Aqours - Mirai no Bokura wa Shitteru yo · forum

newton-

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-10-10T12:18:34+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, December 9, 2017 at 9:36:34 PM

Artist: Aqours
Title: Mirai no Bokura wa Shitteru yo
Source: ラブライブ！サンシャイン!!
Tags: toshino kyoko season 2 lovelive love live sunshine opening anime tv size school idol project Inami Anju 伊波杏樹 Aida Rikako 逢田梨香子 Suwa Nanaka 諏訪ななか Komiya Arisa 小宮有紗 Saito Shuka 斉藤朱夏 Kobayashi Aika 小林愛香 Takatsuki Kanako 高槻かなこ Suzuki Aina 鈴木愛奈 Furihata Ai 降幡愛 Takami Chika 高海千歌 Sakurauchi Riko 桜内梨子 Matsuura Kanan 松浦果南 Kurosawa Dia 黒澤ダイヤ Watanabe You 渡辺曜 Tsushima Yoshiko 津島善子 Kunikida Hanamaru 国木田花丸 Ohara Mari 小原鞠莉 Kurosawa Ruby 黒澤ルビィ
BPM: 181
Filesize: 24897kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.49 stars, 99 notes)
Hard (3.21 stars, 240 notes)
Normal (2.15 stars, 180 notes)
Sunshine (5.31 stars, 347 notes)
Toshino's Insane (4.61 stars, 288 notes)

Download: Aqours - Mirai no Bokura wa Shitteru yo
Download: Aqours - Mirai no Bokura wa Shitteru yo (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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「what do we do about the future?」

diffspread

easy - mapped by me
normal - mapped by me
hard - mapped by me
insane - mapped by toshino kyoko
sunshine - mapped by me
hitsounds by me

credits

mp3 and video from starr's set

i'm sure our future selves will have the answer.

Last edited by newton- 2018-01-22T13:07:19+00:00, edited 34 times in total.

Pulse

257 posts

Joined April 2015

Pulse 2017-10-12T23:25:04+00:00

hey!
m4m

[General]

Countdown enabled on every diff except Toshino's Insane
I think that kiais could be the same for every diff

[Easy]

00:06:604 (2) - Seems like stack is off
00:54:836 (3) - Shouldn't sliderstart be hitsounded with a finish too? Sounds "wrong" since you have 00:53:676 (4,6) hitsounded

[Normal]

00:38:759 (7) - Fix DS
00:54:836 (1) - Add finish if you did it on Easy

[Hard]

00:54:836 (1) - Add finish if you did it on Normal

[Toshino's Insane]

00:22:847 (2) - Random 5% vol. timing point
00:42:903 (2) - Not sure if this NC is necessary
01:06:107 (2) - Touches health bar

[Sunshine]

00:19:698 (3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing seems to break players flow on last patterns. Maybe you could make it a little bit higher or at least Ctrl+G 00:20:196 (7) to require more player movement.
00:55:997 (1) - Not sure if this NC is necessary too

sry for short mod, clean stuff

good luck!

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-10-13T12:54:34+00:00

Pulse wrote:
hey!
m4m

[General]
Countdown enabled on every diff except Toshino's Insane oshit whoops
I think that kiais could be the same for every diffthis is up to toshi
[Easy]
00:06:604 (2) - Seems like stack is off i had to sacrifice stack accuracy so it could still look stacked with 00:08:593 (3) -
00:54:836 (3) - Shouldn't sliderstart be hitsounded with a finish too? Sounds "wrong" since you have 00:53:676 (4,6) hitsounded good point
[Normal]
00:38:759 (7) - Fix DS lmao how did this even happen
00:54:836 (1) - Add finish if you did it on Easy yeah, reworked hitsounds too
[Hard]
00:54:836 (1) - Add finish if you did it on Normal yeah, reworked hitsounds around here a bit anyway
[Sunshine]
00:19:698 (3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing seems to break players flow on last patterns. Maybe you could make it a little bit higher or at least Ctrl+G 00:20:196 (7) to require more player movement. ctrlg'ed
00:55:997 (1) - Not sure if this NC is necessary too removed
sry for short mod, clean stuff thx u wu

good luck!

fixed like 2 hitsounds on toshi's diff, will leave gd up to him

Daycore

918 posts

Joined January 2015

Daycore 2017-10-13T13:54:13+00:00

From #modreqs (NM)

Hello, this is my second mod ever, so, don't be angry if I'll be stupid

Toshino's Insane

Can you turn on "Countdown"?
Stack Leniency 2 in unrankable. You should set SL to 3 minimum.

00:03:289 (1,2,3,4) - I think, you should remove hitsound on third circle and put the hitsound on the first and fourth circles.
00:13:731 (1,2,3) - If not skilled player play this map, he'll get confused.
00:17:046 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think, same here ^.
00:22:847 - Hitsounds r.i.p.?
00:56:245 - Volume 5% maybe?
01:20:278 - ^

Your mapset is good and I hope that you'll rank this map.

Good luck!

AMX

365 posts

Joined May 2014

AMX 2017-10-13T15:59:44+00:00

Hi! Returning that M4M from your queue.

Easy

00:29:975 (2) - Idk if this is to fast for the newbies. I'd recommend just mapping a 1/1 slider there on the redticks
00:50:361 (1) - Same
00:50:361 (1,4,2) - Might be hard to read for new players
01:19:533 (3) - I think it's to fast for a new player tbh.

Normal

Can't really find anything

Hard

00:12:571 (1,2,3,4) - I'd add some depth to this with increasing volume on the white ticks. It's definently supported there.
00:43:731 (3,1) - Fix blanket
00:43:731 (3,1,3,4) - Why not blanket these aswell?
01:19:533 (2,3) - Why not make the slider into 2 circles instead? The drums are going a bit higher there, it's the 'finale' of the kiai section. + it get rids of the wierd rythm.
00:28:814 (2,3,4,5) - 2 to 3 is much larger than 00:29:312 (4,5) - even tho the intensity is going up.

