Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ame

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-13T17:42:32+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月14日 at 16:01:35

Artist: Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa)
Title: Crying Heart
Source: ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート2 -Nora, Princess, and Crying Cat.-
Tags: eroge to oujo noraneko noratoto Yasaija 714 Sekaii Sekai-nyan Momochikun
BPM: 178
Filesize: 3418kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:

Insane (4.76 stars, 409 notes)
Mochi's Hard (3.45 stars, 285 notes)
Sekai's Normal (2.25 stars, 232 notes)
Yasai's Easy (1.49 stars, 128 notes)

Download: Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa) - Crying Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#6
Easy Yasaija 714
Normal Sekaii
Hard Momochikun
Insane me

Homura-'s set

Last edited by Asuka_- 2018-03-06T00:56:15+00:00, edited 67 times in total.

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-13T17:43:18+00:00

meta
https://i.gyazo.com/278c05a0b36ac86811c ... a0b640.png (from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IP-OG3vm9h8)
http://harukaze-soft.com/nora2/
http://harukaze-soft.com/product/

Title: クライングハート
Romanised Title: Crying Heart
Artist: アイリス・ディセンバー・アンクライ(花園めい)、ノエル・ザ・ネクストシーズン(雨場つかさ)
Romanied Artist: Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa)
Source: ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート2 -Nora, Princess, and Crying Cat.-

edit: added this link t/653303/start=31

Last edited by Asuka_- 2017-12-17T03:59:02+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

makisokk

928 posts

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makisokk 2017-10-15T16:14:38+00:00

Easy pp

2017-10-15 19:59 makisokk: 00:12:870 (3,1) - fix blanket
2017-10-15 20:00 makisokk: 00:21:972 (3) - move the note a little lower
2017-10-15 20:00 makisokk: 000:25:679 (1,2) - can blanket this
2017-10-15 20:01 makisokk: 00:32:421 (1,3) - pls unstack
2017-10-15 20:02 makisokk: 00:39:837 (4,1) - do blanket?
2017-10-15 20:03 makisokk: 00:58:039 (1,3) - i think better unstack
2017-10-15 20:03 makisokk: 01:02:253 (2,4) - blanke
2017-10-15 20:03 makisokk: t
2017-10-15 20:05 makisokk: 01:08:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard srteam, [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9323802 somehow it's better]
2017-10-15 20:05 makisokk: 01:08:826 (1,3) - pls unstackXD
2017-10-15 20:06 makisokk: the rest looks good

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-15T16:31:07+00:00

makisokk wrote:
Easy pp
2017-10-15 19:59 makisokk: 00:12:870 (3,1) - fix blanket yess
2017-10-15 20:00 makisokk: 00:21:972 (3) - move the note a little lower yse
2017-10-15 20:00 makisokk: 000:25:679 (1,2) - can blanket this yes
2017-10-15 20:01 makisokk: 00:32:421 (1,3) - pls unstack keep for now because i consistent with 00:21:635 (1,2,3) -
2017-10-15 20:02 makisokk: 00:39:837 (4,1) - do blanket? yes
2017-10-15 20:03 makisokk: 00:58:039 (1,3) - i think better unstack i wanna keep lol iit's fun to me
2017-10-15 20:03 makisokk: 01:02:253 (2,4) - blanke yes
2017-10-15 20:03 makisokk: t
2017-10-15 20:05 makisokk: 01:08:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard srteam, [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9323802 somehow it's better] not hard!! you could play here !!
2017-10-15 20:05 makisokk: 01:08:826 (1,3) - pls unstackXD uhehe
2017-10-15 20:06 makisokk: the rest looks good

thanks checking!!

Sekai

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Sekai 2017-10-16T10:26:45+00:00

Finished my Normal with 2.25 ></

Also I think this bg is kinda nsfw, maybe try to find better one? safer one at least o.o/

anyways my diff: http://puu.sh/xZoR1/7e43494f07.zip

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-16T11:58:17+00:00

@Sekaii updated~ really thanks!!

Last edited by Asuka_- 2017-10-17T03:26:39+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Dubturt

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Dubturt 2017-10-16T13:55:53+00:00

unko

21:45 Asuka_-: hi can i ask for quick irc?
21:46 Dubturt: ye
21:46 *Asuka_- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1439840 Hanazono Mei, Ameba Tsukasa - Crying Heart]
21:46 Asuka_-: pls psl psl
21:46 Dubturt: wait lol
21:47 Asuka_-: ok lol
21:47 *Dubturt is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1439840 Hanazono Mei, Ameba Tsukasa - Crying Heart [Insane]]
21:47 Dubturt: noraneko 
21:47 Asuka_-: insane only pls-
21:47 Asuka_-: yes
21:48 Dubturt: it would be nice if this 00:10:005 (1,2,3) - had slighty bigger spacing than this 00:09:500 (1,2,3) - 
21:48 Dubturt: i mean like
21:49 Dubturt: the spacing gets gradually bigger for 00:09:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the the 3 triangles
21:50 Dubturt: nice if it were blanketed 00:23:657 (3,1) - imo
21:52 Dubturt: idk 00:39:163 (1,2) - maybe your style lol
21:52 Dubturt: its ok if you dont do anything to it
21:52 Asuka_-: ok thanks! pls post to forum ><
21:53 Dubturt: ye
21:53 Dubturt: lol wait hehe
21:53 Dubturt: maybe a little too hard? 01:08:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
21:54 Asuka_-: hm....
21:54 Asuka_-: i passed it,,,   hm... test play ok?
21:54 Dubturt: tomorrow lol
21:54 Dubturt: exams w
21:54 Asuka_-: okay
21:54 Asuka_-: ah

