[insane]
00:08:719 (1,2) - i think converting that to a 1/1 slider would work well with emphasizing the melody, since then all the clicks would be on melody notes.
00:35:880 (3,4) - ctrl g on this fits way better with vocal, since 00:36:083 - now thers slider here instead of slider end
00:56:556 (1) - i think you can make these jump patterns rotate the other way since all the pattern leading up to it are the same direction, so spinning in same direction circle over and over is kind of boring.
01:02:232 (1,2) - tbh, i think you should try emphasize 1 a bit more.... atm it is kind of low spacing from 5 even tho it has distinct sounds and finish and everything... maybe point 5 the other direction? so ther eis more pressure to 1
01:08:718 (6) - can u rotate it a little bit so that the follow points lead into the slider btter: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10359390
(-10 degree rotate)
01:15:205 (1) - same here, u can ctrl g 1 2 maybe?
01:27:164 (1,2) - plz slider lol
[hard]
00:08:719 (1,2) - 1/1 slider + circle for melody i think is more interesting than white tick only rhythm
00:20:475 (4,1) - i think i would be confusing after triple to have 1/1 stack, players would expect 1/2... unstack maybe better
00:46:826 (1,1,2,3) - why these density are so different...? use lower for 2nd time too plz
01:23:718 (5,1) - ctrl g to follow vocal well, there isnt much on white tick anyway
01:24:326 (2,3) - and same here
you can add some small jumps in kiai by flipping sliders or out of slider ends imo, having no jump but then full jump spam insane maybe not so good
[normal]
00:22:502 (3,4) - this look kinda cramped.. you can break ds a bit to make the spacing look more even with 00:23:110 (4,5) -imo
00:46:421 (6) - ctrl h + j!!!
01:20:678 (4,5) - ctrl g?
rhythm follow vocals way better that way.
think you should add more circles in kiai, replace some 1/1 slider or even 1/2 sliders. would be more fun to play
[easy]
00:09:529 (4) - i think you should make it circles, only sliders is lame imo
00:16:016 (4) -
00:58:178 (3,4) - those can be circles too for buildup
00:08:719 (1,2) - i think converting that to a 1/1 slider would work well with emphasizing the melody, since then all the clicks would be on melody notes.
00:35:880 (3,4) - ctrl g on this fits way better with vocal, since 00:36:083 - now thers slider here instead of slider end
00:56:556 (1) - i think you can make these jump patterns rotate the other way since all the pattern leading up to it are the same direction, so spinning in same direction circle over and over is kind of boring.
01:02:232 (1,2) - tbh, i think you should try emphasize 1 a bit more.... atm it is kind of low spacing from 5 even tho it has distinct sounds and finish and everything... maybe point 5 the other direction? so ther eis more pressure to 1
01:08:718 (6) - can u rotate it a little bit so that the follow points lead into the slider btter: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10359390
(-10 degree rotate)
01:15:205 (1) - same here, u can ctrl g 1 2 maybe?
01:27:164 (1,2) - plz slider lol
[hard]
00:08:719 (1,2) - 1/1 slider + circle for melody i think is more interesting than white tick only rhythm
00:20:475 (4,1) - i think i would be confusing after triple to have 1/1 stack, players would expect 1/2... unstack maybe better
00:46:826 (1,1,2,3) - why these density are so different...? use lower for 2nd time too plz
01:23:718 (5,1) - ctrl g to follow vocal well, there isnt much on white tick anyway
01:24:326 (2,3) - and same here
you can add some small jumps in kiai by flipping sliders or out of slider ends imo, having no jump but then full jump spam insane maybe not so good
[normal]
00:22:502 (3,4) - this look kinda cramped.. you can break ds a bit to make the spacing look more even with 00:23:110 (4,5) -imo
00:46:421 (6) - ctrl h + j!!!
01:20:678 (4,5) - ctrl g?
rhythm follow vocals way better that way.
think you should add more circles in kiai, replace some 1/1 slider or even 1/2 sliders. would be more fun to play
[easy]
00:09:529 (4) - i think you should make it circles, only sliders is lame imo
00:16:016 (4) -
00:58:178 (3,4) - those can be circles too for buildup