Toshino's Insane

00:04:533 (1) - Reason as to why this exists?
00:05:113 (3) - Should be a 1/1
00:22:847 (2) - Uhm 5% sound ^^
00:29:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - Would be nice if u kept the pause that u did with 00:25:002 (3,1) - etc etc.
00:33:289 (4,6) - Why not Ctrl+G these? There's no reason for 00:33:289 (4) - to be so spaced out, nothing supports the jump
00:39:091 (1,2,3,4) - Why not space this out more?
00:54:919 (1,1) - Make the spinner recoverytime more, this is unrankable.
01:20:278 (1,1) - Same

Sunshine

00:19:698 (3,4,5,6,7) - Why not map the whole piano thing if ur gonna map 3 notes of it?
00:28:483 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Build up this pattern more, the drums here kind of build up if you listen, ur DS goes from bottom to top right away if u compare the rest of the section is really tight and close.
00:38:593 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Same stuff here, actually 00:38:593 (4,5) - why is this so spaced to begin with?
00:56:328 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2) - This is hard to read, i'd use DS here or something, it's so hard to read atm
01:26:494 (1,1,2) - Uncomfortable flow. I'd do something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9306606 (but NC ofc)

Sorry for so short mod, can't really find much they all look so clean. I'll shoot some stars cause the mod was so short. GL

Atalanta

529 posts

Joined December 2015

Atalanta 2017-10-13T17:49:05+00:00

Pulse wrote:
hey!
m4m

[General]
Countdown enabled on every diff except Toshino's Insane It's more like turn it off on every other diff tbh
I think that kiais could be the same for every diff No this is my diff
[Toshino's Insane]
00:22:847 (2) - Random 5% vol. timing point Fixed
00:42:903 (2) - Not sure if this NC is necessary Changed NC
01:06:107 (2) - Touches health bar Fixed

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

Stack Leniency 2 in unrankable. You should set SL to 3 minimum. I'm pretty sure as long as it's not 0 it's rankable

00:03:289 (1,2,3,4) - I think, you should remove hitsound on third circle and put the hitsound on the first and fourth circles. Sure
00:13:731 (1,2,3) - If not skilled player play this map, he'll get confused. 13sec in the map, they can retry if they don't understand the pattern, not a problem
00:17:046 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think, same here ^. ^
00:56:245 - Volume 5% maybe? I don't like putting hs to 5% so no
01:20:278 - ^ ^

AMX wrote:
Toshino's Insane

00:04:533 (1) - Reason as to why this exists? Struming chord, sounds different than a simple clic on one circle
00:05:113 (3) - Should be a 1/1 Sound stops at 00:05:278 - so it should be 1/2, plus it will you bad if it was a 1/1
00:29:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - Would be nice if u kept the pause that u did with 00:25:002 (3,1) - etc etc. Those are two different parts, they sound pretty different, so I won't put the same pattern for them
00:33:289 (4,6) - Why not Ctrl+G these? There's no reason for 00:33:289 (4) - to be so spaced out, nothing supports the jump Sure
00:39:091 (1,2,3,4) - Why not space this out more? Sounds quite different from the rest of the song, the vocals are pretty low pitched, and I think that a linear pattern fits that sound
00:54:919 (1,1) - Make the spinner recoverytime more, this is unrankable. This is an Insane diff, it's totally rankable
01:20:278 (1,1) - Same ^

Thanks for mods

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
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WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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Title:Mirai no Bokura wa Shitteru yo
TitleUnicode:未来の僕らは知ってるよ
Artist:Aqours
ArtistUnicode:Aqours
Creator:newton-
Version:Toshino's Insane
Source:ラブライブ！サンシャイン！！
Tags:season 2 lovelive love live sunshine opening anime tv size school idol project Inami Anju 伊波杏樹 Aida Rikako 逢田梨香子 Suwa Nanaka 諏訪ななか Komiya Arisa 小宮有紗 Saito Shuka 斉藤朱夏 Kobayashi Aika 小林愛香 Takatsuki Kanako 高槻かなこ Suzuki Aina 鈴木愛奈 Furihata Ai 降幡 愛 Takami Chika 高海千歌 Sakurauchi Riko 桜内梨子 Matsuura Kanan 松浦果南 Kurosawa Dia 黒澤ダイヤ Watanabe You 渡辺 曜 Tsushima Yoshiko 津島善子 Kunikida Hanamaru 国木田花丸 Ohara Mari 小原鞠莉 Kurosawa Ruby 黒澤ルビィ
BeatmapID:1438912
BeatmapSetID:679821

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OverallDifficulty:8
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newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-10-14T03:13:31+00:00

AMX wrote:
Hi! Returning that M4M from your queue.

Easy

00:29:975 (2) - Idk if this is to fast for the newbies. I'd recommend just mapping a 1/1 slider there on the redticks the same sort of thing is seen in 00:13:234 (5,1,2) - so 1/2 reverses won't be unexpected, plus 1/2 reverses are ok in easies
00:50:361 (1) - Same ^
00:50:361 (1,4,2) - Might be hard to read for new players readability-wise it's fine
01:19:533 (3) - I think it's to fast for a new player tbh. not really

Hard

00:12:571 (1,2,3,4) - I'd add some depth to this with increasing volume on the white ticks. It's definently supported there. good idea
00:43:731 (3,1) - Fix blanket hopefully fixed
00:43:731 (3,1,3,4) - Why not blanket these aswell? fixed blanket on 00:45:057 (3,4) - if thats what you meant
01:19:533 (2,3) - Why not make the slider into 2 circles instead? The drums are going a bit higher there, it's the 'finale' of the kiai section. + it get rids of the wierd rythm. made just one circle for dramatic pause, fixes the problem too anyway
00:28:814 (2,3,4,5) - 2 to 3 is much larger than 00:29:312 (4,5) - even tho the intensity is going up. fixed

Sunshine
00:19:698 (3,4,5,6,7) - Why not map the whole piano thing if ur gonna map 3 notes of it? those are the only prominent enough sounds of the piano to warrant being mapped imo
00:28:483 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Build up this pattern more, the drums here kind of build up if you listen, ur DS goes from bottom to top right away if u compare the rest of the section is really tight and close. spaced 4 further to build up spacing more gradually
00:38:593 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Same stuff here, actually 00:38:593 (4,5) - why is this so spaced to begin with? this one is fine imo since spacing isnt as high as the previous section. 00:38:593 (4,5) - is spaced because it's the same vocal phrase as (1.2.3) so it's as intense, also i feel that gradual spacing change would kinda kill the sharp contrast between the low and high spacing sections
00:56:328 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2) - This is hard to read, i'd use DS here or something, it's so hard to read atm stacked 00:56:328 (1,2,3) - for easier readability, also the ncs here are to make the 1/1 gaps easily readable so i think it's fine in that regard
01:26:494 (1,1,2) - Uncomfortable flow. I'd do something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9306606 (but NC ofc) the uncomfortable flow adds more impact to 1 than this i feel

Sorry for so short mod, can't really find much they all look so clean. I'll shoot some stars cause the mod was so short. GL whoa thx for stars

xidorn

91 posts

Joined February 2016

xidorn 2017-10-14T10:41:36+00:00

hey neeton heres ur mod

morning starlgiht

00:11:245 (1,2,3) - make these drum sample w/ finish and whistle bc they reflect the bg drums and the guitar thing
maybe add some whistles 00:12:571 (1,2) - here too
00:42:903 (1) - in the previous section, every slider with that is nc'd and looks like this are the same sv as the previous combo, so suddenly halving the sv will be confusing. add a bit more contrast my changing slidershape, spacing, or something else
01:01:632 (1) - in everywhere else in the kiai, the half sv'd slider is straight, but this is about as straight as the girls in the show. fix for consistency. i think this doesnt need redoing 34875349753 patterns dw (i hope)

toshino kyoko

00:05:113 (3,1) - isn't there something about the shortest time to this kind of overlap being 2 beats?
00:30:472 (4) - maybe delete? in the part before, the perfect stack is 1/1 rhythm plus you seem to be following the trumpet there
01:26:577 (1) - sound at end of spinner seems too prominent to be passive rhythm, maybe shorten spinner by half a beat and adding a note?