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-16T13:57:43+00:00

@Dubturt all fixed! thanks

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-17T08:27:03+00:00

meta updated
re-dl please!!

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Affirmation

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Affirmation 2017-10-17T08:38:41+00:00

As you requeste, m4m

[Easy]
well.. I suggest cs3, cause 2.5 is too big, so circles are too close for seeing, not so good to seeing for me.
01:13:039 (3) - unnecessary beat, drum is too weak, so playing can be weird imo.
for me, 1/1 was too many so playing was little bit boring and 2/3 makes hard reading for beginners, As you know, this is lowest diff in this set, so I suggest thinking about easier rhythm.

[Normal]
00:18:095 - I suggest adding a beat here since you added at 00:28:882 - , and you followed vocal at previous, I mean 00:13:208 (3,4) - here, but felt weird you followed drum at here.
00:44:387 - Unnecessary beat imo. deleting this beat can be easier rhythm for newbies.
00:57:702 - if you followed drum, this beat should be clickable, if you followed vocal. 00:57:365 - should be added. current beat looks just weird beats imo.
00:58:713 - I think strong beat is here, not 00:59:050 - , I sgueest ctrl G 00:58:545 (3,4) -
01:00:736 (1,4) - symmetrical pattern?
I think symmetrical pattern and downbeat notees made not so good rhythm. Just felt 1/1 map imo.

[Hard]
00:25:342 (1) - how about adding clickable beats at 00:25:679 - ? looks good for music and consistency with 00:14:556 (4,1) -
00:57:365 (4,5) - stacking made bad DS. check it ingame.
01:00:399 (3,2) - this linear overlap looks not so good imo.

[Insane]
00:31:073 (1,2,3,4) - How about make similar flow with 00:20:286 (1,2,3,4) - ? can be good for consistency.
00:58:039 (1,3) - stacking can be hard to read, I suggest overlapping. can be good for reading and emphasizing,
01:08:826 (1,3) - ^
01:18:769 (4,5) - well,, this stack looks little bit hard?

Really good mapset, GL with rank

Affirmation

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Affirmation 2017-10-17T08:41:09+00:00

take 2 stars
Okay 12sp~~BN when~~

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DeletedUser_423548 2017-10-17T11:50:48+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
As you requeste, m4m

[Easy]
well.. I suggest cs3, cause 2.5 is too big, so circles are too close for seeing, not so good to seeing for me. ok
01:13:039 (3) - unnecessary beat, drum is too weak, so playing can be weird imo. I am taking rhythm according to vocals
for me, 1/1 was too many so playing was little bit boring and 2/3 makes hard reading for beginners, As you know, this is lowest diff in this set, so I suggest thinking about easier rhythm. However, since there are many 1/2 sounds in this song, there are many uncomfortable feeling if it is 1/1 slider

Really good mapset, GL with rank

Thank you~

@Asuka_-さん CS3にしてください

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-18T08:44:20+00:00

@Sekaii talked with Doyak about BG and i decided to change~ thanks!!
@Neoskylove thanks star~ i'll reply!
@Yasaija 714 ok~ updated

Mochi's Hard updated, so spread is fine.
BG changed. (i could not find good one, so i chose it randomly. but it's fine lul)

_DT3

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Joined October 2015

_DT3 2017-10-18T13:43:47+00:00

As requested suuper quick mod ^^

Easy
00:43:882 (3) - This slidershape feels really underwhelming for the loud drumroll in the background, maybe change it to a edgy slider (with red anchors)?

Clean ^^

Normal
Just noticed the jump in SV from Easy to Normal is pretty big compared to the rest. Something noteworthy but probably not that bad
00:01:410 (1,4) - Why not make them have the same slidershape? The edgy slider kinda sticks out in this part unnecessarily so making it have a curve would feel more
00:12:196 - This part seems to be a bit inconsistent in the rhythms used imo, for example:

00:15:567 (2,3,4) vs. - 00:26:354 (2,3,4,5) - Here 00:26:354 (2,3) - you could maybe add a 1/2 slider for (2) because you did so in the previous part. Even if it's more intense a 1/2 slider would feel more appropriate and consistent to represent the different intensity
00:17:590 (1,2,3) - vs. 00:28:376 (1,2,3,4) - Here again rhythm varies a lot despite not being so different at all next to the different lyrics. I think both can have the same rhythm as 00:28:376 (1,2,3,4) - since that follows the vocals more appropriate
00:20:286 (7,1) - NC switch here maybe because you do every second downbeat? Even if 00:21:635 (1) - is stronger you stayed consistent here too 00:31:073 (1,4) -

