hihi M4MThanks for your mod and comment~
00:29:698 - delete here for spread of notes and also 7+ notes in part like this is look weird (because the part is same as 00:17:128 ~ 00:21:150 ) delete please Deleted 00:29:362 (131) - instead.
00:32:547 - how about k ddkkd? kkd kdd is look weird to me idk I think they represent the drum sequence pretty well.
00:46:625 ~ 01:18:804 -seem good :3 also even all kiais! I am glad to hear that :3
01:22:072 - add k here? to follow+emphasize vocals and I guess it would be better because it will be oppisite here! 01:19:390 - fixed
01:46:290 (543,544,545,546,547,548) - same as before if you would ot change to ddkkd same as 00:32:547 -
01:54:083 (580,581,582,583,584,585) - they're weird to me because you follow vocals.even 00:38:580 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - you should delete 01:54:083 (580,581,582) - (instead break by there) and put kkd 01:54:083 (580,581,582) - and add note 01:54:837 - to be more smoother and flow Remain unchanged for a bit more variation as vocals are still well accompanied this way.
well,I can relax my eyes now
your map took my time 2 hours (4min deam) I hope it's helpful
good luck both