yeah i cant mod low diffs
gl on rank
also :b:netsu when

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-10-14T13:13:52+00:00

Xidorn wrote:
hey neeton heres ur mod
morning starlgiht
00:11:245 (1,2,3) - make these drum sample w/ finish and whistle bc they reflect the bg drums and the guitar thing dont really like how it sounds, plus i feel the drums come in more prominently in the next combo so sampleset changes there
maybe add some whistles 00:12:571 (1,2) - here too drums are more prominent there, and i can only use one custom sampleset at a time orz
00:42:903 (1) - in the previous section, every slider with that is nc'd and looks like this are the same sv as the previous combo, so suddenly halving the sv will be confusing. add a bit more contrast my changing slidershape, spacing, or something else shiet ur write, changed to red anchor
01:01:632 (1) - in everywhere else in the kiai, the half sv'd slider is straight, but this is about as straight as the girls in the show. fix for consistency. i think this doesnt need redoing 34875349753 patterns dw (i hope) nice catch

yeah i cant mod low diffs
gl on rank
also :b:netsu when find me a normal gd

thanks!

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-10-14T16:24:22+00:00

hello riceball

EZ

AR4 and OD4 are too high xd
00:03:289 (3) - on the reverse is no sound the sound you want to follow is here 00:03:787
00:08:262 (2) - if you would delete this circle then you would have some good emphasis on the vocal
00:09:919 (1) - would do a 2/1 Slider here instead the reverse does not really fits with the music in this part
00:10:914 (2) - same as 00:08:262 (2) this time for the instrument tho
00:16:383 (1) - delete nc doesn't fit if your nc combo-ing
00:20:196 (4) - same as 00:08:262 (2)
00:29:975 (2,3) - this might be too hard for a easy idk
00:43:400 - would make this clickable because the calm section begins here and having it on a sliderend is meh
00:50:361 (1) - this doesn't have to be a 1/2 reverse imo a 1/1 would fit better
your easy gd's are better imo

NM

i can't mod it
01:26:494 (1) - this spinner is way too short imo

Gl rice

newton-

670 posts

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Topic Starter

newton- 2017-10-15T02:46:48+00:00

My Angel Kanan wrote:
hello riceball

EZ
AR4 and OD4 are too high xd fixed
00:03:289 (3) - on the reverse is no sound the sound you want to follow is here 00:03:787 for rhythm simplification
00:08:262 (2) - if you would delete this circle then you would have some good emphasis on the vocal sure
00:09:919 (1) - would do a 2/1 Slider here instead the reverse does not really fits with the music in this part it adds to the intensity,
which serves as contrast from the previous section.
00:10:914 (2) - same as 00:08:262 (2) this time for the instrument tho ^
00:16:383 (1) - delete nc doesn't fit if your nc combo-ing shiet nice catch
00:20:196 (4) - same as 00:08:262 (2) theres an important drum there which warrants clickability imo
00:29:975 (2,3) - this might be too hard for a easy idk gap is still 1/1, i think it's fine
00:43:400 - would make this clickable because the calm section begins here and having it on a sliderend is meh arguably the calm section starts here at 00:43:068 - which the sliderhead is closer to, thus i don't think catching the start of the vocals is necessary for the reason you mentioned
00:50:361 (1) - this doesn't have to be a 1/2 reverse imo a 1/1 would fit better it catches the 1/2 vocal thing
your easy gd's are better imo i agr e

NM
i can't mod it
01:26:494 (1) - this spinner is way too short imo still ok by ranking criteria

Gl rice

vielen dank

also gl with your gd on starr's set l ol e

Atalanta

529 posts

Joined December 2015

Atalanta 2017-10-15T11:16:53+00:00

Xidorn wrote:
toshino kyoko
00:05:113 (3,1) - isn't there something about the shortest time to this kind of overlap being 2 beats? iirc it only concerns same sliders overlap, like a 1/2 with a 1/2, here it's a 1/2 with a 1/1 so not problem
00:30:472 (4) - maybe delete? in the part before, the perfect stack is 1/1 rhythm plus you seem to be following the trumpet there Already answer for something like that, the parts you mention are different, and 00:29:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - is more intense than the part before
01:26:577 (1) - sound at end of spinner seems too prominent to be passive rhythm, maybe shorten spinner by half a beat and adding a note? Mhh nah I like the way it is

Thanks for mod, no changes uwu

RythmSniper999

90 posts

Joined August 2015

RythmSniper999 2017-10-15T19:51:13+00:00

Hope you accept my mod since i need kds and mods because my extra on my maap is cool imo. owo

anyways

Easy

00:18:704 (2) - this is way to overkill. Remove the finish pls just like 4
00:28:483 (1) - same but only where the slider ends because theres a less higher pitched sound so without the finish it sounds better trust me.
01:17:544 (1,2) - same here make sliderend on 1 a clap and keep 2 as a finish it sounds better.
there are many many spots where u went overkill with finish sounds theryre called "finish" for a reason xd.
remove some of them on the circles and the sliderends.
00:53:676 (1,2,3,4) - this is an example where its not overkill.
Make 00:48:372 (3) - a new combo , remove combo at 00:50:361 (3) - and add nc to 00:51:024 (1) - its rhythmically way more fitting.
its really just minor complaints. This map is asthetic haven owo.

Normal

00:06:604 (1,2) - remove nc on 1 and add one on 2 its prob a mistake
00:19:035 (4) - any reason why this isnt a straight slider?. Its not a special sound for me. is it because of those bell sounds? if yes then its ok
01:06:936 (1) - remove finish on sliderend

Hard

those juicy sliders Kreygasm. Fits to the music
01:07:267 (2,3) - remove finish sound at 2 and at sliderend in 3 and put finish in the sliderhead. Way better
other than that nothing else to say. magnificent diff.

Toshino`s Insane

00:05:610 (1,2) - hey thats pretty good. owo
00:54:505 (3) - maybe remove that finish?
01:01:963 (2) - since you introduced the kiai with the 2 NC gimmick you should do that aswell. ad nc pls
and do that anywhere else where that sound queue pops up.
01:07:599 (1,2) - remove finish on 1 and add 2 on sliderhead. sounds better.
01:18:041 (2,3,4) - remove finish on slider head add one on 3 and deltete on 4. Its better.

Sunshine

Average pp map. BrokeBack
lol here newton actually followed the 2 NC gimmick lmao
and here the finish hitsound gimmick actually work xd
nothing to say.

overall aside from finish sound gimmick being too overkill on lower diffs and the extra diff being a pp map this is asthetically so pleasing. esp the hard diff looks so spicy and awesome. gonna shoot a star for that

.

good work and gl on rank.

