1. the oni and inner diffs have one less kiai time. Idk if it's bad for ranking but that really annoyed me :p
2. lower inner hp to 5.5 or 5? Stream map and notelocking could easily kill the player.

1. 00:48:542 (255,256,257,258,259) - Mm, try using a pattern like dkkdk or something similar to land the k on 257 and 259 as they are the high pitched piano notes here and they are louder than the drums, it fits well. dkdkk is an option if you still want to follow the drums.
2. 00:49:042 (260) - this to kat as it's a higher pitch (compare to 00:51:209 - ). Also, if you didn't agree with the previous suggestion it would help the playability as it's more comfortable to play a kat after a pattern ending on don (dkdkd in this case).
3. 00:49:959 (271) - try deleting or moving this note to 00:50:125 - and maybe changing to kat. The break at 00:49:959 - feels better with the music imo.
4. 00:50:042 (272) - this has a higher pitch than 00:49:875 (270) - . Could change the colours here and make some other changes around that fits it.
5. 00:50:709 (279) - high pitch for kat.
6. 00:51:959 (292,293) - try ctrl+g and changing 00:52:209 (295) - to kat. This looks good if you want to follow the piano. The kat doesn't fit well in 292 as it's not a high pitch (compare to 291) and 295 has a higher pitch than 294 which is also a kat.
7. 00:52:792 (301) - I know it's covering the drum sound but deleting this would gime more emphasis on the piano sounds that stand off on the song.
8. Taking 00:54:875 (321) - into consideration and other stream patterns, 00:55:125 (324) - this should be kat as there's a strong piano melody note here. Try changing it and making adjustments around it.
9. 01:02:125 (396) - Try changing to don. The kk here makes it similar to the following kk which is pretty different if you hear it, looks out of place. The don should fix that.
10. 01:37:375 (673,674,675,676,677,678,679) - the dkkdkkd looks out of place compared to the other patterns in the kiai and doesn't strictly follow anything after hearing this part many times on 25%. Try stuff like ddkdkkd or dkkddkd, the mirrored pattern is quite weird as the song isn't mirrored here.
11. 01:38:209 (680) - high pitch for kat? Also contrasts with the previous pattern that ends on don.
12. 01:39:542 - This is inconsistent with 00:50:209 - . In one pattern you use mostly kats to fill the piano and on the other there's dons. Try choosing the one you like the most and sticking with it.
13. 01:49:042 - From this section, if you're following the piano here and really want to stick with repeated patterns then ddkddkddk... fits better than kddkddk... on this stream as the k lands on the higher pitches. Try finding out what works better on the others. Though I'd recomend manually doing this part as for now it really looks like forced kddkddk patterns that doesn't really fit.

1. 00:44:375 ~ 01:04:875 - Not necessary for ranking as it doesn't pass 16/1 continous mapping but some rest times in that section would be more comfortable for the player. Same goes for the kiai. If you don't mind that then this will be a hard oni, which is always good :^)

1. 00:28:042 (56) - this whistle scared the hell out of me :<
2. You could also change 00:52:709 (172,173) - one of these to kat to emphasize the strong sound at 173. 172 as kat if you want 173 to be don and 173 as kat if you want it as kat. 172 as kat is more consistent with 00:54:875 but since you're changing everytime the 3/2 notes appear that doesn't matter much.
3. 01:27:542 - In the second kiai I feel a lack of 1/4s here and there as this is a muzu diff. Without them it feels like an ultra-mega-super buffed futsuu but that's just an oppinion :p

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1. lol OD1
2. 00:46:875 (3) - Move to 00:49:542 - to maintain a similar rhythmic structure per 4 bars throughout the kiai?
3. 00:59:542 (14) - Change to k? I think it fits the instrumental pitch better (relative to the other 2/1 notes).
4. 01:39:542 (12,13) - Ctrl+g? I think these notes fit better like how you did them at 01:28:875 (2,3) - since you're following pretty prominent instrumental sounds.
5. 02:06:209 (31,32) - Maybe delete these or at least 32? I think it's weird how you chose to leave some violin sounds earlier in the ending section blank while choosing to map notes to these violin sounds.

1. Interesting rhythm choices at the start. I'd have thought beat snapping like this would be better in a Futsuu seeing as the first 4/1 break is nearly 30 seconds into the map, but I digress.
2. 00:34:709 (34,35) - Consider using Ctrl+g on these notes to break the monotony of repeated ddk, and to differentiate the triple at 00:34:209 - from the one at 00:36:875 - etc.
3. 00:40:042 (40,41) - ^

1. Is it intentional for this difficulty to have the same HP/OD as the Kantan?
2. 00:34:709 (71,72) - Same idea as Kantan
3. 00:40:042 (86,87) - ^
4. 00:50:875 - Add a note or move the preceding note here? Considering the high sound I think it's weird that the previous sound is mapped but this one isn't.
5. 01:34:542 - Add a note or move the following note here? If the goal is to have some sort of density increase between the first and second half of the kiai it's understandable but I think mapping the first sound of the double there makes more sense than mapping the second.
6. 01:39:209 (80) - Move to 01:38:709 - so the three 1/1 instrumental sounds from 01:38:875 - will be distinct, like you did at the start of the kiai.

1. 00:49:375 (154,155,156,157,158) - Ctrl+g these 5 notes (to make kddkdkk)? I think the kdd at the start fits the descending piano sounds better, similar to what you had from 00:45:209 - followed by the kdk as the pitch increases.
2. 01:01:042 (215,216,217) - Given this is the only multicolor 1/4 triple in the map, maybe change it to monocolor d for simplicity.
3. 01:01:375 (218,219) - If you change the above, maybe change one of these to k.

1. Nice diff, nothing much to note.