00:59:387 (1) - Why the NC? I thought it was only used every second downbeat

Really don't like how it uses rhythm like that in general, but I guess it's fine

Hard
AIMod problems? At least on my side
00:17:253 (5,1) - 00:18:601 (3,1) - Tbh, the first one feels stronger in the song but the second one is emphasized noticeably more, maybe reduce spacing on the second one?
00:25:342 (1) - Kinda confused about why the rather strong vocal is on the repeat, 00:14:556 (4,1) - is essentially the same, yet it has the vocal clickable
00:26:859 (1) - It feels like it deserves more emphasis but it's fine I guess, you choose
00:57:028 (2,3,4,5) - Really don't like the fact that the continuous 1/2 hitcircles kinda overshadow how the instruments go away here 00:57:365 (4) - but again, up to you
01:20:286 (3) - No emphasis? Again, it's your choice but the ways of emphasis feel kinda weird to me
01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - Really nazi but it triggers me that 01:39:163 (3) - kinda ruins the pentagon a bit xd

Fun diff

Insane
00:03:264 (1,2,3,4) - Rather nazi but maybe for tidiness make these overlap more like 00:00:904 (1,2,3) - or the other way around , your choice though xd
00:58:039 (1,3) - 01:08:826 (1,3) - Don't know if this is allowed because: (RC outtake)
"When perfectly overlapping two slider bodies, the first slider must be fully faded out before the second slider is fully faded in."
But might wanna ask for more opinions

Haven't looked closer, but looks really clean, gj!

Sorry for the bad mod, don't have much time though uwu
GL!

niyuji

529 posts

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niyuji 2017-10-18T16:41:00+00:00

Hello. So here I am. Super ~~quick~~ mod.

Insane

00:23:657 (3,1) - blanket looks weird, try moving 00:23:657 (3) - closer or just correcting the slider a little
00:36:129 (4) - my personal look, however, I think you could make this slider longer like 00:44:219 (10,1) - because the vocal is not changing a would make sense to emphasize it like that
00:46:915 (5,1) - same here ^ (or just ignore these two suggestions)
00:47:253 (1,2) - also weird blankets again
00:56:522 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this part could have some more emphasis e.g increase spacing 00:56:859 (2,3,4) -
01:04:612 (1,2,3) - hmm check this out http://puu.sh/y1cBw/7eb09e9eaa.jpg small details but worth fixing them
01:15:399 (1,2) - blanket ?
01:22:140 (5,4) - check stacks here
01:30:736 (2,3,4) - same as above ^^^
01:35:792 (1,2,3,4) - spacing a little off
01:41:017 - would love to see a circle here

Mochi's Hard

00:08:826 (2) - i think i would be better to rotate this slider https://puu.sh/y1cOK/bb20db0bb1.jpg
00:08:657 (1,1) - too close
00:35:455 (5,1) - and 00:36:466 (1,2,3) - spacing between 5th and 1st - fix it
01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - you should use something ctrl+shift+d to create a perfect shaped pentagon
01:39:837 (1,2) - and 01:40:679 (3,4) - spacing could be better like put 01:41:017 (4) - a little closer

other diffs are cool

good luck!

Pulse

257 posts

Joined April 2015

Pulse 2017-10-18T18:26:28+00:00

[Yasai's Easy]

00:05:286 (3) - Sliderend probably whould use whistle + clap since you still represents the same sound as 00:02:590 (3) - which was whistle'd
00:07:646 (2) - Should be used clap + finish as 00:06:803 (1). Same sound which was represented before
00:09:500 (1) - + Finish on start
00:32:421 (2) - Finish on start
00:53:826 (2) - Finish
00:55:174 (1) - Finish
01:15:399 (3) - Finish
01:24:163 (4) - Finish

[Sekai's Normal]

00:06:297 (6) - Check DS
01:12:702 (4) - Check DS
00:05:960 (5) - Clap on sliderend
00:07:814 (3) - Whistle on sliderend
00:09:500 (1) - NC and clap
00:11:522 (2) - Whistle on reverse and finish on end
00:57:533 (1) - Whistle on reverse
01:27:702 (1) - Clap
01:38:488 (1) - Clap

[Mochi's Hard]

00:09:500 (1) - Clap
00:11:859 (6) - Clap
00:38:826 (7) - This blanket could be better. Tail could be curved as on head
00:58:713 (3) - I get different DS's on 00:55:174 (1,2,3) - and near on music start but I'm not sure if this one is ok
01:09:500 (3) - Could be clean as 00:58:713 (3,4)
01:27:702 (1) - Clap
01:30:061 (5) - Clap

[Insane]