Tiff

402 posts

Joined May 2016

Tiff 2017-10-15T22:21:16+00:00

HI M4M
sorry if I didn't make a lot of comments because I am still a new modder

Easy

00:02:958 (2) - 00:04:284 (4) - I really don't suggest you stack the circles in a easy, it will confuse beginners
00:50:361 (1,2,3) - I think there is too many returning sliders at one time in easy
yup that's it for easy

Hard

I think some DS are a bit irregular here
00:29:477 (5) - Ctrl+G wrong DS and a bit uncomfortable
00:33:787 (1) - same
00:35:610 (2,3) - same but do Ctrl+G on 2 and Ctrl+G on 3
00:37:765 (3) - I think this better if u make to this

well I think you change ur DS in Kiai is reasonable so I have nothing to say in there

toshino's Insane

00:06:604 (1) - I don't get it why do u have to put slower here, if yes I would say this is too slow for that rhythm
I think DS should be almost the same for every beat except jumps

I don't map 5 star maps so that's it

good luck on mapping!

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-10-16T02:13:32+00:00

RythmSniper999 wrote:
Hope you accept my mod since i need kds and mods because my extra on my maap is cool imo. owo

anyways

Easy
00:18:704 (2) - this is way to overkill. Remove the finish pls just like 4 hitsounds are straight from extra diff + they reflect the song, so imo theyre not a problem
00:28:483 (1) - same but only where the slider ends because theres a less higher pitched sound so without the finish it sounds better trust me. ^
01:17:544 (1,2) - same here make sliderend on 1 a clap and keep 2 as a finish it sounds better. ok this one i agree with
there are many many spots where u went overkill with finish sounds theryre called "finish" for a reason xd. the finishes dont really seem overdone to me tbh
remove some of them on the circles and the sliderends.
00:53:676 (1,2,3,4) - this is an example where its not overkill.
Make 00:48:372 (3) - a new combo , remove combo at 00:50:361 (3) - and add nc to 00:51:024 (1) - its rhythmically way more fitting. the nc pattern is strictly nc every 2 measures without exception so no
its really just minor complaints. This map is asthetic haven owo.

Normal
00:06:604 (1,2) - remove nc on 1 and add one on 2 its prob a mistake oops nice catch, redid ncs in this part
00:19:035 (4) - any reason why this isnt a straight slider?. Its not a special sound for me. is it because of those bell sounds? if yes then its ok the bells man
01:06:936 (1) - remove finish on sliderend ok

Hard
those juicy sliders Kreygasm. Fits to the music
01:07:267 (2,3) - remove finish sound at 2 and at sliderend in 3 and put finish in the sliderhead. Way better ~~drums in bg warrant finish spam idk, if i get more opinions on this i might change it~~ edit: changed
other than that nothing else to say. magnificent diff.

overall aside from finish sound gimmick being too overkill on lower diffs and the extra diff being a pp map this is asthetically so pleasing. esp the hard diff looks so spicy and awesome. gonna shoot a star for that . owo thanks for star

good work and gl on rank.

tiffany yu tyu wrote:
HI M4M
sorry if I didn't make a lot of comments because I am still a new modder
Easy
00:02:958 (2) - 00:04:284 (4) - I really don't suggest you stack the circles in a easy, it will confuse beginners this is still readable for new players, since it's really obvious where you need to go after 3
00:50:361 (1,2,3) - I think there is too many returning sliders at one time in easy those are like 3/2 sliders so they arent a problem. it would only be a problem if they were 1/2s
yup that's it for easy

Hard
I think some DS are a bit irregular here ds doesnt need to be that exact in hards, visual spacing matters more fixed a bunch like 01:11:577 (4) - and loosened up 00:12:240 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - tho
00:29:477 (5) - Ctrl+G wrong DS and a bit uncomfortable flow is still circular, plus the spacing is for emphasis
00:33:787 (1) - same ~~ok this one i agree with~~ reverted
00:35:610 (2,3) - same but do Ctrl+G on 2 and Ctrl+G on 3 still circular, plus slider leniency makes this way easier to play than it looks
00:37:765 (3) - I think this better if u make to this spaced for emphasis, also this is way harder to read than what i have now
well I think you change ur DS in Kiai is reasonable so I have nothing to say in there

I don't map 5 star maps so that's it
good luck on mapping!

thanks for mods!

Last edited by newton- 2017-10-16T12:06:35+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

JierYagtama 2017-10-16T05:52:06+00:00

chikaS

Hard

stop making clean lower diffs thx

Toshi insane

00:04:450 (1) - pretty sure this should be in here 00:04:450 -
00:06:604 (1) - not sure why you're skipping vocals here
00:28:483 (3,6,7,8) - nazi but sstacc
00:39:091 (1,2,3) - imo these should be spaced out a little bit more since theres some buildup intensity on the vocals
00:40:914 (1,2,1,2) - nicc 1212
00:58:980 (1) - kind of an inconsistent NC here cos 01:01:632 (1,2) - notice that these are the same sounds but only one nc while the beginning of the kiai has one

clean

Kaarawan

ffs clean

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-10-16T06:05:08+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
chikaS
Hard
stop making clean lower diffs thx

Kaarawan
ffs clean

prankd

all no change kappa

Jemzuu

Beatmap Nominator

600 posts

Joined February 2016

Jemzuu 2017-10-16T07:51:39+00:00

[sunshine]
00:57:323 (1) - remove nc
00:58:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - idk but in this stream, for me, it sounds better if whistles were replaced by claps instead
01:08:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:17:212 (5) - i'd sugget to ctrl g this slider, ds here 01:17:544 (1) - is too close imo
01:19:698 (2) - shouldn't this slider have a lower sv to have a transition to the next like what u did to other sliders
01:22:516 (3) - maybe lower the sv here cus the vocal gives a sound like 01:12:240 (1) - ye u get me then 01:22:847 (1) - add finish here
01:26:494 (1) - hmm add hs to this sliderend perhaps as well the next 2 notes

clean map
nice pp

Last edited by Jemzuu 2017-10-16T11:44:20+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-10-16T08:18:57+00:00

Q

[Sunsine]
00:21:522 (5,6) - I suggest stacking 6 with 3 for Increase DS like 00:22:847 (5,6) -
01:11:245 (3,4) - too small DS comparing with 01:00:638 (3,4) - ?
01:16:715 (3,4,5) - ^

[Hard]
00:31:135 (1,2) - Why you increasd DS? you didn't made jump at this part, I suggest set consistent DS.
01:06:936 (1,2,3,4) - really weird pattern listening with HS.

