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Kawada Mami - PSI-missing -2011 remix-

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JauiPlaY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年11月9日 at 11:07:02

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: PSI-missing -2011 remix-
Source: Toaru Majutsu no Index
Tags: op opening karenying ignorethis collab
BPM: 140
Filesize: 6764kb
Play Time: 03:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bakaying's Normal (4.37 stars, 296 notes)
  2. Easy (2.17 stars, 172 notes)
  3. Jauignore (5 stars, 594 notes)
Download: Kawada Mami - PSI-missing -2011 remix-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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11th beatmap.

Bakaying's Normal by karenying.
Jauignore collab with ignorethis.

Btw, my favorite character in Toaru Majutsu no Index is actually Kaori Kanzaki (神裂 火織, かんざきかおり)~
Powerful and sexy oneesan! XD
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
General

Easy
too lazy/Easy比较难做又要适度,又要花样好看,不过感觉好象复制,粘贴略多
01:22:770 (1) delete/这里删了,留个2,节奏也不错,比较适合EASY,我1000多RANK,这里打出1个100,你本来放的1
02:38:199 (1) ^ /同上
I only mod half of easy is also OK,because of so much copy/EASY我MOD一半就好了,后面全对称的

Guest dif Normal
distance problem/距离问题,不过是完美主义的距离问题,改不改随你,我举几个例子
AR + 1
00:30:699(2) the distance between (1) and (3) isn't same/你看这个2,紧贴3但,离1有SMALL GRID的1格距离,但按照你拍子放的位置应该距离一样的,这个轻重自己掌握,不影响RANK就不用改了,毕竟NORMAL这样的问题很多,改起来略麻烦
00:33:699 (1) ^

Gauignore
normal volume too high noise.change to 45%/最后个难度,NOTE很多65的NORMAL好吵,改成45不错。还有最后个难度的节奏,会让很多喜欢这歌的人失望的-,-
For example 00:27:699~00:28:342
00:53:412
00:58:342
01:07:342~01:08:627
01:15:699~01:16:127
01:17:734~~01:17:949
换句话说,你的很多二连不配这首歌

In one word,you are a mature mapper,skill isn't too bad/总体来说,你也是个成熟的做图者,再多注意点细节吧,今天两首,我投你的,KUSUDO到,星到,谢了
Nagae-Iku
General
不错

Easy
完美对称?如果是的话需要把03:35:413 (1)向左上方移一格

Bakaying's Normal
略难
有些slider可能需要改动
00:57:699 (4) 这种滑动中带有小折返的slider不知道能否rank
01:28:984 (2) ^
02:13:127 (1) ^

Jauignore
02:26:199 (4) 与节奏不符
03:25:127 - 03:28:556 音效渐高 很棒
03:35:842 - 03:36:913 两连不匹配
03:42:699 - 03:43:770 ^

nice map & star
good luck :D
aston_old
[Easy]
- Nothing

[Bakaying's Normal]
- Spacing looks like changing from 1.0x and 1.2x, pick one and stick with it and redo all notes to distance.
- 03:16:556 (3) - Too far, fix distance
- 03:18:270 (5) - ^
- Mostly distance snapping in this diff, too many to list.

[Jauignore]
- A lot of slider speed changes/bpm changes - try to stick with one to two please, hard to sightread if not.
- 02:40:984 (1) - move to 02:40:877, distance however. I think it sounds better.
- I think HP Drain Rate +1 possible

Not many problems. Nice map, good mapping :D/
Nymph
我喜欢吃烤鸭
General:
Offset咋记事本又显示一堆小数点……

BG 700多K 我转了一下不损失清晰度190K 能省0.5M的下载空间 下载的快点赚PC数多(大雾

Easy:
01:09:699 (1) - 我建议这个别STACK 红线到白线的话 EASY这样有时候不容易新手读图吧
02:25:127 (1) - 同上(其实也无所谓 包括那个按住的SLIDER 等MAT吐槽再说吧)

Baka莹's Normal:
01:40:342 (5) - 我个人喜欢这个NOTE放在01:40:127。

基片鸭和一个脑:
03:09:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这一坨用normal hit不用soft如何?
03:11:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同上
03:25:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 音量再大点?更燃点才好

没了 记得你不让我扔星来着 那省下了 液
S h i o n
Hi,JauiPlaY (As is requested.)

MAY'S - I LOVE YOU ga Ienakute
Nice map and nice song. Thank you for sharing~ :)


Easy
moe~


Bakaying's Normal
00:35:413 (4) - It was 1/4 too late.
03:23:413 (4) - The reverse arrow should be on this blue line: 03:23:734. Have a try like this ?



Jauignore
00:51:699 (6) - New combo
01:51:270 (1) ~ 02:03:699 Personally,such mixture of 1/4s and sliders feels not that fluence and will annoy me when playing ,though it is fine enough.
02:30:699 (1) - Was this slider somehow too late. Have a try like this ?

02:40:127 (5) - Have a try like this ?



