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Ni-Sokkususu - Blade Dance

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Asuka_-
にーそっくすすと聞いて m4m

General
move mapset to pending state lol
video hasnt been applied to Easy, Irohas's Insane

Easy
video pls
00:17:969 (4,1) - not good overlapping. avoid better.
00:29:519 (2,3) - you haven't been able to blacket here xd

Normal
01:12:193 (6,1) - swap nc

Hard
00:19:412 (4) - whistle ww
00:45:241 (1,4) - parallel?
00:56:953 (2) - remove this? because here doesnt have sound, so you dont need map here in hard diff imo.
(in add, here are mapped by slidertail, not clickable in insane diff, extra diff)
00:59:519 (2) - ^

Irohas
video pls
00:04:813 (1) - too slow, player may get confuse first play, maybe change to 0.75?

Battle
od is overdone imo.
now is same as top diff. maybe change to 8.2 or 8.5?
00:19:252 (1,2) - you are killing the flow too much here, and I felt bit >< when play.
maybe move 00:19:412 (2) - to bit right (e.g. 349:23), 00:19:733 (3) - to bit left (281;97) ??
00:57:755 (5,1) - ^  too close
maybe move 00:57:755 (5) - to up (208:35?) ?

Blade Dance
00:46:525 (1) - Certainly the distance is bigger than 00:45:883 (3,4) - , but I feel that the flow stopped visually, so i think you havent been able to emphasize start of kiai.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/786ca80aef6c04f2f9e ... 88a19e.png
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That's all!! good luck^^
Djulus
fixed all
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Irohas
@asuka_- 0.75 and 0.7 is not a big difference lol so i keep
@neoskylove dont forget to add mugiwarasekai to tags pls
did hitsound stuffs
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263,228,55830,2,0,P|277:278|291:324,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,358,56150,2,0,L|232:377,1,80,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,312,56471,1,8,0:1:0:0:
35,330,56792,5,6,0:0:0:0:
153,272,56953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,242,57113,2,0,P|-11:206|-2:163,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,74,57434,2,0,P|115:115|103:159,1,80
60,19,57755,1,8,0:1:0:0:
199,136,57915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,19,58076,6,0,P|307:58|295:104,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,0,58396,1,8,0:1:0:0:
385,102,58557,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,152,58717,1,8,0:1:0:0:
210,165,59038,2,0,P|199:126|186:78,1,80,8|2,0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
53,204,59359,6,0,P|84:194|138:207,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,285,59680,2,0,P|231:295|178:285,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,199,60001,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,199,60161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
385,330,60321,1,8,0:1:0:0:
493,196,60482,6,0,P|481:238|470:272,1,80,2|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,60803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
282,284,60963,1,8,0:1:0:0:
282,284,61124,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,187,61284,6,0,B|160:163|160:163|229:205,1,132.00000402832,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,213,61605,6,0,P|222:152|205:71,1,132.00000402832,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,66,61926,6,0,P|248:56|302:69,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,174,62247,2,0,P|385:182|347:172,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,118,62567,5,8,0:0:0:0:
448,268,62728,1,2,0:0:0:0:
319,144,62888,2,0,P|331:186|342:220,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,333,63209,5,8,0:0:0:0:
288,315,63289,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,308,63369,1,2,0:0:0:0:
226,315,63449,1,2,0:0:0:0:
199,333,63530,5,2,3:2:0:0:
168,340,63610,1,2,0:0:0:0:
137,334,63690,1,2,0:0:0:0:
111,315,63770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
97,285,63851,6,0,P|108:252|115:231,3,40,8|2|2|2,0:3|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,207,64172,2,0,P|187:174|180:153,3,40,2|2|2|2,0:3|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,112,64493,6,0,B|209:108|184:170|286:162,1,167.999994873047,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,159,65134,5,8,0:0:0:0:
253,81,65295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
365,1,65455,5,8,0:0:0:0:
348,85,65616,1,6,0:0:0:0:
465,261,66418,6,0,B|488:221|488:221|469:175,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,85,66739,2,0,B|330:120|330:120|349:166,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,94,67059,6,0,P|482:80|427:88,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,159,67380,2,0,P|315:167|362:178,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,108,67701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,231,67862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,172,68022,2,0,P|61:214|73:257,1,80,8|2,0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
143,377,68343,6,0,P|152:338|162:295,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
50,384,68664,1,8,0:1:0:0:
158,273,68824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,377,68985,2,0,P|285:382|327:366,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,236,69305,2,0,P|404:231|361:246,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
494,383,69626,6,0,P|503:344|513:301,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
418,158,69947,2,0,P|427:200|436:235,1,80,8|2,0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
475,90,70268,1,2,0:0:0:0:
475,90,70428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,208,70589,1,8,0:1:0:0:
201,76,70749,6,0,P|208:115|219:169,1,80,2|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,15,71070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,105,71231,1,8,3:1:0:0:
109,105,71391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,151,71551,5,8,0:1:0:0:
98,120,71712,1,2,0:0:0:0:
294,141,71872,1,8,0:1:0:0:
294,141,72193,6,0,P|305:165|300:219,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,258,72514,2,0,L|236:277,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,185,72835,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,275,72995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,357,73156,2,0,B|43:322|43:322|54:278,1,80,8|2,0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
177,135,73477,6,0,P|191:173|185:214,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,105,73797,1,8,0:1:0:0:
219,45,73958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,105,74118,2,0,P|61:65|75:28,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,117,74439,2,0,L|169:136,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,191,74760,6,0,L|249:210,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,38,75081,2,0,L|385:137,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,269,75402,1,2,0:0:0:0:
475,269,75562,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,120,75723,1,8,0:1:0:0:
354,204,75883,6,0,P|397:193|444:181,1,80,2|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,163,76204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,289,76364,5,2,3:2:0:0:
359,289,76525,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,110,76685,5,8,0:1:0:0:
252,257,76846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
167,109,77006,1,8,0:1:0:0:
167,109,77327,6,0,P|156:163|146:212,1,80,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,310,77648,2,0,B|37:274|37:274|52:231,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,338,77969,1,4,3:1:0:0:
143,270,78129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,338,78289,2,0,P|218:347|179:357,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,252,78610,5,4,3:1:0:0:
375,362,78771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,247,78931,2,0,P|467:300|453:348,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,146,79252,2,0,P|383:199|397:247,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,84,79573,1,2,0:0:0:0:
390,223,79733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
286,94,79894,6,0,P|253:88|211:103,1,80,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,222,80215,2,0,P|136:228|179:213,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
15,164,80535,1,4,3:1:0:0:
69,317,80696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,182,80856,2,0,P|178:235|164:283,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,334,81177,5,4,3:1:0:0:
167,275,81338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,227,81498,5,8,0:1:0:0:
224,383,81658,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,288,81819,6,0,P|417:341|431:389,1,80,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,227,82140,2,0,P|319:176|340:99,1,120,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,85,82461,6,0,P|283:74|210:122,2,128,2|2|0,0:0|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,159,83263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,159,83423,2,0,P|444:150|484:141,1,64,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,251,83744,2,0,P|414:242|454:233,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,127,84065,6,0,L|291:206,1,64,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,308,84386,2,0,L|230:241,1,64,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,128,84707,2,0,L|165:194,1,64,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,344,85027,6,0,L|85:213,2,128,2|2|0,0:0|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,374,85830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,374,85990,2,0,P|242:367|289:357,1,64,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,255,86311,5,6,0:0:0:0:
287,360,86471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
245,183,86631,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,271,86792,5,2,0:0:0:0:
159,214,86953,1,8,0:1:0:0:
308,105,87113,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,39,87273,6,0,L|282:202,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Affirmation

Asuka_- wrote:

にーそっくすすと聞いて m4mにーそっくす

Normal
01:12:193 (6,1) - swap nc

Hard
00:19:412 (4) - whistle wwWell, I think it doesn't matter.
00:45:241 (1,4) - parallel?? already parallel, and 00:45:241 (1) - wanted to make other pattern, like symmetry.
00:56:953 (2) - remove this? because here doesnt have sound, so you dont need map here in hard diff imo.Wukk think about it
(in add, here are mapped by slidertail, not clickable in insane diff, extra diff)
00:59:519 (2) - ^

Blade Dance
00:46:525 (1) - Certainly the distance is bigger than 00:45:883 (3,4) - , but I feel that the flow stopped visually, so i think you havent been able to emphasize start of kiai.for emphasis NC downbeat.
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/786ca80aef6c04f2f9e ... 88a19e.png

That's all!! good luck^^
Thanks for mod :D
-Keitaro
As requested :3

format is [x, y]

[Dance]
00:11:391 (6) - I feel like this is a lil bit different from the other, probaly move it to [421, 318] for better movement and emphasize
00:47:327 (7,8) - move (8) a bit more far so it'll looks consistent with 00:48:610 (8,9) - 00:49:894 (8,9) - , etc
01:02:888 (1,2) - since you're slowly moving faster from 01:01:926 (1) - so make the jump more faster, somewhere like 3,25x would be better imo
01:14:279 (6) - I think its better to stack with 01:13:156 (6) - , it's more fit with the vocal, I think
01:16:846 (6) - [312, 296] for better movement?

