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i actually don't like this song. at all. sounds like whispering than singing to me lmao

general
do all diff's have to end on the same note? i'm not sure but all your diff all end on diff note. i think it's unrankable so maybe fix that correct me if i', wrong

normal
could you make 00:22:035 (2,3,4) - look a bit more straightforward? beginners might get confused and clicked 4 instead of 3.
00:41:702 (2,1) - my stacking is on so why are these not stacked they are just overlap?
01:21:535 (2) - ctrl j would and f;pw better in my opinion.

hard
sg changed are too much gouing from .5>1.5 is too much lmao please maybe like lower it down
also this is just a hard so like try not to exceed 1.3/1.4 sv as your max(in f6 not timing)

can i stop here? wait no one's restricting me
posted
Frontier


00:03:035 (1) - slider doesn't seem symmtrical (assuming you're making it so) maybe cuz of those red points

00:05:702 (1) - end of this slider in the semi circle part looks weird, could be improved

01:03:369 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - decrease the spacing here since you're giving this part emphasis when it should be on the chorus and its like, nearly the same as the spacing for chorus itself

01:12:202 (6) - the angle here seems weird, maybe putting it under 01:11:702 (4) - instead

01:14:702 (1,2) - uhh too big? not sure


did a quick check can't find any other errors
good map, hope to seeing this in ranked soon :D
posted
Hai NM from mod queue

[Frontier]

  1. 00:03:035 (1) - I think you should fix that small second bump on the slider by just moving the second red anchor.
  2. 00:41:535 (1,2) - I think you should map this sound 00:41:702 - and completly do that switch to drum mapping here 00:42:369 -

    Tbh, this diff is prolly alright for rank but both kiai feel really disconnected with the smooth calm sounding song with that huge spacing really not my thing tbh x)


[1112's Insane]
  1. 00:55:369 (3) - 00:58:035 (3) - I think those slider end should by soft sample set?


Lower diffs seems pretty solid. Set is pretty good, like I said not a fan of top diff just feel too spaced overall to connect with the song but thats only a personal opinion really.
posted

Alfarai wrote:

Frontier


00:03:035 (1) - slider doesn't seem symmtrical (assuming you're making it so) maybe cuz of those red points

00:05:702 (1) - end of this slider in the semi circle part looks weird, could be improved not sure what do you mean by improving the end of the slider. you could have pinpointed the exact curve or smth.

01:03:369 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - decrease the spacing here since you're giving this part emphasis when it should be on the chorus and its like, nearly the same as the spacing for chorus itself

01:12:202 (6) - the angle here seems weird, maybe putting it under 01:11:702 (4) - instead don't think so, it pretty normal considering there were similar angles already used. it doesn't affect the flow much - it still plays solid

01:14:702 (1,2) - uhh too big? not sure wanted to emphasize this part as much as i could so that's why the spacing here is so big, btw it forms a perfect triangle which imo fulfills the aesthetic part of it


did a quick check can't find any other errors
good map, hope to seeing this in ranked soon :D<3 thank you!
no reply - fixed

Shanipika wrote:

Hai NM from mod queue

[Frontier]

  1. 00:03:035 (1) - I think you should fix that small second bump on the slider by just moving the second red anchor.
  2. 00:41:535 (1,2) - I think you should map this sound 00:41:702 - and completly do that switch to drum mapping here 00:42:369 - as i already chose to follow the drums at that part, don't really want to make sudden shifts

    Tbh, this diff is prolly alright for rank but both kiai feel really disconnected with the smooth calm sounding song with that huge spacing really not my thing tbh x) i see, however, my idea for the highest diff was to make big jumps on purpose because imo it emphasizes the richness of this song - how the vocal's part changes tremendously compared to non-kiai parts, how the synth comes into play with the rest of the harmony increasing intensity, etc.