00:07:983 (3) - Imo a 5% vol should exist on sliderend since the sound that made you make 00:07:309 (4) - as a 1/2 is clearly different of this one
00:10:005 (1,2,3) - Are claps instead whistles
00:10:848 (3) - Finish
00:30:230 (3) - Why DS changing? Should keep it consistent
00:31:073 (1) - Finish
00:32:421 (1) - Finish
00:43:713 (4,5) - and 00:44:051 (8,9) - Should be whistles
00:55:848 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - There's no sound on (5), remove it or remove hitsounding
00:58:713 (3) - Look's great if ctrl+g'd for differentiate phrases
01:06:129 (1) - Finish
01:07:309 (1) - Finish
01:09:500 (3) - Look's great if ctrl+g'd for differentiate phrases
01:12:533 (4) - Looks off if you don't overlap it like 01:11:017 (4,1)
01:12:702 (1) - Finish
01:15:399 (1) - Finish
01:18:264 (1) - Finish
01:19:275 (6,7,8,9) - Whistles instead claps
01:23:488 (1) - Finish
01:24:163 (4) - Finish
01:27:702 (1) - Finish
01:28:545 (7,8) - Whistles instead claps
01:28:713 (9) - No hitsound on sliderend and + finish on start
01:28:882 (10) - Whistles instead
01:38:151 (10) - Finish

Last edited by Pulse 2017-10-18T22:59:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sekai

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Joined February 2011

Sekai 2017-10-18T19:52:36+00:00

Fixed everything, thanks for the mod :3

Sekai's Normal

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57281
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1410,22983,101775
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Crying Heart
TitleUnicode:クライングハート
Artist:Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa)
ArtistUnicode:アイリス・ディセンバー・アンクライ(花園めい)、ノエル・ザ・ネクストシーズン(雨場つかさ)
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Sekai's Normal
Source:ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート2 -Nora, Princess, and Crying Cat.-
Tags:eroge to oujo noraneko noratoto Yasaija 714 Sekaii Sekai-nyan Momochikun
BeatmapID:1442884
BeatmapSetID:681010

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg(1366x768).jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
62,337.078651685393,4,2,2,50,1,0
1410,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
5960,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
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58039,-100,4,2,2,60,0,1
90399,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
105146,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 128,255,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 255,128,64

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Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-10-19T05:16:13+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
As you requeste, m4m

[Hard]
00:25:342 (1) - how about adding clickable beats at 00:25:679 - ? looks good for music and consistency with 00:14:556 (4,1) - nope
00:57:365 (4,5) - stacking made bad DS. check it ingame. keep stack but change some ds
01:00:399 (3,2) - this linear overlap looks not so good imo. fine i think

Really good mapset, GL with rank

_DT3 wrote:
As requested suuper quick mod ^^

Hard
AIMod problems? At least on my side
00:17:253 (5,1) - 00:18:601 (3,1) - Tbh, the first one feels stronger in the song but the second one is emphasized noticeably more, maybe reduce spacing on the second one? i dont see it as a problem
00:25:342 (1) - Kinda confused about why the rather strong vocal is on the repeat, 00:14:556 (4,1) - is essentially the same, yet it has the vocal clickable nah
00:26:859 (1) - It feels like it deserves more emphasis but it's fine I guess, you choose
00:57:028 (2,3,4,5) - Really don't like the fact that the continuous 1/2 hitcircles kinda overshadow how the instruments go away here 00:57:365 (4) - but again, up to you
01:20:286 (3) - No emphasis? Again, it's your choice but the ways of emphasis feel kinda weird to me i already add a lot of jumps, idk why people ask for more jumps lol
01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - Really nazi but it triggers me that 01:39:163 (3) - kinda ruins the pentagon a bit xd ahh yeah fixed

Fun diff thanks !

GL!

niyuji wrote:
Hello. So here I am. Super ~~quick~~ mod.

Mochi's Hard
00:08:826 (2) - i think i would be better to rotate this slider https://puu.sh/y1cOK/bb20db0bb1.jpg nope
00:08:657 (1,1) - too close nah
00:35:455 (5,1) - and 00:36:466 (1,2,3) - spacing between 5th and 1st - fix it its fine
01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - you should use something ctrl+shift+d to create a perfect shaped pentagon fixed
01:39:837 (1,2) - and 01:40:679 (3,4) - spacing could be better like put 01:41:017 (4) - a little closer

other diffs are cool

good luck!