[Battle]
00:10:268 (5,2) - isn't this have a chance of misread?
00:14:600 (2,1) - oops, overlap.
00:18:931 (4,5) - this is different from the others, the others use sliders to ephasize a voice, why this one is 2 circles?
00:27:434 (2) - [336, 264] for better visual with 00:27:594 (3,4) - ?
00:29:359 (4,2) - overlap here :3
00:43:316 (5,2) - I dunno if you're trying to overlap here or not, but I would suggest moving (2) to [220, 24]
01:27:113 (6) - possible triangle with 01:26:471 (2,4) -, it's up to you tho

[Irohas]
00:51:979 (2,3,4) - this stack doesn't look polished imo

[Hard]
00:03:851 (5,1) - not really sure if this is a good idea tbh, (1) is a bit too curved imo

[Djulus]
00:17:006 (3) - why not copy this note from 00:15:723 (1) - ? it looks way much better imo
(why am I mentioning this) 00:40:749 (3,4) - fix up blanket


I can't really mod this lol, no kds if not helpful

good luck~
Djulus
1. Thats slider destroys my flow :(
2.its ok
Arf
Man I'm extremely late sorry, haven't modded or responded to mods or done anything osu!mapping related for some days.
M4M from your queue

Djulus' Easy
00:04:172 (3,4) - In every pattern similar to this, meaning these: 00:06:739 (3,4) - 00:09:305 (4,5) - 00:11:872 (3,4) - 00:14:439 (3,4) - wouldn't it sound better rhythmically if the note came before the repeat slider? What I mean to say is that I think this rhythm works better than the current one because the repeat slider is mapped directly to the "ni hai hai" or "hai hai hai" vocal, which I think is better sounding to players of Easy difficulties.

00:17:006 (3) - Small nitpick, probably irrelevant, but this being straight when 00:15:723 (1,1,3) - all of these are slightly curved is a little out of place. Also I think this pattern could look better if 00:17:006 (3) - was a flipped copy/pasta of 00:15:723 (1) - , gives a symmetrical pattern which is visually maybe better than the current one. Up to you

(minor) 00:20:856 (1,2) - Consider blanketing these two sliders, the current placement looks like a failed blanket, even if that's not what you were going for with the pattern. I think it would also not disturb the flow very much to just move "2" to the right a bit

00:46:525 (1) - Hmm I'm not sure about this at all. For me personally, it sounds a very strange rhythmic choice, the repeat is not on any sort of strong note at all, consider two 1/1 sliders here instead, then your 1/2 gap to the next pattern is intact. I recognize that this ruins your pattern placement and is a hassle but the current rhythm sounds odd to me. Up to you since this is very opinionated. Same at 00:51:658 (1) -

01:08:343 (3,4) - Same as the first point, I think it sounds better if the rhythm is note->repeat slider not the other way around. Same at 01:13:477 (3,4) - However, funnily enough, 01:10:910 (3,4) - sounds better to me as it is currently, probably because of the leading vocals.
Box of Extremely OCD things because Third Reich and also polishing on lowest diffs should be tip top
00:07:701 (4,1) - strange anti-blanket thing here, probably irrelevant
00:10:589 (1,2) - easy to miss, and I hate myself
00:31:124 (1,2) - Himmler would be sad
00:36:257 (1,2) - See how the top of the blanket is unevenly showing compared to the bottom part
00:40:749 (3,4) - It's cold, I need a blanket
00:47:648 (2,3) - something something blanket
00:51:338 (4,1) - something something blanket
00:54:065 (4,1) - so minor it doesn't even matter, but if I'm listing them all I might as well. Left-right uneven etc
01:01:605 (5,1) - whee

There's two or three more but I'm reconsidering my life choices right about now, I don't know why I made this.

Normal
Pretty safe difficulty, not much to say
00:08:664 (3) - Wouldn't this be nicer if Ctrl+H'd? Gives a nice circular flow from "2" instead of the strange counter flow currently present. Doing this does ruin the counter flow from 00:08:664 (3,4) - though, which was actually pretty nice.

01:23:744 (3,1) - Strange gap here, not sure why this isn't mapped.

Hard
00:14:760 (3,4,5) - I really liked how 00:04:493 (2,3,4) - had all three sliders as similar in a cohesive pattern making the emphasis special. Consider doing something similar here too

00:30:161 (5,6,7) - I get that you wanted to make a small jump here but the flow is very strange in my opinion, consider Ctrl+G the "6" and "7" or maybe make a slightly different pattern


00:56:953 (2) - Feels weird to me personally to play this as a stack when the beat is nowhere near as strong as the previous stacks at 00:43:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider deleting the second note and just stacking 1 on the next slider. Same at 00:59:359 (1,2) -

01:26:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - Are you sure you want to introduce something like this at the very end of the map considering nothing like this was really in the map before? It's a little evil to put something this difficult to read in a position like this. Consider changing up the pattern

Couldn't really find much, mapset looks good. Good Luck
Topic Starter
Affirmation

Arf wrote:

Normal
Pretty safe difficulty, not much to say
00:08:664 (3) - Wouldn't this be nicer if Ctrl+H'd? Gives a nice circular flow from "2" instead of the strange counter flow currently present. Doing this does ruin the counter flow from 00:08:664 (3,4) - though, which was actually pretty nice.well. I think this flowbreak pattern makes fun things for play,

01:23:744 (3,1) - Strange gap here, not sure why this isn't mapped.cause the lowest tension of this song, little bit downmapped.

Hard
00:14:760 (3,4,5) - I really liked how 00:04:493 (2,3,4) - had all three sliders as similar in a cohesive pattern making the emphasis special. Consider doing something similar here toobut 00:14:760 (3,4,5) - tension is higher than others, same as last part.

00:30:161 (5,6,7) - I get that you wanted to make a small jump here but the flow is very strange in my opinion, consider Ctrl+G the "6" and "7" or maybe make a slightly different patternsimilar Ds with 00:20:215 (1,2,3) -


00:56:953 (2) - Feels weird to me personally to play this as a stack when the beat is nowhere near as strong as the previous stacks at 00:43:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider deleting the second note and just stacking 1 on the next slider. Same at 00:59:359 (1,2) - deleted 2 since it doesn't have beat.

01:26:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - Are you sure you want to introduce something like this at the very end of the map considering nothing like this was really in the map before? It's a little evil to put something this difficult to read in a position like this. Consider changing up the pattern

Couldn't really find much, mapset looks good. Good Luck

Error- wrote:

[Dance]
00:11:391 (6) - I feel like this is a lil bit different from the other, probaly move it to [421, 318] for better movement and emphasizedoesn't need to be emphasized imo,
00:47:327 (7,8) - move (8) a bit more far so it'll looks consistent with 00:48:610 (8,9) - 00:49:894 (8,9) - , etcgood idea, but well, doesn't matter for playing imo./color]
01:02:888 (1,2) - since you're slowly moving faster from 01:01:926 (1) - so make the jump more faster, somewhere like 3,25x would be better imo
01:14:279 (6) - I think its better to stack with 01:13:156 (6) - , it's more fit with the vocal, I thinkwill consider it.
01:16:846 (6) - [312, 296] for better movement?ehh......... wanna make honeycomb pattern.