Lower diffs seems pretty solid. Set is pretty good, like I said not a fan of top diff just feel too spaced overall to connect with the song but thats only a personal opinion really thank you
no reply - fixed
posted

niyuji wrote:

Alfarai wrote:

Frontier


00:05:702 (1) - end of this slider in the semi circle part looks weird, could be improved not sure what do you mean by improving the end of the slider. you could have pinpointed the exact curve or smth.
this part of the slider. There's like a tiny bump on the semi circle's shape that looked weird
posted
I can't find anything wrong with this map
posted
Hi,
Pretty nice map, there's a few things i personally don't like about it so most of these are just suggestions:

1. The jumps could use more depth to them. Example: 00:11:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - there's so much music shifts going on here and you're just making it all a circular jump without changing the distance almost at all.
2. I don't like where some of your sliders end, will explain why in a sec.

This is basically all up to your judgement. I tend to try and make stuff more fun gameplay-wise. You seem to be focusing a lot on the looks of a map and I don't want to enforce my ideologies on you. xd
OK, so from the start.
00:09:535 (1) - The sound on sliderend here is pretty strong eh? A shame to leave it passive if you ask me. What I would do here is shorten the slider by 1/8 and place a singletap on its tail with a jump backwards to the next strong beat. https://puu.sh/yspsS/aeb2773826.png Would probably map the jump as a 1/4 slider too tbh.

The beats on 00:11:702 (4) - 00:13:035 (4) - 00:14:369 (4) - and so on are audibly stronger yet the jump distance is the same as the rest. This is what I was talking about when I said it needs more depth. I get that you're probably trying to make this map look nice with stuff like 00:10:535 (2,3,4,1,2) - but forcing it makes the gameplay dull, and these were not fun to play at all. So my advice is, use sharper jump angles and some variety in spacing, emphasis is important, and that includes jump angles. This pretty much applies to all your jumps. But again, that's just my opinion.

00:25:035 (3) - the slidertail here is a part of the next pattern imo @_@' so I'd do similar thing as 00:09:535 (1) , just another 1/4 slider instead of singletap
00:45:535 (2,1) - touch this slider gently so it snaps with (2) :P
00:50:869 (2,1) - ^
01:06:535 (5,6) - ctrl+g, I'd also make it 2 1/4 sliders. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9609987

Solid map overall, good job and good luck~!
posted

Wanko wrote:

Hi,
Pretty nice map, there's a few things i personally don't like about it so most of these are just suggestions:

1. The jumps could use more depth to them. Example: 00:11:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - there's so much music shifts going on here and you're just making it all a circular jump without changing the distance almost at all.
2. I don't like where some of your sliders end, will explain why in a sec.

This is basically all up to your judgement. I tend to try and make stuff more fun gameplay-wise. You seem to be focusing a lot on the looks of a map and I don't want to enforce my ideologies on you. xd
OK, so from the start.
00:09:535 (1) - The sound on sliderend here is pretty strong eh? A shame to leave it passive if you ask me. What I would do here is shorten the slider by 1/8 and place a singletap on its tail with a jump backwards to the next strong beat. https://puu.sh/yspsS/aeb2773826.png Would probably map the jump as a 1/4 slider too tbh. i like the idea, implemented in my own way

The beats on 00:11:702 (4) - 00:13:035 (4) - 00:14:369 (4) - and so on are audibly stronger yet the jump distance is the same as the rest. This is what I was talking about when I said it needs more depth. I get that you're probably trying to make this map look nice with stuff like 00:10:535 (2,3,4,1,2) - but forcing it makes the gameplay dull, and these were not fun to play at all. So my advice is, use sharper jump angles and some variety in spacing, emphasis is important, and that includes jump angles. This pretty much applies to all your jumps. But again, that's just my opinion. yeah i see, however, i've focused on emphasizing the vocal>drums(kicks near the downbeats)

00:25:035 (3) - the slidertail here is a part of the next pattern imo @_@' so I'd do similar thing as 00:09:535 (1) , just another 1/4 slider instead of singletap have to refuse because it's clear that the song isn't getting intensive at this specific part. i keep with a formula of (3x)+(nx)+(3x)+(nx) etc. 3x - combo. ; n - random number (!=3)
00:45:535 (2,1) - touch this slider gently so it snaps with (2) :Pokay
00:50:869 (2,1) - ^ auto snap isn't always the best solution :P
01:06:535 (5,6) - ctrl+g, I'd also make it 2 1/4 sliders. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9609987 no thanks

Solid map overall, good job and good luck~!
thank you
posted
from Q

im sick..