Pulse wrote:
[Mochi's Hard]
00:09:500 (1) - Clap i dislike finish + clap, it sounds bad
00:11:859 (6) - Clap
00:38:826 (7) - This blanket could be better. Tail could be curved as on head ok
00:58:713 (3) - I get different DS's on 00:55:174 (1,2,3) - and near on music start but I'm not sure if this one is ok its fine
01:09:500 (3) - Could be clean as 00:58:713 (3,4) nah
01:27:702 (1) - Clap
01:30:061 (5) - Clap

thanks

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Title:Crying Heart
TitleUnicode:クライングハート
Artist:Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa)
ArtistUnicode:アイリス・ディセンバー・アンクライ(花園めい)、ノエル・ザ・ネクストシーズン(雨場つかさ)
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Mochi's Hard
Source:ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート2 -Nora, Princess, and Crying Cat.-
Tags:eroge to oujo noraneko noratoto Yasaija 714 Sekaii Sekai-nyan Momochikun
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-Atri-

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-10-19T08:54:32+00:00

m4m return
Map for mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/683020
CEにアップロードするの際は強制的にmoddingv2したのでそのthreadで： p/6307153/

[野菜]

01:40:511 (4) - circleしませんか？Easyにおすすめしないから、しかもあんなに今更1/2を使うのは良くないかも
なにもありませんでした～

[Sekai]

00:08:657 (1,2,3) - I don't think using 1/1 would be a great choice here, it seems it follows the drum but it's better to follow the main melody (which is landed on 3/4) as it was more louder, especially since it's an easier diff, so in this case, a 3/4 return slider will work better
00:09:500 (4,5,6,7) - I feel it's quite overdone to use so many amount of 1/2 here as it might be hard for normal.... so maybe simplify this rhythm a bit?
:::
00:11:522 (2) - imo I think making 00:11:859 - clickable will be better to emphasize the note
00:20:286 (7) - NC
00:43:376 (1,2,3,4) - same here, simplifying it will be better
:::
01:16:915 (1,2,3,4) - same here, 4 circles will be better
01:27:702 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:38:488 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Mochi]

00:51:129 (1) - 00:52:646 (1) - both have finish on head, but only 00:51:129 (1) - have jumps to emphasize it]
Fine diff

[Insane]

00:31:073 (1) - Finish on head
00:58:039 (1,3) - 判断する時間があまりないのでunstackの方はいいかも
01:08:826 (1,3) - ^
01:08:151 (4) - ここに　01:08:151 (4,1) - と流れが悪いからそんなに飛ばないならいいかもね
いいね

頑張って～

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-10-19T09:00:07+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
[Insane]
00:31:073 (1,2,3,4) - How about make similar flow with 00:20:286 (1,2,3,4) - ? can be good for consistency. keep for now
00:58:039 (1,3) - stacking can be hard to read, I suggest overlapping. can be good for reading and emphasizing, okay overlapped
01:08:826 (1,3) - ^ ^
01:18:769 (4,5) - well,, this stack looks little bit hard? it's fine plabably lol

_DT3 wrote:
Insane
00:03:264 (1,2,3,4) - Rather nazi but maybe for tidiness make these overlap more like 00:00:904 (1,2,3) - or the other way around , your choice though xd
ok done~
00:58:039 (1,3) - 01:08:826 (1,3) - Don't know if this is allowed because: (RC outtake)
"When perfectly overlapping two slider bodies, the first slider must be fully faded out before the second slider is fully faded in."
But might wanna ask for more opinions
ok olverlapped

!

niyuji wrote:
Hello. So here I am. Super ~~quick~~ mod.
Insane
00:23:657 (3,1) - blanket looks weird, try moving 00:23:657 (3) - closer or just correcting the slider a little little changed
00:36:129 (4) - my personal look, however, I think you could make this slider longer like 00:44:219 (10,1) - because the vocal is not changing a would make sense to emphasize it like that keep for now, 3/4slider doesnt empasize vocal
00:46:915 (5,1) - same here ^ (or just ignore these two suggestions)
00:47:253 (1,2) - also weird blankets again little changed
00:56:522 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this part could have some more emphasis e.g increase spacing 00:56:859 (2,3,4) -
01:04:612 (1,2,3) - hmm check this out http://puu.sh/y1cBw/7eb09e9eaa.jpg small details but worth fixing them little changed
01:15:399 (1,2) - blanket ? ye
01:22:140 (5,4) - check stacks here nice
01:30:736 (2,3,4) - same as above ^^^ little changed
01:35:792 (1,2,3,4) - spacing a little off little changed
01:41:017 - would love to see a circle here okay

Pulse wrote:
[Insane]
00:07:983 (3) - Imo a 5% vol should exist on sliderend since the sound that made you make 00:07:309 (4) - as a 1/2 is clearly different of this one
keep
00:10:005 (1,2,3) - Are claps instead whistles claps dont suit the music to me
00:10:848 (3) - Finish nice
00:30:230 (3) - Why DS changing? Should keep it consistent empasize next (3)
00:31:073 (1) - Finish
00:32:421 (1) - Finish
00:43:713 (4,5) - and 00:44:051 (8,9) - Should be whistles
00:55:848 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - There's no sound on (5), remove it or remove hitsounding
00:58:713 (3) - Look's great if ctrl+g'd for differentiate phrases no
01:06:129 (1) - Finish
01:07:309 (1) - Finish
01:09:500 (3) - Look's great if ctrl+g'd for differentiate phrases nono
01:12:533 (4) - Looks off if you don't overlap it like 01:11:017 (4,1) stacked
01:12:702 (1) - Finish
01:15:399 (1) - Finish
01:18:264 (1) - Finish
01:19:275 (6,7,8,9) - Whistles instead claps
01:23:488 (1) - Finish
01:24:163 (4) - Finish
01:27:702 (1) - Finish
01:28:545 (7,8) - Whistles instead claps
01:28:713 (9) - No hitsound on sliderend and + finish on start
01:28:882 (10) - Whistles instead
01:38:151 (10) - Finish

applied almost hs (but i dont like clap+finish.. keep it.) thanks!

