Hi! Small mod just because.
02:04:488 (4,5) - this flow makes the fact that these two aren't flipped stand out and it doesn't sound like that was the idea
02:50:164 (3,1,2) - this transition is kinda harsh compared to the other ones around here
03:25:299 (3) - I'd NC here since 03:25:029 (1,2) - sounds like it should be part of the 1-2
04:43:541 (1) - and 04:45:703 (2) - and 04:50:028 (2) - and some more times in this section are kind of in that grey zone of overlapping/not overlapping where it looks ugly.
06:49:081 (2) - this section too
05:22:460 (2,1) - unevenness here also looks a little ugly
09:02:861 (1,2,3,4,5) - mapping-wise it these make perfect sense but I can only imagine sightreading this and dying to streams that are way more spaced than I was prepared for
I really like how you use flow in a lot of sections to really support the song!
That said, I do feel like the overall composition of the jumps could do with some work. In this case you have a lot of clear shapes for the jumps, but it sometimes feels like they were put together a bit messily without as much consideration for how the shapes themselves fit together. It might just be me looking for more cleanliness where it isn't needed, but I think the overall aesthetic could improve a lot with a bit of focus on the composition.
02:04:488 (4,5) - this flow makes the fact that these two aren't flipped stand out and it doesn't sound like that was the idea
02:50:164 (3,1,2) - this transition is kinda harsh compared to the other ones around here
03:25:299 (3) - I'd NC here since 03:25:029 (1,2) - sounds like it should be part of the 1-2
04:43:541 (1) - and 04:45:703 (2) - and 04:50:028 (2) - and some more times in this section are kind of in that grey zone of overlapping/not overlapping where it looks ugly.
06:49:081 (2) - this section too
05:22:460 (2,1) - unevenness here also looks a little ugly
09:02:861 (1,2,3,4,5) - mapping-wise it these make perfect sense but I can only imagine sightreading this and dying to streams that are way more spaced than I was prepared for
I really like how you use flow in a lot of sections to really support the song!
That said, I do feel like the overall composition of the jumps could do with some work. In this case you have a lot of clear shapes for the jumps, but it sometimes feels like they were put together a bit messily without as much consideration for how the shapes themselves fit together. It might just be me looking for more cleanliness where it isn't needed, but I think the overall aesthetic could improve a lot with a bit of focus on the composition.