  • Collab Easy
  1. 00:43:035 (1,3) - make them parallel it's look better https://puu.sh/ytT9N/accbd83bb9.png
  2. 00:48:369 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern should be here too 00:43:035 (1,2,3,4) - it's fit so much better imo
  • Kujinn's Normal
  1. the diff seems bugged.. I updated and it deleted the diff but the diff looks good~
  • Atsuro's Hard
  1. 00:20:035 (4,5) - stack them like you did 00:12:035 (4,5)
  2. 00:33:702 (4) - curved it for better flow https://puu.sh/ytTuf/3a154b4649.png
  3. 01:00:369 (5) - nc for emphasis drums
  • 1112's Insane
  1. the diff seems bugged too..
  2. 00:05:702 (1,1) - why there isn't a blanket here?
  3. 01:09:702 (1) - doesn't look beautiful tbh maybe like this it's work https://puu.sh/ytTXh/7429ae8672.jpg
  4. 01:20:368 (1) - ^
  • Frontier
  1. from 00:22:202 (2) - to 00:43:035 (1) - pleeasee decrease the volume it's a calm part, 70% it's too loud for this moment
  2. 00:37:702 (1,2) - imperfect stack
  3. 01:05:535 (1) - this slider seems out of place because i know that you wanted to map the sound of the head but you jump a drum and at the same time vocals who should be clickable imo so i suggest to add a note 01:05:535 - and then add a 1/4 slider there is no important sound to emphasis here 01:05:869 - It's should be like this https://puu.sh/ytUoF/cae2e85b5d.png similar for 01:16:202 (1)
  4. 01:06:535 (5) - strong vocals on the tail, just ctrl+g these notes 01:06:535 (5,6)
  5. 01:09:702 (1,2) - slider instead of 2 circles for vocals imo
  6. 01:17:202 (5,6) - strong vocals on the tail too, ctrl+g like i said before
  7. 01:20:035 (6,5) - stack them


Nice mapset!

gl!~
posted

ShogunMoon wrote:

from Q

im sick.. hope u get better soon

  • Collab Easy
  1. 00:43:035 (1,3) - make them parallel it's look better https://puu.sh/ytT9N/accbd83bb9.png @niyuji can you fix that for me? xd
  2. 00:48:369 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern should be here too 00:43:035 (1,2,3,4) - it's fit so much better imo if I change that it would be pretty boring rhythm-wise having different rhythm here supports creativity


Nice mapset!

gl!~
Thanks 4 mod
posted
Q

[frontier]
  1. 00:22:369 (3,1) - for seeing this pattern, it looks little bit hard imo. 00:21:702 (1,2) - this pattern has 1/2 rhythm, but 00:22:369 (3,1) - has 1/1 rhythm gap. But DS looks similar, I think you can make better reading pattern.
  2. 00:26:869 (1,2) - swap NC, in this part, downbeat has on 00:27:035 - , then 00:27:035 - has stronger sound than 00:26:869 (1) - .
  3. 00:50:702 (1,2,1) - This flows weird, this wide angle has strange flow, it can be hard to play.
  4. 00:55:369 (3,4,5) - Suddenly you decreased DDS without any reason, it makes weird playing. I know you intend 120 degree triangle, but you should make it with bigger DS like 00:53:702 (1,2,3,4) - .
  5. 00:56:202 (6,1) - it looks too big DS imo, after 1/8, this pattern makes too many sliderbreaks. You can make it into easier pattern.


[1112]
  1. 00:15:535 - 00:16:202 - you should add beats here, I think this part has similar music with 00:12:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - , but rhythm gap is different, that makes weird consistency.
  2. 01:20:368 (1) - this slider shape looks ugly, could you make better slider? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9634908


GL
posted

Shanipika wrote:

Hai NM from mod queue

[1112's Insane]
  1. 00:55:369 (3) - 00:58:035 (3) - I think those slider end should by soft sample set?