Good luck~
Kotone

palmolive wrote:

Bakaying's Normal
略难
有些slider可能需要改动
00:57:699 (4) 这种滑动中带有小折返的slider不知道能否rank
01:28:984 (2) ^
02:13:127 (1) ^
能。

aston wrote:

[Bakaying's Normal]
- Spacing looks like changing from 1.0x and 1.2x, pick one and stick with it and redo all notes to distance.
- 03:16:556 (3) - Too far, fix distance
- 03:18:270 (5) - ^
- Mostly distance snapping in this diff, too many to list.
1.2x is Jump,and 1.5x spacing bcz of I use 0.65x slider
so,no change

Nymph wrote:

Baka莹's Normal:
01:40:342 (5) - 我个人喜欢这个NOTE放在01:40:127。
no,goodbye baka

S h i o n wrote:

Bakaying's Normal
00:35:413 (4) - It was 1/4 too late.
03:23:413 (4) - The reverse arrow should be on this blue line: 03:23:734. Have a try like this ?

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故意的orz,sorry no change
Sure
Hi there :D


[Jauignore]
00:31:770 (5) - New combo to be consistent with 00:24:913 (1)
00:33:484 (5) - New combo to be consistent with 00:26:627 (1)
01:01:127 (1,1,1) - Don't separate comboing. Or separate these 02:16:556 (1,2,3)
02:30:699 (1) - This slider really doesn't fit music
03:25:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - DON'T MAKE 7 COMBOS IN THE STREAM. IT'S SILLY. Maybe 7*4 looks good appearance but it doesn't fit music at all. Osu is a rhythm game mostly, not a visual game.


[Bakaying's Normal]
It's fine to me except 00:50:842 (1,2) these patterns.
It's not good idea in Normal diff in my opinion. Oh well, but it fit well. NVM. :p


[Easy]
01:08:842 (2,1) - I don't suggest stacking. Stacking under slider isn't good for beginner, it's hard to read.
01:19:127 (3,1) - ^
01:27:270 (2) - Flipping vertically will be better flow.
02:24:270 (2,1) - I don't suggest stacking. Wait... copy&paste? =.=
02:34:555 (3,1) - ^
02:42:698 (2) - Flip vertically
03:27:699 (3,1) - ._.


Pretty nice map. Good luck ;)
Kotone
OK.Changed some thing like 00:50:842 here.Thank you

Download: Kawada Mami - PSI-missing -2011 remix- (JauiPlaY) [Bakaying's Normal].osu
Zelos
As per the #modreqs request

Folder:
Clean

General:
In Tags, change OP to Opening as you cant search via 2 letters without the entire sentence in tags also. so yes change to opening or you could just remove in general
Remove collab from tags as it will serve no purpose in finding a specific beatmap in osu!direct or the site.

Please note all mods are only suggestions and can be freely ignored.
Let us commence.

Easy:
01:29:413 (2,1) - timing wise, these might be too close together for an easy difficulty because most easy players wont be ready to immediately switch from slider to spinner. I suggest you at least give the timing spacing at least a minimum of a 1/2 apart.
02:44:841 (2,1) - ^^^^
03:48:270 (1,1) - ^^^^
Could not find anything else wrong due to the good symmetrics used here.

Bakaying's Normal:
00:33:699 (1) - it is generally frowned upon when you make sliders overlap themselves so that the end of the slider is actually on the slider itself. I highly suggest you change this.
01:01:127 (1) - the distortion near the end of the kickback slider is so very misleading. it makes the length to the kick back slider seem much shorter than it actually is. please change this.
02:16:556 (1) - ^^^
On the good note, you actually stack your notes and sliders correctly. Other maps ive modded recently. not so much.

Jauignore:
Nothing could be found in this amazing diff.

Star.
Yasora
Hi~ time to mod your map~

Easy
AR -1?
00:54:699 (3) overlap with 1
01:08:413 (1) del NC?
01:15:699 (1) ^
01:43:984 (1) add finish in the beginning?
02:10:130 (3) same with 00:54:699
02:31:127 (1) del NC?
03:35:413 (1) add finish?

Bakaying's Normal
01:18:270 (5) spacing
01:22:770 (5) move into 01:22:556
02:39:270 (1) del NC?
02:40:127 (2) NC?

Jauignore
00:50:199 (4) NC?

Good map and nice song :3~
Good luck~
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Thanks everyone! I've read all those posts carefully and I'm sure that all of them are useful enough~
So kudosu rain!
Again, thank you for your modding! :D

@Bakaying:我先更新了,最后2個mod妳下次一起改吧...然後,下次最好用QQ傳我,辛苦了 ;)
Pokie
粗略看了一下沒什麼細節需要挑的
雖然感覺稍微平淡了些

就總的來說是做的不錯 XD
Samah
[Easy]
Holy symmetry, Batman! Nice perfect sliders, btw.
01:08:842 (2,1) - It might be hard for a new player to read the timing between these stacked sliders since the first is a blue tick.
02:24:270 (2,1) - ^

[Bakaying's Normal]
Spacing changes a lot in this even with 1x bpm.
01:30:270 (4) - Up a bit?