Firis Mistlud wrote:
[Insane]
00:31:073 (1) - Finish on head ok
00:58:039 (1,3) - 判断する時間があまりないのでunstackの方はいいかも ok
01:08:826 (1,3) - ^ ok
01:08:151 (4) - ここに　01:08:151 (4,1) - と流れが悪いからそんなに飛ばないならいいかもね悪いかなー。。？　bnに言われたら変えるわ
いいね

[]
@Sekai, Momochikun:
Firis's mod came before i upload GDs sorry><

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-10-19T12:46:01+00:00

Firis Mistlud wrote:
m4m return
Map for mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/683020
CEにアップロードするの際は強制的にmoddingv2したのでそのthreadで： p/6307153/

[野菜]
01:40:511 (4) - circleしませんか？Easyにおすすめしないから、しかもあんなに今更1/2を使うのは良くないかもそれはリズムが続いているときにはよくないと思いますが最後の音なので問題ないと思います
なにもありませんでした～

頑張って～

modありがとうございます！

@HitsoundについてはコピーなのでAsuka_-さんに任せます

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,152 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-10-20T16:01:48+00:00

Insane
- 00:57:702 - Could be a 1/4 slider cuz the sound here is pretty strong and since you don't really capitalize on it with stopping movement you could probably make a different rhythm to compensate.
- 00:58:039 (1,3) - These are overlapped so little I nearly misread them on sightread, probably do something more like this https://i.imgur.com/H1oxY9z.png so it's not as surprising. Since you didn't really introduce overlaps like this earlier it only makes sense to have them as intuitive as possible.
- 01:08:320 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This stream felt a little too intense and I don't really think there's anything on 01:08:320 (2,3) - so you could probably just delete 3 and have a 5 note stream at the same spacing? You can do something like https://i.imgur.com/WEkbZVR.jpg if you really want to but that would be a pretty major change. Up to you what you really want to do but I felt the stream was a bit too strong here compared to the rest of the kiai.

Mochi's Hard
- 00:03:769 - Might be nicer as a circle here to differentiate between the double chime melody thing on 00:03:432 (4) -
- 00:08:657 (1,2) - You could make the 2 lead from the 1 a bit better like if you blanketed it around 00:07:814 (4) -
- 00:32:758 (3,4) - 3 gets way more emphasis than 4 does yet 4 is way stronger? Buffing 3>4 and nerfing 2>3 would be cool here imo
- 00:38:826 (7) - Really out of place imo - different slider, flow change on a relatively weak beat, and it's not even blanketed nicely over 00:38:151 (5), and it ends on a downbeat. If you wanted to, you could ctrl+g 00:38:826 - and make it a 1/1 reverse which would fix the flow change thing and the downbeat thing and the blanket thing if you blanketed it nicely.
- 00:43:797 - You could put a note if you wanted to.
- 00:48:095 (3,2) - You could avoid this overlap and maybe do something to make 00:47:758 (2,3,1,2) - not look like you intended for this https://i.imgur.com/FyaD3zD.png and ran out of space

- 00:59:893 (2,3,2) - I think not overlapping 01:00:399 (3,2) - would do well to separate the downbeat cuz atm it looks like they should be the same pattern which isn't what you or the song has been doing.
- 01:32:421 (3,4,5) - I think this might confuse players especially introduced so late into the map. Could either raise stack leniency or manually stack it some other way. Similarly I don't think 01:31:578 (1,2) - are that nice stacked like they are, since I don't really think you ever stacked like this before and I'm wondering why you decided to all of a sudden.
- 01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - You can tidy this up a little bit especially 01:39:163 (3,1) -

Sekai's Normal
- 01:01:915 (1,2) - Weird to follow vocals with this then ignore 01:02:590 - to map drums right after. Would suggest to map the red tick.
- 01:10:005 (3) - There's nothing on the red tick so important for this slider. The downbeat has way more stuff on it. I think it would be nicer if you put the slider to start there instead of on the red before it.

Overall the kiai feels like it switches between vocals and drums very liberally and I think that might be a bit troublesome for newer players to get their heads around. It might be nicer if you decided to stick to either drums or vocals rather than switch between both. Drums seem like the more obvious choice with vocals as a heavy secondary but you do you. I just think the kiai's rhythm could use some work.

Yasai's Easy
- 00:56:522 (2) - You could make this a 1/1 reverse to get all 3 sounds if you wanted to.

