Mir wrote:
hi
overall the rhythm is kinda bland comparing to what the song offers for top and the extra. most of the map utilizes exclusively 1/2 circles and sliders in parts that emphasize 1/1. not only that but the hexgrid structure of the entire map (topdiff) makes it really monotonous to play since there's no variation in patterning. it's all the same stuff so yea
top:
- 00:05:455 (1,2) - 00:08:022 (1,2) - could be 1/2 due to lack of the snare on 00:06:899 - and doing that consistently would make for some nicer variation in rhythmyou mean sliders? I want to just put them into circles.
- 00:08:985 (6,7,1,2,3) - spacing here is suddenly super low despite having way more spacing for the same sounds 00:06:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's just because circles are gathering, DS is same with other sounds,
- 00:56:471 (6,1) - 1 gets barely any emphasis since it's symmetrical to 6 even though it is the start of a new downbeat. the problem with this now is due to the hexgrid structure i have no idea where you would move this in order to me 00:56:471 (6,1) - feels lower intense than 00:56:150 (5,6) - for listening music for me, I wanted to reduce DS.
- 01:08:664 (3,4,5,6) - the hai-hai-hai doesn't get emphasized here through the map despite your hitsounds even following it which seems really weird.. As I didn't follow them at all, you can see I don't want to follow that sounds.
- 01:11:391 (4,5,6,7) - nice place to put some 1/1 gaps maybeI followed just drum sounds, I don't want to follow 'hai' vocals.
Lasse wrote:
some additional things:
(top diff)
what happened to your finishes ?
lack of them when there are actually strong cymbals in the song is really weird and makes hs feel very bland overall
00:05:455 (1) - this does it right for example, but then spots like 00:15:723 (1) - or the entire 00:15:723 (1) - to 00:41:311 - part are missing them
also
movement wise 00:43:316 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - also feels really weird. mainly because 00:42:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - uses way more changes between clockwise and counterclockwise movement, but then 00:43:156 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again just plays like a spinner. putting breaks in rotation on 00:41:391 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - for example would make it feel much nicer and way less "random" movement wise.Just made with 00:42:674 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - into clockwise, then can be better than now
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normal could be higher ar, like 5.5 or even 6, you use relatively "high" sv together with 187 and rather dense rhythms, 4.7 just feels too low
similarly od on hard seems quite low too, around 5.5-6 would make more sense so people have to follow the song a bit more
i like how this diff has better playfield usage than your top diff...
Turquoise- wrote:
00:28:557 (1,2) - not snapped properly lol
cool map thoDoesn't matter at all. Timeline is snapped.
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thanks