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Riko (CV-Miyu Tomita), Regu (CV- Mariya Ise) - Tabi no Hidar

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keima915
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Dogerinoo
yo, mod from #modreq

Mod :)
00:17:235 (5) - this would fit better:
~ https://gyazo.com/9c2f323863c2ef52f51385ecb685aa55

00:22:510 (2) - same thing with this, music dosent fit well with the reverse sliders you put in:
~ https://gyazo.com/0d93fb192656c96de0232bde2675788b

00:26:961 (2) - 00:28:280 (4) - try not to put 1/4 timed notes is such a low diff map, and they dont sync with the song.

:arrow: Conclusion!
Overall, i think u need to work on your note choice, when to use and when not to use sliders, single notes, reverse sliders etc.

Its a pretty good map for a new mapper, so ill give you that. Good luck on your future mapping!
Topic Starter
keima915
Thanks, Dogerinoo! I've already followed your first couple of advice, though I'm still thinking about the third one since I might have to redo that part. Anyway, have a good day!
Pan Jezus
I'm quite new to modding but I hope I was able to help

00:01:411 (3) - 00:02:730 (5) - 00:04:049 (7) - 00:04:049 (7) - Drum sampleset doesn't fit well here
00:13:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't really like the pattern here. It doesn't look good compared with 00:10:642 (1,2,3,4,5) - and - 00:15:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you should try making something silimar to these
00:22:180 - I think slider would fit better here 00:25:807 - Same here
00:42:290 - Sliders with less curve would look better 00:56:466 - Position the end of that slider on top of the end of next slider, looks cleaner
01:01:411 - This empty space after the circle feels weird, try using a reverse slider instead
01:07:016 (3) - Try making this slider less curvy 01:15:422 (3,4) - ctrl+g and new combo looks better
01:27:125 (1) - 1.5x and try making it a slider, looks and feels better if you do make it into a slider decrease volume 01:27:785 - 80% - 01:27:950 - 60% - 01:28:114 - 40% - 01:28:279 - 20% - 01:28:444 - 5%
LwL
did a bit of explaining in memehelp


HardNeper
Hey from #modreqs !

[Hard]
00:13:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks like you disabled distance snapping for these circles, make sure the spacing is consistent
00:21:191 (1) - Sliders repeating twice or more next to similar ones who doesn't repeat or repeats only once can be misleading. You can repeat this slider only once and add a circle at 00:22:180 for example
00:24:818 (3) - ^
00:22:510 (2) - 00:23:829 (2) - 00:24:818 (3) - 00:26:136 (4) - 00:27:455 (3) - You should avoid overlap when possible, these ones doesn't really make any sense and make the map hard to read
00:32:895 (6) - is hard to read, try something like this
00:35:532 (6) - ^
00:41:136 (1,2,3,4) - You should place these closer to 00:40:972 (6)

There is a last thing i want to point out, but it's more subjective: 00:05:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:29:103 (2,3,4) - 01:07:345 (4,5,6) - You should avoid tiny overlap like this because it looks weird and messy, try increasing the spacing a bit in those places to remove them.
00:32:235 (2,3,4,5) - It works fine for circles though ^

[Conclusion]
For your very first map, it's not bad at all. You should work on your rhythm choices and maybe spacing too, just keep mapping ;)
Topic Starter
keima915
Thanks a lot guys, I just caught up and have the beatmap updated with your advice! :D
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