1. Futsuu (1,97 stars, 131 notes)
2. Idealism's Kantan (1,12 stars, 89 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2,38 stars, 200 notes)
4. Oni (2,89 stars, 255 notes)

Kazaze wrote:

Hi~

Oni

• 00:30:625 (68,69,70,71,72) - Any reason why this pattern is different from 00:30:625 (68,69,70,71,72) - for example? I think it should be "dkdkd" just like the others since this part of your map is just repetition without differenciation. Fixed
• 00:34:625 (91,92) - Remove these two notes to add a break in that part and to lighten it a bit in order to differenciate it from the beggining of the Kiai time that has a similar long part without a break. Fixed
• 00:39:750 (118) - Change this note to a "d" to emphasize on the vocals of 00:39:875 (119) - Fixed
• 01:04:375 - The slider velocity of the inherited point ending the Kiai time effect messes up the SV of the last note - change it to 1,20 to fix that Fixed

Muzu

• 00:38:375 (84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - Any reason why this part is drastically different from 00:30:375 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - ? Both sessions have sound differences in 00:39:125 (89,90,91) - But I tried to make them as equal as possible, despite the difference
• 00:40:375 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101) - I think you should make this part similar to 00:32:875 (63,64,65,66,67,68) - since it is the exat same density as the Kiai time part : 00:52:375 (137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145) - that should be denser Fixed
• 00:49:625 - You can add a note here (Maybe a "d") to reduce the number of breaks there is in the Kiai time since it is almost as dense as the rest of the song.
○ 00:51:625 - Same suggestion ; add a "d" and change to a "k" for consistency with 00:59:875 (169) - fixed
○ 00:57:625 - Same suggestion ; add a "d"fixed
○ 00:59:625 - Same suggestion ; add a "d"fixed

Futsuu

• 00:57:375 (111) - Change to a "k" for consistency with 00:49:375 (91) - fixed
> I think you should work on trying to add breaks of 2/1 in the part after the spinner - before the kiai time (00:16:375 - to 00:47:875 - ) fixed

Thanks for asking me to mod your map, hope this helped!
Best of luck on your first Taiko Mapset!

Idealism wrote:

ae

d = don
k = kat
D = finish don
K = finish kat

[General]
recomendo fazer um kantan pq a galera n gosta mto de set FMO (eu posso fazer uma gd se vc quiser)

muda aí alguns valores:
Futsuu - OD4 HP7
Muzukashii - OD5 HP6
oni tá de boa
Fixed

[Futsuu]
00:00:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - esse início tá mto repetitivo, ao invés de só usar d d k vc pode variar usando k d, d k etc. Eu não gostaria de mudar esse início, segue muito bem a música apesar de ser repetitívo

no geral o mapa tá uma mesmice, não tem muita variação de patterns, é tudo d k ddk e tal, e a galera diz que isso é mapeamento preguiçoso. você poderia dar uma variada nisso mudando notas como 00:22:375 (17) - pra k, e continuar seguindo pra que não fique repetindo a mesma pattern direto. tentei variar um pouco mais
00:32:375 (46,47) - dá ctrl+g nisso, segue melhor a música fixed
00:36:375 (56,57,58,59) - n vejo pq usar K dDK aqui, já que não há nada de intenso pra indicar o uso de um finisher aqui. eu sugiro você trocar isso pra k dkk e usar finisher em notas como 00:39:875 (66) -, em que dá pra ouvir um "HEY!". Oki doki
00:49:375 (91) - um d soa muito melhor aqui. fix
00:57:375 (111) - ^ fix

no geral o mapa tá bem repetitivo mesmo, você tem que ir procurando lugares para variar as patterns ou vão te chamar de mapper preguiçoso.

[Muzukashii]
00:00:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - mesma coisa que o futsuu
00:18:875 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - k ddd d k k d segue bem melhor aqui fix
00:22:375 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - ao invés disso, acho melhor usar k dk dk d d K nessa seção pois segue bem melhor ambos vocais e instrumentos.fix do meu jeito
00:30:375 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - ctrl+g, segue muito melhor do que no momento. Ok
00:32:250 (62,63) - remove o 62 e passa o 63 pra d fix
00:37:875 (86) - muda pra k ok
00:48:000 - bota um k aqui e faz uma triple de kkk com 00:47:875 (124,125) - esses dois fix
00:48:375 (126,127,128,129,130) - k dk dk segue melhor aqui Well, disseram que esse tipo de coisa não podia em muzu
00:50:375 (134,135,136,137,138) - ^ e vai seguindo
00:59:375 (172) - pq n k aqui pra manter consistência com a outra pattern? fix
01:04:375 (192) - D ok

[Oni]
00:00:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa xd
00:38:625 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - acho que segue bem melhor usar k dk dk ddd K aqui Pessoalmente eu acho que isso segue muito bem o som do vocal e do instrumental
n sei moddar oni mto bem mas né, tentei AUEHAUEHAE

espero n ter sido rude pq de vez em quando exagero AUEHAUEHASIUHEASIUERHBAS
sei que é seu primeiro mapa de taiko, então tentei achar a maior quantidade possível coisas nele. boa sorte! (se quiser a gd pode dar hl no discord)

Protonori wrote:

From my modding queue.
Remember that these are only suggestions. Feel free to ignore them.

