0,20777|3) - The flow here isn’t comfortable I think, at least changing the positions of these three, or change the hold places if you want. Right now it affects the playing of the whole part until the next hold so I think you should definitely check it out.
⏩00:25:003 (25003|1) - I think it is okay removing this note considering there aren’t significant sounds here just as other places.


Short mod because the maps are quite neat, and there’s only 30s ;w;
Good luck with the set!
Thanks For Your Mod owo
AyeAries

Mod for Mod Request



[General]
  1. BPM: OK
  2. Offset: OK
  3. AiMod: OK
  4. Audio: I suggest that you add some costumed hitsounds not the default sound. I can help you to find the hitsound just pm me (via forum or in-game) if you want.
  5. Background: OK
  6. Preview Point: OK
4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Lv.13]
  1. 00:03:876 (3876|1,4087|3,4298|1,4510|2) - these notes are actually out of sync. I suggest some pattern like this one.
  2. 00:16:552 (16552|0,16763|1,16974|3,17186|2,17397|0,17608|1,17820|2) - this one too, change pattern like this one.
[Lv.8]
  1. 00:03:665 (3665|1,3876|3,4087|0,4298|1,4510|3) - As i said in Lv.13's diff, it's out of sync. change pattern like this one.
  2. 00:16:763 (16763|3,16974|2,17186|1,17397|3,17608|0,17820|1,18031|2) - Again, change pattern like this one.
Actually I like this song. Good luck and thanks again for mod my map :)
Topic Starter
RiP46

- Aries - wrote:

Mod for Mod Request



[General]
  1. BPM: OK
  2. Offset: OK
  3. AiMod: OK
  4. Audio: I suggest that you add some costumed hitsounds not the default sound. I can help you to find the hitsound just pm me (via forum or in-game) if you want.
  5. Background: OK
  6. Preview Point: OK
4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Lv.13]
  1. 00:03:876 (3876|1,4087|3,4298|1,4510|2) - these notes are actually out of sync. I suggest some pattern like this one.
  2. 00:16:552 (16552|0,16763|1,16974|3,17186|2,17397|0,17608|1,17820|2) - this one too, change pattern like this one.
[Lv.8]
  1. 00:03:665 (3665|1,3876|3,4087|0,4298|1,4510|3) - As i said in Lv.13's diff, it's out of sync. change pattern like this one.
  2. 00:16:763 (16763|3,16974|2,17186|1,17397|3,17608|0,17820|1,18031|2) - Again, change pattern like this one.
Actually I like this song. Good luck and thanks again for mod my map :)
Thanks For Your Mod owo

I suggest that you add some costumed hitsounds not the default sound. I can help you to find the hitsound just pm me (via forum or in-game) if you want.
Please help me with hitsound T^T
arcwinolivirus
Hello there! here's my little mod in the last difficulty
1|2|3|4

00:01:129 (1129|0,1341|1) - you can swap column so there will be pitch relevancy

00:11:904 (11904|1,12115|3,12327|1) - move to 3 , 2 , 1 respectively for comfortable execution. If applied, 00:12:538 (12538|2) - move to 2

00:13:805 (13805|2) - move to 4 to avoid 00:13:383 (13383|2,13594|2,13805|2) -

00:20:672 (20672|2,20777|1) - swap column so the sight will be clearer and easier to execute.

00:21:622 (21622|2) - move to 2 for comfort

00:23:101 (23101|0) - move to 3 ^

00:27:327 - add note to 3 with kick sound

00:27:749 - ^ to 2 same reason


Good song choice actually. Good luck and keep it up!
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