GL

Atalanta

529 posts

Joined December 2015

Atalanta 2017-10-16T08:29:13+00:00

RythmSniper999 wrote:
Toshino`s Insane
00:05:610 (1,2) - hey thats pretty good. owo Pretty generic too
00:54:505 (3) - maybe remove that finish? I didn't do the hs for my diff, but I can hear a cymbal in the song here so no
01:01:963 (2) - since you introduced the kiai with the 2 NC gimmick you should do that aswell. ad nc pls
and do that anywhere else where that sound queue pops up. Changed it to something else, NC spam is not a gimmick though
01:07:599 (1,2) - remove finish on 1 and add 2 on sliderhead. sounds better. Finishes on sliderend ew, no sounds not better
01:18:041 (2,3,4) - remove finish on slider head add one on 3 and deltete on 4. Its better. Doesn't sounds better either

tiffany yu tyu wrote:
toshino's Insane
00:06:604 (1) - I don't get it why do u have to put slower here, if yes I would say this is too slow for that rhythm There's a pretty cool bass sound here, I wanted the represent that with a slow slider
I think DS should be almost the same for every beat except jumps This is nor a Light Insane, this is an Insane

JeirYagtama wrote:
Toshi insane
00:04:450 (1) - pretty sure this should be in here 00:04:450 - I'm pretty sure no. Actually I put it at 00:04:533 - cause it emphasize 00:04:615 -
00:06:604 (1) - not sure why you're skipping vocals here Do you hear that cool bass sound here ? That's why
00:28:483 (3,6,7,8) - nazi but sstacc Blame stack leniency
00:39:091 (1,2,3) - imo these should be spaced out a little bit more since theres some buildup intensity on the vocals Sure no it looks pretty bad
00:40:914 (1,2,1,2) - nicc 1212 You degen xd
00:58:980 (1) - kind of an inconsistent NC here cos 01:01:632 (1,2) - notice that these are the same sounds but only one nc while the beginning of the kiai has one Fix cause of previous mod

Thanks

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Fu Xuan

Beatmap Nominator

1,430 posts

Joined September 2015

Fu Xuan 2017-10-16T12:00:00+00:00

mod

it jok gt prnakd

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-10-16T12:01:39+00:00

AJamez wrote:
[sunshine]
00:57:323 (1) - remove nc nc is there for readability as a 1/1 gap
00:58:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - idk but in this stream, for me, it sounds better if whistles were replaced by claps instead drums in bg are more bass than snare so whistles fit here better imo
01:08:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
01:17:212 (5) - i'd sugget to ctrl g this slider, ds here 01:17:544 (1) - is too close imo increased spacing
01:19:698 (2) - shouldn't this slider have a lower sv to have a transition to the next like what u did to other sliders those other sliders had lower sv to emphasize the trumpet after them more. there isnt any trumpet here
01:22:516 (3) - maybe lower the sv here cus the vocal gives a sound like 01:12:240 (1) - ye u get me then 01:22:847 (1) - add finish here sv unneeded, if i use it everywhere instead of just the kiai the kiai is less special. also the finish doesnt fit imo
01:26:494 (1) - hmm add hs to this sliderend perhaps as well the next 2 notes next 2 notes

clean map
nice pp

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Sunsine]
00:21:522 (5,6) - I suggest stacking 6 with 3 for Increase DS like 00:22:847 (5,6) - nah, the latter has a vocal so it should be spaced mroe than the former, which is just filler drum rhythm
01:11:245 (3,4) - too small DS comparing with 01:00:638 (3,4) - ? ur right
01:16:715 (3,4,5) - ^ again, 5 is just a filler drum beat without that bg piano thing on the others so no spacing is really needed

[Hard]
00:31:135 (1,2) - Why you increasd DS? you didn't made jump at this part, I suggest set consistent DS. reverted back
01:06:936 (1,2,3,4) - really weird pattern listening with HS. fixed

GL

now i have to retcon edit some previous mods

thanks!

Zelzatter Zero

3,962 posts

Joined October 2016

Zelzatter Zero 2017-10-16T12:39:28+00:00

Hi M4M.
[Toshino's Insane]
00:29:643 (1) - Turn down the sound in the end of the slider. It doesn't fit any rhythm the music.

ok that's it. you're the bro mapper. I can't found any issues in your diff. Awesome!!

Atalanta

529 posts

Joined December 2015

Atalanta 2017-10-16T14:34:30+00:00

Uraomote Error wrote:
Hi M4M.
[Toshino's Insane]
00:29:643 (1) - Turn down the sound in the end of the slider. It doesn't fit any rhythm the music.

ok that's it. you're the bro mapper. I can't found any issues in your diff. Awesome!!

This is not even a mod, I won't fix anything and this doesn't deserve any kudosu

Edit : You should at least shoot a kds cause it was M4M

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2017-10-16T22:30:58+00:00

^at least give him credits for trying no need to be too much of a dick

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-10-17T09:29:06+00:00

Since it was only 1 point stated and was even denied no kds needs to be given. Probably could have been said a lot nicer but oh well.

@newton

The finishes in your map are really loud and drown out the music (as well as other hitsounds). Consider lowering the volume of the hitsound file?

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-10-17T11:28:53+00:00

@kisses: hitsound volume down by 10% across all diffs

thanks for the star

Gravified

537 posts

Joined May 2010

Gravified 2017-10-22T17:45:33+00:00

M4M from your Q

Normal

00:25:499 (5) - DS
01:20:030 (1,2) - I know you're focussing on vocal but I think the sound on 01:20:196 - you cannot ignore. So I think here you should delete 2 and move 1 to 01:20:196

Hard

01:20:030 (1) - Here I suggestion to keep red tick empty cuz 01:20:527 (2,3,4,1,2) - is not vocal emphasize and 01:18:870 (1,2,3) - could be perceived to emphasize drums

Tomato's Insane

00:04:533 (1) - Personally I would delete this cuz I don't hear a sound on blue tick itself, though I understand why you might've put it there
00:31:135 (1) - Hmm why silder velocity multiplayer 1.20x for this section? Feels too fast, especially the starting slider. Shouldn't be as fast as Kiai Time imo.Also the part before Kiai Time is x1.00.
00:42:074 (3,5) - overlap
01:26:494 (3) - Keep the jump going?

Sunshine

00:02:626 (3) - Could look better. Copy 00:03:621 (2) - and put on the same position, recreate repeater.
00:59:312 (1) - Feels less strong than other parts, maybe because it's facing back to right? How about ctrl+J and ctrl+G it.
01:15:555 (3,4,5,6,1) - Spacing is rather low and can also be seen when comparing to 01:04:947 (3,4,5,6,1) -
01:20:030 (1) - Since 01:19:698 (2) - emphasizes vocal I suggest a single note on red tick and slider afterwards

Good luck there!