Lower diffs seems pretty solid. Set is pretty good, like I said not a fan of top diff just feel too spaced overall to connect with the song but thats only a personal opinion really.

ShogunMoon wrote:

from Q

im sick..

  • 1112's Insane
  1. the diff seems bugged too..
  2. 00:05:702 (1,1) - why there isn't a blanket here? i don't quite understand why you use the tone of questioning, but fixed
  3. 01:09:702 (1) - doesn't look beautiful tbh maybe like this it's work https://puu.sh/ytTXh/7429ae8672.jpg
  4. 01:20:368 (1) - ^


Nice mapset!

gl!~

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[1112]
  1. 00:15:535 - 00:16:202 - you should add beats here, I think this part has similar music with 00:12:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - , but rhythm gap is different, that makes weird consistency. change some
  2. 01:20:368 (1) - this slider shape looks ugly, could you make better slider? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9634908


GL
no reply = fixed
thx~
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posted

ShogunMoon wrote:

from Q

im sick.. take care

before everything i must say that your mod is mostly focused on the vocals

  • Frontier
  1. from 00:22:202 (2) - to 00:43:035 (1) - pleeasee decrease the volume it's a calm part, 70% it's too loud for this moment okay
  2. 00:37:702 (1,2) - imperfect stack ye
  3. 01:05:535 (1) - this slider seems out of place because i know that you wanted to map the sound of the head but you jump a drum and at the same time vocals who should be clickable imo so i suggest to add a note 01:05:535 - and then add a 1/4 slider there is no important sound to emphasis here 01:05:869 - It's should be like this https://puu.sh/ytUoF/cae2e85b5d.png similar for 01:16:202 (1) have to disagree because here 01:05:535 - i've emphasized strong kick and synth instrument on purpose
  4. 01:06:535 (5) - strong vocals on the tail, just ctrl+g these notes 01:06:535 (5,6) same here - 01:06:535 - emphasized synth & 01:06:869 (6,1) - two kicks. yes, i am "ignoring" the vocal on purpose
  5. 01:09:702 (1,2) - slider instead of 2 circles for vocals imo really want to keep those jumps for consistency
  6. 01:17:202 (5,6) - strong vocals on the tail too, ctrl+g like i said before 01:17:035 (4,5) - follows up with the bass line & 01:17:535 (6,1) - kick emphasis
  7. 01:20:035 (6,5) - stack them alright


Nice mapset!
thanks!
gl!~

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[frontier]
  1. 00:22:369 (3,1) - for seeing this pattern, it looks little bit hard imo. 00:21:702 (1,2) - this pattern has 1/2 rhythm, but 00:22:369 (3,1) - has 1/1 rhythm gap. But DS looks similar, I think you can make better reading pattern. moved 00:22:202 (2) - so now it's a little better to read
  2. 00:26:869 (1,2) - swap NC, in this part, downbeat has on 00:27:035 - , then 00:27:035 - has stronger sound than 00:26:869 (1) - . ye, good idea
  3. 00:50:702 (1,2,1) - This flows weird, this wide angle has strange flow, it can be hard to play. not sure why did you call out this particular part 00:50:702 (1,2,1) - when i've used literally the same angle before 00:45:369 (1,2,1) . Besides that i know it can be hard to play, however, my intention was to make this kind of angle. It's way more interesting and it also keeps the player focused despite the whole section being calm.
  4. 00:55:369 (3,4,5) - Suddenly you decreased DDS without any reason, it makes weird playing. I know you intend 120 degree triangle, but you should make it with bigger DS like 00:53:702 (1,2,3,4) - . if you take a deeper look, you will see that i've seperated objects into pairs: 00:53:702 (1,2) - 00:54:702 (5,1) - 00:55:702 (4,5) - next: 00:54:202 (3,4) - 00:55:201 (2,3) - etc. i mean that after ever slider like 00:58:369 (4) - where it has the following circle like 00:58:702 (5) - i use smaller ds immediatly after that inceasing ds again. also: 00:54:369 (4,5) - and 00:57:035 (4,5) - has higher ds, on the other hand, 00:55:369 (3,4) - and 00:58:035 (3,4) - has smaller. everything is calculated :D
  5. 00:56:202 (6,1) - it looks too big DS imo, after 1/8, this pattern makes too many sliderbreaks. You can make it into easier pattern. decreased spacing