[Jauignore]
00:57:699 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is *really* hard to read. Perhaps you could do something more like this: 01:29:413 (1,2)
01:07:984 (1,2,3) - ^
01:11:413 (1,2,3) - ^
01:50:842 (3,4,5) - It plays strange having this triplet group under the *end* of a slider, especially since there's a half beat rest.
02:14:413 (5) - I think this would play better if you moved it down over the start of slider (1) at 02:13:127.
03:02:413 (4,5) - These two notes break your clockwise triangle theme, so the player loses that circular motion and it plays odd.

Very nice mapset, ready for ranking, imo.
Have a star. <3
AoiX

Aoi's Mod

  1. General
    1. 后面空的略多
    2. 换堕天使女仆装BG
  2. 基个脑
    1. 00:34:984 (3,4) - 这两个点交换下位置可以提升可玩性
    2. 01:53:627 (4,5,6) - 这几个点打的时候总感觉间隔太开了
    3. 01:57:270 (5) - 叠在一起略坑爹啊
    4. 02:20:413 (4) - NC
    5. 02:31:984 (7) - finish
    6. 02:59:199 - 这段神排列啊,太有爱了。就算为了这排列我也要射星
    7. 03:12:806 (3,4,5) - 前面的滑条是往左上方走的,但这几个点因为叠加又是往右下方向这样会很突兀。做成不叠加的stream会好且能和spinner连贯起来
  3. Bakaying
    1. 00:21:913 (x) - add circle
    2. 02:26:413 (4) - 去和5叠在一起
  4. EZ
    1. 02:35:412 (1) - 不要叠加
    2. 03:28:556 (1) - ^
bossandy
你好像是泡麵的朋友吧XD 我mod不是很好 請見諒...
Bakaying's Normal:
SPOILER
00:31:984 (1) - 間距
01:28:984 (2) - 會不會被騙啊lol
01:40:342 (5) - whistle?
01:48:484 (3) - 開頭whistle?
03:31:770 (4) - 這段副歌就這裡間距不一樣
Jauignore:
SPOILER
00:22:020 (X) - 加個note?
00:34:877 (X) - 加個note?
02:09:056 ~ 02:10:127 試試這節奏不? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172576
最後副歌的二連拍 有一些可以改成slider 不然有點無趣(對我來說
找不到很多... 這就是神mapper吧XD
Nice map~ star~
Breeze

All difficulties

  1. There are many unsnap slider end and start, you'd better redo all slider once
  2. Make sure your KIAI timing sections are right on tick

Timing

  1. I got a Offset : 1995 (+10) if you feel this one is better, then use this one

Bakaying's Normal

  1. 00:57:709 (4) - This slider might be confusing, make it like this maybe better
  2. 02:33:280 (4) - Make slider start a bit out of slider end of (3) seems better

Jauignore

  1. 01:30:066 (3,4,5) - Put these 3 notes out of slider end would make it more easy to read as 1/4 beat space, like this maybe
  2. 03:12:816 (3,4,5) - ^, and some more stuff like this, depends on you fixing it or not
  3. 01:37:137 - 02:04:566 - Add some hitsounds like whistle at this period of time

Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Your modding are really useful guys!
So...another kudosu rain! :)

@Breeze

SPOILER

Breeze wrote:

01:37:137 - 02:04:566 - Add some hitsounds like whistle at this period of time
一個腦說他是刻意的 所以沒改
另外offset+11 別的應該都ok了

Thank you for your modding!
Breeze
我先确认AIBat出错是什么原因, 有可能是你osu文件里面有些地方出了问题
确认前暂时还不太好泡不好意思
Grimoire Queen
nice map good luck
Breeze
[Bakaying's Normal]
  1. 03:46:781 (4) - This slider is hidden by previous note, kinda hard to see while playing. Post here to see if you would change it or not
And comboburst seems with a small size, doesn't effect play though

Call me back for a recheck when you have any reply
Kotone
OK fixed.看不見JPY上Q,我放這裡好了
http://puu.sh/8knN
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
不好意思 昨天晚上斷網了
Fixed and Updated. Now I guess it's okay~ :D
Breeze
OK, bubbled
Zelos
sweet. happy that this is bubbled.
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
YAY~
Thanks Breeze and Zelos!

EDIT: and 卸腿大哥! :D
Andrea
Looks pretty good to me!

Ranked~
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Oh finally ;_;
Thanks a lot Andrea~
Kotone
baka janai desu
Nymph
baka desu
Sekai
>w< gretz JPY ~~~

karen baka desu~
Breeze
ヾ(๑╹ω╹๑)ノ
Kawayi Rika
Omedeto ~ JPY ~ :)
banvi
grats JPY ~ :)
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Thanks everyone! I love you sooooooooooooo much~
xierbaliti
ioana2008v
Nice song, but I have a score bug, my score doesn't get in the rankings, the personal record is none, still I have tried 2 times! What to do?
Edit: the bug happens on both Catch the Beat and osu Standard.
Edit 2: fixed. osu! needed a quick restart. :P
Kavans
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NiC3003
beatmaps file currupt please fix it thanks
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