Normal kiai rhythm could use work but the rest of the set seems fine. If you don't bother me about it you can be tactful and ask me for a recheck sometime later down the road.

Good luck!

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-10-20T16:08:34+00:00

Mir wrote:
Yasai's Easy
- 00:56:522 (2) - You could make this a 1/1 reverse to get all 3 sounds if you wanted to.

Normal kiai rhythm could use work but the rest of the set seems fine. If you don't bother me about it you can be tactful and ask me for a recheck sometime later down the road.

Good luck!

fixed!
Thank you Mir!

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Asuka_-

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Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-10-20T18:01:29+00:00

Mir wrote:
Insane
- 00:57:702 - Could be a 1/4 slider cuz the sound here is pretty strong and since you don't really capitalize on it with stopping movement you could probably make a different rhythm to compensate.yea, nice point. i can do that your sugested, but i want to keep here for now xd. because i think now looks clear. ><
- 00:58:039 (1,3) - These are overlapped so little I nearly misread them on sightread, probably do something more like this https://i.imgur.com/H1oxY9z.png so it's not as surprising. Since you didn't really introduce overlaps like this earlier it only makes sense to have them as intuitive as possible.
i see, okay applied!
- 01:08:320 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This stream felt a little too intense and I don't really think there's anything on 01:08:320 (2,3) - so you could probably just delete 3 and have a 5 note stream at the same spacing? You can do something like https://i.imgur.com/WEkbZVR.jpg if you really want to but that would be a pretty major change. Up to you what you really want to do but I felt the stream was a bit too strong here compared to the rest of the kiai.
As you said, certainly the part here was stronger than the other parts in kiai.
However, since I want to pick up (3)'s bass drum as clickable,so I kept the number of stream and narrowed the distance of stream.
I think that it was probably resolved that it was too strong~.

Thanks~!!! (easy updated)
Since I have not given up speed rank yet, i would like to ask recheck at a later date if you dont mind.

Last edited by Asuka_- 2017-11-10T09:18:05+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Sekai

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Joined February 2011

Sekai 2017-10-21T15:48:45+00:00

I will check the mods soon, I'm kinda busy right now ></

Sorry Asuka ;w;

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-21T16:21:35+00:00

okay, no problem~ ^^ ♪

Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-10-23T00:27:23+00:00

Mir wrote:
Mochi's Hard
- 00:03:769 - Might be nicer as a circle here to differentiate between the double chime melody thing on 00:03:432 (4) - well i would prefer to keep the symmetrical pattern if its not a big deal
- 00:08:657 (1,2) - You could make the 2 lead from the 1 a bit better like if you blanketed it around 00:07:814 (4) - i wanted to keep the stack pattern, dont want blanket
- 00:32:758 (3,4) - 3 gets way more emphasis than 4 does yet 4 is way stronger? Buffing 3>4 and nerfing 2>3 would be cool here imo alright
- 00:38:826 (7) - Really out of place imo - different slider, flow change on a relatively weak beat, and it's not even blanketed nicely over 00:38:151 (5), and it ends on a downbeat. If you wanted to, you could ctrl+g 00:38:826 - and make it a 1/1 reverse which would fix the flow change thing and the downbeat thing and the blanket thing if you blanketed it nicely. changing stuff
- 00:43:797 - You could put a note if you wanted to.
- 00:48:095 (3,2) - You could avoid this overlap and maybe do something to make 00:47:758 (2,3,1,2) - not look like you intended for this https://i.imgur.com/FyaD3zD.png and ran out of space nah i intend this though, i would like to make (2) same shape as (1) but making it spaced would be too far, so i make it overlapping instead
- 00:59:893 (2,3,2) - I think not overlapping 01:00:399 (3,2) - would do well to separate the downbeat cuz atm it looks like they should be the same pattern which isn't what you or the song has been doing. changed the next combo
- 01:32:421 (3,4,5) - I think this might confuse players especially introduced so late into the map. Could either raise stack leniency or manually stack it some other way. Similarly I don't think 01:31:578 (1,2) - are that nice stacked like they are, since I don't really think you ever stacked like this before and I'm wondering why you decided to all of a sudden. nah i think manual stacking would make things even worse, also i did stack like this before and i do like it tbh
- 01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - You can tidy this up a little bit especially 01:39:163 (3,1) - im bad at this lol

Good luck!