[Hard]
00:03:851 (5,1) - not really sure if this is a good idea tbh, (1) is a bit too curved imoJust getting flow, I think this current pattern looks good now
No reply=fixed. thanks for mod xD
Hishiro Chizuru
m4m

Djulus' Easy

00:11:872 (3) - would straighten to keep consistent with other repeating sliders
00:19:573 (3) - straight so 00:15:723 (1,3,1,3) - is systematic: slight curve, straight, slight curve
00:23:102 (4) - I don't recommend this since it's not repeated anywhere else and this is an easy diff
00:28:236 (4) - I personally wouldn't do any overlaps in an easy 00:38:503 (5) -
00:46:525 (1,2) - I really don't like this kind of pattern in an easy, but up to you to keep it. just throwing my opinion there. An easy should have no confusing rhythm at all
01:24:707 (4) - same as before


Normal

00:21:979 (4) - why sudden change to vocals.
00:52:781 (4) - I would ctrl-h for ease of flow
00:55:348 (5) - change this too for better flow if you do what i suggested above. If not, don't change this


Hard

00:14:600 (2) - something like this but cleaned up a bit might be nice https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9506203
00:30:482 (6,7,8) - being spaced the same as 00:20:215 (1,2,3) - would be better imo
00:58:717 (3) - angle a bit more counter clockwise to flow better with 00:59:359 (1) -
01:12:674 (2) - overlap looks messy
01:26:953 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9506223 better flow from 01:26:792 (4) - and leads into 01:27:273 (1) -


Irohas' Insane

00:04:813 (1) - Faster sv and use red anchors to emphasize guitar riff plsplspls
00:28:557 (1) - make single instead of slider
00:42:354 (3,4) - would make these into a jump because there are vocals. 00:42:033 (1,2) - here u were following drums but still stacked
00:46:525 (1) - custom hitsound seems inappropriate for the song


Battle's Extra

00:30:963 (7) - delete to be consistent with 00:23:102 (5) -
All good no issues


Dance

00:05:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:10:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use perfect stacks for single jumps, but the other same patterns don't. Why the reading challenge only on these jumps?
all good no issues

gl
Irohas

[ amb1d3x ] wrote:

m4m

Irohas' Insane

00:04:813 (1) - Faster sv and use red anchors to emphasize guitar riff plsplspls i think sv is fine
00:28:557 (1) - make single instead of slider consistency with 00:18:289 (1) -
00:42:354 (3,4) - would make these into a jump because there are vocals. 00:42:033 (1,2) - here u were following drums but still stacked not really necessary since big claps to emphasize is on 00:44:600 (1,2,1) - so not obligated to spam jumps xd
00:46:525 (1) - custom hitsound seems inappropriate for the song fine

gl
thx but no change for me
Ohwow
ayyy
[General]
Missing videos on Djulus' Easy and Irohas' Insane
00:36:257 - the volume is too low imo, 50% would be my suggestion and the next section could be 60%

[Normal]
01:24:707 - add circle here? I think that spot deserves to be clicked.

[Hard]
01:21:017 (5,1) - spacing might be a bit too far. Should at least reduce it to the same spacing as 01:18:450 (5,1) - The player stops moving at 01:20:856 (4,5) - cause they are stacked, but they are forced to moved really fast to 01:21:177 (1) - which could be tricky to play.

[Irohas' Insane]
00:57:915 (6,1) - I would ctrl+g this rhythm to follow vocal better. the downbeat on the white tick is barely noticeable.
01:27:113 (3,1) - increase spacing? it's the strongest sound there and changing it would mak it so the ending doesn't feel anticlimatic.

[Battle's Extra]
00:19:894 (4) - this could be 2 circles instead of match the vocals, also to build a little more intensity.
00:30:161 (3) - ^
00:45:241 (1,2,3) - hmm not really liking how when i play here, the movement slows down really drastically. It would feel better if 00:45:241 (1) - is split into 2 1/2 sliders imo.
01:04:332 (11) - maybe do something like this: https://i.gyazo.com/b8109e42fa8b539d0f7 ... 306372.jpg

that's all i could complain. good luck man :D
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[ amb1d3x ] wrote:

Normal

00:21:979 (4) - why sudden change to vocals.changed to vocals from 00:15:723 (1) - ...?
00:52:781 (4) - I would ctrl-h for ease of flow00:52:621 (3,4,5) - flow is okay in here...
00:55:348 (5) - change this too for better flow if you do what i suggested above. If not, don't change thisyea, for emphasis.


Hard

00:14:600 (2) - something like this but cleaned up a bit might be nice https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9506203 good suggeston, but don't want to change it.
00:30:482 (6,7,8) - being spaced the same as 00:20:215 (1,2,3) - would be better imosame emphasis... difference has only 00:20:375 (2,3) -
and 00:30:482 (6,7,8) - DS?

00:58:717 (3) - angle a bit more counter clockwise to flow better with 00:59:359 (1) -
01:12:674 (2) - overlap looks messyhalf stacking looks good for me.
01:26:953 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9506223 better flow from 01:26:792 (4) - and leads into 01:27:273 (1) - I didn't use this slider, it can make weird patterns.


Dance

00:05:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:10:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use perfect stacks for single jumps, but the other same patterns don't. Why the reading challenge only on these jumps?well, doesn't matter for reading imo.
all good no issues

gl

Ohwow wrote:

[Normal]
01:24:707 - add circle here? I think that spot deserves to be clicked.wanna make empty in here.