thanks!
GL
Oh yeah about those two bugged diffs: Kujinn's Normal & 1112's Insane

Not sure what to do. I can rename those and probably it'll work.
Update: changed 1112's Insane to Suzuki's Insane
Update: changed Kujinn's Normal to Kujinn's Standard
posted
[general]
  1. ya know, using normal hitsound doesn't suit for a song like this tbh, but soft hitsound does it well enough
  2. 00:00:369 (1,1,1) - each synth sound here from these 3 sliders are getting softer and softer. i'd suggest u lower the tick volume there each. applied for both diffs if there is


[frontier]
  1. somehow this diff is overdone for me, as those jumps doesn't deserve to have such spacing with a song like this
  2. 00:00:369 (1,1,1) - each synth sound here from these 3 sliders are getting softer and softer. i'd suggest u lower the tick volume there each
  3. 00:24:702 (1,2,3) - it'd be better for u to use 3 1/4 sliders there to follow vocals well tbh
  4. 00:35:369 (1,2) - 1/4 slider won't hurt to follow a vocal well here
  5. 00:38:869 (5) - at least try to avoid overlapping a bit from 00:39:702 (2) -
  6. 00:52:202 (3,4) - u messed a blanket here a bit
  7. 00:53:702 (1,2) - i'd use 1/2 slider to emphasize a vocal, even there's no such note to click on 00:54:035 (2) -
  8. 01:00:369 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - at least perfect the circle shape with this + to emphasize a kick beat rather than the current one for an extra diff https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9715781
  9. 01:06:369 (4,5,6) - should use 1/4 sliders starting on white tick and red tick there to fit a vocal here. should work on 01:17:035 (4,5,6) -
  10. 01:14:369 (1,2,1,2) - notes are too weak, but u ended up making this gap, which makes no sense as the note says so, even when u tried to cover it up with a custom hitsound here
  11. 01:22:369 (4,5,6,1) - here's a fix flow for u with a rhythm fix http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9717459


i'd suggest you to look over ur map again and analyze stuff all over like what u were trying to follow, does this note even exist, or even more than that, even if i didn't want to mention all of them though after looking through this .-.

[suzuki]
  1. 00:53:702 (1,2,3) - this somehow confuses me and other players timing this carefully here. would use 1/2 sliders here to emphasize a vocal and to avoid such misreading here
  2. 00:57:869 (2) - just a note is enough tbh .-.
  3. 00:58:869 (1) - i'd remove NC here since it doesn't start with its emphasize from a vocal
  4. 01:14:035 (2,3) - avoid overlapping this from both tails
  5. 01:16:368 (1) - curving the tail up a bit won't hurt though for this view


[atsuro]
  1. 00:14:369 (3,6) - minor, but the pixel went off a bit for a symmetry here
  2. 00:18:369 (7,1) - too, if u check it by ctrl + g
  3. 01:16:702 (6,7) - blanket's off a bit


[kujinn]
  1. uhh, what's this diff name about...? it's clearly like Normal here
  2. 00:00:369 (1,1) - at least make it more symmetrical here lol (up2u though xd)
  3. 01:18:869 (2,3) - try to avoid overlapping with those 2 tails there, even if it's a bit
posted

lit120 wrote:

[atsuro]
  1. 00:14:369 (3,6) - minor, but the pixel went off a bit for a symmetry here y
  2. 00:18:369 (7,1) - too, if u check it by ctrl + g e
  3. 01:16:702 (6,7) - blanket's off a bit s
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posted

lit120 wrote:

[general]
  1. ya know, using normal hitsound doesn't suit for a song like this tbh, but soft hitsound does it well enough it depends on the skin you are using. besides that, we use soft sampleset in the middle of the song where the song gets super calm so it is ok
  2. 00:00:369 (1,1,1) - each synth sound here from these 3 sliders are getting softer and softer. i'd suggest u lower the tick volume there each. applied for both diffs if there is i don't think it would make any significant improvement


[frontier]
  1. somehow this diff is overdone for me, as those jumps doesn't deserve to have such spacing with a song like this as i thought, sooner or later someone will judge the distance and i have to say that it was my intention to make this map, let's call it, 'spacious', especially the part between 2nd and 3rd kiai
  2. 00:00:369 (1,1,1) - each synth sound here from these 3 sliders are getting softer and softer. i'd suggest u lower the tick volume there each explained above
  3. 00:24:702 (1,2,3) - it'd be better for u to use 3 1/4 sliders there to follow vocals well tbh oversimplified suggestion. i want to keep the emphasis. i think the current layout is the most suitable for syllables
  4. 00:35:369 (1,2) - 1/4 slider won't hurt to follow a vocal well here i don't think that 00:35:369 (1,2) - and 00:35:702 (3,4,5) - sound that similar.
  5. 00:38:869 (5) - at least try to avoid overlapping a bit from 00:39:702 (2) - it's not the trouble as i've inreased cs by 0.1
  6. 00:52:202 (3,4) - u messed a blanket here a bit ok
  7. 00:53:702 (1,2) - i'd use 1/2 slider to emphasize a vocal, even there's no such note to click on 00:54:035 (2) - there is - high hat. also from 00:53:702 - i start increasing tension by only using 1/4 sliders and 1/8 reverse on significant parts
  8. 01:00:369 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - at least perfect the circle shape with this + to emphasize a kick beat rather than the current one for an extra diff https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9715781 oh right that's much better
  9. 01:06:369 (4,5,6) - should use 1/4 sliders starting on white tick and red tick there to fit a vocal here. should work on 01:17:035 (4,5,6) - ok
  10. 01:14:369 (1,2,1,2) - notes are too weak, but u ended up making this gap, which makes no sense as the note says so, even when u tried to cover it up with a custom hitsound here i tried to cover the emphasis of the vocal which starts 01:13:035 - and culminates at 01:14:369 -
  11. 01:22:369 (4,5,6,1) - here's a fix flow for u with a rhythm fix http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9717459 can't really call this a fix tbh. changing 01:22:702 (5,6) - to a slider would ruin the last two kicks 01:22:869 (6,1) - . making 01:22:369 (4) - a reverse slider would actually be a better solution in this case, however, then it would miss the vocal part which starts at 01:22:702 (5) - . so to prioritize both vocal and drums i'll keep the current rhythm


i'd suggest you to look over ur map again and analyze stuff all over like what u were trying to follow, does this note even exist, or even more than that, even if i didn't want to mention all of them though after looking through this .-. while i was covering your suggestions i found out that your mod feels really biased. only couple ideas were actually useful. most of them would make this map monotonic. despite purging the emphasis, it would require remapping a lot of things and by that ruining positions which, in this case, are critical. but anyways, thanks for modding!

oh and yeah about Kujinn's diff. we can't change it back to 'normal' because it's bugged. unless we find a better diff name
posted
@lit120 00:53:702 (1,2,3) - is ok
thx~
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Title:Pipo Password
TitleUnicode:Pipo Password
Artist:TeddyLoid feat. Bonjour Suzuki
ArtistUnicode:TeddyLoid feat. ボンジュール鈴木
Creator:niyuji
Version:Suzuki's Insane
Source:宇宙パトロールルル子
Tags:tv size space uchuu patrol luluco ending Kujinn Suzuki Suzuki_1112 1112 Atsuro Lulu Lulu- My Angel Kanan 1112deng
BeatmapID:1442572
BeatmapSetID:682185

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:8.7
SliderMultiplier:2.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"pipobg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,21902,31724
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo3 : 139,0,139
Combo4 : 255,51,51

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