Thanks for modding

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375,37,90230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,121,90399,6,0,B|425:198|425:198|409:232|418:265,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,306,90904,2,0,P|282:289|187:278,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,250,91410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
193,193,91578,6,0,P|226:142|209:54,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,66,92084,2,0,P|263:89|310:88,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,68,92421,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,128,92590,1,2,0:0:0:0:
361,68,92758,1,8,0:0:0:0:
325,237,93095,6,0,P|261:229|185:267,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,280,93601,2,0,P|100:319|102:363,1,70
55,216,93938,2,0,P|66:182|67:148,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,84,94275,6,0,P|184:113|253:105,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,62,94781,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,147,94949,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,147,95033,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,147,95118,2,0,L|373:220,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,200,95455,2,0,L|257:273,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,338,95792,6,0,P|175:345|128:346,1,70,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,309,96129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,229,96297,2,0,P|115:155|104:90,1,140,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,53,96803,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,9,96972,6,0,P|191:78|202:147,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,229,97477,1,8,0:0:0:0:
302,212,97646,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,253,97814,2,0,P|410:303|407:357,2,105,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,293,98488,6,0,L|216:318,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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386,122,99331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,63,99500,1,8,0:0:0:0:
417,48,99668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,32,100511,1,8,0:0:0:0:
171,72,100679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
321,273,101017,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-24T00:23:55+00:00

hard updated

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Asuka_- 2017-10-27T12:51:14+00:00

発売日おめ

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Asuka_- 2017-11-10T09:13:41+00:00

Mir wrote:
Sekai's Normal
- 01:01:915 (1,2) - Weird to follow vocals with this then ignore 01:02:590 - to map drums right after. Would suggest to map the red tick.
- 01:10:005 (3) - There's nothing on the red tick so important for this slider. The downbeat has way more stuff on it. I think it would be nicer if you put the slider to start there instead of on the red before it.

Overall the kiai feels like it switches between vocals and drums very liberally and I think that might be a bit troublesome for newer players to get their heads around. It might be nicer if you decided to stick to either drums or vocals rather than switch between both. Drums seem like the more obvious choice with vocals as a heavy secondary but you do you. I just think the kiai's rhythm could use some work.

i tried fixing because Sekaii is so busy right now (we talked on forum-pm).

he has followed drum in chorus (before kiai part), so i decided follow drum which as you said in kiai part.
should be fine now i guess!! (i have no confidence because my style is following vocal in normal diff lol)

thanks!!

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Mir 2017-11-10T15:23:29+00:00

Provide a valid metadata link and you can get me to bubble. Changes seem fine.

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Asuka_- 2017-11-10T15:44:21+00:00

@Mir thanks!!

meta t/653303/start=1

Title: クライングハート
Romanised Title: Crying Heart
Artist: アイリス・ディセンバー・アンクライ(花園めい)、ノエル・ザ・ネクストシーズン(雨場つかさ)
Romanied Artist: Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa)
Source: ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート2 -Nora, Princess, and Crying Cat.-

ref screen captures (all official)

(from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IP-OG3vm9h8& (Title, Tirle Unicode)

(from http://harukaze-soft.com/nora2/ (Sourse)

couldnt good capture >< (ディセンバー = "December" in japanese, so it should be fine.)

(from http://harukaze-soft.com/nora2/ (Artist, Artist Unicode)

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Mir 2017-11-10T16:38:23+00:00

all good

metadata is ^

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Asuka_- 2017-11-10T16:39:35+00:00

@Mir thanks~!

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Garden 2017-12-13T04:53:10+00:00

easy:
01:00:736 (4,1) - could swap nc

normal:
00:08:994 (2) - what is this even mapped to?
00:11:522 (2) - similarly, https://puu.sh/yFlrF/5fca686845.png would be enough
00:32:084 (3,4) - better if this is unstacked cuz most stacks are introduced as 1/2 gap
01:41:185 (1) - maybe make ending time consistent with other difficulties?

and some hitsounding suggestion (checked in insane, can probably apply to other diffs):
00:07:983 - should have a finish like 00:07:309 - ?
00:31:241 - random finish at the slider tail lol
00:51:129 - 00:52:646 - 00:53:826 - 01:06:129 - 01:07:309 - 01:07:983 - 01:16:915 - 01:18:264 - 01:18:769 - 01:34:275 - 01:41:017 - are also some potentially good spots for finishes

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Asuka_- 2017-12-13T12:17:01+00:00

Yasaija 714 cant log into osu now (his pc has been broken ;w;) ,so i try to fix.
Sekaii is still busy now, so im entrusted with checking & fixing.

Garden wrote:
easy:
01:00:736 (4,1) - could swap nc ok

normal:
00:08:994 (2) - what is this even mapped to? >< mapped with 3/4 reverse
00:11:522 (2) - similarly, https://puu.sh/yFlrF/5fca686845.png would be enough okay
00:32:084 (3,4) - better if this is unstacked cuz most stacks are introduced as 1/2 gap ok~
01:41:185 (1) - maybe make ending time consistent with other difficulties? fixed!!

and some hitsounding suggestion (checked in insane, can probably apply to other diffs):
00:07:983 - should have a finish like 00:07:309 - ?
00:31:241 - random finish at the slider tail lol
00:51:129 - 00:52:646 - 00:53:826 - 01:06:129 - 01:07:309 - 01:07:983 - 01:16:915 - 01:18:264 - 01:18:769 - 01:34:275 - 01:41:017 - are also some potentially good spots for finishes

ok applied to Easy, Normal, Insane. (Hard: all finishes where you pointed out were applied already.)

Thanks~!!>< ready!!