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-10-23T09:28:19+00:00

Gravified wrote:
M4M from your Q

Normal
00:25:499 (5) - DS minor but sure
01:20:030 (1,2) - I know you're focussing on vocal but I think the sound on 01:20:196 - you cannot ignore. So I think here you should delete 2 and move 1 to 01:20:196 i wanna keep rhythm simpler so i think not
Hard
01:20:030 (1) - Here I suggestion to keep red tick empty cuz 01:20:527 (2,3,4,1,2) - is not vocal emphasize and 01:18:870 (1,2,3) - could be perceived to emphasize drums i cant emphasize vocals on 01:20:527 - since there arent any vocals there in the first place lol. also i follow vocals wherever theyre present so i'd like to keep that idea consistent
Sunshine
00:02:626 (3) - Could look better. Copy 00:03:621 (2) - and put on the same position, recreate repeater. blanket would be destroyed
00:59:312 (1) - Feels less strong than other parts, maybe because it's facing back to right? How about ctrl+J and ctrl+G it. would kill blanket,
plus it also abuses slider leniency from the previous object already, so it's consistent
01:15:555 (3,4,5,6,1) - Spacing is rather low and can also be seen when comparing to 01:04:947 (3,4,5,6,1) - moved 4 and 1
01:20:030 (1) - Since 01:19:698 (2) - emphasizes vocal I suggest a single note on red tick and slider afterwards i'm emphasizing vocal with most of the sliders in this map, don't see the need to follow bg here when imo vocals are more prominent
Good luck there!

thanks!

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Nitrous 2017-10-25T23:08:25+00:00

Hi! From my queue.

Easy

00:47:046 (1) - Try making this a 1/2 repeat and add a slider/circle to make 00:47:046 (1) - clickable?

Normal

00:47:046 (4) - Make this a 1/2 repeat instead?

Hard

01:18:041 (3) - The DS is way too big but doesn't have the same intensity as the others with DS of 2.0x

Toshino's Insane

00:14:560 (4,5,6) - Try doing or something similar to this:
00:54:919 (1,1) - I'm not so sure about this, this doesn't look like you can give the player enough time to react to the next object.
01:17:544 (1) - Remove finish on tail
01:18:041 (2) - Remove finish on tail and use a clap instead
01:20:278 (1) - Would probably be cool if you mapped this section instead of a spinner

This is all from me, thanks for using my queue!

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-10-26T08:59:45+00:00

Nitrous wrote:
Hi! From my queue.

Easy
00:47:046 (1) - Try making this a 1/2 repeat and add a slider/circle to make 00:47:046 (1) - clickable? dont want rhythm to get too dense
Normal
00:47:046 (4) - Make this a 1/2 repeat instead? yeah, good idea
Hard
01:18:041 (3) - The DS is way too big but doesn't have the same intensity as the others with DS of 2.0x arguably this is as intense as the rest since this note marks the near end of the chorus

This is all from me, thanks for using my queue!

thanks for modding!

Atalanta

529 posts

Joined December 2015

Atalanta 2017-10-26T10:08:33+00:00

Oh wait I have to reply to mods, shit I forgot

Gravified wrote:
M4M from your Q

Tomato's Insane
00:04:533 (1) - Personally I would delete this cuz I don't hear a sound on blue tick itself, though I understand why you might've put it there okay sure
00:31:135 (1) - Hmm why silder velocity multiplayer 1.20x for this section? Feels too fast, especially the starting slider. Shouldn't be as fast as Kiai Time imo.Also the part before Kiai Time is x1.00. I tihkn this part is pretty intense, though I kinda agree with you, idk why I my x1.2 sv, but I won't fix it cause to much work
00:42:074 (3,5) - overlap I prefer the way it is rn, but I NC'd it
01:26:494 (3) - Keep the jump going? If you mean increase spacing I changed it

Nitrous wrote:
Hi! From my queue.

Toshino's Insane
00:14:560 (4,5,6) - Try doing or something similar to this: Sure
00:54:919 (1,1) - I'm not so sure about this, this doesn't look like you can give the player enough time to react to the next object. There's enough time and the next object after the spinner is fairly close to the center of the screen, I'll change it if more people complain about that
01:17:544 (1) - Remove finish on tail Changed 01:17:544 (1) - to an extended slider
01:18:041 (2) - Remove finish on tail and use a clap instead Changed to something else
01:20:278 (1) - Would probably be cool if you mapped this section instead of a spinner Maybe, I like the way it is rn, maybe will change idk

Thanks for the mods :3

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Log Off Now 2017-10-27T11:38:31+00:00

hi, m4m from my q, sorry this is so late ;(

[Easy]

00:04:615 (1,2) - fix stack plss
00:09:919 (1) - theres no note on the middle of this slider, i would prefer it if this slider was 1/1, or at least no whistle hitsound since it sounds a bit overmapped atm
00:14:892 (4,3) - stack ree
00:51:024 (2,3) - make these two the same shape for visual consistency?
00:55:665 (4) - i think you can make this into two circles because of how intense these notes are and because this is near the end of a really long slider section
00:58:317 (3) - same^ altho this time its because theres no differentiation rhythmically compared to the kiai, so it might be more fun/interesting to play 2 circles here
01:19:533 (3) - remove the repeat on this slider because theres no note on the white tick

[Normal]

00:42:903 (4) - the vocal/synth don't stretch this far, so i would suggest making this a 1/1 slider and having a circle on 00:43:400 -
00:48:041 (6,1) - this is a really sharp angle that you don't really use at all anywhere else in this diff, would prefer if 00:48:372 (1) - was rotated 90 degrees or moved to the right of something, or even have its shape changed so its slightly less aggressive/jarring to play
00:56:328 (3) - i would nc this because start of a new mini section
00:58:317 (7) - idk how i feel with the two strong vocals here being unclickable, i would make this a circle then halfbeat slider
01:00:638 (5,6) - i would swap these for a 1/1 slider so you get more emphasis on the louder vocal/drum cymbal here 01:01:301 (7,1,2) -
01:11:245 (4,5) - ^same

main thing is the emphasis in the kiai but apart from that cool diff

[Hard]

so many imperfect triggering stacks in this diff

(

00:36:439 (1) - i would space this more since it doesn't match your current emphasis style
00:37:599 (2,3) - idk why this is spaced so large, i mean its a cute pattern but i dont think it reflects the music very well, considering the spacing here 00:37:765 (3,4) - is the same intensity if not more intense but is spaced way less
00:47:046 (1) - i would turn this into two circles because of how intense these two notes are in this pattern
00:50:030 (2,3) - spacing here is soooo big compared to 00:48:041 (4,1) - which doesn't really make sense imo
00:58:317 (3) - i would nc this to make it easier to read theirs a gap in the rhythm here
uh idk how i feel about the constant bass drum hitsounds lol it doesnt really match the song imo

feels more like a light insane tbh, lots of spacing jumps where i dont rly think its necessary at times

[Toshino's Insane]