You'll notice that I'm focusing mostly on note density in the higher diffs.

[Futsuu]
00:21:375 (14) - Change to k, since the next pattern starts with kdk? i think my way follows the song better
00:21:625 (15) - Change to d. You also did this at 00:29:625 (37). ok
00:29:375 (36) - Change to k. Same reasoning as 00:21:375. same
00:46:625 (82) - Use d instead? i like the way this sounds, so no
00:32:375 (46) - You normally map this pitch with a d [ex: 00:16:375- 00:24:375- and 00:40:375]. I don't hear anything in the music to justify the change, though. fixed
00:41:125 (69) - Move to 00:41:625? It's consistent with 00:33:625. If you change it to k, at least. fixed
00:45:125 - Add a note here to be consistent with 00:37:125. i'm following just the vocals here
00:49:125 (90) - Change to k? Mirrors the pattern at 00:50:375 (93,94,95,96), which is good imo. ok
00:55:375 (106) - Change to k? It mirrors the pattern at 00:54:875 (104,105,106). ok
00:55:875 (107) - Finisher? ok
00:57:125 (110) - Change to k? Same reasoning as 00:49:125. ok
01:03:375 (126) - Change to k? Same reasoning as 00:55:375. ok

[Muzukashii]
I think there should be more 1/2 breaks in this diff. Muzu players are generally still learning how to deal with 1/4 patterns.
00:19:625 (13,14) - Switch these around? i'll keep this because of the strong sound here 00:19:875 (14) -
00:20:125 (15) - Delete for a break? ok
00:28:125 (44) - ^
00:30:375 - I'm not entirely sure why you switched to triples here. I'd recommend doubles like you used at 00:22:375. fixed
00:32:125 (61) - Delete for a break. ok
00:32:125 (61) - Delete? Note density could cause problems for newer players. ok
00:33:500 (68) - Delete? This triple isn't really necessary imo. ok
00:36:375 to kiai - A new set of patterns? Variety is good, of course, but I'd suggest using the patterns from before. This song isn't very long.
00:53:500 (148) - Delete? Same reasoning as 00:33:500. ok
00:56:125 (158) - Delete for a break. ok
01:01:500 (181) - ^


[Oni]
00:18:625 (11,12,13) - kdk to mirror the following pattern? ok
00:20:125 (20) - Delete? The bpm is low, but I think you should be consistent with the breaks. i think not
00:26:625 (48,49,50) - kdk? Same reasoning as 00:18:625. ok
00:28:125 (57) - Delete? Same reasoning as 00:20:125.
00:34:625 - The break here is a bit strange, especially since there's no similar break in the next section [00:34:875 to 00:39:375]. Maybe move the break to a different spot? fixed
00:39:250 (115) - This pattern is better suited for the Oni, in my opinion. Consider deleting this note. sorry, no
00:42:625 (130,131,132) - There is no difference in the song, but you used a break at 00:34:625. I'd recommend changing something.
00:50:125 (166) - Consider deleting this note. The bpm is low, but the note density is much higher than the muzu.
00:52:125 (178,179) - Consider deleting these notes. Same reason as above. i think not
00:56:125 (199) - ^
00:58:125 (211) - ^
01:00:125 (223) - ^
01:02:125 (233) - ^

This modding might've been a bit extreme
Good luck with ranking it, though!

rew0825 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue!

Oni

1. 00:22:375 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - How about change to this. Look follow a vocal better. ok
2. 00:23:875 (37) - Add finish for consistency in Muzukashii added
3. 00:30:375 (67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - Same as above ^. ok
4. 00:37:125 (105) - Change to k? 00:35:625 to 00:38:375 - you use a note same all of this part so I want it different a bit. ok
5. 00:38:625 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - How about change to dkddkkd? look it follow a melody better. ok
6. 00:56:125 (200) - Delete this note? look it hard a bit because you use a finish on 00:55:875 (199) - deleted

Muzukashii

1. 00:31:250 (54) - Move to 00:31:000 ? The melody look stead more than ok
2. 00:39:250 (84) - Move to 00:39:000 ? The melody look stead more than ok

