M4M from your queue.
00:42:867 (1) - maybe emphasize this a little bit more by putting it on the slider end of 00:42:191 (2) - and move this a little bit more up to the left 00:43:137 (2) - something like this -
https://stratos.s-ul.eu/pFeiTXFW-
01:00:434 (2) - move this circle where the 01:00:569 (3) - is and then put the 01:00:569 (3) - on this slider head 00:59:488 (2) - something like this for example
https://stratos.s-ul.eu/6NyO44ez-
02:10:164 (5) - maybe emphasize this a little more by overlapping it with this 02:08:002 (3) - and then move the reverse slider a little bit more down so you emphasize both sounds a little more,
and move 02:09:488 (2) - to the reverse slider tail? something like this for example
https://stratos.s-ul.eu/TrNCTtFZ-
03:01:786 (1) - overlap with the slider end of 02:59:218 (2) - looks better
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03:28:677 (3) - move this a bit more to the left so it looks better like this for example
https://stratos.s-ul.eu/ZIAZr0mW-
03:41:786 (1) - overlap this with the slider end of 03:40:434 (3) - so it fits the last pattern more, and you're going for the stacking sliders in this part so it makes more sense to me. like this for example
https://stratos.s-ul.eu/KvvMAete-
03:55:029 (1,2) - change this a little bit up so it emphasizes the sound on 03:55:299 (1) - a little more, something like this for example 03:55:299 (1) - something like this for example
https://stratos.s-ul.eu/WwONDcx1-
03:55:840 (1) - stack this with 03:55:029 (1) - you can just move the pattern and then stack it again with 03:56:380 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this part and then 03:58:812 (2,4) - this.
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05:58:676 (3) - stack this with the slider tail of 05:56:649 (1) - so it emhpasizes it a little bit more and looks better in the blanket.
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07:35:969 (2,1,2) - why not make this into a visually better triangle like this for example
https://stratos.s-ul.eu/LasPFzSg looks better
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07:53:537 (6) - stack with slider end on 07:54:753 (2) -
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08:17:185 (3) - rotate by ten degrees and the stack the slider head on 08:17:185 (3) - , and move these a little down so it doesn't have a ugly overlap with 08:17:185 (3) - like this for example
https://stratos.s-ul.eu/4fsvYAts-
08:43:807 (1,2) - fix stack ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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08:59:618 (1,2) - stack with 08:57:455 (1,2) -
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09:01:239 (2) - maybe make the slider stack better with 09:00:158 (5,6) - like this for example
https://stratos.s-ul.eu/4tUbLlYT looks better
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Good map, Honestly not many things I could point out but hopefully I was helpful in any way. If I would describe this map in one word it would be triangle heaven.