00:18:704 (3,4) - not rly a fan of the wide angle here, i think a sharper angle would reflect the intensity of the music better since this can just be played straight because of slider leniency, i would maybe put it here or smt
00:30:306 (3,4) - this stack is kinda hard to notice because of perfect stack, and because its two seperate drum notes idk if it really fits having a stack here, i would maybe put (4) in the middle of the triangle?
00:40:914 (1,2,1,2) - any reason for changing the nc patterning here? i would get it if you was ncing the newly introduced instrument but that starts playing here 00:41:080 (2) - not here 00:40:914 (1) - so i would rethink your nc usage here
00:47:046 (1,2) - how come these aren't circles when a very similar piece of the music here 00:29:975 (1,2,3,4) - was made with circles? feels a bit inconsistent and undermapped here tbh
00:54:919 (1) - i would shorten this spinner to where the vocal ends here 00:55:997 - instead of right upto the drum beat since this is rly easy to miss atm
00:56:329 (1,2,3) - any reason why these aren't mapped with large spacing like 00:29:975 (1,2,3) - which arguably is less intense? i mean i like the pattern but idk if it fits your current way of spacing things
00:58:649 (2) - extend to blue tick to follow full vocal?
01:07:267 (1) - remove nc, this just feels like an excuse for 1,2 spam when the music doesn't really support 1,2 comboing (especially when the vocals dont even follow this rhythm)
01:07:599 (1) - remove nc^
01:17:212 (4,1) - this overlap

(( move (1) further away slightly so it doesn't look weirdpls xd
01:17:874 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - this section can all be combo'd 1,2 but you switch combo pattern, in the box i've suggested a new nc pattern to make it all 1,2 since it looks like that was what you was going for

nc pattern

01:17:874 (2) - nc
01:18:206 (4) - nc
01:18:372 (1) - remove nc
01:18:538 (2) - nc
01:18:704 (1) - remove nc
01:18:870 (2) - nc

01:20:278 (1) - this feels super out of place, and doesn't even start where the held vocal it looks like its trying to follow starts, move 01:20:196 (1,1) -
to 01:20:030 -

[Sunshine]

00:30:306 (3,1) - this is a strange change in spacing imo considering its the same sound as 00:29:975 (1,2,3) - , i would space 00:30:638 (1) - more
00:57:820 (1,2) - i would space this more since its more intense than 00:57:323 (1,2) -
01:08:096 (2) - i kinda wanna play an extended slider here because of the vocal since you follow it previous

gl!

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-10-27T12:59:20+00:00

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hi, m4m from my q, sorry this is so late ;(

[Easy]

00:04:615 (1,2) - fix stack plss was debating on whether to perfectly stack this or make it seem stacked with 00:08:593 (3) - , but yeah sure stacked
00:09:919 (1) - theres no note on the middle of this slider, i would prefer it if this slider was 1/1, or at least no whistle hitsound since it sounds a bit overmapped atm changed to 1/1
00:14:892 (4,3) - stack ree fuc
00:51:024 (2,3) - make these two the same shape for visual consistency? sure
00:55:665 (4) - i think you can make this into two circles because of how intense these notes are and because this is near the end of a really long slider section dont really feel the need to make this more dense, 2 circles in a row is something that normally only happens in the kiai here and i dont wanna take that special part of the kiai away. also theyres a circle literally 2 objects before this so yeah
00:58:317 (3) - same^ altho this time its because theres no differentiation rhythmically compared to the kiai, so it might be more fun/interesting to play 2 circles here imo consistency is more important than variety in low diffs so new players have a better idea of what to expect. just me tho
01:19:533 (3) - remove the repeat on this slider because theres no note on the white tick unsure about readability now but changed

[Normal]

00:42:903 (4) - the vocal/synth don't stretch this far, so i would suggest making this a 1/1 slider and having a circle on 00:43:400 - nice idea
00:48:041 (6,1) - this is a really sharp angle that you don't really use at all anywhere else in this diff, would prefer if 00:48:372 (1) - was rotated 90 degrees or moved to the right of something, or even have its shape changed so its slightly less aggressive/jarring to play rip hexgrid. new pattern is symmetrical anyway w/e
00:56:328 (3) - i would nc this because start of a new mini section sure i guess
00:58:317 (7) - idk how i feel with the two strong vocals here being unclickable, i would make this a circle then halfbeat slider yeah
01:00:638 (5,6) - i would swap these for a 1/1 slider so you get more emphasis on the louder vocal/drum cymbal here 01:01:301 (7,1,2) - i'm satistied with this kind of rhythm, but i moved 6 so flow changes on 7 to emphasize it more
01:11:245 (4,5) - ^same yeah same thing done

main thing is the emphasis in the kiai but apart from that cool diff

[Hard]

so many imperfect triggering stacks in this diff ( oh shit youre right, fixed the ones i found

00:36:439 (1) - i would space this more since it doesn't match your current emphasis style spaced out more. comfortableness of flow might not be up to par tho
00:37:599 (2,3) - idk why this is spaced so large, i mean its a cute pattern but i dont think it reflects the music very well, considering the spacing here 00:37:765 (3,4) - is the same intensity if not more intense but is spaced way less fixed, i had a backup plan prepared in case this was ever a problem
00:47:046 (1) - i would turn this into two circles because of how intense these two notes are in this pattern done
00:50:030 (2,3) - spacing here is soooo big compared to 00:48:041 (4,1) - which doesn't really make sense imo they feel more or less the same imo, (4,1) is as emphasized as the latter because of the flow i feel
00:58:317 (3) - i would nc this to make it easier to read theirs a gap in the rhythm here nced a bunch of notes
uh idk how i feel about the constant bass drum hitsounds lol it doesnt really match the song imo i can hear 1/2 bass fills in the bg idk

feels more like a light insane tbh, lots of spacing jumps where i dont rly think its necessary at times nerfed some spacing stuff, also since there isn't an advanced or light insane diff i tried to make the hard incorporate elements from both

[Sunshine]

00:30:306 (3,1) - this is a strange change in spacing imo considering its the same sound as 00:29:975 (1,2,3) - , i would space 00:30:638 (1) - more changed space of 3 to make 1 stand out more. also i think the sv change gives enough emphasis as is
00:57:820 (1,2) - i would space this more since its more intense than 00:57:323 (1,2) - trying to keep all notes in this mini section on the same two spots
01:08:096 (2) - i kinda wanna play an extended slider here because of the vocal since you follow it previous the 1/1 gap feels more bouncy tho, also i want variety in rhythm

gl!

thanks for the comprehensive mod

Atalanta

529 posts

Joined December 2015

Atalanta 2017-10-27T13:42:26+00:00

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[Toshino's Insane]