Futsuu

1. 00:25:375 (25) - Change to d? Look a melody is similar 00:25:625 (26) - ok
2. 00:37:125 (58) - Change to k? Look a melody is similar 00:36:375 (56,59) - ok
3. 00:48:375 (88,89,90) - I not sure in Futsuu can use this melody. I suggest move 00:48:750 (89) - to 00:48:875 I'll ask someone~
4. 00:50:375 (93,94,95) - Same as above ^. I suggest move 00:50:750 (94) - to 00:50:875
5. 00:56:375 (108,109,110) - Same as above ^. I suggest move 00:56:750 (109) - to 00:56:875
6. 00:58:375 (113,114,115) - Same as above ^. I suggest move 00:58:750 (114) - to 00:58:875

This is all from me. Good luck

Dingdom wrote:

da ideia

2017-10-22 17:05 Dingdom: eae
2017-10-22 17:05 Marianna: oie
2017-10-22 17:06 Dingdom: to aqui
2017-10-22 17:07 Dingdom: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1439074 Brave Girls - Outro (Rollin') [Oni]]
2017-10-22 17:07 Dingdom: bora coisar
2017-10-22 17:08 Marianna: ai mds, um segundinho, deixa só eu upar mayday
2017-10-22 17:09 Marianna: prontinho
2017-10-22 17:11 Dingdom: 00:23:000 (33) - 
2017-10-22 17:11 Dingdom: muda pra k e move pra 00:22:875 - 
2017-10-22 17:12 Dingdom: essa beat ai da clap é mt importante pro ritimo da musica
2017-10-22 17:12 Marianna: Aí tô seguindo o vocal e essa pausa entre os dois deu um ênfase muito bom
2017-10-22 17:13 Dingdom: pera ai
2017-10-22 17:13 Dingdom: volume do fone tava baixo
2017-10-22 17:15 Dingdom: 00:28:125 (57) - k?
2017-10-22 17:15 Dingdom: 00:20:125 (20) - é o mesmo beat daqui
2017-10-22 17:16 Marianna: fixed
2017-10-22 17:18 Dingdom: 00:56:375 (200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207) -  faz algo diferente aqui
2017-10-22 17:19 Dingdom: 00:58:375 (212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219) - pq é parecido com esse
2017-10-22 17:19 Marianna: eu prefiro manter pq já tava algo diferente e em outro mod foi pedido pra ser igual por causa da consistência
2017-10-22 17:22 Dingdom: eu pensei em tipo 00:56:500 (201,205) - ctrl + g e isso 00:58:375 (212,213,214,215) - ser o ddkd
2017-10-22 17:22 Dingdom: mas se vc nn quiser :c
2017-10-22 17:24 Marianna: ficou boa a sua sugestão então vou manter
2017-10-22 17:24 Dingdom: <3
2017-10-22 17:25 Dingdom: 00:26:625 (48) - eu esqueci de falar que isso aqui tbm é pra ser um d pq é o mesmo som do outro la
2017-10-22 17:26 Marianna: fixed
2017-10-22 17:28 Dingdom: oq vc ta seguindo entre 00:32:536 - e 00:44:375 - ?
2017-10-22 17:29 Marianna: 00:32:625 - aqui o instrumental 00:44:375 - aqui o vocal
2017-10-22 17:30 Dingdom: é pq vc usou mt dkd em partes diferentes isso q nn entendi
2017-10-22 17:30 Marianna: ah
2017-10-22 17:30 Dingdom: 00:32:625 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) -  tipo aqui
2017-10-22 17:31 Marianna: 00:32:750 - 00:33:500 -  aqui tem o som agudo do instrumental
2017-10-22 17:32 Marianna: 00:34:125 (88,89) - aqui eu troquei o d pelo k
2017-10-22 17:36 Dingdom: dps eu volto pro oni pode ser?
2017-10-22 17:36 Marianna: okay
2017-10-22 17:36 Dingdom: muzukashii agora
2017-10-22 17:39 Dingdom: 00:37:125 (77) - k? nn vejo motivo pra isso 00:36:375 (73,77,78) - ser diferente do oni
2017-10-22 17:39 Marianna: ok
2017-10-22 17:40 Marianna: fixed
2017-10-22 17:43 Dingdom: 00:46:375 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125) - pra mim isso ficou mt longo e dificil
2017-10-22 17:44 Marianna: 00:48:000 (116,117) - vou remover isso, aí fica um break melhor
2017-10-22 17:44 Dingdom: ss
2017-10-22 17:44 Dingdom: ficou bom
2017-10-22 17:48 Dingdom: 00:19:125 (10,11,12) - kkk só pra dar uma diferenciada? igual vc fez aqui 00:27:125 (38,39,40) -  ?
2017-10-22 17:50 Marianna: okay
2017-10-22 17:50 Dingdom: acho q no muzukashii é só isso msm
2017-10-22 17:52 Dingdom: nn da pra moddar o o futsuu
2017-10-22 17:52 Dingdom: oq tem pra falar é que vc vai precisar nerfar
2017-10-22 17:53 Marianna: nerfar?
2017-10-22 17:53 Marianna: nerfar o que?
2017-10-22 17:53 Dingdom: pera
2017-10-22 17:54 Dingdom: eu esqueci o nome
2017-10-22 17:54 Dingdom: tipo break 1/1 só que x2, nn tem isso no mapa
2017-10-22 17:55 Marianna: tipo disso 00:31:375 - pra isso 00:32:375 - ?
2017-10-22 17:55 Dingdom: é
2017-10-22 17:56 Dingdom: é tipo 1/1 no oni, precisa ter em algum momento
2017-10-22 17:58 Dingdom: 00:43:875 (76) - deleta isso por exemplo, pra ter uma diferença clara do instrumental pro vocal
2017-10-22 17:59 Marianna: ok, eu apaguei umas notas aqui 00:31:875 - 00:47:625 - 00:55:375 -
2017-10-22 17:59 Marianna: e essa aí que você apontou
2017-10-22 18:01 Dingdom: parece bom
2017-10-22 18:04 Dingdom: tbm evita colocar 5 notas em 1/2 
2017-10-22 18:05 Dingdom: se for fazer isso bota um 1/1 antes tipo d d ddddd
2017-10-22 18:05 Dingdom: algo tipo ddd ddddd é considerado na maioria das vezes como dificil de fazer no futsuu
2017-10-22 18:07 Marianna: tentei mudar algumas
2017-10-22 18:07 Dingdom: tendeu né?
2017-10-22 18:07 Marianna: ss
2017-10-22 18:07 Dingdom: vm pro kantan agora
2017-10-22 18:07 Dingdom: ah nn pera
2017-10-22 18:07 Dingdom: é do idealism xd
2017-10-22 18:08 Marianna: sim, se tiver algo pra falar do kantan põe no forum pls
2017-10-22 18:08 Dingdom: oka
2017-10-22 18:09 Dingdom: voltando pro oni
2017-10-22 18:11 Dingdom: afis nn fica afk ;-;
2017-10-22 18:12 Dingdom: 00:34:125 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99) - evita fazer sequencias longas de triplets
2017-10-22 18:13 Dingdom: isso em oni com 3* 120 bpm é considerado errado
2017-10-22 18:13 Marianna: deixei algumas pausas aí
2017-10-22 18:14 Dingdom: pq a ideia que um oni assim passa é que ele é pra quem ta começando a jogar oni
2017-10-22 18:15 Dingdom: 00:50:375 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185) -  aqui tbm, tenta dar um jeito
2017-10-22 18:16 Marianna: pronto
2017-10-22 18:16 Dingdom: acho que era só isso msm