[Hard]
01:21:017 (5,1) - spacing might be a bit too far. Should at least reduce it to the same spacing as 01:18:450 (5,1) - The player stops moving at 01:20:856 (4,5) - cause they are stacked, but they are forced to moved really fast to 01:21:177 (1) - which could be tricky to play.ehh, DS has similar with others,
and need to be emphasized.
Thanks for mod all xD
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2017-11-11 17:05 IntellectualBoy: ㅋㅋ
2017-11-11 17:05 Neoskylove: 00:00:322 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
2017-11-11 17:05 Neoskylove: 처음부터 문제점
2017-11-11 17:05 IntellectualBoy: 5번
2017-11-11 17:05 Neoskylove: 실화?
2017-11-11 17:05 IntellectualBoy: 방향 반대로하셈
2017-11-11 17:05 Neoskylove: ??
2017-11-11 17:05 IntellectualBoy: 님
2017-11-11 17:05 IntellectualBoy: 1번부터 시작해서
2017-11-11 17:06 IntellectualBoy: 5번까지 무빙을 한번해보셈
2017-11-11 17:06 Neoskylove: ㄷㄷ
2017-11-11 17:06 IntellectualBoy: 흐름을 꼬아서 만든건 상관이없는데
2017-11-11 17:06 IntellectualBoy: 일반적으로 저모양대로 패턴을 만든다면
2017-11-11 17:06 IntellectualBoy: 방향이 반대로 가야 정상적인 흐름이 됨
2017-11-11 17:06 Neoskylove: 흐름 바꾸기 너무힘듦
2017-11-11 17:06 Neoskylove: 반시계로 돌리라는건 알겠는데
2017-11-11 17:06 IntellectualBoy: 저런걸 플레이어들이 굳이 신경쓰진 않는데
2017-11-11 17:07 IntellectualBoy: 뒷부분까지
2017-11-11 17:07 IntellectualBoy: 스택되어있으니까
2017-11-11 17:07 IntellectualBoy: 바꾸기 힘들다 이거아님?
2017-11-11 17:07 Neoskylove: ㅇㅇ 그런것도 있고...
2017-11-11 17:09 Neoskylove: 너무 삼각형밖에 안보이나여
2017-11-11 17:09 IntellectualBoy: 스택 건드리지 않고
2017-11-11 17:09 IntellectualBoy: 바꾼거임 이게
2017-11-11 17:10 IntellectualBoy: https://puu.sh/yjwh9/cb01382dd4.png
2017-11-11 17:10 Neoskylove: ㄷㄷ
2017-11-11 17:10 IntellectualBoy: 근데
2017-11-11 17:10 IntellectualBoy: 고칠지 안고칠지는
2017-11-11 17:10 IntellectualBoy: 님이 판단하면됨
2017-11-11 17:10 Neoskylove: `이거는 생각해볼게여
2017-11-11 17:11 Neoskylove: 이건 첫단추를 잘못끼운거라
2017-11-11 17:11 Neoskylove: 앞뒤를 전체적으로 좀 더 보고 고쳐야할듯
2017-11-11 17:11 IntellectualBoy: 00:04:845 (4,5,6)
2017-11-11 17:11 IntellectualBoy: 여기는
2017-11-11 17:11 IntellectualBoy: 노트 강조보다는
2017-11-11 17:11 IntellectualBoy: 3/4로 슬라이더 묶어서 배치했거나
2017-11-11 17:11 IntellectualBoy: 1/2 슬라 하나 + 삼각형으로 해도 되는데
2017-11-11 17:12 IntellectualBoy: 강조 한게 너무 밋밋함
2017-11-11 17:12 IntellectualBoy: 그리고 난이도 스프레드 고려해보면
2017-11-11 17:12 IntellectualBoy: 3/4로 점프식으로 돌리는 흐름으로 슬라 배치하던지
2017-11-11 17:12 IntellectualBoy: 아니면 조금 과감하게 배치를 해서 강조를 했어도 무방할텐데
2017-11-11 17:12 IntellectualBoy: 이런건 문제라기보단, 센스쪽 문제라서
2017-11-11 17:12 IntellectualBoy: 이것도 님이 판단하에 바꿀지 안바꿀지 결정하는게 좋음
2017-11-11 17:13 IntellectualBoy: 지금도 무난한데 이 무난하다는게 이 난이도 스프레드에 비해서 굉장히 지루하다는걸 알아야됨
2017-11-11 17:13 Neoskylove: 넹
2017-11-11 17:14 IntellectualBoy: 한번 고려해보는 것도 좋음
2017-11-11 17:14 Neoskylove: 이거 나중에 고칠게여
2017-11-11 17:14 IntellectualBoy: 00:09:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
2017-11-11 17:14 IntellectualBoy: 이렇게 배치하는것도 좋은데
2017-11-11 17:14 Neoskylove: 헐
2017-11-11 17:14 IntellectualBoy: 가사 부분에
2017-11-11 17:14 IntellectualBoy: 하이하이 라는게
2017-11-11 17:14 IntellectualBoy: 굉장히 독특하게 강조되는데
2017-11-11 17:15 IntellectualBoy: 이걸 굳이 노트로만 배치를해서
2017-11-11 17:15 IntellectualBoy: 밋밋하게 해야했나 싶기도하고
2017-11-11 17:15 IntellectualBoy: 슬라이더 속도를 늘려서
2017-11-11 17:15 Neoskylove: 아 그거 뉴콤넣으려다가
2017-11-11 17:15 Neoskylove: 망한
2017-11-11 17:15 IntellectualBoy: 강조를 했으면 재미요소를 좀 더 부각시킬수있었을까 했는데
2017-11-11 17:15 IntellectualBoy: ㅇㅇ
2017-11-11 17:16 IntellectualBoy: 00:18:931 (3,4)
2017-11-11 17:16 IntellectualBoy: 보컬이 굉장히 부각되는 부분에서
2017-11-11 17:16 IntellectualBoy: 그냥 일반적인 1/2 슬라쓴 이유는 머임?
2017-11-11 17:16 IntellectualBoy: 1/1 이던 3/4가 여기선 더 어울려보이는데
2017-11-11 17:16 Neoskylove: 여기가 부각된다고는 크게 모르겠...
2017-11-11 17:16 IntellectualBoy: 이 부각된다는 제 말의 뜻은
2017-11-11 17:17 IntellectualBoy: 지금 이 부분 첫시작을 시작해서
2017-11-11 17:17 IntellectualBoy: 가사에 따라서 박자를 찍었는데
2017-11-11 17:17 IntellectualBoy: 그냥 일반적인 1/2을 때려박아서 단순해지는게 아쉽다라는 말임
2017-11-11 17:17 Neoskylove: 아
2017-11-11 17:17 IntellectualBoy: 00:16:043
2017-11-11 17:17 IntellectualBoy: 00:16:043
2017-11-11 17:17 Neoskylove: 그냥 가사 있는부분에 클리커블 넣을라고
2017-11-11 17:17 Neoskylove: ? 왜 좌표가 안찍힘
2017-11-11 17:17 IntellectualBoy: 여ㅑ기부터 시작인데
2017-11-11 17:17 IntellectualBoy: 띄어써야 찍힘
2017-11-11 17:18 Neoskylove: 00:16:043 -
2017-11-11 17:18 Neoskylove: 아
2017-11-11 17:18 Neoskylove: 아조씨 죄송한데
2017-11-11 17:18 Neoskylove: 조금만 빨리 해주세영
2017-11-11 17:18 IntellectualBoy: ㅇㅇ
2017-11-11 17:18 IntellectualBoy: ㅋㅋ
2017-11-11 17:18 IntellectualBoy: 그냥
2017-11-11 17:18 Neoskylove: 저 엄마가 외출하재 갑자기 ㅠㅠ
2017-11-11 17:18 IntellectualBoy: 한꺼번에
2017-11-11 17:18 IntellectualBoy: 정리해서 말해줌
2017-11-11 17:18 IntellectualBoy: 지금
2017-11-11 17:19 IntellectualBoy: 전체적으로 맵 상태는 비슷비슷함
2017-11-11 17:19 IntellectualBoy: 첫시작점부터 시작해서
2017-11-11 17:19 IntellectualBoy: 끝까지 일관성이나 패턴부분에선 굉장히 비슷함
2017-11-11 17:19 IntellectualBoy: 근데 노트들 표현력이라던가
2017-11-11 17:19 IntellectualBoy: 재미를 추구할만한 요소가 하나도없음
2017-11-11 17:20 IntellectualBoy: 그냥 틀에만 박힌 지도라는 말임
2017-11-11 17:20 IntellectualBoy: 랭킹에 지장은 없지만
2017-11-11 17:20 IntellectualBoy: 그저 플레이어나 매퍼들에게는 더타목적으로만 찍어내는 맵머신 정도
2017-11-11 17:20 IntellectualBoy: 세세하게 문제점 찾으면 존나 많은데
2017-11-11 17:20 IntellectualBoy: 전체적으로는 저렇다는 얘기임
2017-11-11 17:21 IntellectualBoy: 결론 : 랭크 시키는데에 별문제가 없으나, 전혀 재미가없어보임
2017-11-11 17:21 IntellectualBoy: 까는말이라 좀 말하기 거북하지만
2017-11-11 17:21 IntellectualBoy: 난 매퍼를 까서 알아먹게 하는 스타일이라
2017-11-11 17:21 IntellectualBoy: 기분나쁘면 어쩔수 없는거고
2017-11-11 17:21 IntellectualBoy: 알아먹고 고칠맘있는거면 좋은거고
2017-11-11 17:21 IntellectualBoy: 모아니면 도임
2017-11-11 17:22 IntellectualBoy: 님이 내 판단을 듣고하고싶어하는 이상 난 이렇게 솔직하게 까겠음
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Ohwow wrote:

[Battle's Extra]
00:19:894 (4) - this could be 2 circles instead of match the vocals, also to build a little more intensity. i'd rather have the burst of intensity with the jumps
00:30:161 (3) - ^ ^
00:45:241 (1,2,3) - hmm not really liking how when i play here, the movement slows down really drastically. It would feel better if 00:45:241 (1) - is split into 2 1/2 sliders imo. i like the transition from intense to not cuz that's basically what the song does with a held vocal, no reason to be two 1/2s for filler rhythms when the vocals themselves are pausing :L
01:04:332 (11) - maybe do something like this: https://i.gyazo.com/b8109e42fa8b539d0f7 ... 306372.jpg i prefer what i did

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[ amb1d3x ] wrote:

Battle's Extra

00:30:963 (7) - delete to be consistent with 00:23:102 (5) -
All good no issues

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Error- wrote:

[Battle]
00:10:268 (5,2) - isn't this have a chance of misread? not rly 1's already appeared so it's p obvious
00:14:600 (2,1) - oops, overlap. wrong hl but if there's an overlap it's probably intentional or doesn't matter
00:18:931 (4,5) - this is different from the others, the others use sliders to ephasize a voice, why this one is 2 circles? variation, also the vocals in the next combo fit the pattern of a circle -> slider well so it helps set up for something different
00:27:434 (2) - [336, 264] for better visual with 00:27:594 (3,4) - ? it lines with the diagonal slider so no
00:29:359 (4,2) - overlap here :3 u dont see this in play so it doesnt matter lol
00:43:316 (5,2) - I dunno if you're trying to overlap here or not, but I would suggest moving (2) to [220, 24] ^
01:27:113 (6) - possible triangle with 01:26:471 (2,4) -, it's up to you tho im fine with this lol

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Asuka_- wrote:

Battle
now is same as top diff. maybe change to 8.2 or 8.5? sure 8.5
00:19:252 (1,2) - you are killing the flow too much here, and I felt bit >< when play. maybe move 00:19:412 (2) - to bit right (e.g. 349:23), 00:19:733 (3) - to bit left (281;97) ??
00:57:755 (5,1) - ^  too close i only moved it like a pixel up, it's like a vocal but not a super strong one so having "awk" flow to you might be different for others zz
maybe move 00:57:755 (5) - to up (208:35?) ?

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unreplied is fixed, other colors are easy to tell
Djulus
@NeoSL help me with hitsounds pls ;w;
all fixed i guess
osu file format v14

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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Blade Dance
TitleUnicode:精霊剣舞祭
Artist:Ni-Sokkususu
ArtistUnicode:にーそっくすす
Creator:Neoskylove
Version:Djulus' Easy
Source:精霊使いの剣舞
Tags:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance Ending TV Size Battle Irohas Djulus mugiwarasekai
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Kotori-Chan
mod as requested !! sry that it took so long ;w;


Easy

00:17:006 (3) - i would make this the same slider like 00:15:723 (1) - kind of looks better imo
00:37:541 (3) - better put this one around x279 y80 to keep the sharp flow from 00:36:257 (1,2) -

btw, why does this diff not have a video like the other ones !?

Normal

00:00:963 (3,4,5) - could slightly fix that blanket :> http://puu.sh/ymsw0/71cb0195ea.jpg
00:09:626 (5,1) - i kinda dont really like how this flows, try putting a curved slider instead ? http://puu.sh/ymsz8/f1d205bbc0.jpg

Iroha Insane

00:04:813 (1) - maybe try something like that http://puu.sh/ymsQE/0eedb1897c.jpg kinda flows better

where is video ~ i also like that hitsounds alot more <33


sry for small mod but i cant really find much :? map is pretty much perfect already in my eyes ~
good luck with it ! :3
Djulus
all fixed ty
@neosl pls add video on my diff too
Topic Starter
Affirmation

Kotori-Chan wrote:

Normal

00:00:963 (3,4,5) - could slightly fix that blanket :> http://puu.sh/ymsw0/71cb0195ea.jpg
00:09:626 (5,1) - i kinda dont really like how this flows, try putting a curved slider instead ? http://puu.sh/ymsz8/f1d205bbc0.jpgI want to make 00:09:626 (5,1) - as symmetrical slider
no reply=fixed.
Thanks for mod :)
MaridiuS
Mmhhhhhhh

[Dance]
I'll be modding this map first, the rest look fairly agreeable. However, this one seems to be more problematic. I didn't understand the rhythm on the core of the map 00:05:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - which repeats throughout the map. Yes, it is consistent, but I don't think it's the best rhythm choice to be consistent at all. It doesn't follow strictly drums, nor vocals nor the melody, it's just consistent, there are no differences between music layers. When mapping, clickable notes should represent the most important layer that you're following. The rest, less important notes, should most usually be made passive like sliderends so that a difference is made.
  1. 00:05:936 (4) - The biggest problem is probably this note being clickable. It doesn't have the high pitched melody, no drums, and no vocals (it has some deep guitar or piano tone, but it shouldn't be mapped like the rest since it's completely different) yet it is being mapped like the others. Making that note in a sliderend will make all others more emphasized.
  2. 00:06:418 (7) - This could be made into two circles to follow the melody which is going on 1/2 intervals. You can emphasize the new combo 00:06:739 (1) - if you want with spacing to make it more apparent. 00:07:701 (7) - This doesn't have the melodic sound on its sliderend, so it would make sense to make them different because in the song they're different. https://i.imgur.com/3K8NpIl.jpg so the rhythm in my ideal world should like this on these sound patterns.
  3. You can apply similar stuff to the intro section, with less dense rhythm, I'll let you decide on your own.
  4. If you want to follow vocals on parts where they are different like on this part 00:21:979 - ... You can make this into a slider 00:22:781 (5) - since the vocals are not on the red tick. I think you should consider that, since that sound pattern is different than the others that doesn't have vocals. 00:33:049 (5) - same applies here.
  5. 01:09:947 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - The vocals are going in 1/2 intervals here and are really intense, yet there is no change in spacing from this usual sound pattern. I strongly recommend scaling this a lot like https://i.imgur.com/FRMJzWF.jpg to better follow how intense the song is at this part, don't mind my aesthetics ;d.
  6. 01:14:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Same goes to this, the music is different, more intense, yet it has no change in the map.
  7. https://i.imgur.com/BI2mrBY.jpg sweet
Topic Starter
Affirmation

MaridiuS wrote:

Mmhhhhhhh

[Dance]
I'll be modding this map first, the rest look fairly agreeable. However, this one seems to be more problematic. I didn't understand the rhythm on the core of the map 00:05:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - which repeats throughout the map. Yes, it is consistent, but I don't think it's the best rhythm choice to be consistent at all. It doesn't follow strictly drums, nor vocals nor the melody, it's just consistent, there are no differences between music layers. When mapping, clickable notes should represent the most important layer that you're following. The rest, less important notes, should most usually be made passive like sliderends so that a difference is made. Hard to change it and I don't wanted to make various pattens.
  1. 00:05:936 (4) - The biggest problem is probably this note being clickable. It doesn't have the high pitched melody, no drums, and no vocals (it has some deep guitar or piano tone, but it shouldn't be mapped like the rest since it's completely different) yet it is being mapped like the others. Making that note in a sliderend will make all others more emphasized. I followed downbeat rhythm and trumpet? sound. so this can be okay imo. if you think it is really weird, then I'll consider to fix.
  2. 00:06:418 (7) - This could be made into two circles to follow the melody which is going on 1/2 intervals. You can emphasize the new combo 00:06:739 (1) - if you want with spacing to make it more apparent. 00:07:701 (7) - This doesn't have the melodic sound on its sliderend, so it would make sense to make them different because in the song they're different. https://i.imgur.com/3K8NpIl.jpg so the rhythm in my ideal world should like this on these sound patterns. Similar as before, I want to make simple rhythm. and 00:06:578 - sound is not so strong. I think.
  3. You can apply similar stuff to the intro section, with less dense rhythm, I'll let you decide on your own.xD
  4. If you want to follow vocals on parts where they are different like on this part 00:21:979 - ... You can make this into a slider 00:22:781 (5) - since the vocals are not on the red tick. I think you should consider that, since that sound pattern is different than the others that doesn't have vocals. 00:33:049 (5) - same applies here.
  5. 01:09:947 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - The vocals are going in 1/2 intervals here and are really intense, yet there is no change in spacing from this usual sound pattern. I strongly recommend scaling this a lot like https://i.imgur.com/FRMJzWF.jpg to better follow how intense the song is at this part, don't mind my aesthetics ;d.
  6. 01:14:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Same goes to this, the music is different, more intense, yet it has no change in the map.
  7. https://i.imgur.com/BI2mrBY.jpg sweet xD
No reply=fixed.
Thanks for mod !!!
MaridiuS
No kudosu for this.