00:18:704 (3,4) - not rly a fan of the wide angle here, i think a sharper angle would reflect the intensity of the music better since this can just be played straight because of slider leniency, i would maybe put it here or smt Changed in a bit different way
00:30:306 (3,4) - this stack is kinda hard to notice because of perfect stack, and because its two seperate drum notes idk if it really fits having a stack here, i would maybe put (4) in the middle of the triangle? There's no real intensity to 00:30:472 (4) - so I think no putting movement to it is better
00:40:914 (1,2,1,2) - any reason for changing the nc patterning here? i would get it if you was ncing the newly introduced instrument but that starts playing here 00:41:080 (2) - not here 00:40:914 (1) - so i would rethink your nc usage here Fixed
00:47:046 (1,2) - how come these aren't circles when a very similar piece of the music here 00:29:975 (1,2,3,4) - was made with circles? feels a bit inconsistent and undermapped here tbh I'm a shit mapper that's why it's inconsistent, fixed
00:54:919 (1) - i would shorten this spinner to where the vocal ends here 00:55:997 - instead of right upto the drum beat since this is rly easy to miss atm Sometimes I wonder if people testplay when modding, at least for bellow 6*, well anyway this is totally playable but fixed
00:56:329 (1,2,3) - any reason why these aren't mapped with large spacing like 00:29:975 (1,2,3) - which arguably is less intense? i mean i like the pattern but idk if it fits your current way of spacing things The reason is that I don't know how to map, fixed
00:58:649 (2) - extend to blue tick to follow full vocal? No, it would make a 3/4 jump that I don't want
01:07:267 (1) - remove nc, this just feels like an excuse for 1,2 spam when the music doesn't really support 1,2 comboing (especially when the vocals dont even follow this rhythm) Finishes + strong vocal on 01:06:935 (1,1) - that's why it's NCd
01:07:599 (1) - remove nc^ ^
01:17:212 (4,1) - this overlap (( move (1) further away slightly so it doesn't look weirdpls xd Fixed
01:17:874 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - this section can all be combo'd 1,2 but you switch combo pattern, in the box i've suggested a new nc pattern to make it all 1,2 since it looks like that was what you was going for Changed NC in another way + changed jump pattern
nc pattern
01:17:874 (2) - nc
01:18:206 (4) - nc
01:18:372 (1) - remove nc
01:18:538 (2) - nc
01:18:704 (1) - remove nc
01:18:870 (2) - nc
01:20:278 (1) - this feels super out of place, and doesn't even start where the held vocal it looks like its trying to follow starts, move 01:20:196 (1,1) -
to 01:20:030 - 01:20:030 - Added a note here instead

Thanks

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Chewin

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Chewin 2017-10-27T13:56:38+00:00

Hello, your mapset has been chosen from my Queue!

~General~

(To Toshino) Just add the last kiai fountain to be consistent with all other diffs: https://puu.sh/y8qar.png

~Easy~

00:03:289 (3) - Curve this slider more for a better blanket with previous one: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9406326
00:01:964 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Well, if you placed this whole pattern to the center of the grid, it would be nice. The impact while playing it would be different;
00:04:615 (1) - Once you have moved the pattern on the center you could move this slider to the same Y coordinate of the previous 00:03:289 (3) - to make it symmetrical. Also, you should stack the 00:06:604 (2) - better with (1) because it's not perfect actually. Moreover, do not forget to fix the spacing of the next elements after moved the pattern on the center!
00:47:046 (1) - I would fix combo pattern in this other way instead: remove NC from 00:47:046 (1) - and add it on 00:48:372 (3) - where the new stronger section is gonna to start with the finish hitsounds, then remove NC from 00:50:361 (1) - and add it on 00:51:024 (2) - . I think this fits better honestly;

~Normal~

00:46:715 (3,4) - I would honestly change this to something else to make it easier to play and read being a Normal diff. Maybe something like this may work better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9406425 If you don't like this, just find a better solution. If you apply this, do not forget to fix the next elements' spacing as well;
01:26:494 (1) - This spinner is too short for a Normal diff, I am 100% sure. You can extend it till the downbeat that sounds very nice. If you do, you could do the same for all other diffs, including the Easy one where I didn't mention it because I still had to check this ew

~Hard~

00:06:273 (2) - This slider is overmapped, even with that whistle that doesn't give anything positive to me. Just remove this element and restart mapping with 00:06:604 (3) - as first element and maybe you could stack it with 00:05:610 (1) - 's tail and make a good pattern together with the upcoming slider as well;
00:13:731 (1,2,3) - This pattern plays bad to be honest because the jump you created with 00:14:229 (2,3) - is kinda too pushed considering the way you curved the 00:13:731 (1) - . I would force the (1) curve in this way (ignore the fact that it's blanketted with 00:12:903 (2) - because it doesn't matter after a few appeared elements anymore): https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9406498 After fixed it I would even avoid this jump 00:14:229 (2,3) - that actually breaks the flow, honestly. You could just place it by using the same 1.50x from the previous (2);
00:52:847 (2) - The spacing here should be emphasized to be consistent with the previous 00:51:522 (2) - . You could maybe CTRL + G it and fix the spacing of the next slider after applied it, to be consistent with 00:52:019 (3) - ;
01:26:577 (1) - Well, same of Normal for consistency, and for all other diffs (I won't mention it again)

~Toshino's Insane~

Just check what I have said in "General" field;
Decrease AR to 8.5, it's better tbh;
00:06:604 (1) - Never edit this kind of things from .osu file, please. Just decrease the SV by 0.50x, this one is exagerated;
00:21:356 (1) - I do not like how you used NCing here honestly. Just remove it from here and add it on 00:21:853 (3) - instead and make the same for next parts, so remove it from 00:22:682 (1) - and add it on 00:23:179 (3) - and so on; (If you have difficulty with this I will mention all of them in my recheck, but I think you got my idea);
00:39:422 (3,4) - This stack makes the finish on 00:39:588 (4) - sounds too empty imo. I think that the best would be to remove the stack so that the slider (4) with a jump would get a better emphasis (this is the only stack you are using here, just don't do this TwT);
00:51:522 (3) - Same here, unstack it with (4). You could stack it with 00:52:019 (5) - and move the (5) closer to (4) to reduce the spacing between the new 00:51:356 (2,3) - and stack the 00:51:356 (2) - with 00:50:693 (5) - . Well, to make it understandable lol here's what I mean: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9406604 (Mine is just an idea, you can apply something else if you prefer but I would highly change that stack);
00:59:643 (3) - Move this some grid down because it's actually covered by HP bar;
01:03:952 (8,1) - Unstack them to emphasize the new section that is gonna to start with the slider;
01:20:030 - There should be a circle here because it looks too empty actually;

~Sunshine~

00:49:035 (3,4) - This stack breaks the flow you created, I would avoid it;
00:53:593 (8) - Unnecessary circle, remove it? It plays bad after the previous triple honestly. If you accept you could even unstack it with the 00:53:676 (1) - to emphasize more the new jumping section is gonna to start;
00:55:665 (1) - It would be nice if this slider was moved more on the right to make a triangle with 00:55:334 (1,2) - . Maybe at x:272 y:256? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9406656
01:16:715 (3,4,5) - I would increase the spacing here because it's the only part with an antijump, and it's not that smooth to play imo;
01:24:505 (2,3) - Same here, just increase the spacing
01:27:488 (1) - This circle is hard and unconfortable to hit due to the shape you gave at the previous 01:26:494 (1) - slider. I would move it somewhere else or I would change the slider's shape with something more interesting xP

Clean mapset. It would be nice if you fixed the stuff I mentioned above.
Do not hesitate to call me back after fixes so we can try to catch the bubbie!

Aqours - Mirai no Bokura wa Shitteru yo

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