PeterEU wrote:

Futsuu

00:32:375 (42) - add K becase there is finish in background Added a k
00:43:875 - maybe you should add object here I need a break for recovery here
00:47:625 - optional but you could add slider here for drums in background it would fit with finish ^

PeterEU wrote:

Kantan

01:03:875 (26) - would turn into K because it fits vocal done
00:14:375 (15) - turn that into spinner to make it consistent with other diffs also it fits music done
00:16:375 (16) - add finish here like in other diffs because there is finish in background of music done

Igor Sprite wrote:

eu to fazendo tanto irc que esqueci como faz na thread

Idealism's kantan

• ⬛ 00:51:375 - tira o finish pq nas outras diffs nn tem, mas pra manter a enfase vc poderia mudar pra d 00:50:875 - e dar ctrl + g no 00:48:875 (2,3) - Eu gostei de como ele utilizou o vocal aqui, não quero tirar
  ⬛ 00:59:375 - ^
  ⬛ 00:30:875 - muda pra d e move pra 00:31:375 - dps disso vc pega o 00:29:375 - muda pra k e move pra 00:28:875 - pra ficar igual ao oq vc fez aqui 00:21:875 - done

acho q é só isso msm pq o mapa ta um monte de d k d k ta legal

Cocoaaa wrote:

yo
really big late ;w; sorry,I'm really lazy
NM from my modding quest

Oni

00:20:625 change to d? it's not high pitched and same as 00:16:625 fixed
good diffi

Muzukashii

00:31:375 change to k.it same as 00:13:375 For me this one is ok

I looked all diffi
may you can call bn to try it and chack
may it's rankeble nowlol
good luck~~