[General]
  1. tags: bladedance of elementalers anime Ibuki Kido Kana Yuuki Shizuka Ishigami Saori Oonishi Ai Kakuma 精霊剣舞祭<ブレイドダンス> source on ending theme.
  2. https://i.imgur.com/IUWfiPr.png it seems that video is missing for iroha's insane, I dont have it enabled.
[Dance]
Okay so we had an IRC and the rhythm I suggested was applied, proceeding to mod the rest.
  1. Hitsounds are bland. There is no actual whistle hitsounding present. 00:06:097 (4,1,4) - you could for example place whistles on these notes which are to my ears the loudest bagpipe notes. Keep in mind that in folder you use soft-hitwhistle that sounds like a drum-hitnormal or normal-hitnormal. This may sound a bit complicated, but the current soft-hitwhistle could be renamed to drum-hitnormal, and all sounds that are currently on whistles are to be moved to drum sampleset, https://i.imgur.com/DHzglwV.jpg . By doing this, you can do soft-hitwhistle hitsounding to spice up the map (similar to how they sound on default skin) while still having this drum hits done. Whistles are generally used for high-pitched sounds. Usually this current method is acceptable if the song is really deep pitched. In case you didn't understand me well, contact me irc.
  2. The kiai section should use "finish" hitsound on cymbals such as 00:47:648 (1,1,1) -. If you agree, apply "finish" to other cymbal sounds as well in the kiai.

  3. General problem in the kiai that I have is that 00:47:327 (7,8) - these jumps are too small. Both have vocals on those notes, and especially (8) which has a more important one. 00:48:771 (9) - or this. It should be a good idea to increase the spacing to every second note after 5stack like those I linked as contrast.I intend to suggest big changes https://i.imgur.com/9X2lk5t.jpg to spacing, 2.8x+. Applies too all similar parts of course.
  4. 01:09:947 (3) - The vocal phrase starts from here, so I highly suggest having this nced since the spacing increases from here too. 01:15:081 (3) - Same applies to this.
  5. 01:17:327 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - By following my suggestion of hitsounding, you can put whistle on every "HAI" in the song to follow the vocals.
[battle's extra]
Same hitsounding suggestions here. I approve of the style, but I'm interested in what might others have to say about this diff, do you think you could fetch a mod or two?
  1. 00:05:455 - to 00:10:589 - I am generally confused to why you changed the rhythm after the interval I linked. I really liked hais being followed, and never was the rhythm for hais used ever again in the map. There was no obvious change in music to warrant this. I would've preferred if you haven't used the "hai" rhythm (which I really like) if you had no intent to reuse it again.
  2. 00:30:963 (7) - This is actually an empty note. You should make the previous note a slider to fill it, not make it the most spaced, it's not even a hihat. If you wanted this part to be jumpy and intense, a good improvisation might be to make 00:30:161 (3) - into two circles since the sliderend covers a drum hit. Drum hits are really nice for making jumps tbh.
  3. 00:46:525 - I notice that you're a somewhat freestyle mapper, not putting much thought into every detail, which I like, however, in the kiai I think you could have an empasis system going. Currently nothing really grabs my attention. What I'm aiming at is 00:47:487 (8) - these notes, white ticks before the guitar offbeat. Imo they have bigger impact than other vocal notes such as 00:47:166 (6,7) - and in the map it could be represented better. The example I linked has a bit bigger spacing, but it's not enough to grab attention, something like 2.6x-3.0x is what I'd say gives impact. In case you agree that this could be the main note to emphasize, you might consider lowering 00:47:648 (1) - spacing relative to the white ticks I'm talking about, something like 2.5x I guess? It is a guitar hit which warrants a slider, but the vocals are not really intense to suggest high spacing is why I believe that this might be the way to go.
  4. 00:56:311 (5,7) - These two notes don't exist in the song, not even drums. If you'd like, you can make 00:56:150 (4,6) - these two into 3/4 sliders to emphasize them and overall make it similarly intense.
  5. 01:27:273 (7) - Consider making this a slider like neoSL did, seems like a nice touch.

[iroha's insane]
  • Sweet
  1. 01:09:947 (2,3,4,5) - you have been giving emphasis and bigger spacing to impactful vocals like 00:22:140 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - but not here. I think the vocals are pretty loud, going in 1/2 intervals and should considered to be the most spaced part in this section. 01:15:081 (2,3,4,5) - same goes here. First step is to make the slider into 2 circles and then make a jumpy pattern in case you agree.
[hard]
  1. hitsounding
  2. 01:03:851 (3,4) - These hitsounds sound weird. I don't think you should have them on "finish".
  3. 01:26:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think jumps are okay, will really surprise hard players and make them mad when they either fail or miss here.

[normal]
  1. hitsounding
[djulus easy]
  1. 00:18:289 (1) - missed clap on sliderend.
  2. 00:20:856 - suddenly no hitclap hitsounding on this section? 00:20:856 (1) - Only this sliderend had a clap on a snare.
  3. 00:15:723 - to 00:20:856 - analogous sections have different hitsounding style 00:25:990 - to 00:31:124 -
  4. 00:34:653 - missed clap
  5. 00:46:525 (1) - no "finish" on cymbals, you should add them. 00:47:648 (3,1,3,1,3) - applies to this etc.
  6. 01:00:642 (3) - Distance snap
    Generally the diff needs work on hitsounding, refer to my initial post too for hitwhistles. This diff has inconsistent clap hitsounding within analogous sections, and tons of claps are randomly missing, some sections don't even have hitclap hitsounding
Call me back when you think it's ready.
Djulus
fixed some ds
about finishes on kiai,why? its kinda weird on little sounds and in vocal imo.
will copy hitsounds when neosl fix hitsounds
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Shmiklak
djulus asked me to take a look on his difficulty.
Irohas

MaridiuS wrote:

No kudosu for this.

[iroha's insane]
  • Sweet thx!!
  1. 01:09:947 (2,3,4,5) - you have been giving emphasis and bigger spacing to impactful vocals like 00:22:140 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - but not here. I think the vocals are pretty loud, going in 1/2 intervals and should considered to be the most spaced part in this section. 01:15:081 (2,3,4,5) - same goes here. First step is to make the slider into 2 circles and then make a jumpy pattern in case you agree. mmh kinda understand but i think making a rhythm as hard as 00:22:140 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - would make this part too much uncomfortable plus i think its more judicious to emphasize 01:11:070 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - than 01:09:947 (2,3,4,5) - imo, hope u understand
Call me back when you think it's ready.
thx for mod!!
Topic Starter
Affirmation

MaridiuS wrote:

No kudosu for this.

[General]
  1. tags: bladedance of elementalers anime Ibuki Kido Kana Yuuki Shizuka Ishigami Saori Oonishi Ai Kakuma 精霊剣舞祭<ブレイドダンス> source on ending theme. tbh tags doesn't matter at all. just better for fine, I don't think people will find this song searching by that words.
  2. https://i.imgur.com/IUWfiPr.png it seems that video is missing for iroha's insane, I dont have it enabled.
[Dance]
Okay so we had an IRC and the rhythm I suggested was applied, proceeding to mod the rest.
  1. Hitsounds are bland. There is no actual whistle hitsounding present. 00:06:097 (4,1,4) - you could for example place whistles on these notes which are to my ears the loudest bagpipe notes. Keep in mind that in folder you use soft-hitwhistle that sounds like a drum-hitnormal or normal-hitnormal. This may sound a bit complicated, but the current soft-hitwhistle could be renamed to drum-hitnormal, and all sounds that are currently on whistles are to be moved to drum sampleset, https://i.imgur.com/DHzglwV.jpg . By doing this, you can do soft-hitwhistle hitsounding to spice up the map (similar to how they sound on default skin) while still having this drum hits done. Whistles are generally used for high-pitched sounds. Usually this current method is acceptable if the song is really deep pitched. In case you didn't understand me well, contact me irc.
  2. The kiai section should use "finish" hitsound on cymbals such as 00:47:648 (1,1,1) -. If you agree, apply "finish" to other cymbal sounds as well in the kiai.not symbol sound there, only starting kiai part has symbol.

