Iguchi Yuka - Mirai Shoot · forum

banvi

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banvi 2011-11-12T06:51:38+00:00

All my just suggestion!

[Easy]

00:30:876 (3,4) - Hmm, I think beginners will be confused because spacing is close.
But this is not error. At least, change a silder with (4),(5)?
00:36:523 (3,4) - ^
01:32:993 (3,4) - ^
01:38:640 (3,4) - ^

[Insane]

02:29:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - try making the y-axis symmetry
02:42:876 (5) - new combo?
03:12:523 (4) - try like this?
SPOILER
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AR9 but it's enough to fit for me~

really well done every diff!! 神mapper~
go go ranked~

KayeSara

KayeSara 2011-11-13T00:52:07+00:00

WCX大神想要迅速rank那我就不多nazi了啊

[Easy]

Easy感觉没什么问题，但是那个slider和note的链接速度与slider的SV对比起来真是lag啊

后面没什么问题了，个人觉得，不过那个hard和insane难度感觉差不多，除了AR和个别跳变了而已
NO KD

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2011-11-13T07:40:18+00:00

updated
thanks you all

Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2011-11-13T21:43:49+00:00

好。Nazi mod开始

/req from Queue

[General]

nothing

[Easy]

还是建议Easy不要叠._.虽然按照你往常的map来看不会听就是了

其他就没啥问题了o.o

[Normal]

00:15:346 (1) - 歪了，拉直吧
01:25:228 (5) - 远了o.o
02:05:464 (1,2,3) - 既然你2,3又是直线后面又是方块，与其这样还不如不要管前面的三角，2,3和1放在同一条垂直线上o.o

[Hard]

总体来说觉得02:53:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) 这种二连很违和。因为歌曲的分割是两个三连+1个2连。所以变成四个2连感觉相当不好._.

02:50:111 (4) - 下移一格

其他没啥o.o

[Insane]

感觉AR8更好。虽然AR9也能打不过感觉有点违和

00:28:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 可以摆的更圆弧一点

其他没了o.o

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2011-11-15T12:45:38+00:00

[Insane]
00:06:876 (3) - finish?
00:!6:581 (10) - clap may work here?
00:29:111 (3,7,8) - clap?
00:30:170 (3,4,6) - ^ [ clap in coming similar position? ]
00:54:170 (2) - the original position is a bit confusing on spacing, try to stack on last combo (7)?
02:28:052 (1) - clap at this beginning as well
02:33:876 - if there's no break in the next gap remove the break here as well. The HP drain is a bit hrasy (~1/2 of HP bar) but it's acceptable for insane.
02:46:228 (1) - [Nazi] move the last slider point to (408,160) so that it has the same curvature with last (3).

[Hard]
02:33:876 - remove break same as insane

找不到問題, 打MAT們去吧
star

No_Gu

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Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2011-11-19T11:29:43+00:00

request from my queue

虽然这时间是2 diff的- -但是神mapper还是都算上好了

[General]
Tag要加个No.5吗。真帆应该是这个编号

[easy]
01:25:228 (3) - spacing是不是有点问题

[normal]
00:17:111 (4) - 开头来个whistle?
01:46:405 (2,3,4) - 把网格关掉弄个平分吧

[hard]
找不到

[insane]
00:37:405 (7) - 来个NC?
02:53:111 (6) - x120 y192

瞎了

Dino99

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Joined May 2011

Dino99 2011-11-19T13:02:55+00:00

Request from my queue~

[Hard]

00:23:111 (3) - 這樣如何? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184249 (3頭尾對調)
00:58:934 (1) - 往上一格!!
01:32:817 (1) - 排到跟01:31:405 (1)一樣的位置吧~(左右反轉)
02:10:758 (5) - Finish?

[Insane]

01:54:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 好像沒排好???(我覺得....)
02:10:758 (5) - Finish?
02:35:993 (1,2) - 孤單的Notes... 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184266
02:44:464 - 加個Note 然後音量漸增~~到02:44:993 讓他變7連音吧:D
02:44:552 - 加Note

好歌+神Mapper!!~

~STAR~

Love

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Love 2011-11-26T07:10:44+00:00

Guessing you won't accept a taiko as usual?

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2011-11-26T09:56:27+00:00

Love wrote:
Guessing you won't accept a taiko as usual?

oh , taiko diff is always welcome
but I'll accept only when I think it is good :3

Rukario

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Rukario 2011-11-26T15:04:14+00:00

Easy:
02:15:523 - Please don't silence the sliderticks when you already have a silent sliderslide.
02:33:876 - I would remove this break. It's too short.

Normal:
02:15:523 - Please don't silence the sliderticks when you already have a silent sliderslide.
02:33:876 - Same as on Easy.

Hard:
02:15:523 - Please don't silence the sliderticks when you already have a silent sliderslide.
02:33:876 - Same as on Easy

Insane:
02:15:523 - Please don't silence the sliderticks when you already have a silent sliderslide.
02:23:993 - ^
02:33:876 - Same as on Easy

Amazing mapset otherwise.

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2011-11-26T15:36:03+00:00

Rukarioman wrote:
Easy:
02:15:523 - Please don't silence the sliderticks when you already have a silent sliderslide.
02:33:876 - I would remove this break. It's too short.

Normal:
02:15:523 - Please don't silence the sliderticks when you already have a silent sliderslide.
02:33:876 - Same as on Easy.

Hard:
02:15:523 - Please don't silence the sliderticks when you already have a silent sliderslide.
02:33:876 - Same as on Easy

Insane:
02:15:523 - Please don't silence the sliderticks when you already have a silent sliderslide.
02:23:993 - ^
02:33:876 - Same as on Easy

Amazing mapset otherwise.

all fixed
thanks for modding :3

Rukario

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Rukario 2011-11-26T15:41:34+00:00

Looks fine now, have your bubble

Love

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Love 2011-11-26T18:00:46+00:00

Such an early bubble =w=p

whymeman

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whymeman 2011-12-04T04:47:01+00:00

Well, the map plays pretty good so far. Though for your future maps, you can try adding a bit more to it like custom skin objects or extra backgrounds if possible. Nothing bad but just suggesting something optional for your future maps if you plan to put more time into them. Anyways, the map shall be ranked then.

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2011-12-04T04:52:22+00:00

WCX 欧尼酱赛高~