  3. General problem in the kiai that I have is that 00:47:327 (7,8) - these jumps are too small. Both have vocals on those notes, and especially (8) which has a more important one. 00:48:771 (9) - or this. It should be a good idea to increase the spacing to every second note after 5stack like those I linked as contrast.I intend to suggest big changes https://i.imgur.com/9X2lk5t.jpg to spacing, 2.8x+. Applies too all similar parts of course.
  4. 01:09:947 (3) - The vocal phrase starts from here, so I highly suggest having this nced since the spacing increases from here too. 01:15:081 (3) - Same applies to this.
  5. 01:17:327 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - By following my suggestion of hitsounding, you can put whistle on every "HAI" in the song to follow the vocals.
[battle's extra]
Same hitsounding suggestions here. I approve of the style, but I'm interested in what might others have to say about this diff, do you think you could fetch a mod or two?
  1. 00:05:455 - to 00:10:589 - I am generally confused to why you changed the rhythm after the interval I linked. I really liked hais being followed, and never was the rhythm for hais used ever again in the map. There was no obvious change in music to warrant this. I would've preferred if you haven't used the "hai" rhythm (which I really like) if you had no intent to reuse it again.
  2. 00:30:963 (7) - This is actually an empty note. You should make the previous note a slider to fill it, not make it the most spaced, it's not even a hihat. If you wanted this part to be jumpy and intense, a good improvisation might be to make 00:30:161 (3) - into two circles since the sliderend covers a drum hit. Drum hits are really nice for making jumps tbh.
  3. 00:46:525 - I notice that you're a somewhat freestyle mapper, not putting much thought into every detail, which I like, however, in the kiai I think you could have an empasis system going. Currently nothing really grabs my attention. What I'm aiming at is 00:47:487 (8) - these notes, white ticks before the guitar offbeat. Imo they have bigger impact than other vocal notes such as 00:47:166 (6,7) - and in the map it could be represented better. The example I linked has a bit bigger spacing, but it's not enough to grab attention, something like 2.6x-3.0x is what I'd say gives impact. In case you agree that this could be the main note to emphasize, you might consider lowering 00:47:648 (1) - spacing relative to the white ticks I'm talking about, something like 2.5x I guess? It is a guitar hit which warrants a slider, but the vocals are not really intense to suggest high spacing is why I believe that this might be the way to go.
  4. 00:56:311 (5,7) - These two notes don't exist in the song, not even drums. If you'd like, you can make 00:56:150 (4,6) - these two into 3/4 sliders to emphasize them and overall make it similarly intense.
  5. 01:27:273 (7) - Consider making this a slider like neoSL did, seems like a nice touch.

[iroha's insane]
  • Sweet
  1. 01:09:947 (2,3,4,5) - you have been giving emphasis and bigger spacing to impactful vocals like 00:22:140 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - but not here. I think the vocals are pretty loud, going in 1/2 intervals and should considered to be the most spaced part in this section. 01:15:081 (2,3,4,5) - same goes here. First step is to make the slider into 2 circles and then make a jumpy pattern in case you agree.
[hard]
  1. hitsounding
  2. 01:03:851 (3,4) - These hitsounds sound weird. I don't think you should have them on "finish".lol I couldn't find finish sound? maybe deleted by copying HS.
  3. 01:26:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think jumps are okay, will really surprise hard players and make them mad when they either fail or miss here. this part should be have emphasis.

[normal]
  1. hitsounding
[djulus easy]
  1. 00:18:289 (1) - missed clap on sliderend.
  2. 00:20:856 - suddenly no hitclap hitsounding on this section? 00:20:856 (1) - Only this sliderend had a clap on a snare.
  3. 00:15:723 - to 00:20:856 - analogous sections have different hitsounding style 00:25:990 - to 00:31:124 -
  4. 00:34:653 - missed clap
  5. 00:46:525 (1) - no "finish" on cymbals, you should add them. 00:47:648 (3,1,3,1,3) - applies to this etc.
  6. 01:00:642 (3) - Distance snap
    Generally the diff needs work on hitsounding, refer to my initial post too for hitwhistles. This diff has inconsistent clap hitsounding within analogous sections, and tons of claps are randomly missing, some sections don't even have hitclap hitsounding
Call me back when you think it's ready.
Thanks for mod!
Battle
MS

MaridiuS wrote:

[battle's extra]
Same hitsounding suggestions here. I approve of the style, but I'm interested in what might others have to say about this diff, do you think you could fetch a mod or two?
  1. 00:05:455 - to 00:10:589 - I am generally confused to why you changed the rhythm after the interval I linked. I really liked hais being followed, and never was the rhythm for hais used ever again in the map. There was no obvious change in music to warrant this. I would've preferred if you haven't used the "hai" rhythm (which I really like) if you had no intent to reuse it again. i wanted variation but w/e it makes more sense changing it back to how it originally was
  2. 00:30:963 (7) - This is actually an empty note. You should make the previous note a slider to fill it, not make it the most spaced, it's not even a hihat. If you wanted this part to be jumpy and intense, a good improvisation might be to make 00:30:161 (3) - into two circles since the sliderend covers a drum hit. Drum hits are really nice for making jumps tbh. well it has a vocal so i chose to use a circle here, it's not about having a jumpy part because drums, it's to have a jumpy part to transition from the less intense to a higher intensity part, making gameplay more impactful
  3. 00:46:525 - I notice that you're a somewhat freestyle mapper, not putting much thought into every detail, which I like, however, in the kiai I think you could have an empasis system going. Currently nothing really grabs my attention. What I'm aiming at is 00:47:487 (8) - these notes, white ticks before the guitar offbeat. Imo they have bigger impact than other vocal notes such as 00:47:166 (6,7) - and in the map it could be represented better. The example I linked has a bit bigger spacing, but it's not enough to grab attention, something like 2.6x-3.0x is what I'd say gives impact. In case you agree that this could be the main note to emphasize, you might consider lowering 00:47:648 (1) - spacing relative to the white ticks I'm talking about, something like 2.5x I guess? It is a guitar hit which warrants a slider, but the vocals are not really intense to suggest high spacing is why I believe that this might be the way to go. Well, you wrote a lot which I really can't follow because I don't like reading long sentences, however, I did add more emphasis by using a snapping back and forth motion for the majority of it, and if it didn't it's still somewhat snappy. I think the biggest thing that you say is increase spacing,
    but there's a lot more to emphasis than just spacing that you can make lol. As for the white tick before the downbeats, I don't feel they're AS signficant compared to the red ticks which usually have the end of a vocal phrase, so I don't treat them differently, it's just a different way of expressing the music and imo it's the red tick that really matters so I'd rather stress that then have a bunch of spaced ones to the point where nothing is emphasized
  4. 00:56:311 (5,7) - These two notes don't exist in the song, not even drums. If you'd like, you can make 00:56:150 (4,6) - these two into 3/4 sliders to emphasize them and overall make it similarly intense. I just added hitsounds lol
  5. 01:27:273 (7) - Consider making this a slider like neoSL did, seems like a nice touch. nah i like it to end where it does

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ps. dont put ur hitsounds on mine cuz i added different stuff to my parts for hitsounding so ye

also u should probs find mods for my diff since dude asked for it for w/e reason lol
MaridiuS
you asked for a recheck on thread and emm, please do copy or do something with djulus hitsounds.

Generally I am okay with top diffs hitsounds, now to copy it on lower diffs eh? Also be sure to add finish hitsound on battle diff too the cymbals on kiai.

Why not add tags? You never know who might find in what way a map, no reason not to add them.
Hollow Delta
Incoming Bubble

jk it's a nm for Battle

Battle's Extra
  1. I think it would be more interesting for 00:05:776 (3) - to have the same curve as 00:06:418 (6) - doing so I think gives the vocal more importance as that would be the highest point of the pattern if you were to put an NC on 00:06:097 (4) - You applied this concept 00:08:343 (3,6) - so I think it would look more organized to do it here as well.
  2. 00:09:947 (4,5) - I think the way these patterns connect visually contradict the sounds they're mapped too. Yes, they're mapped to the 3 vocals in a similar fashion as done at 00:07:059 (3,4,5) - but they didn't have the clap finishes giving them extra emphasis, so I think the pattern should be slightly different accordingly. https://puu.sh/yEnHj/770dea98ad.jpg Could you try a pattern like this? I feel the difference in angles gives emphasis accordingly yet visually groups these notes into 3 like before.
  3. 00:24:707 (1) - I feel like because you keep the same circular motion as 00:23:423 (1,4) - this feels like it has less emphasis than implied as you tend to reverse the flow every 2 white ticks.
  4. 00:54:546 (3,4,5,6) - I think the rhythm here should be the same as 00:49:412 (3,4,5,6) - as they're both mapped where this section of the song loops / ends, so they serve as the 'finisher' of this section.
The roughly .8* spread from Insane to Battle's Extra has an OD difference of 1.5, Battle's Extra to Dance has only .2 difference in OD. OD7.8 - 8.0 for Battle's Extra seems more balanced to me spread-wise as the difference in OD would be around .9

gl
Battle
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Bubblun wrote:

Incoming Bubble

jk it's a nm for Battle

Battle's Extra
  1. I think it would be more interesting for 00:05:776 (3) - to have the same curve as 00:06:418 (6) - doing so I think gives the vocal more importance as that would be the highest point of the pattern if you were to put an NC on 00:06:097 (4) - You applied this concept 00:08:343 (3,6) - so I think it would look more organized to do it here as well. I mean it's still a similar concept in that they're making triangles (free-handed with no technique but still, triangles) so I don't really think it looks any less organized or more messy, it's not a huge deal anyways imo lol
  2. 00:09:947 (4,5) - I think the way these patterns connect visually contradict the sounds they're mapped too. Yes, they're mapped to the 3 vocals in a similar fashion as done at 00:07:059 (3,4,5) - but they didn't have the clap finishes giving them extra emphasis, so I think the pattern should be slightly different accordingly. https://puu.sh/yEnHj/770dea98ad.jpg Could you try a pattern like this? I feel the difference in angles gives emphasis accordingly yet visually groups these notes into 3 like before. That actually looks cute but I actually prefer it this way, the ss you had is pretty similar to the other "hi"s that go on whereas the "hi"s here feel pretty distinct and more emphasized than the other ones, hence use of linear pattern to both emphasize the "hi"s with sharp movement and contrasting visuals, tl;dr the contrast is intentional
  3. 00:24:707 (1) - I feel like because you keep the same circular motion as 00:23:423 (1,4) - this feels like it has less emphasis than implied as you tend to reverse the flow every 2 white ticks. I do tend to do that? I kinda just mapped it for the sake of making it look like that lol, in any case the intensity is dying so less emphasis than it should goes along with the gradually decreasing intensity lol
  4. 00:54:546 (3,4,5,6) - I think the rhythm here should be the same as 00:49:412 (3,4,5,6) - as they're both mapped where this section of the song loops / ends, so they serve as the 'finisher' of this section. sure it makes that rhythm variation less out of place lol
The roughly .8* spread from Insane to Battle's Extra has an OD difference of 1.5, Battle's Extra to Dance has only .2 difference in OD. OD7.8 - 8.0 for Battle's Extra seems more balanced to me spread-wise as the difference in OD would be around .9 mm, probs shouldn't be looking at strictly numbers for OD, i think it's fairly fine lol, it was originally the same OD as the higher diff but people aren't into that lol

gl

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i added more finishes btw so ye
MaridiuS
[battle]

  1. 00:41:391 - vs that part in top diff, one is whistle spam (which is quiestionable imo) when the top diff is drum hitsound, please make it consistent it drums too, I don't really dig the whistles.
  2. 00:00:322 - to 00:36:257 - the whistles are inconsistent... 00:03:690 (5) - In the intro there are no whistles on these notes, up until 00:11:392 (5) - , so between 00 and 11:392 you should also put whistles on those notes, the music didn't seem to change that much.
  3. 00:20:856 - Has different whistle patterning, spamming it on white ticks while this was not done before, seems really out of place tbh.
  4. 01:10:268 (4,5) - okay now i'm confused, is this some method where you vary the hitsounds, I didn't really see that before tbh, the songs melody doesn't seem to be any different than what it was for different hitsounding style to be warranted.
  5. 01:17:327 - in this section the whistles are really rare...
overall I think getting the whistle's to be consistent should be the way to go considering the song's melody doesn't change at all.

[neosl diffs]
  1. 01:27:273 (1) - the green lines are not making the sliderbody more silent because its on same sampleset. So no need to slowly decrease if it doesn't work (I don't think it shouldn't even in general decrease since I think the sliderslide gives a nice noise). If you want to silence the sliderticks, use 5% on the first greenline 01:27:434 - here and delete the rest (except the first one lol).
[normal]
  1. 00:57:916 (1) - inconsistent with 01:00:482 (5) - , I think both should be not NCed.
Topic Starter
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MaridiuS wrote:

[battle]

  1. 00:41:391 - vs that part in top diff, one is whistle spam (which is quiestionable imo) when the top diff is drum hitsound, please make it consistent it drums too, I don't really dig the whistles.
  2. 00:00:322 - to 00:36:257 - the whistles are inconsistent... 00:03:690 (5) - In the intro there are no whistles on these notes, up until 00:11:392 (5) - , so between 00 and 11:392 you should also put whistles on those notes, the music didn't seem to change that much.
  3. 00:20:856 - Has different whistle patterning, spamming it on white ticks while this was not done before, seems really out of place tbh.
  4. 01:10:268 (4,5) - okay now i'm confused, is this some method where you vary the hitsounds, I didn't really see that before tbh, the songs melody doesn't seem to be any different than what it was for different hitsounding style to be warranted.
  5. 01:17:327 - in this section the whistles are really rare...
overall I think getting the whistle's to be consistent should be the way to go considering the song's melody doesn't change at all.
It's my fault tbh, after you said about custums, I changed on;y my diffs and didn't checked Battle's. I changed all whistles into drums,
[neosl diffs]
  1. 01:27:273 (1) - the green lines are not making the sliderbody more silent because its on same sampleset. So no need to slowly decrease if it doesn't work (I don't think it shouldn't even in general decrease since I think the sliderslide gives a nice noise). If you want to silence the sliderticks, use 5% on the first greenline 01:27:434 - here and delete the rest (except the first one lol).wanted to add some sounds at 01:27:273 - , I added clap sound, I think this song can be added clap on here, and deleted all sounds from 01:27:354 - .
[normal]
  1. 00:57:916 (1) - inconsistent with 01:00:482 (5) - , I think both should be not NCed.lol my fault.
all fixed and changed battle's because I think he intended drum sound on note which has a whistle hitsound.
MaridiuS
ask battle to confirm what's going on.
Battle
ye he told me dw
Topic Starter
Affirmation
lol I said it into pm already xD
MaridiuS
raer anime song that i like

let's give it a shot.
Topic Starter
Affirmation
Oh, finally....Thanks MaridiuS xD
then...........finding kind BN lol
Djulus
👀
Garden
hai

Normal:
01:24:707 - no idea why this got skipped while everything else is well followed

Hard:
00:19:894 (5,1,2,3,1) - the heavily stacked pattern calls for high approaching rate imo, either raise ar or change pattern should work
00:43:637 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ same here, just raise your ar to 8 to save your work i guess

Irohas:
01:05:616 - ending the kiai here instead of 01:05:936 - sounds better to me

hitsounding for e n h topx:
some more finishes can be added to emphasize cymbals: 00:05:455 - 00:08:022 - etcetcetc.
also

MaridiuS wrote:

01:17:327 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - By following my suggestion of hitsounding, you can put whistle on every "HAI" in the song to follow the vocals.
↑ i can agree with this, but didn't see your reply?
Djulus
👀
Irohas
did
thx garden!!
osu file format v14

[General]
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[Metadata]
Title:Blade Dance
TitleUnicode:精霊剣舞祭
Artist:Ni-Sokkususu
ArtistUnicode:にーそっくすす
Creator:Neoskylove
Version:Irohas' Insane
Source:精霊使いの剣舞
Tags:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance Ending TV Size bladedance of elementalers anime Ibuki Kido Kana Yuuki Shizuka Ishigami Saori Oonishi Ai Kakuma 精霊剣舞祭<ブレイドダンス> Battle Irohas Djulus mugiwarasekai
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